2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)UNIT1TEENAGELIFE表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案含解析新人教版必修第一冊(cè)

UNIT1TEENAGELIFE建議信本單元的寫(xiě)作項(xiàng)目屬于應(yīng)用體類(lèi)別中的“建議信”。這種題目要求我們就有關(guān)問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析，并針對(duì)這些問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和建議。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭(beginning)——開(kāi)宗明義，向?qū)Ψ疥愂鲎约旱挠^點(diǎn)(stateyouridea)。2．主體(body)——對(duì)所提出的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析并說(shuō)明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasonsandevidence)。3．結(jié)尾(ending)——呼應(yīng)開(kāi)頭，重申觀點(diǎn)(restateyouropinion)。[常用詞塊]beworriedabout擔(dān)憂(yōu)havetrouble/difficulty(in)doingsth.做某事有困難sharesth.withsb.與某人共享某物followtheadvice遵從建議advise/recommendsb.todosth.建議某人做某事overcomethedifficulty克服困難[常用語(yǔ)句]★精彩開(kāi)頭1．I'msorryyouhavetroublein...2．Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.3．Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...4．Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning...5．Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning...andIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.★正文佳句1．Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaif...2．Inmyopinion，itwouldbewiseto...3．Isuggestthatyoushould...4．Inmyopinion，you'dbetter...5．Iadviseyouto...6．IfIwereyou，Iwould...7．Whynot...？/Whydon'tyou...?8．Howabout...？/Whatabout...?★余味結(jié)尾1．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/tipspractical/useful/helpful.2．Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouinmoredetail.3．Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.假如你是李華，最近收到了你的美國(guó)摯友Jane的來(lái)信。她在信中說(shuō)，她剛進(jìn)入中學(xué)，不能適應(yīng)新的環(huán)境，不知如何去結(jié)交新?lián)从?，因而心情低落。?qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封回信，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括如下要點(diǎn)：1．向Jane表示問(wèn)候和勸慰。2．針對(duì)她的問(wèn)題提出以下建議：(1)同學(xué)遇到麻煩時(shí)，要去幫助他們；(2)放學(xué)后邀請(qǐng)同學(xué)一起參與活動(dòng)；(3)其他建議。留意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly，LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.Infactyourclassmatesarealsonewstudentsandfacingthesameproblem，soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.①Youcandosomethingtochangethissituation.Firstly，helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.②Then，trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool，andthiswillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Finally，③inmyopinion，oftencommunicatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Yourstruly，LiHua[點(diǎn)評(píng)]1.句可加上定語(yǔ)從句構(gòu)成復(fù)合句。2.句可由并列句改成復(fù)合句。3.可升級(jí)該短語(yǔ)?！旧褡魑摹緿earJane，Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighschool.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.Infactyourclassmatesarealsonewstudentsandfacingthesameproblem，soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandotochangethissituation.Firstly，helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.Then，trytoinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool，whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Finally，asfarasIamconcerned，oftencommunicatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.Yourstruly，LiHua為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開(kāi)設(shè)了“HEART-TO-HEART”專(zhuān)欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為“Worried”的同學(xué)的求助信。該同學(xué)在信中向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日簡(jiǎn)單發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)你用英文給該同學(xué)寫(xiě)一封回信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．表示理解并賜予勸慰；2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。留意：1．詞數(shù)80左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣；心情Hi“Worried”，I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie[參考范文]Hi“Worried”，I'msorrytoknowthatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthisthateveryonehasoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwaytoletyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexer