讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+告別陰霾：與媽媽散步的治愈之旅+講義 高三上學(xué)期10月月考英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Haveyoueverbeensodepressedthatyoucan’tsleep?Youalsocan’teat.Youcan’tread.YouhavenofriendstocallupandnothingisgoodonTV.Soyousigh,pressyourfacedownharderintoyourpillow,andshedafewtears.Thiswasmylifetwoyearsago.Ihadjustturned14butalreadyfoundlifeastruggle.AsIlayinmybedoneSaturday,Mompeeked(瞄)intomyroomtomakeherregular“IsEmilystillalive”check.IknewthatifIspentmoretimelikethis,shewouldbegindustingme.AftersuggestingafewthingsformetodothatIimmediatelyrejected,Mommadehermove,“Emily!Getdressed!I’mtakingthedogoutforawalk,andyou’recomingwithme!”“Why?”Iprotested.“Becauseit’llmakeyoufeelbetter.”Thethoughtofmovingwasunbearable.IfeltasifallofmybodypartswereweigheddownbytonsofbricksIcouldn’trememberthelasttimeIhadgoneoutside.SomehowIfoundthestrengthtosliponapairofjeansandablacksweatshirt.Momwaswaitingatthedoor,leash(狗繩)inhandanddogatherside.Then,westeppedoutside.ItwasawarmMarchdayandithadbeenalongtimesincethewarmthofthesunhadtouchedmycheeks.Momledthedogandmedownsomedirtpaths,throughabigfieldandreachedHalseyPond.Butthesignsofspringhadyettoappearandthescenewasrathercolorlessthroughouttheentirejourney.“I’mtired!It’sboring,Mom!Whencanwegohome?”“Notyet,”she’dsay.Momstoppedtosayhitoeveryjogger,dogwalker,runner,andbicyclistwhopassedus.Sometimesshewouldgetintoaconversation.Theywouldtalkaboutweather,dogs,andallsmalltalktopics.Sheseemedhappy,andwasliterallyglowing(容光煥發(fā)).Afterwalkingforwhatseemedanage,Momfinallysaiditwastimetogoback.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.____________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意14歲的“我”曾長(zhǎng)期處于抑郁狀態(tài)，對(duì)任何事都提不起興趣，整日躺在床上。媽媽強(qiáng)行拉“我”出門(mén)遛狗。盡管“我”一開(kāi)始極不情愿，但在散步過(guò)程中，媽媽熱情地和遇到的人打招呼、聊天。整個(gè)行程對(duì)“我”來(lái)說(shuō)有些無(wú)聊，“我”多次要求回家。然而回家后，這次散步卻在“我”心中喚醒了一種新的感覺(jué)。五要素分析人物：“我”和媽媽。時(shí)間：一個(gè)溫暖的三月周六。地點(diǎn)：從家出發(fā)，經(jīng)過(guò)一些土路、大田野，到達(dá)哈爾西池塘，然后返回。起因：“我”因抑郁而萎靡不振，媽媽為了讓“我”振作起來(lái)，拉“我”出門(mén)遛狗。經(jīng)過(guò)：媽媽帶著“我”和狗散步，沿途和路人交談，“我”覺(jué)得旅程無(wú)聊，多次想回家。結(jié)果：回家后“我”有了新的感覺(jué)。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)伏筆：媽媽說(shuō)散步會(huì)讓“我”感覺(jué)好一些?；貞?yīng)：回家后“我”有了新感覺(jué)，意識(shí)到散步有積極作用。伏筆：媽媽在散步過(guò)程中容光煥發(fā)、很快樂(lè)?；貞?yīng)：后來(lái)“我”主動(dòng)要求帶狗出門(mén)，也體會(huì)到了快樂(lè)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段情感線(xiàn)：從最初的抵觸到回家后的微妙變化，有一種對(duì)新感覺(jué)的好奇和隱隱的期待。故事線(xiàn)：描述回家后的“我”身心上的變化，比如不再像之前那樣消沉，開(kāi)始有了積極生活的想法。第二段情感線(xiàn)：主動(dòng)要求帶狗出門(mén)體現(xiàn)出“我”心態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)變，從消極到積極，對(duì)出門(mén)散步充滿(mǎn)熱情。故事線(xiàn)：著重寫(xiě)這次出門(mén)“我”的不同表現(xiàn)，如主動(dòng)和路人交流、欣賞周?chē)L(fēng)景，真正享受散步的過(guò)程。主旨升華句Sometimes,thesimplestactivities,likeawalkwithlovedones,canbethekeytounlockthedoorofourimprisonedsouls.Asmallstepoutofthecomfortzone,asreluctantasitmaybe,canleadustoanewworldfilledwithhopeandvitality.Inthejourneyoflife,it'softentheforceddetours,likethiswalk,thatbringusbacktothepathofhappiness.Thewarmthofthesunoutsideandthecompanyoffamilycanmelttheiceofdepressionwithinus,revealingthebeautifulselfbeneath.Wemayresistchange,butasshownbythiswalk,changecanbethecatalystforanewbeginningandanewoutlookonlife.寫(xiě)作示范第一篇Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Itwasasifatinysparkhadbeenlitinsideme.Inolongerfelttheheavygloomthathadcloudedmydays.Ilookedaroundmyroom,andforthefirsttimeinages,Inoticedthesunlightstreamingthroughthewindow,castingbeautifulpatternsonthefloor.Irealizedthattheoutsideworld,whichIhadshunned,hadsomuchtooffer.MaybeMomwasright.Maybegettingoutofmyself-madeprisonwasthefirststeptowardshealing.

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Shesmiledknowinglyandhandedmetheleash.AsIwalkedalongthefamiliarpaths,Ifeltasenseoffreedom.Igreetedeverypasser-bywithenthusiasm,andthistime,Ilingeredtoadmirethescenery.Thepondnolongerlookeddull;itwasabeautifulexpanseofwaterreflectingthesky.Iunderstoodthatlifehaditssimplejoys,andIwasdeterminedtoembracethem.第二篇Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.TherewasanewfoundenergywithinmethatIcouldn'tquiteexplain.Isatonmybed,thinkingaboutthewalk.Thefreshair,thepeoplewemet,andMom'shappyfaceallflashedthroughmymind.IfeltaconnectiontotheworldoutsidethatIhadn'tfeltinalongtime.Igotupanddecidedtocleanmyroom,ataskIhadneglectedforweeks.Itwasasifthewalkhadgivenmeanewperspectiveonlife.

Paragraph2:AnewSaturdayfoundmeaskingMomifIcouldtakethedogout.Shebeamedwithpride.Thistime,asIwalkedwiththedog,Ifeltasenseofpurpose.Istoppedtotalktoanelderlywomansittingonabench,sharingalaughwithher.Iwatchedtheducksswimminginthepondwithfascination.Irealizedthatthissimpleactofwalkingwasagift,awaytobreakfreefromthechainsofdepressionandembracelifeagain.【答案】Paragraph1:WhenIgothome,anewfeelingseemedtobeawakened.Theheavinessthathadweighedmedownbeforeseemedtohavelifted,ifonlyslightly.Thesimpleactofbeingoutside,feelingthewarmthofthesun,andhearingthechirpingofbirdshadsparkedsomethinginsideme.Itwasaglimmerofhope,atinyrayoflightinthedarknessofmydepression.Irealizedthatmaybe,justmaybe,therewasstillsomethin