英語六級寫作范文點(diǎn)評

英語六級寫作范文點(diǎn)評

導(dǎo)讀：我根據(jù)大家的需要整理了一份關(guān)于《英語六級寫作范文點(diǎn)評》的內(nèi)

容，具體內(nèi)容：與英語四級作文要求相比，除了字?jǐn)?shù)的要求外，在英語六級

作文考試,拿到高分的要求更高。不僅要求考生像四級考試一樣，做到文章

通順,切題,無錯(cuò)誤。還要求考生掌握更多的固定表達(dá)方式，以及更多的短

語???

與英語四級作文要求相比,除了字?jǐn)?shù)的要求外,在英語六級作文考試,拿

到高分的要求更高。不僅要求考生像四級考試一樣，做到文章通順,切題，

無錯(cuò)誤。還要求考生掌握更多的固定表達(dá)方式，以及更多的短語,句式。為

提高大家的英語六級寫作能力和技巧，下面我為大家?guī)?，歡迎大家學(xué)習(xí)！

英語六級寫作范文：Why1Teach

IteachbecauseIlikethepaceoftheacademiccalendar.June,

July,andAugustofferanopportunityforreflection,researchand

writing.

Iteachbecauseteachingisaprofessionbuiltonchange.When

thematerialisthesame,Ichange-and,moreimportant,my

studentschange.

IteachbecauseIlikethefreedomtomakemyownmistakes,to

learnmyownlessons,tostimulatemyselfandmystudents.Asa

teacher,Immyownboss.IfIwantmyfreshmentolearntowrite

bycreatingtheirowntextbook,whoistosayIcant?Suchcourses

maybehugefailures,butwecanalllearnfromfailures.

IteachbecauseIliketoaskquestionsthatstudentsmuststruggle

toanswer.Theworldisfullofrightanswerstobadquestions.While

teaching,Isometimesfindgoodquestions.

Soteachinggivesmepaceandvariety,andchallenge,andthe

opportunitytokeeponlearning?.

However,themostimportantreasonswhyIteacharethatmy

studentsgrowupandchangeinfrontofme.Somehavebecomedoctoral

studentswithexcellentsuccessandfoundgoodjobs;somehave

becomeinterestedintheurbanpoorandservedascivilrights

lawyers;somehavedecidedtofinishhighschoolandgotocollege.

Butteachingofferssomethingbesidesmoneyandpower:itoffers

love.Notonlytheloveoflearningandofbooksandideas,butalso

thelovethatateacherfeelsforthatrarestudentwhowalksinto

ateacherslifeandbeginstobreathe.Perhapsloveisthewrong

word:magicmightbebetter.

Iteachbecause,beingaroundpeoplewhoarebeginningtobreathe,

Ioccasionallyfindmyselfcatchingmybreathwiththem.

范文點(diǎn)評：

文章第一段到第四段都采用了〃Iteachbecause...〃的句型開頭，句式

統(tǒng)一，在內(nèi)容上構(gòu)成了并列。每段的第一句即為該段的主題句，先指出自

己想要當(dāng)老師的原因，接著再具體進(jìn)行解釋。在第五段中，作者用S。概

括了上述原因，再次重申〃WhyITeach\呼應(yīng)主題。笫六段開頭借助

“However〃一詞的過渡，指出教書最重要的理由，和前文構(gòu)成了語義上的

遞進(jìn)。文章最后一段還是用Iteachbecause...結(jié)尾，與段首相呼應(yīng)，使

文章顯得有始有終。

英語六級寫作范文：CommunicatingaSenseofPersonalPower

Communicatingasenseofpersonalpowercomesfromabeliefthat

youcanreachyourgoalsinyourownway.Powerfulpeoplegiveothers

powerandencourageotherstoexpressthemselvesopenly.You

communicateasenseofpersonalpowerbydevelopingthesetraits:

Authority

Authorityisinnerconfidence—atrustinyourskillsand

abilities.Itcomesfromtheinside,fromanattitudeofcando

that”.〃Ideservesuccess”.Thisattituderadiatesoutwardasyou

assertyourright,honestlyaskforwhatyouwantandneed,and

developawillingnesstogivetoothersandyourself.

Beingself-assured

Self-assuredbehaviorisactive,direct,andhonest.It

communicatesanimpressionofself-respectandrespectfor

others.Bybeingself-assured,weviewourwants,needs,andrights

asequalwiththoseofothers.Aself-assuredpersonwinsby

influencing,listening,andnegotiatingsothatotherpeoplechoose

tocooperatewillingly.

Accessibility

Thepowerfulpersonisamasternetworker.Goodnetworking

increasesyourvisibilityandgivesyouavaluablecircleofpeople

fromwhomyoucangiveandreceivesupportandinformation.Imagine

yourselfasthecenterofawheelsurroundedbyspokesofcontacts.

Image

Youcommunicatepowerthroughyourimage.Doyouprojectanimage

consistentwithstrongleadership??Standtallandwalkproudly,

rememberingthatyouhavevalueasaperson.Whenyoumeetothers,

makedirectcontactandkeepyourhandshakefirmandfriendly.

Clearlystatewhoyouareandwhatyoudo.

Communicationhabits

Takeadeepbreathtoprojectafirmvoice.Avoidslang,andjargon,

andvocalhesitationsthatcanhindereffectivecommunication.Use

onlythe