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continuationwritingHaveyouevergrabbedawrongbagWhatifyoumayloseanimportantswimmingcompetitionwithouttherightbagJennyhadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Thisparticularswimmingcompetitionwascrucial(至關(guān)重要的)thatshehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttolether____________(teammate)down.___________(sleep)sopoorly,shewas_________(terrible)anxiousaboutthecompetition,___muchthatshecouldn‘teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach(感到非常緊張).Jenny_______(pick)athereggswithaforkandallshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.Jenny’smomsensedherdaughter’sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback(贊許；鼓勵(lì)).Jennyfeltabitofreliefbutbythetimeshegottotheathleticclub_____theswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomfort_______________(disappear).Shewenttothelockerroomandopenedhergymbag,onlytofindshehadgrabbedthewrongbag…teammatesHavingsleptterriblysopickedwherehaddisappearedReadforthemainideaBeginningDevelopmentClimaxLaterDevelopment+EndingtobecontinuedReadforthebasicinformationwhoCharacterswhenwhereSettingswhatwhyhowMainplotstense/

Jenny;mother;teammates;coachInthemorningInthelockerroom（衣帽間）JennygrabbedthewrongbagWorryaboutlosingtheimportantcompetition/lettingherteammatesdown.Toonervoustosleepwell/eatbreakfastSimplepast

PlotorganizationcontrastSolution?Jennymother

teammatescoachThemeWithouttherightbag,JennymightlosethecrucialcompetitionThepassageisastorytopraisemother’slove/friendships/team’spower/innerstrength.DrawaMindmap(思維導(dǎo)圖)togetherAppearedintheformerarticleforseveraltimes(mostprobably)Jennywasverynervous.Shehadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Shetossedandturnedallnight.Shewasnostrangertocompetition.Infact,shelovedit.Jennywasveryathleticandwasnotonlypartofaswimteam,butasoccerteam,aswell.Sheevenwonasoccerchampionshipwithherteammateslastyear.Butthisparticularswimmingcompetitionwasimportant.Shehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttoletherteammatesdown.Whenheralarmwentoffat6:00am,shehitthesnoozebutton(鬧鐘的延時(shí)按鈕)androlledontoherside,wishingshecouldjuststayinbedallday.Havingsleptsopoorly,Jennywasnotatallreadyfortheday.Afterafewminutes,shestretchedherarmsaboveherheadandyawnedbeforethrowinghercoversback（把被子扔回去）andclimbingoutofbed.Shewasterriblyanxiousaboutthecompetition,somuchthatshecouldn'teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach.Jenny'smotherlookedconcerned.“Youhavetoeatsomething,”shesaid.“It'simportanttokeepyourstrengthup.”“Iknow,I'mjustnothungrythismorning,”Jennyreplied,pickingathereggswithafork.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.WhatifsheperformedpoorlyWhatifshedisappointedhercoachandteammatesShewouldn'tbeabletoforgiveherself.Jenny'smomsensedherdaughter'sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback.“You'llbegreat,dear.Justdoyourbest.That'sallthatmatters.”Jennyfeltabitofreliefandappreciatedhermother'skindwords.Mother’swordswereuseful.Butbythetimeshegottotheathleticclubwheretheswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomforthaddisappeared.Shewenttothelockerroomtoprepareforthecompetition.Echos&ContrastsHintsforeshadowingthelaterdevelopmentsechos&usefulexpressionsJennywasverynervous.Shehadaswimmingcompetitioninthemorningandcouldnotsleep.Shetossedandturnedallnight.Shewasnostrangertocompetition.Infact,shelovedit.Jennywasveryathleticandwasnotonlypartofaswimteam,butasoccerteam,aswell.Sheevenwonasoccerchampionshipwithherteammateslastyear.Butthisparticularswimmingcompetitionwasimportant.Shehadmadeitallthewaytothefinalsanddidn'twanttoletherteammatesdown.Whenheralarmwentoffat6:00am,shehitthesnoozebutton(鬧鐘的延時(shí)按鈕)androlledontoherside,wishingshecouldjuststayinbedallday.Havingsleptsopoorly,Jennywasnotatallreadyfortheday.Afterafewminutes,shestretchedherarmsaboveherheadandyawned（打哈欠）beforethrowinghercoversback（把被子扔回去）andclimbingoutofbed.Shewasterriblyanxiousaboutthecompetition,somuchthatshecouldn'teveneatbreakfast.Itfeltasthoughshegotbutterfliesinherstomach.Jenny'smotherlookedconcerned.“Youhavetoeatsomething,”shesaid.“It'simportanttokeepyourstrengthup.”“Iknow,I'mjustnothungrythismorning,”Jennyreplied,pickingathereggswithafork.Allshecouldthinkaboutwasfacingthecompetition.WhatifsheperformedpoorlyWhatifshedisappointedhercoachandteammatesShewouldn'tbeabletoforgiveherself.Jenny'smomsensedherdaughter'sworryandgaveheracomfortingpatontheback.“You'llbegreat,dear.Justdoyourbest.That'sallthatmatters.”Jennyfeltabitofreliefandappreciatedhermother'skindwords.Mother’swordswereuseful.Butbythetimeshegottotheathleticclubwheretheswimmeetwasbeingheld,thatfeelingofcomforthaddisappeared.Shewenttothelockerroomtoprepareforthecompetition.Echos&Contrastsmaybesomesnackswereinthebag.Maybebeforecompetition,shewasstillanxious.Maybelateron,mom’swordsstillworked.Hintsforeshadowingthelaterdevelopments伏筆Para1:Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.Para2:Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.Q1__________________________________________（與首句銜接）Q2___________________________________________(情節(jié)推動(dòng)1)Q3_______________________________________________(情節(jié)推動(dòng)2)Q4____________________________________________(與第二段首句銜接)Q1__________________________________________（與首句銜接）Q2_____________________________________________(情節(jié)推動(dòng))Q3_____________________________________________(情節(jié)推動(dòng)2)Q4_____________________________________________(主題點(diǎn)撥)WhatwasJenny’sreaction(反應(yīng))DidJennycomeupwithanysolutionsWhocametohelpJennyHowAddanythinginthebagWhatwasJenny’sresponse(gatheruphercourage)HowdidJennyfeelHowdidsheperformedinthecompetitionWhatwastheresultofthecompetition(win)Designtheplot--DiscussionWhatwastheendingPara1:Whensheopenedhergymbag,shewasquitesurprisedtoseehersocceruniformandrealizedshehadgrabbedthewrongbag.WeavethestoryDumbfoundedwithanemptymind,Jennywasradically/thoroughly/completelydraggedintoaswampofdespair.Timefleeting/Timeflyinglikeanarrowandtensionmountingsecondbysecond,theatmosphereinthelockerroombegantofreeze(氣氛變得緊張起來(lái)),forcingJennytothinkaboutchickeningout.呆滯著，腦袋一片空白，珍妮徹底被拖入了絕望的沼澤(swamp)。目瞪口呆地？dumbfounded時(shí)間轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝(fleet)，緊張感一秒一秒地逐步增加(mount)，更衣室里的氣氛開(kāi)始凍結(jié)，迫使珍妮想到了退縮（chickenout）。What’sJenny’sreaction(反應(yīng))WeavethestoryHelplessandhopeless,shewasphoning/abouttophonethecoachwhen,suddenly,aknockonthedoorcametoherrescue.Imitateit饒有興趣且放松的，當(dāng)我正在享受令人嘆為觀止的美景時(shí)，令人不快的事物出現(xiàn)在我眼前。無(wú)助且無(wú)望的，她正準(zhǔn)備給教練打，突然,一陣敲門(mén)聲傳來(lái)，救了她(rescue)。DidJennycomeupwithanysolutionsA

wasdoingsthwhenBdidsth/AwasabouttodosthwhenBdidsthA正在做某事時(shí)，B突然…Heartbrokenbutfearless,hedecidedtoturnthisaround.（藝術(shù)家賣畫(huà)）Helplessandhopeless,…Interestedandrelaxed,Iwasenjoyingthebreath-takingsceneryaroundwhensomethingunpleasantcaughtmyeye.WeavethestoryBehindthedoorstoodhermomwiththerightbaginherhands.門(mén)后站著她的母親，手里拿著對(duì)的那只包。（with）WhocametohelpJennyHow

人物（驚訝）：讓我感到驚訝的是…IttookJennybysurprisethat讓珍妮吃驚的是，她的包就在隊(duì)友/母親的手中。IttookJennybysurprisethattherightbagwasgrabbedbyherteammate/mother.IttookJennybysurprisethatthebagwasrightthere,tightlygrabbedbyhermother，whowasoutofbreath.(+非謂+定從+details--descriptionformom)Allofasudden/Attheverymoment，thesoundofheavybreathingintruded,Jennythenturnedaround,onlytofindthebagwasrightthere,tightlygrabbedinhermother’shand.Moretoadd:（+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)+onlytofind）突然/就在這時(shí)，沉重的呼吸聲闖了進(jìn)來(lái)(intrude)，珍妮隨即轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身來(lái)，才發(fā)現(xiàn)袋子就在那里，緊緊抓在她母親的手里。陳思雅TeammatesVersion2(teamspirit):Herteammatesspottedherworryandcastacomfortingglanceather.Theytoldherthatitwastheirjointeffortsthatmadetheteamandtheywouldn’tblamehereventhoughshelostthegame.Swimmingwithallhermight,shewasinthefirstplace.Herteammatesapplaudedandyelledandeventuallyshewonthefirstmedal.AlthoughJennywastooexhaustedtomoveaninch,shefeltmuchproudandpleasedkeepingcalmandconfidentwhenintrouble.Version3(solvebyJenny)："HowcarelessIam!"shewhispered,thensherushedtophonehermam,Fortunately,hermomdidn'tgofarawayandtoldhertherightbagwasonthecar.Gettingthisnews,theheavystoneinJenny’sheartwasputdown.WeavethestoryThemomentJennyopenedthebag,shewasgreetedwithherswimsuitalongwithanotesaying“Youwon’tletanyonedown.--Mom.”WhatwasJenny’sresponse(gatheruphercourage)Shewasshiveringwithdeterminationnow.Feelingextraordinarilyrelaxed,theworryinherheartwasturnedintobubbles!Appreciategreatworksfromourclassmates!Withheartfeltcouragepossessingher,shetookadeepbreath,gatheringupallherstrengthandgoingtoagreatlengthstojump,andthenswim.Para2:Jennyheadedfortheswimmingpoolwithabrightsmile.WeavethestoryHowdidJennyfeel盡管筋疲力盡，我們沒(méi)有放棄。Fatiguedaswewere,wedidn’tgive

up.Nervousasshewas,shewasnolongerafraidordiscouraged.=Althoughshewasnervous,shewasnolongerafraidordiscouraged.盡管她很緊張，她不再害怕或氣餒。Exhaustedasshewas,shestillkeptyellingatthetopofherlungs（扯破喉嚨，特別大聲地）.盡管筋疲力盡，她仍然拼命呼喊（lung）。WeavethestoryHowdidsheperformedinthecompetitionInasplitofsecond,thestartinggunfiring,shewasthefastestarrowintheair.

Thenextfewminutessawherwavingthearmsswiftlyandcuttingthroughthewatersmoothlylikeaflyingfish.Whenswimming,shefelttheworldoutsidethewaterseemedtohavevanished,withonlyhermom’swordshovering（盤(pán)旋；縈繞）inhermind.as+情緒形容詞＋as+意象”喜：ashappyasaking;怒：asangryasabull(公牛);asfuriousasaragingstorm哀：assadasahomelessdog累：astiredasthewingsofabirdasfatiguedasanox緊張不安：asnervousasanantonahotpan害怕：sb'sfaceturnedaspaleasasheetMakemoresentencesShewasjustlikeaknife,cuttingthroughthesurfaceofwatertoshowhowsharpshecouldbe.Sheleaptandslipintothewaterl