天津高考英語寫作分類訓練：開放性作文

開放性作文

1.假設(shè)你是晨光中學高三學生李津，下周你校將與英國姊妹校線上“云”交流校園生活。高

中三年即將結(jié)束，回顧豐富多彩的校園生活，哪一次校園活動給你留下了美好而深刻的印象

呢?請你以"TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

內(nèi)容包括：

L介紹活動過程；

2.分享個人感受。

注意：短文不少于100詞。

2.假設(shè)你是某國際學校的學生會主席李津，你校剛剛開展了走進社區(qū)的一系列文明實踐活

動。請你為校園廣播站寫一篇英文活動報道，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)介紹你們參加的活動(如照顧老人;宣傳交通法規(guī)等)及其原因；

(2)說明此項活動的意義；

(3)簡單介紹此項活動引起的反響。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;

(2)可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。

3.假定你是晨光中學的李津，你校將舉辦以生態(tài)旅游為話題的英語演講比賽。請你以"Let's

PromoteEcotourism”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：

1.當前趨勢；

2.你的觀點(良好旅游體驗、生態(tài)友好可持續(xù)發(fā)展、促進經(jīng)濟發(fā)展等等)；

3.你的倡議。

注意：

L詞數(shù)100以上；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)。

LefsPromoteEeotourism

Goodmorning,dearfriends.MynameisLiJin.I'dliketotakethisoppoitunitytotalkabout

ecotourism.

4.你校正在為即將舉行的國際交流生研學活動布置校園文化宣傳欄，請你為其中的“書香校

園(scholarlyschool)”版塊寫一篇英文介紹詞，內(nèi)容包括：

L內(nèi)涵意義：

2.具體實踐。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ScholarlySchool

5.假定你是李華。你的學校新來一批美國交流生，學校要組織迎新晚會。請你用英語給他

們寫一封電子郵件，邀請他們參加，內(nèi)容如下：

1.時間：本周五晚上7—9點；

2.地點：學校禮堂；

3.活動內(nèi)容：文藝節(jié)目；中美學生互動。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dearfriends,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

6.假定你是李華，你校上周六上午邀請了著名京劇大師M,M做了一場精彩的講座。請你

寫一篇新聞報通，發(fā)表在學校的英文報上。內(nèi)容包括：

1講座的目的；

2.講座的過程；

3.講座的反響。

注意：1.詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

ALectureonBeijingOpera

7.假定你是李華，你所在高中正在舉辦題為“MyUnforgettableMother,sDayExperience”的

征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文參賽，要點包括：

1.節(jié)日簡介；

2.慶?；顒樱?/p>

3.你的感受。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

MyUnforgettableMother'sDayExperience

8.假設(shè)你是學校英語俱樂部成員，該俱樂部將舉辦主題為"HowdidyouspendthisSpring

Festival?”的交流活動，請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，屆時與大家分享。

內(nèi)容包括：

L你是怎樣過這個春節(jié)的；

2.你的感受或收獲是什么。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Hello,everyone!I'mhonoredtosharewithyouhowIspentthisSpringFestival.

Thanksforlistening!

9.假定你是某校的英文報記者李華。你們學校最近舉辦了一次主題為“來華留學生講中國故

事”的英語征文大賽。請你寫一篇英文報道，內(nèi)容包括：

1.參賽情況；

2.獲獎情況：10名同學分獲一、二、三等獎；

3.活動反響。

注意：L詞數(shù)80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

10.環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作、學習和生活，而我們的工作和生活又使環(huán)境問題越來越嚴

重，假如你是晨光中學的學生會主席李津,準備以“WhatCanWeDofortheEnvironmentinOur

School"為題，寫一篇保護環(huán)境的英語演講稿,號召同學們從我做起，從身邊小事做起,共同保

護環(huán)境。

1.簡述學校內(nèi)存在的環(huán)境問題；

2.可以采取的措施;（至少寫出兩點措施或建議）

3.提出倡議。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右;可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

WhatCanWeDofortheEnvironmentinOurSchool

Hello,everyone.

Thankyouforyourlistening.

1.Hello,everyone!

I'mLiJin,aseniorthreestudentfromChenguanghighschool.I'mmorethandelightedto

communicatewiththeclassmatesfromthesisterschoolinBritainonlineaboutcampuslife.

Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.Andtheonethat

impressedmemostisthecoming-of-ageceremony.

ThemeaningfuleventwasheldonMay4thtohonorthestudentswhohadturned18.We

gatheredatthestadium,wearingtraditionaldresses.First,ourprincipalsincerelyextendedhis

congratulationsonusbecominggrown-ups.Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,which

wasfullofhappiness.ThenfollowedtheConfucian-stylecoming-of-ageceremonies-JiLi(for

girls)andGuanLi(forboys).Finally,wemadeasolemnvowtoshouldertheresponsibilitiesofan

adult.

Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsomotivated

ustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.We,18-year-olds,shouldcherishour

youth.

Thafsall.Thankyou.

【導語】本篇書面表達為一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學生以“TheMostImpressiveSchoolActivity”為題

寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

高興的：delighted^pleased/cheerful

回顧：review—lookback/retrospect

激勵：motivate一inspire/stimulate

2.句式拓展：

原句：Personally,thisactivitynotonlyexposedustotraditionalChineseculture,butalso

motivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.

拓展句：Personally,notonlydidthisactivityexposeustotraditionalChineseculture,butalsoit

motivatedustoembracethenewidentityandliveuptoourpromise.

【點睛】【高分句型IJ

Lookingback,Ifindthepastdayshavewitnessedplentyofmemorableactivities.（運用了現(xiàn)在分

詞作狀語。）

【高分句型2】

Andwereviewedourhighschoollifetogether,whichwasfullofhappiness.（運用了which弓［導非

限制性定語從句。）

2.Ourschoolhasjustlaunchedaseriesofcivilizedpracticeactivitiesintothecommunity,which

includetakingcareoftheelderlyandpublicizingtrafficlawsandregulationsandsoon.The

reasonwhyweheldtheseactivitiesisthatmoreelderlypeopleneedcareandsomeuncivilized

phenomenastillexist.Thesignificanceistoraisepeople'sawarenessofbecomingacaringand

civilizedman.Throughtheseactivities,ouractivitieshavebeencoveredbyavarietyofmedia

outletsandarousedastrongresponse.Moreandmorepeoplewhoarewillingtocareaboutothers

andlawsandregulationsarecalledontoparticipateinthem.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，假設(shè)你是某國際學校的學生會主席李津，你校剛剛開展

了走進社區(qū)的一系列文明實踐活動。請你為校園廣播站寫一篇英文活動報道。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

包括：include一involve

照顧：takecare0fLlookafter

重要性：significance一importance

參力口：participatein—takepartin

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Throughtheseactivities,ouractivitieshavebeencoveredbyavarietyofmediaoutletsand

arousedastrongresponse.

拓展句：Itisthroughtheseactivitiesthatouractivitieshavebeencoveredbyavarietyofmedia

outletsandarousedastrongresponse.

【點睛】[高分句型1]Thereasonwhyweheldtheseactivitiesisthatmoreelderlypeopleneed

careandsomeuncivilizedphenomenastillexist,（why引導的限制性定語從句和that引導的表

語從句）

[高分句型2]Ourschoolhasjustlaunchedaseriesofcivilizedpracticeactivitiesintothe

community,whichincludetakingcareoftheelderlyandpublicizingtrafficlawsandregulation.

（which引導的非限制性定語從句）

3.LefsPromoteEeotourism

Goodmorning,dearfriends.MynameisLiJin.I'dliketotakethisopportunitytotalkabout

eeotourism.Commonlyregardedaslowimpacttraveltoundisturbedplaces,eeotourismhas

becomeincreasinglypopulartheseyear.

Asforme,eeotourismisatrueeco-friendlytrip.Withtheaimofsustainabledevelopment,

eeotourismcallsontouriststoenjoythescenerywithoutdamagingthenaturalenvironment.

Therefore,itdoeslittleharmtotheenvironment.Bybeingexposedtonaturalareas,touristscan

haveapleasantexperiencetogetclosetonature.Meanwhile,eeotourismbenefitstheeconomic

developmentoflocalcommunities.

Eeotourismmeansresponsibleandsustainabletravel.Wehaveonlyoneplanet.Toprotect

ourplanet,Idohopewecanliveinharmonywithnatureandmakesurethateeotourismcan

providepositiveexperiencesforbothvisitorsandhosts.

Thanksforlistening.

【導語】本篇書面表達為一篇應(yīng)用文。要求學生就“Let'sPromoteEeotourism”寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

目的：aim^-purpose/intention

傷害：doharmto一beharmfulto/harm

對...有益：benefit-bebeneficialto

確保：makesure^-ensure/guarantee

2.句式拓展：

合并簡單句

原句：Asforme,ecotourismisatrueeco-friendlytrip.Withtheaimofsustainabledevelopment,

ecotourismcallsontouriststoenjoythescenerywithoutdamagingthenaturalenvironment.

拓展句：Asforme,ecotourismisatrueeco-friendlytrip,whichcallsontouriststoenjoythe

scenerywithoutdamagingthenaturalenvironmentwiththeaimofsustainabledevelopment.

【點睛】【高分句型1】

Commonlyregardedaslowimpacttraveltoundisturbedplaces,ecotourismhasbecome

increasinglypopulartheseyear.（運用了過去分詞作狀語）

【高分句型2】

Toprotectourplanet,Idohopewecanliveinharmonywithnatureandmakesurethatecotourism

canprovidepositiveexperiencesforbothvisitorsandhosts.（運用了動詞不定式作目的狀語和

that引導賓語從句）

4.Possibleversion:

Scholarlyschooliswherestudentsaremotivatedtoreadextensively,explorenewideasand

developcriticalthinking.Itcreatesanatmospherefosteringinterestinreadingandpromoting

academicexcellence.

Ourschooloffersvariousresources,includinglibraries,lecturehallsandspecialized

workshops.Studentsbenefitfromaseriesofinteractiveactivities,likereadingsalons,bookclubs,

andquizcompetitions.Additionally,itisworthmentioningthatdistinguishedexpertsareinvited

toofferguidanceoneffectivereadingandsatisfystudents5learningneeds.Allthesepractices

equipstudentswithrichknowledgeandpreparethemforabrightfuture.

【導語】本書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求為校園文化宣傳欄的“書香校園”版塊寫一篇介紹

1司O

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

激勵：motivate一inspire

多種多樣的：various—>diverse

止匕夕卜：additionally—whafsmore

有前途的：bright-promising

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Itcreatesanatmospherefosteringinterestinreadingandpromotingacademicexcellence.

拓展句：Itcreatesanatmospherewhichcanfosterinterestinreadingandpromoteacademic

excellence.

【點睛】【高分句型1JScholarlyschooliswherestudentsaremotivatedtoreadextensively,

explorenewideasanddevelopcriticalthinking.（運用了where弓|導的表語從句）

【高分句型2]Additionally,itisworthmentioningthatdistinguishedexpertsareinvitedtooffer

guidanceoneffectivereadingandsatisfystudents9learningneeds.（運用了it作形式主語，that

引導主語從句）

5.Dearfriends,

MynameisLiHua.Warmlywelcometoourschool.Wearegoingtohaveapartyonthis

Fridayeveninginourschoolhallanditwilllastfrom7pmto9pm.

Intheparty,wewillputonperformances,suchassinginganddancing.Atthesametime,you

arewelcometointroduceyourselvestous.Andwecanaskeachotherquestionssothatwewill

haveabetterunderstanding.Itisourwishthatyouwillhaveagoodtime.

Wearelookingforwardtoseeingyou.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導語】這是一篇邀請信。要求考生以李華的身份給你的學校新來一批美國交流生介紹學校

要組織的迎新晚會，并邀請他們參加。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉辦晚會：haveaparty一holdaparty

同時：atthesametime—inthemeantime

介紹：introduce一present

過得愉快：haveagoodtime一enjoyyourself

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：WearegoingtohaveapartyonthisFridayeveninginourschoolhallanditwilllastfrom7

pmto9pm.

拓展句：WearegoingtohaveapartyonthisFridayeveninginourschoolhall,whichlastsfrom7

pmto9pm.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Atthesametime,youarewelcometointroduceyourselvestous.（動詞

不定式）

【高分句型2】Itisourwishthatyouwillhaveagoodtime.（形式主語）

6.ALectureonBeijingOpera

Awonderfullecturewasgivenbyawell-knownmasterofBeijingOpera,Mr.Ma,inthe

schoollecturehalllastSaturdaymorning,whichaimedtohelpstudentshaveabetter

understandingofBeijingOpera.

ThemomentMr.Mastartedspeaking,wewereimpressedbyhisclearvoice.Thelecturewas

filledwithmovingstoriesandliveperformances.Allofusappreciatedthepricelesscultural

traditionsomuchthattwohourspassedquickly.

ThelecturewasverymeaningfulandinspiredustolearnmoreaboutBeijingOpera.

【導語】這是一篇開放作文。假定你是李華，你校上周六上午邀請了著名京劇大師Ma,Ma

做了一場精彩的講座。請你寫一篇新聞報通，發(fā)表在學校的英文報上。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

幫助：help一assist

充滿：befilledwith—befullof

無價的：priceless—valuable

激勵：inspire一motivate

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)化

原句：ThelecturewasverymeaningfulandinspiredustolearnmoreaboutBeijingOpera.

拓展句：Thelecturewasverymeaningful,inspiringustolearnmoreaboutBeijingOpera.

【點睛】[高分句型1].Awonderfullecturewasgivenbyawell-knownmasterofBeijingOpera,

Mr.Ma,intheschoollecturehalllastSaturdaymorning,whichaimedtohelpstudentshavea

betterunderstandingofBeijingOpera,（which引導的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Allofusappreciatedthepricelessculturaltraditionsomuchthattwohourspassed

quickly.（so...that引導的結(jié)果狀語從句）

7.MyUnforgettableMother'sDayExperience

Mother'sDayisregardedasaspecialoccasiontothankmothersfortheirloveandcare.This

yearIexperiencedthemostunforgettableMother?sDay,whichfallsonthesecondSundayin

May.

BeforeMother'sDay,Ihadmadefullpreparationstoamazemymother.Thus,Ihadbooked

carnationsandplannedarichdinnerinherfavoriterestaurant.Withallthatready,Icouldn'twait

forittocome.OntheafternoonofMother'sDay,wesetofftowatchthemoviefeaturingmutual

understandingandlovebetweenmomandkids,whichwebothenjoyed.Atdinner,Isurprisedmy

motherwithabunchofredcarnationsdeliveredtothespot.Sheheldittightlyasifitwasthebest

giftever!

Personally,offeringmyloveandwarmthtomymother,thismemorabledaywillbedeeply

rootedinmyheart!

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求寫一篇短文參加題為“MyUnforgettableMothe'sDay

Experience”的征文比賽，介紹母親節(jié)的信息，自己和媽媽如何度過的以及自己的感受。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

被認為/被看作為：beregardedas-beconsideredas

給某人驚喜：amazesb.—surprisesb./giveasurprisetosb./givesbasurprise

預(yù)訂：book—order

出發(fā)：setofif^-startoff

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Thus,Ihadbookedcarnationsandplannedarichdinnerinherfavoriterestaurant.

拓展句：Thus,notonlyhadIbookedcarnations,butalsoIhadplannedarichdinnerinher

favoriterestaurant.

【點睛】【高分句型1]OntheafternoonofMother'sDay,wesetofftowatchthemoviefeaturing

mutualunderstandingandlovebetweenmomandkids,whichwebothenjoyed.（"featuringmutual

understandingandlovebetweenmomandkids”為現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語,修飾名詞“themovie”,

且運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Sheheldittightlyasifitwasthebestgiftever!（運用了asif引導方式狀語從句）

8.Hello,everyone!I'mhonoredtosharewithyouhowIspentthisSpringFestival.

OnNewYear'sEve,myfamilygatheredtogetherandhadareuniondinnerwhilewatching

theSpringFestivalGala.Whentheclockstruck12,mybrotherandIrushedouttosetoff

fireworkstowelcometheNewYear.WhatimpressedmemostwasthatIdecoratedourhousewith

redlanterns,putupcoupletsandmadedumplingswithmyparentshappily.Additionally,Iplayed

sportsandgameswithmyfriendsbesideslearning.

Ireallyenjoyedhelpingmyparentswithhousework,andmeanwhileIlearnedlotsoflife

skills.Afterall,theSpringFestivalisimportantbecauseifsanewbeginningwhichbringshopeto

usandit'salsoatimetoshowourgratitudeandtakeourresponsibility.

Thanksforlistening!

【導語】本文是開放性作文。要求考生以“HowdidyouspendthisSpringFestival?”為主題寫

一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

敲擊：struck一hit

燃放：setofF-^letoff

翻修：decorated一renovate

張貼：putup-post

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Ireallyenjoyedhelpingmyparentswithhousework,andmeanwhileIlearnedlotsoflife

skills.

拓展句：Ireallyenjoyedhelpingmyparentswithhousework,duringwhichIlearnedlotsoflife

skills.

【點睛】【高分句型11Whentheclockstruck12,mybrotherandIrushedouttosetofffireworks

towelcometheNewYear.（由When引導的時間狀語從句）

【高分句型2】WhatimpressedmemostwasthatIdecoratedourhousewithredlanterns,putup

coupletsandmadedumplingswithmyparentshappily.（由What弓|導的主語從句和that弓|導的

表語從句）

9.LatelyanEnglishwritingcontestwiththethemeof“ForeignstudentsinChinatellstoriesabout

China^^washeldinourschool.Alotofforeignstudentsjoinedinitenthusiasticallyand10

studentswonfirst,secondandthirdprizesrespectively.

Thiscontestwasgreatlywelcomedbyallstudentsandteachers,becauseitmadeeveryone

understandChinaandChineseculturemoredeeply.Thiseventalsoinspiredustousewhatwe've

learnttocreateamuchmorebrilliantChinesemodernculture.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇英文報道，報道你們學校最近舉辦的主

題為“來華留學生講中國故事，，的英語征文大賽的相關(guān)情況。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

最近：lately一recently

比賽：contest一competition

參力口：joinin—participatein/takepartin

鼓勵：inspire一encourage

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Alotofforeignstudentsjoinedinitenthusiasticallyand10studentswonfirst,secondand

thirdprizesrespectively.

拓展句：Alotofforeignstudentsjoinedinitenthusiastically,10ofwhomwonfirst,secondand

thirdprizesrespectively.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Thiscontestwasgreatly