讀后續(xù)寫+匿名的善意：薩拉的大學(xué)夢(mèng)與神秘恩人+講義 高三上學(xué)期期中考試英語(yǔ)試題

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Saragazedthoughtfullyatherparentswhileholdingaletter.ShewasacceptedtopursuetheElectricalEngineeringdegreeprogrammeatUniversityPertanianMalaysia.Allherhardworkandsacrificeshadpaidoff.Butsheknew,beingtheeldestof6siblings,herfamilycouldnotaffordtopaytheuniversityentrancefees.Herfatherwasonlyasettlerworkingonapalmoilestate.Thoughshewasdeterminedtodeclinetheoffer,SarawenttovisitMs.Changwiththeletter.Ms.ChangwasoneofthemostdedicatedteachersthatSaraknew.Fromahumblebeginning,shesupportedherselfattheTeachers’TrainingCollegebyteachingtuition.Sosheunderstoodhowhardpoorstudentsstruggledtocontinuetheirstudy.Foryears,notonlydidshebringreferencebookstothestudents,butsheoftentookthemoutforlunchandassuredthemtheywouldsucceedinlife.“CongratulationsSara,Iamsoproudofyou,"Ms.Changsaidexcitedly.“ButI'mafraidIhavetorejecttheoffer,becausemyfamilyisunabletobearthecostofenrollingmethere,"Sararepliedinalowtone.Ms.Changlookedatherintentlyandtoldhernottoworryaboutfinance.Therewouldalwaysbeaway.Afewdayslater,whenSarawashesitatingaboutdecliningtheoffer,herhighschoolprincipal,Mr.Salim,calledhertohisoffice.Toherastonishment,Mr.Salimhandedheranenvelope,inwhichSarasawalargesumofcash.Itwasmorethanwhatsheneeded.ButwhenSaraaskedMr.Salimwherethemoneywasfrom,hejusttoldherthatthepersonwantedtoremainanonymous(匿名的).Withthemoneyinthecnvelope,Sarabecameafreshmanoftheuniversity.Onemonthlater,shereceivedanothersumofmoney.Shecalledherfather,“Dad,youdon'thavetosendmoneytome.Icanmanageonmyown."Herfatherwasstunned,“ButIdidn't."Fromthenon,Sarareceivedthesamesumofmoneyeverymonth.“Whoisthekindsoulthatismakingallthiscontribution?"shewasalwayswondering.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Sara被馬來(lái)西亞博特拉大學(xué)電氣工程專業(yè)錄取，但因家庭貧困打算拒絕。老師Ms.Chang鼓勵(lì)她別擔(dān)心費(fèi)用。之后高中校長(zhǎng)Mr.Salim給了她一個(gè)裝有足夠?qū)W費(fèi)的信封，捐款人匿名。Sara入學(xué)后每月都收到一筆錢，她以為是父親給的，但父親否認(rèn)。Sara一直好奇這位好心人的身份。五要素分析人物：Sara、Ms.Chang、Mr.Salim和Sara的父親。時(shí)間：從Sara收到大學(xué)錄取通知開始，持續(xù)到她大學(xué)畢業(yè)。地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校、校長(zhǎng)辦公室和大學(xué)。起因：Sara家庭貧困，無(wú)力支付大學(xué)學(xué)費(fèi)。經(jīng)過(guò)：老師鼓勵(lì)，校長(zhǎng)給她匿名捐款，大學(xué)期間持續(xù)收到錢。結(jié)果：Sara順利上大學(xué)但不知捐款人是誰(shuí)。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆：捐款人匿名?；貞?yīng)：后文揭示是Ms.Chang。伏筆：Sara對(duì)捐款人身份的好奇?；貞?yīng)：最終找到答案。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段情感線：充滿感激和急切想知道恩人身份的心情。故事線：Sara以優(yōu)異成績(jī)畢業(yè)，決定尋找恩人，回到母校向校長(zhǎng)詢問(wèn)捐款人信息。第二段情感線：感動(dòng)、崇敬，為Ms.Chang的善舉所震撼。故事線：Sara來(lái)到Ms.Chang家，表達(dá)深深的感激，領(lǐng)悟到善良和助人的力量。主旨升華句Truekindnessislikealighthouse,guidingthoseinthedarkseaofdifficultytowardshope.Theactofgiving,evenanonymously,cancreateripplesofchangeinsomeone'slifejourney.Aselflessdonorisanangelindisguise,bringingthelightofopportunitytotheneedy.Inthefaceofhardship,thekindnessofstrangerscanbethemostpowerfuldrivingforceforsuccess.Thebeautyofaltruismliesinitsabilitytotransformliveswithoutexpectinganythinginreturn.寫作示范第一篇TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.Withexcellentgrades,shewasfilledwithgratitudetowardstheunknownbenefactor.ShereturnedtoherhighschoolandfoundMr.Salim.Shetoldhimthatshewantedtothankthepersonwhohadchangedherlife.Mr.Salimsmiledandfinallyrevealedtheaddressofthekind-heartedperson.

WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.Herheartwaspoundingwithemotion.WhenMs.Changopenedthedoor,Sara'seyeswelledupwithtears.ShethrewherselfintoMs.Chang'sarmsandthankedherprofusely.SherealizedthatMs.Chang'skindnesshadbeenthewindbeneathherwingsallthistime.第二篇TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.Shehadasuccessfulcollegecareer,allthankstotheanonymousdonor.Shecouldn'twaittofindoutwhoitwas.Sherushedtotheprincipal'soffice.Mr.Salimsawhercomingandknewwhatshewanted.Hehandedherapieceofpaperwithanaddressonit.

WiththeaddressMr.Salimgaveher,SarastoodatthegateofMs.Chang'shouse.Shefeltamixtureofexcitementandnervousness.Assheknockedonthedoor,herhandswereshaking.WhenMs.Changappeared,Saraburstintotearsandsaid,"Thankyouforbelievinginmeandchangingmylife."Itwasamomentofpureemotionandrealizationofthepowerofkindness.范文:TimeflewandSaragraduatedatlast.ThankstothatanonymousSamaritan,shewasabletoaccomplishhercollegeeducationwithoutdistraction.Tryasshemay,shecouldneverfigureoutwhowasthekindsoul.“Mr.Salimmusthavehiddensomethingfromme,"thedoubtechoedconstantlyinhermind.SaravisitedMr.Salimimmediatelyshewenthometown.“Please,Mr.Salim,tellmewhosentmethemoney."sheaskedearnestly.Theprincipal