考點(diǎn)39 應(yīng)用文寫作之告知信 演講稿（核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）（含答案解析）

考點(diǎn)39應(yīng)用文寫作之告知信&演講稿（核心考點(diǎn)精講精練）1.高考真題考點(diǎn)分布年份試卷體裁話題題材內(nèi)容2024新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷告知信學(xué)校生活介紹美術(shù)課的個(gè)人作品和感想全國(guó)甲卷演講稿社會(huì)科技中國(guó)交通發(fā)展天津卷演講稿社會(huì)生活低碳生活浙江卷征文投稿學(xué)校生活課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)2023新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建議信學(xué)校生活給外教提建議全國(guó)甲卷征文投稿歷史文化介紹中國(guó)歷史人物全國(guó)乙卷征文投稿生活學(xué)習(xí)假期習(xí)得新技能天津卷申請(qǐng)信社會(huì)生活“中國(guó)工坊”活動(dòng)浙江卷活動(dòng)報(bào)道學(xué)校生活認(rèn)識(shí)我們身邊的植物2022全國(guó)卷乙卷征文投稿調(diào)查結(jié)果學(xué)習(xí)英語的狀況全國(guó)卷甲卷征文投稿世界海洋日保護(hù)海洋新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷邀請(qǐng)信文化生活學(xué)校的電臺(tái)訪談?wù)憬硌?qǐng)信學(xué)校生活圖書館開設(shè)了一個(gè)小組學(xué)習(xí)室天津卷視頻文字稿學(xué)校生活社團(tuán)活動(dòng)2.命題規(guī)律及備考策略【命題規(guī)律】近3年命題規(guī)律：對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化種類的考查，既有有高度概括性的全面考查，也有針對(duì)某一具體文化現(xiàn)象的考查；體現(xiàn)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)與時(shí)代發(fā)展相融合；體裁上有：提綱作文；開放性作文；圖表作文；看圖作文；內(nèi)容上選材貼近考生實(shí)際生活。所寫內(nèi)容都是學(xué)生熟悉內(nèi)容。盡管對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容有限制，學(xué)生仍有較大的自由發(fā)揮空間（自己的感想），以展示自己的個(gè)性和創(chuàng)意【備考策略】熟練掌握各種應(yīng)用文的基本構(gòu)架；積累基本詞匯和句式，尤其是簡(jiǎn)單基本句式，寫好簡(jiǎn)單句；背誦優(yōu)美的段落和范文，模仿高級(jí)句式和表達(dá)；加強(qiáng)審題（主題、時(shí)態(tài)）訓(xùn)練；練習(xí)書寫，達(dá)到整潔美觀的程度?！久}預(yù)測(cè)】預(yù)測(cè)2025年應(yīng)用文考查仍然貼近考生實(shí)際生活，以電子郵件和投稿為主，考查考生的解決問題能力。必備基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)：告知信通常是要求考生將某條信息告知外國(guó)友人的信件。常見的有告知上課計(jì)劃、會(huì)議、招聘信息、電話留言、活動(dòng)報(bào)名及安排等。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該先告知寫信目的，然后再講述要告知的具體信息。考點(diǎn)一、告知信【思路點(diǎn)撥】

通常寫作結(jié)構(gòu)為：第一段：點(diǎn)明寫信目的，簡(jiǎn)要寫明要告知的事情；第二段：寫明告知的具體事項(xiàng)（時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、前期準(zhǔn)備和活動(dòng)安排）；第三段：詢問對(duì)方是否要了解其它信息，并表達(dá)期待?！颈貍湓~匯和萬能句式】【篇首句】簡(jiǎn)要說明寫信目的1.Iamwritingthislettertotellyouthat…2.Iwouldliketotellyousomeinformation/detailsfor…3.Iamwritingthisletterbecause…4.Iheardthat...5.Myteachertoldme...6.I’minformedthat...7.Ireadinyournewspaper/websitethat...8.Irememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedin....9.I’mwritingtoexpress【篇中句】介紹活動(dòng)具體內(nèi)容。ThematchwilltakeplaceinourschoolgymontheafternoonofJuly4th.比賽將在7月4日學(xué)校體育館舉行。WewillplayagainsttheteamfromHongXingHighSchool.我們將與紅星高中對(duì)決。Inordertowinthematch,weshouldgetfullypreparedandpracticehard.為了贏得這場(chǎng)比賽，我們要充分準(zhǔn)備，刻苦練習(xí)。Sofromtomorrow,weneedtotrainfortwohoursafterschooleveryday.從明天開始，需要每天放學(xué)后訓(xùn)練兩小時(shí)。Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.請(qǐng)周一到周五每天下午6點(diǎn)半到學(xué)校體育館?！酒簿洹勘磉_(dá)感受。Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthatwecanwinthegame.Let’stryhardtogether!有你在。我們相信一定會(huì)贏。讓我們一起努力！Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,pleaseletmeknow.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.如果你有任何其他問題，請(qǐng)告知我。期待你的到來?！緦懽髂０濉磕０澧貲ear________,I’mwritingtoletyouknowthat_______________________(告知寫信目的).Thematchwilltakeplace___________________________(簡(jiǎn)明扼要地告知活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)).Wewillplayagainsttheteamfrom_______________________.Inordertowinthematch,______________________(賽前等的決心）.Sofromtomorrow,weneedto_____________________________(具體準(zhǔn)備事宜）.Pleasecometotheschoolgymat6:30pmfromMondaytoFriday.You’reanexcellentplayer.Withyouontheteam,weareconfidentthat____________________(表達(dá)期待和鼓勵(lì)).Let’stryhardtogether!Cheers,LiHua模板②Dear________,I’mgladtolearnthat________________(了解到的情況）.I’mwritingtoexpressthewarmwelcomefrommeandmyfamily.NowIwanttotellyousomethingabouttheplans(寫信目的）.Thedetailsareasfollows（告知細(xì)節(jié)）.Inthemorning,_______________________(活動(dòng)安排）.Intheafternoon,wewill___________.Intheevening,notonlywillwe____________,butalsowewill___________（按照時(shí)間順序活動(dòng)安排）.I’msurewewill______________________（表達(dá)感受）.Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,pleaseletmeknow.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.(期望表達(dá)）.【2024新課標(biāo)Ⅰ&II卷】假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmycreativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.Inaword,Itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生給Chris寫一封信,分享在公園上美術(shù)課的經(jīng)歷。【詳解】1.詞匯積累決定：decide→determine整個(gè)的：entire→whole提供：offer→provide總之：inaword→inshort2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.拓展句：BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark’spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.(that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)[高分句型2]IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.(as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)（24-25高三上·山東濟(jì)南·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，在暑假參與了一次社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Frank寫封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1.你做的工作；2.你的收獲。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearFrank,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestregards,LiHua【答案】DearFrank,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Duringthesummervacation,Iparticipatedinacommunityvolunteerserviceactivity.Mymaintasksincludedhelpingtocleanupthelocalparkandassistinginorganizingacharityeventforunderprivilegedchildren.Thisexperiencewasincrediblyrewardingasitallowedmetogivebacktothecommunityanddevelopadeepersenseofsocialresponsibility.Ialsomadenewfriendsandlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.Iamlookingforwardtoparticipatinginmoresuchactivitiesinthefuture.Bestregards,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給英國(guó)朋友Frank寫封郵件，分享暑假期間參與的社區(qū)志愿者服務(wù)活動(dòng)的經(jīng)歷?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累參加：participatein→takepartin幫助：help→assist值得的：rewarding→worthwhile有價(jià)值的：valuable→precious2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Ialsomadenewfriendsandlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.拓展句：NotonlydidIalsomakenewfriends,butalsoIlearnedvaluableteamworkskills.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Mymaintasksincludedhelpingtocleanupthelocalparkandassistinginorganizingacharityeventforunderprivilegedchildren.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞helping和assisting作賓語）【高分句型2】Thisexperiencewasincrediblyrewardingasitallowedmetogivebacktothecommunityanddevelopadeepersenseofsocialresponsibility.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句）考點(diǎn)二、演講稿必備基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)：演講稿是在較為隆重的儀式上和某些公眾場(chǎng)合發(fā)表的講話文稿，是人們?cè)诠ぷ骱蜕鐣?huì)生活中經(jīng)常使用的一種文體。演講一般用以交流思想感情、表達(dá)主張見解等，具有宣傳、鼓動(dòng)、教育等作用，以期使聽眾信服并在思想感情上產(chǎn)生共鳴。1)主題演講類：圍繞某一主題提煉延伸，交流思想情感，將聽眾的思維引向更高的境界，升

華主題(對(duì)主題的見解+自己的做法)2)觀點(diǎn)發(fā)表類：在會(huì)議或重要活動(dòng)上就某話題發(fā)表自己的主張、見解(正反觀點(diǎn)/利弊+自己

的主張)3)儀式致辭類：在儀式上說明活動(dòng)安排或回顧以往活動(dòng)，表示歡迎、感謝、勉勵(lì)、祝賀等，

交流感想，表達(dá)祝愿(活動(dòng)安排+目的/活動(dòng)回顧+收獲)【思路點(diǎn)撥】

【演講稿的基本結(jié)構(gòu)】首段簡(jiǎn)短介紹1.歡迎聽眾(welcomeyouraudience)2.介紹主題/自我介紹(briefintroductionofyoursubject)*TodayIamgoingtotalkabout…*Thepurposeofmypresentationistointroduce…3.說明演講結(jié)構(gòu)(explainthestructureofyourspeech)*I’llmainlytalkaboutthreepoints…*Duringmytalk,I’llbelookingatthreeareas.First,…Second,…Third,…*I’vedividedmypresentationintofourparts.Theyare…主體演講的正文陳述主題(presentthesubjectitself)*So,tostartwith,I’dliketotalkaboutthe…*Thefirstproblemtodayisthat…*Let’sgotothefirsttopic…結(jié)束概括總結(jié)1.總結(jié)演講(summarizeyourspeech)*Toconclude/Inconclusion/Now,tosumup,…*SoletmesummarizewhatI’vesaid.*Finally,I’dliketorepeatthepointsImadeatthebeginning.*Inconclusion,myrecommendationsare…*Ithereforesuggest/propose/recommendthefollowingstrategy.2.致謝聽眾(thankyouraudience)*Manythanksforyourattention.*Thankyouallforbeingsuchanattentiveaudience.【演講稿寫作步驟】第一步：對(duì)聽眾的稱呼語最常用的是

Ladiesandgentlemen，也可根據(jù)不同情況，選用

Fellowstudents,Distinguishedguests,MrChairman,HonorableJudges(評(píng)委)等等。第二步：提出論題由于演講的時(shí)間限制，必須開門見山，提出論題。提出論題的方法有各種各樣，但最生動(dòng)，最能引起注意的是用舉例法。比如：你要呼吁大家關(guān)心貧窮地區(qū)的孩子，你可以用親眼看到的或者收集到的那些貧窮孩子多么需要幫助的實(shí)例開始。另外，用具體的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)也是一個(gè)有效的引出論題的方法，比如：你要談遵守交通規(guī)則的話題，你可以從舉一系列有關(guān)車輛、車禍等的數(shù)據(jù)開始。第三步：論證對(duì)提出的論題，不可主觀地妄下結(jié)論，而要進(jìn)行客觀的論證。這是演講中最需要下功夫的部分。關(guān)鍵是要把道理講清楚。常見的論證方法有舉例法、因果法、對(duì)比法等等，可參見英語議論文的有關(guān)章節(jié)。第四步：結(jié)論結(jié)論要簡(jiǎn)明扼要，以給聽眾留下深刻印象。第五步：結(jié)尾結(jié)尾要簡(jiǎn)潔，不要拉拉扯扯，說個(gè)沒完。特別是不要受漢語影響，說些類似＂準(zhǔn)備不足，請(qǐng)諒解＂，＂請(qǐng)批評(píng)指正＂這樣的廢話。最普通的結(jié)尾就是：Thankyouverymuchforyourattention.【必備詞匯】1.takepartin/participatein 參加2.beahelpfulwaytodosth. 是做某事的一種有用方法3.preparefor/getreadyfor 做準(zhǔn)備4.develop/formagoodhabitof… 養(yǎng)成……的好習(xí)慣5.intheprocess/courseof… 在……的過程中6.payattentionto/attachimportanceto 注意7.try/doone’sbesttodosth./makeeveryefforttodosth. 盡力做某事8.turn.Into. （使）變成；成為9.takeresponsibilitytodosth. 負(fù)責(zé)做某事10.narrowthegenerationgap 縮小代溝11.guideto 帶領(lǐng)到12.behelpful/beneficialto 對(duì)……有幫助13.beofgreatbenefit 有很大的好處14.makegooduseof.… 好好利用15.takeaction/steps/measures 采取行動(dòng) 16.Itishightimesb.didsth. 到了某人該做某事的時(shí)候17.beboundto 一定要……；注定18.turninto. （使）變成；成為19.makeadifference 有影響；起（重要）作用20.inconclusion 最后，綜上所述【萬能句式】【經(jīng)典句型一】最常用的演講開場(chǎng)句型1.Iamhonoredto...我很榮幸……【短評(píng)】這是演講的第一大王牌句型，幾乎每一場(chǎng)演講都要以這個(gè)句型作為開場(chǎng)白。有人提出，這個(gè)句型已經(jīng)到了陳詞濫調(diào)（cliche）的地步。但是，謙虛永遠(yuǎn)是一種美德，這個(gè)句型之所以能被古今中外無數(shù)演講大師所采用，當(dāng)然有其吸引人的地方。2.Iamhonoredtohaveachancetospeaktoyoutoday.我今天很榮幸跟大家講幾句。3.Iamhonoredtobehereonsuchaspecialoccasion.我很榮幸在這個(gè)特別的時(shí)刻來到這里。4.IamhonoredtointroducethefounderofCrazyEnglish，Mr.LiYang.我很榮幸地為大家介紹瘋狂英語創(chuàng)始人—李陽先生。這個(gè)句型也可以說成＂It’smy(great)honorto...＂【經(jīng)典句型二】最具感情色彩的演講句型1.Wordscan’texpress...言語表達(dá)不了……2.Wordscan’texpresshowluckyIam.簡(jiǎn)直不能用言語來表達(dá)我有多幸運(yùn)。3.Wordscan’texpresshowthankfulIam.言語表達(dá)不了我的感激之情。【經(jīng)典句型三】最平實(shí)的演講過度句型1.TodayIwanttotalktoyouabout...今天我想跟你們談?wù)劇ㄑ葜v都有個(gè)主題，如何在演講中介紹自己的主題呢？這個(gè)句型是最常用的。）2.TodayIwanttotalktoyouaboutaveryimportantsubject.今天我將和你們談一個(gè)非常重要的話題。3.TodayIwanttotalktoyouaboutthefutureofbusinessinChina.今天我將和你們談一談中國(guó)的商業(yè)前景問題。【經(jīng)典句型四】最具表達(dá)力的演講句型1.Isincerelyhope...我衷心希望……2.Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakeaminutetothinkaboutthefuture.我們真心希望你能花一點(diǎn)時(shí)間考慮一下未來。3.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillhaveawonderfultimetonight.我們衷心希望你們今晚過得開心。【經(jīng)典句型五】最具領(lǐng)導(dǎo)風(fēng)格的演講句型1.Iaskallofyoupresentto...我要求在座各位……2.Iaskallofyoupresenttojoinmeinraisingyourglassestooureverlastingfriendship.我要求在座的各位與我一起舉杯，為我們的友誼長(zhǎng)青干杯。3.Iaskallofyoupresenttojoinhandsinthebattleagainstcorruption.我要求在座各位攜起手來反腐敗?！窘?jīng)典句型六】最具感染力的演講句型1.IknowIspeakfor...我知道我在為……說話。2.IknowIspeakforthepresidentandalltheemployees.我知道我是代表著經(jīng)理和所有的員工在說話。3.IknowIspeakforseveralpeopleinthisroomwhenIsaythatwearethankfulfortheimprovementsinthecompany.當(dāng)我說我們?yōu)楣緺顩r改善感到欣慰時(shí)，我知道這是代表你們當(dāng)中幾個(gè)人所說的?！窘?jīng)典句型七】最具煽動(dòng)性的演講句型1.Iwanttoremind...我想提醒……2.Iwanttoremindyouthatit’snevertoolatetolearn.3.我想提醒你們，無論何時(shí)開始學(xué)習(xí)都不遲。4.Iwanttoremindyouallthatwesharetheresponsibility.我想提醒大家，我們都得承擔(dān)責(zé)任。【經(jīng)典句型八】最常用的演講結(jié)束句型1.Iwishyouthebestofluckin...我祝你……好運(yùn)（這個(gè)句型不但演講中常用，很多場(chǎng)合也能用得上，比如信函的結(jié)尾等。）2.Iwishyouthebestofluckinyournewbusinessventure.祝你們新公司生意興隆。3.Iwishyouthebestofluckineverythingyoudo.祝你們一切順利。【經(jīng)典句型九】最具修辭色彩的演講句型1.Asknotwhat...candoforyou,askwhatyoucandofor...

不要問……能為你做什么，問問你能為……做什么【短評(píng)】肯尼迪總統(tǒng)的那句＂Asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforyourcountry.＂成了千古絕唱，為世人廣為傳頌。我們可以將他這個(gè)句子中的魚骨抽出來，造出不少同樣鏗鏘有力，同樣震撼人心的句子。2.AsknotwhatChinacandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforChina.不要問中國(guó)能為你做什么，問問你能為中國(guó)做什么。3.Asknotwhatsocietycandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforsociety.不要問社會(huì)能為你做什么，問問你能為社會(huì)做什么。4.Asknotwhatotherscandoforyou,askwhatyoucandoforothers.不要問別人能為你做什么，問問你能為別人做什么?！窘?jīng)典句型十】最具震撼力的演講句型1....meansagreatdealto...對(duì)……意義重大。2.Thisprojectmeansagreatdealtoourcompany.這項(xiàng)目對(duì)我們公司來說意義重大。3.Ourcompany’ssuccessmeansagreatdealtoChina.我們公司的成功對(duì)中國(guó)來說意義重大。【寫作模板】模板①Boysandgirls/Ladiesandgentlemen,It’sagreathonorformetostandhereandgivemyspeech._________（表示榮幸）Mynameis

__________.（自我介紹）Thetopicofmyspeechis

___________.（提出演講主題）Tobeginwith,manypeoplesuggestthat

___________.（話題或現(xiàn)象列舉）Secondly,

___________.Thirdly,

___________

.WhatIwanttostressisthat

___________.（重申主題）Foronething,

.Foranother,

.Besides,

___________.（原因或重要性列舉）Inaword,

___________.（總結(jié)）模板②Goodmorning/afternoon/evening,everyone,It’snicetoseeallofyouhere.Ifeelhonoredtohaveopportunitytogive/make/deliveryouaspeechisagreatpleasureformetospeakhere.Thetopicofmyspeechis___________________./TodayIwilltalkabout________________./It’snicetotalk/speakabout…(演講的主題)Firstofall,___________________.Besides,________________.Secondly,_________________________.What’smore,__________________(具體內(nèi)容)AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion,_____________.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat____________.Thanksforyourattention/listening.(總結(jié)演講)【2024全國(guó)甲卷】英語課要求做課堂展示,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯激活提供：offer→provide極大地：dramatically→tremendously減少：reduce→decrease總之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)（24-25高三上·福建南平·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，報(bào)名參加學(xué)?！癇eSporty,BeHealthy”為主題的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你寫一份英文演講稿，內(nèi)容包括:1.問題:學(xué)業(yè)緊張，疏于活動(dòng);2.建議:合理安排，正常鍛煉注意:詞數(shù)80左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】BeSporty,BeHealthyHello,everyone!Ifeelhonoredtobeheretotalktoyouonexercise.Westudentsareheavilyburdenedwithschoolwork,andthussparelittletimeforregularphysicalexercise.However,weallneedasoundbody.SoIsuggestwefitexerciseintoourbusyschedule,makingitpartofourdailyroutine.Putdownourbookstostretchourarmsfromtimetotime.Dosomejoggingandjumpingeveryday.Ifweareabletomakeexercisingourlifehabit,wewillsurelybenefitfromitbothphysicallyandmentally.That’sall.Thankyou.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“BeSporty,BeHealthy”為主題，寫一篇演講稿參加學(xué)校舉辦的演講比賽?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累然而：however→nevertheless健康的：sound→healthy建議：suggest→recommend能夠做某事：beabletodosth.→havetheabilitytodosth.2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,weallneedasoundbody.拓展句：However,weallneedasoundbody,whichisessentialforleadingahealthyandactivelife.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】SoIsuggestwefitexerciseintoourbusyschedule,makingitpartofourdailyroutine.（suggest后面運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句，that被省略）【高分句型2】Ifweareabletomakeexercisingourlifehabit,wewillsurelybenefitfromitbothphysicallyandmentally.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）（最新模擬試題演練）Writing1（24-25高三上·山東青島·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華，上周你校師生和英國(guó)交換生共同開展了一次文藝演出活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Tim寫一封郵件分享這次活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)介紹；2.你的感想。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右：2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearTim,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTim,I’mexcitedtosharewithyouaculturalperformanceeventheldatourschoollastweek,whichinvolvedbothourteachers,students,andBritishexchangestudents.Theeventfeaturedvariousperformances,includingtraditionalChinesedances,Britishfolksongs,andajointdramaperformance.Itwasafantasticopportunityforculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.

Personally,Ifoundtheeventincrediblyenriching.ItnotonlydeepenedmyunderstandingofBritishculturebutalsostrengthenedthebondbetweenusandtheexchangestudents.Ihopewecanhavemoresucheventsinthefuture.

Yours,

LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作，要求考生給英國(guó)朋友Tim寫封信，向其介紹學(xué)校上周舉辦的文藝演出活動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?．詞匯積累：激動(dòng)的：excited→thrilled；機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance；豐富的：enriching→fulfilling；加深：deepen→enhance。2.句式拓展：簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句。原句：Itwasafantasticopportunityforculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.拓展句：Itwasafantasticopportunitywherewecouldengageinculturalexchangeandmutuallearning.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】I’mexcitedtosharewithyouaculturalperformanceeventheldatourschoollastweek,whichinvolvedbothourteachers,students,andBritishexchangestudents.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】ItnotonlydeepenedmyunderstandingofBritishculturebutalsostrengthenedthebondbetweenusandtheexchangestudents.（運(yùn)用了notonly…butalso…結(jié)構(gòu)）Writing2（2024·湖南永州·一模）假定你是李華,上周六你參加了學(xué)校舉行的以“保護(hù)海洋”為主題的創(chuàng)意作品大賽。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Ryan寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷,內(nèi)容包括:1.參賽過程（包括你的參賽作品等）；2.你的感受。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan,I’mwritingtosharewithyouourschool’screativeworkcompetitionIparticipatedinlastSaturday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mwritingtosharewithyouourschool’screativeworkcompetitionIparticipatedinlastSaturday.Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,includingposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.Imadeananimationvideotoshowthelivingconditionsoffishbeforeandaftertheseawaspolluted,emphasizingtheimportanceofprotectingoceans,whichreceivedunanimouspraisefromjudges.Thiscontestnotonlywonmeanaward,butalsohelpedmemakemanylike-mindedfriendsandstrengthenedmydeterminationtoprotecttheocean.Smallactionsaswetake,itwill,Ibelieve,makeahugedifferenceinourlife.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信寫作。要求考生給英國(guó)朋友Ryan寫封郵件，分享學(xué)校上周六舉行的一“保護(hù)海洋”為主題的創(chuàng)意作品大賽，介紹參賽過程和感受?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累：主題：theme→topic大量的、許多的：agreatnumberof→plentyof各種各樣的：avarietyof→allkindsof強(qiáng)調(diào)：emphasize→highlight比賽：competition→contest2.句式拓展：同義句轉(zhuǎn)換：原句：Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,includingposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.拓展句：Withthethemeof“OceanProtection”,agreatnumberofcompetitorsfromdifferentgradesofourschoolproducedavarietyofcreativeworks,whichincludedposters,T-shirts,handbags,videosandsoon.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Imadeananimationvideotoshowthelivingconditionsoffishbeforeandaftertheseawaspolluted,emphasizingtheimportanceofprotectingoceans,whichreceivedunanimouspraisefromjudges.（運(yùn)用了以連詞beforeandafter引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和以關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句。）【高分句型2】Smallactionsaswetake,itwill,Ibelieve,makeahugedifferenceinourlife.（運(yùn)用了以連詞as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句的倒裝句和插入語形式。）Writing3（24-25高三上·河南·開學(xué)考試）假定你是李華。上周六你校攝影社團(tuán)到社區(qū)養(yǎng)老院給老人拍照。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封電子郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1.拍攝過程；2.你的感想。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheexperienceourphotographyclubhadlastSaturday._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearChris,IamwritingtosharewithyoutheexperienceourphotographyclubhadlastSaturday.Wevisitedacommunitynursinghometotakephotosoftheelderlyresidents.Theprocesswasbothheartwarmingandeye-opening.Wespenttimeinteractingwiththeseniors,listeningtotheirstories,andcapturingtheirjoyfulmoments.Personally,itwasatouchingexperience.Seeingthesmilesontheirfacesandhearingtheirlifestoriesmademeappreciatetheimportanceofcherishingeverymomentandconnectingwithothers.Itwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlifeandtheimpactofakindgesture.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求學(xué)生以李華的身份，給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封電子郵件，分享校攝影社團(tuán)到社區(qū)養(yǎng)老院給老人拍照的經(jīng)歷，需涵蓋拍攝過程和個(gè)人感想兩方面的內(nèi)容。【詳解】1.詞匯積累感人的：heartwarming→touching,moving,affecting與……交流：interactwith→communicatewith,engagewith在我看來：personally→frommypointofview,inmyopinion珍惜：cherish→treasure影響：impact→influence2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Itwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlifeandtheimpactofakindgesture.拓展句：Itremindedmethattherearesimplejoysinlifeandakindgesturecanmakeadifference.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Wevisitedacommunitynursinghometotakephotosoftheelderlyresidents.(運(yùn)用了不定式短語作目的狀語)[高分句型2]Seeingthesmilesontheirfacesandhearingtheirlifestoriesmademeappreciatetheimportanceofcherishingeverymomentandconnectingwithothers.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞短語作主語)Writing4（24-25高三上·廣東·開學(xué)考試）假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，你們學(xué)校上周舉辦了高三啟動(dòng)儀式(Kick-offCeremony)，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件與英國(guó)筆友Paul分享此事。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的目的和內(nèi)容;2.你的感想。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPaul,Hopethise-mailfindsyouwell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearPaul,Hopethise-mailfindsyouwell.I’mexcitedtosharewithyoutheSeniorThreeKick-offCeremonythattookplaceatourschoollastweek,whoseaimwastomarkthebeginningofourjourneytowardsthecrucialGaokaoandinspireustobemoredetermined.Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,emphasizingthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.Astudentrepresentativesharedhislearningstrategies.Themostinspiringmomentcamewhenwechorusedourdetermination.Theceremonyisagreatmotivator,inspiringmetoresolvetogivemybestinthecomingyearandtacklethechallengesahead.Yours,LiHua【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國(guó)筆友Paul寫封郵件，分享上周學(xué)校舉辦的高三啟動(dòng)儀式?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累

激勵(lì)：inspire→motivate目標(biāo)：aim→goal激動(dòng)的：excited→thrilled處理：tackle→dealwith

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,emphasizingthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.

拓展句：Duringtheevent,ourheadmasterdeliveredaspeech,whichemphasizedthevalueofhardwork,perseverance,andapositivemindset.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Themostinspiringmomentcamewhenwechorusedourdetermination.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）

【高分句型2】I’mexcitedtosharewithyoutheSeniorThreeKick-offCeremonythattookplaceatourschoollastweek,whoseaimwastomarkthebeginningofourjourneytowardsthecrucialGaokaoandinspireustobemoredetermined.（運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）Writing5（24-25高三上·江西南昌·開學(xué)考試）假定你是學(xué)生李華，你校將舉辦一次有關(guān)農(nóng)業(yè)勞動(dòng)課重要性的英語演講比賽，你將代表班級(jí)參賽，請(qǐng)你以“Ontheimportanceofhands-onagriculturallaborcourse”為主題寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.同學(xué)們對(duì)此課程的看法；2.學(xué)習(xí)農(nóng)業(yè)勞動(dòng)課的意義。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Ladiesandgentlemen,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ladiesandgentlemen,Iamhonoredtostandheretodeliveraspeech.Todaymythemeisabout“Ontheimportanceofhands-onagri