2024-2025學年外研版八年級英語上期考點 專題06 書面表達（11篇） 【考題猜想】

專題06書面表達1．（23-24八年級上·天津西青·期中）假如你是李華，21世紀英文報正在開展以“HowtolearnEnglish”為題的征文活動，請你根據(jù)下列提示內容寫一篇英語短文介紹一下你的英語學習方法。要求：（1）中心突出，語意連貫，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、學校；（3）不少于80詞。內容提示：（1）經(jīng)常聽英文廣播、看英文電影；（Englishradioprograms）（2）英語課上要講英語，課后也要盡可能多地講英語；（asmuchaspossible）（3）學唱英文歌曲；（4）結交一個英國或美國的筆友，經(jīng)常用英語寫信。（penfriend）HowtolearnEnglishTherearemanywaystolearnEnglishwell.Nowletmetellyou________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：HowtolearnEnglishTherearemanywaystolearnEnglishwell.Nowletmetellyousomeofmymethods.First,IoftenlistentoEnglishradioprogramsandwatchEnglishmovies.Thishelpsmeimprovemylisteningskills.Second,ItrytospeakEnglishasmuchaspossiblebothinandoutofclass.Thispracticeisessentialforimprovingmyspeakingskills.Third,IenjoylearningEnglishsongs,whichnotonlymakeslearningfunbutalsohelpswithpronunciationandvocabulary.Lastly,IhaveapenfriendfromtheUK,andweoftenwriteletterstoeachotherinEnglish.Thishelpsmeimprovemywritingskillsandlearnmoreaboutdifferentcultures.Byfollowingthesemethods,IbelieveanyonecanlearnEnglishwell.【詳解】總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示；以“HowtolearnEnglish”為主題，根據(jù)提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，以“怎樣學好英語”引出主題并提出建議；第二步，逐條闡述建議，從聽英文廣播和看英文電影、學唱英文歌曲、多講英語、多讀英文讀物和交筆友等方面給出建議；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①listento聽②asmuchaspossible盡可能多地③isessentialfor對……來說是必不可少的④notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①IenjoylearningEnglishsongs,whichnotonlymakeslearningfunbutalsohelpswithpronunciationandvocabulary.(which引導的定語從句)②Byfollowingthesemethods,IbelieveanyonecanlearnEnglishwell.(賓語從句)2．（23-24八年級上·北京大興·期中）根據(jù)所給提示，完成一篇不少于50詞的英語文段寫作。文中已給內容不計入總詞數(shù)。所給提示詞語僅供選用。請不要寫出你的校名和姓名。來自英國的John一直期待能夠到北京旅行，以更好地了解這座城市，同時親身體驗當?shù)氐奈幕?。假設你是李華，請你通過書信的形式，向他描述北京的城市概況，介紹來北京旅行的最佳時間及在北京能夠去哪里、做什么。提示詞語：old,beautiful,autumn.Beijingopera,duck,citywalk提示問題：1.WhatisBeijinglike?2.WhatisthebesttimetovisitBeijing?3.WhatcanavisitordoinBeijing?DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyouwouldliketocomeandvisitBeijing._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyouwouldliketocomeandvisitBeijing.IthinkBeijing,thecapitalofChinaisagoodplacetovisit.Itisacitywithalonghistory.It’salsooneofthebiggestcitiesinChina.PeopleinBeijingarekindandfriendly.Theyarealwaysgladtohelpothers.Theweatherisnottoohotinautumn.It’sagoodseasonforyoutovisitBeijing.Therearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity.Asforfood,BeijingRoastDuckisthemostfamousanditisverydelicious.IfyougotoBeijing,don’tmissit.

IbelieveifyougotoBeijing,youwillhaveagreatvacation.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山歡迎對方來北京；第二步，具體介紹北京的情況；第三步，書寫結語，表達自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①thecapitalofChina中國的首都②withalonghistory有著悠久的歷史③suchas例如④Asfor至于[高分句型]①IthinkBeijing,thecapitalofChinaisagoodplacetovisit.(動詞不定式作后置定語)②IfyougotoBeijing,don’tmissit.(if引導條件狀語從句)3．（23-24八年級上·天津濱海新·期中）假設你是小華，你的筆友托尼本周末將要來你的家鄉(xiāng)天津游玩。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一封郵件，簡要介紹天津，并為他的行程提出一些建議。簡介：1.天津位于中國北部，渤海沿岸；2.現(xiàn)在比以前更大、更繁忙了，天津的人口也比很多城市的人口要多；建議：3.乘船游海河，費用是80元，是最舒適的方式；4.去茶館聽相聲，了解天津傳統(tǒng)文化。要求：1.詞數(shù)60~80，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.包含上述所有要點，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：相聲crosstalk

海河HaiheRiver

渤海BohaiSea

文化cultureDearTony,I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.Iwillintroducemyhometowntoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,XiaoHua【答案】例文DearTony,I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.Iwillintroducemyhometowntoyou.TianjinislocatedinnorthernChina,alongtheBohaiSea.Tianjinisnowbiggerandbusierthanever.ThepopulationofTianjinisevenbiggerthanmanyothercities.Afteryoucome,wecantakeaboattriptoHaiheRiver.Thecostis80yuan.Travelingbyboatisthemostcomfortableway.What’smore,wecangototheteahousetolistentocrosstalkandlearnmoreaboutthetraditionalcultureofTianjin.I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtimehereandloveTianjintoo. Iamlookingforwardtoseeingyousoon.Yours,XiaoHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“簡介”中天津的特征和去天津游玩的行程的介紹要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出即將介紹天津的話題；第二步，具體闡述天津的特征以及提出幾個游玩天津的建議；第三步，書寫結語。表達“希望托尼來到天津”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①belocatedin位于②thepopulationof……的人口③what’smore還有④haveagoodtime玩得開心[高分句型]①I’mhappytohearthatyouwillcometoTianjinthisweekend.(that引導的賓語從句)②What’smore,wecangototheteahousetolistentocrosstalkandlearnmoreaboutthetraditionalcultureofTianjin.(and接兩個并列句)4．（23-24八年級上·山東德州·期中）為紀念世界動物日，我校廣播站將舉辦以ProtectingAnimals為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下提示，準備一篇演講稿。提示：TheirsituationindangerWhyanimalsareindangerlosehomekillthemforfurormeatWhyweprotectanimalsourfriendsprotectthemisprotectingourselvesHowtoprotectthemDon’tcutdowntheforest.Don’tkillorbuyanimals.要求：1.短文必須包含所給要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順、語法正確、書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名、校名和地名；4.詞數(shù)：80~100詞左右。Boysandgirls,Goodmorning!________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Boysandgirls,Goodmorning!Animalsareourfriendsandweshouldtreatthemkindly.However,manyanimalsareindangerbecauseofhuman’sactivities.Peoplecutdowntreesandforests,solotsofanimalslosehome.Moreover,somehunterskillanimalsfortheirfurormeattomakemoney.Inmyopinion,it’sourdutytoprotectthem.Becauseanimalsareourfriendsandprotectingthemisprotectingourselves.First,wemuststopkillingandcuttingdowntheforest.Second,weshouldn’tkillorbuyanimals.Hopeourworldbetterandbetter.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求根據(jù)提示內容介紹動物的處境并給出建議，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹動物的處境；第二步，表明自己的觀點；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①becauseof因為②Inmyopinion在我看來③cutdown砍倒④betterandbetter越來越好[高分句型]①Animalsareourfriendsandweshouldtreatthemkindly.（并列句）②Becauseanimalsareourfriendsandprotectingthemisprotectingourselves.（原因狀語從句）5．（23-24八年級上·浙江寧波·期中）上星期，Alice對自己所在城市的超市、影院和學校做了一項調查。請根據(jù)下面表格結果，寫一份調查報告。注意：1.短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.可作適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80個左右，短文的開頭和結尾句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。ThebestnamereasonsupermarketSanjiangSupermarketclosestto,cheap,bestqualitymovietheaterWandaCinemamostcomfortableseats,biggestscreen,popularschoolNo.1MiddleSchoolbeautiful,bestteachers,friendlytoLastweek,Alicemadeasurveyaboutsupermarkets,movietheatersandschoolsinhercity.Herearetheresults._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Shehopesthisreportcanhelppeoplemakegooddecisions.【答案】例文Lastweek,Alicemadeasurveyaboutsupermarkets,movietheatersandschoolsinhercity.Herearetheresults.Ofallthesupermarkets,shethinksSanjiangSupermarketisthebest.It’stheclosesttoherhome.Allthethingsthereareverycheap.Andtheyhavethebestquality,too.Asformovietheaters,WandaCinemaisthebest.Ithasthebiggestscreenandthemostcomfortableseats.Soitisquitepopularwithyoungpeople.ThebestschoolinhercityisNo.1MiddleSchool.Itisverybeautiful.What’smore,ithasthebestteachers.Theyarefriendlytothestudents.Shehopesthisreportcanhelppeoplemakegooddecisions.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)表格中的內容介紹Alice對自己所在城市的超市、影院和學校做了一項調查的結果，適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)表格內容介紹城市里最好的超市、影院和學校以及原因；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①asfor至于②bepopularwithsb.受某人的歡迎③befriendlyto對某人友好[高分句型]Ofallthesupermarkets,shethinksSanjiangSupermarketisthebest.(省略that的賓語從句)6．（23-24八年級上·天津和平·期中）假如你是張華，你的美國筆友Tony對中文學習產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣并發(fā)了一封電子郵件向你請教如何學好中文。請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他回一封電子郵件。內容包括：1.看中文電影、聽中文歌曲、讀中文雜志、報刊等，猜測生詞意思。2.盡可能地多說、不要害怕犯錯誤。3.把漢字寫在卡片上，利用卡片記憶漢字等。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：Chinesecharacters漢字

magazine雜志DearTony,Ireceivedyouremailyesterday.Intheemail,youaskedmehowtoimproveyourChinese.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thesearemysuggestions.Ihopetheyareusefultoyou.Yours,ZhangHua【答案】例文DearTony,Ireceivedyouremailyesterday.Intheemail,youaskedmehowtoimproveyourChinese.NowI’dliketogiveyousomeadvice.WatchingChinesefilmsandlisteningtoChinesesongsaregreatwaystolearnChinese.It’salsoagoodideatoreadChinesenewspapersandmagazines.Justguessthemeaningofthenewwordswhilelisteningorreading.Also,speakChineseasmuchasyoucananddon’tbeafraidtomakemistakes.WhynotwritefourorfiveChinesecharactersonacardandputitintoyourpocket?Readandrememberthemwhenyouarefree.IbelieveyouwilllearnChinesewell.Thesearemysuggestions.Ihopetheyareusefultoyou.Yours,ZhangHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”為主；③提示：寫作的內容要點“有關于學好中文的建議”已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息，可適當補充細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作目的；第二步，根據(jù)要點給出學好中文的建議；第三步，表達“希望建議有用”。[亮點詞匯]①asmuchasyoucan盡你所能②beafraidtodosth.害怕做某事③makemistakes犯錯[高分句型]①It’salsoagoodideatoreadChinesenewspapersandmagazines.（it作形式主語）②Readandrememberthemwhenyouarefree.（when引導的時間狀語從句）7．（23-24八年級上·天津河東·期中）

假如你叫李磊，你的朋友Tom打算從上海來你所在的城市天津旅游。請你根據(jù)以下要點，給Tom寫一封電子郵件。(1)天津位于中國東部，以海河而聞名，有大約700年的歷史，有許多名勝古跡；(2)現(xiàn)在，天津比以前更大、更繁華，有1600多萬人口；(3)每年，許多游客來到天津。來這兒的旅行方式多樣化，乘飛機是最昂貴的交通方式，但也是最快的。要提前買好票；(4)在天津，可以乘船游覽海河；品嘗美味食物；在茶館可以觀看戲劇，看魔術表演，喝茶聊天；(5)我希望……提示詞：位于lie；名勝古跡placesofinterest；乘船游覽海河takeaboattouronHaiheRiver；品嘗taste；美味delicious要求：(1)緊扣主題，要點齊全，語法正確，注意時態(tài)和人稱，書寫規(guī)范，可適當發(fā)揮。(2)詞數(shù)：80—100詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearTom,I’mgladtohearthatyou’llcometoTianjin.Tianjinlies____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiLei【答案】例文:DearTom,

I’mgladtohearthatyou’llcometoTianjin.TianjinliesintheeastofChina.Itisabout700yearsold.ItisfamousfortheHaiheRiver.IfyoucometoTianjin,youcanseemanyplacesofinterest.WiththecontinuousdevelopmentofTianjin,itisbiggerandbusierthanbefore.NowTianjinhasapopulationofover16million.

Everyyear,plentyoftouristswhoarefromallovertheworldcomehere.YouhavemanywaystocometoTianjin.Planeisthemostexpensiveway,butitisalsothefastest.Bookyourticketaheadbeforeyoutravel.

YoucantakeaboattouronHaiheRiver.Youcanalsotasteallkindsofdeliciousfood.Intheteahouse,youcanwatchanopera,enjoymagicshows,drinkteaandchat.

Ihopeyou’llenjoyyourselfhere.Ican’twaittoseeyou!Yours,LiLei【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：根據(jù)所給的寫作要點介紹天津這座城市，可適當加入細節(jié)，保持行文連貫，注意不要遺漏要點，時態(tài)和人稱要正確，避免語法錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步：總體介紹一下天津（包括地理位置，歷史，名勝古跡等）；第二步：介紹天津現(xiàn)在的情況；第三步：介紹每年天津的游客數(shù)量和來天津最快的交通方式；第四步：希望Tom能在天津玩得開心。[亮點詞匯]①befamousfor以……而聞名②hasapopulation人口為……③plentyof大量[高分句型]①IfyoucometoTianjin,youcanseemanyplacesofinterest.(if引導條件狀語從句)②Everyyear,plentyoftouristswhoarefromallovertheworldcomehere.(who引導限制性定語從句)8．（23-24八年級上·天津紅橋·期中）假如你是李華，來自天津。你新交的加拿大筆友Judy發(fā)來一封電子郵件，想了解你家鄉(xiāng)的情況。請你根據(jù)提示內容，回復她的郵件，向她介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)天津。(1)天津位于渤海沿岸，有大約14百萬的人口；(2)是一些著名大學的所在地；

(3)有許多旅游景點，比如天津之眼，瓷房子，海河；(4)因傳統(tǒng)美食和相聲表演而聞名。要求：(1)語句通順、意思連貫，語法正確。(2)包含所有提示要點，可適當發(fā)揮；(3)60~80詞(電子郵件的格式、開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))。詞匯：天津之眼

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狗不理包子GoubulisteamedstuffedbunsIt’sgoodtohearfromyou.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyhometownTianjin,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howdoyoulikemyhometown?Wouldyouliketovisitit?Yours,LiHua【答案】例文It’sgoodtohearfromyou.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyhometownTianjin.TianjinislocatedonthecoastofBohaiSea.Ithasapopulationofabout14million.TherearesomefamousuniversitiesinTianjin.Therearealsomanytouristattractionsinmyhometown,suchastheTientsinEye,ChinaHouseandHaiRiver.Thefoodinmyhometownisdeliciousandthecrosstalkshowsarewonderful.ItisespeciallyfamousforGoubulisteamedstuffedbuns.Howdoyoulikemyhometown?Wouldyouliketovisitit?Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意介紹清楚家鄉(xiāng)的位置、旅游勝地、特色等，不要遺漏。適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山。表明自己來自哪里。第二步，具體介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)的情況。介紹天津的位置人口、有著名大學、有什么著名的旅游景點、有哪些傳統(tǒng)美食和文化，必要時可適當展開描述，讓對方了解自己的家鄉(xiāng)。第三步，書寫結語。詢問對方是否了解了自己的家鄉(xiāng)，并提出邀請。[亮點詞匯]①islocatedon坐落于②apopulationof……人口③befamousfor以……而聞名[高分句型]①TherearesomefamousuniversitiesinTianjin.（Therebe句型）②Ithasapopulationofabout14million.（“Ithasapopulationof...”句型）9．（22-23八年級上·廣西柳州·期中）動物是人類的朋友，我們應該善待動物。請根據(jù)下表中的提示“Let’shelpanimals”為題寫一篇70詞左右的英語短文，呼吁人們熱愛動物，保護動物。開頭已給出，但不計入字數(shù)。動物數(shù)量減少的原因1.人們捕殺（kill）動物，為了得到它們的肉或皮毛（fur）；2.人們亂砍濫伐（cutdown）樹木，奪走（takeaway）了它們賴以生存的家園。保護動物的措施和建議1.禁止捕殺動物；2.禁止亂砍濫伐樹木：3.……Let’shelpanimalsAnimalsareourfriends.Weshouldbekindtothem.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】寫作范文：Animalsareourfriends.Weshouldbekindtothem.Butnowpeoplekillmanyofthemfortheirmeatorfur.Peoplealsocutdownmanytreesandtakeawaytheirhomes.Manyanimalshavenoplacetolivein,sotheyarebecomingfewerandfewer.Itisnotrighttokillanimals.Peopleshouldstopkillinganimalsandcuttingdowntrees.Ourgovernmentshouldplantmoreandmoretrees.Wealsoneedtoworkhardtosetupthenaturepark.

Inaword,let’sfindoutwhatelsewecandotosaveasmanyanimalsaspossible.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹動物數(shù)量減少的原因第二步，提出保護動物的建議；第三步，呼吁大家行動起來保護動物。[亮點詞匯]①cutdown砍倒②takeaway帶走③setup建立[高分句型]①Manyanimalshavenoplacetolivein,sotheyarebecomingfewerandfewer.（比較級+and+比較級）②Inaword,let’sfindoutwhatelsewecandotosaveasmanyanimalsaspossible.（賓語從句）10．（22-23八年級上·山東德州·期中）假如你是李華。今年暑假和父母去了不同的地方旅游。請根據(jù)你的旅行經(jīng)歷及內容提示，以“MyGreatTrips”為題，寫一篇80詞以上的英語短文，介紹一下你的旅行情況。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。要求：1.語言通順，要點齊全，條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名：3.80詞以上，文章的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。WhoMyparentsandIWhereShanghaiSichuanBeijingHowWhatvisittheOrientalPearlTVTower(東方明珠)anddosomeshoppinggotothewildlifepark(野生動物園)andwatchthepandasclimbtheGreatWallandlistentothePekingOperaThefeelingsStrongbeproudofFewprotectmanypeoplebecomeinterestedinloveourmotherlandMyGreatTripsHello,I’mLiHua.ThissummermyparentsandIwenttoseveralplaces.Itwasreallyagreattravelexperience.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,I’mLiHua.ThissummermyparentsandIwenttoseveralplaces.Itwasreallyagreattravelexperience.

First,wetookthetraintoShanghai.WevisitedtheOrientalPearlTVToweranddidsomeshopping.WhenIsawthegreatbuilding,Iwassoproudofourmotherland.Ithinkourmotherlandisbecomingstrongerandstronger.

ThenwewenttoSichuanbyplane.Theplanewasveryfastbutalittleexpensive.Wewentthereinordertogotothewildlifeparkandwatchthepandas.Iwasveryexcitedbecausethepandawasoneofmyfavoriteanimals.Buttheanimalsareindangernow.Theyarebecomingfewerandfewer.Sowemustprotectthem.

Onthelasttrip,myfatherdrovemyfamilytoBeijingtoclimbtheGreatWallandlistentothePekingOpera.ChinaisfamousfortheGreatWallandthePekingOpera.AndmoreandmorepeopleintheworldareinterestedinthePekingOpera.ThissummerIhadawonderfultime.ThroughtravelingIloveourmotherlandmore.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)