【知識精研】高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+吉姆的足球之憾：輸球后的內(nèi)心波瀾+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)吉姆的足球之憾：輸球后的內(nèi)心波瀾1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Jimstaredatthegroundandsighedindisappointment.PlayersfromtheopposingteamracedpastJim,celebratingtheirshockingvictory.They’dscoredthegame-winninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.“Justonewordtodescribealosslikethat,”JimmumbledtohisteammateDevin.“Terrible!”Devinsighed.“Itwasatoughone.”Hetrotted(小步快跑)towardthemiddleofthefieldtoshakehandswiththewinningteam.JimwalkedslowlybehindDevin.Heunhappilyslappedhandswiththewinners,andthenstoppedtoshuthiseyesastheautumnaircooledhissweatyface.“Terrible,”herepeatedtohimselfashesatonthebenchandpulledhisjacketon.“Let’sgetsomehotchocolateandwatchthenextgame,”Devinsaid.TherewereeightteamsintheYMCAleague,sogameswouldgoonallmorning.“Sorry.I’mheadinghome,”Jimsaid,“I’vehadenoughsoccerfortoday.”4續(xù)寫原文Ashereachedthegate,Jimglancedbacktoseethenexttwoteamstakethefield.Theywerejumpingandshouting,excitedtoplay.“Thatwasusalittlewhileago,beforewewerediscouraged.”Jimthought.Sowhywelostthegameatlast?Jimaskedhimself.Howdidsuchawell-playedgameendupwithsuchaterribleresult?Itwasstillclearinhishead:JimhadtheballdeepontheJets’sideofthefield,lookingforDevinoranotherteammatetopassto.HisteamhadoutplayedtheJetsformostofthegame,butfailedwithinthelastseconds.Jimletoutadeepbreath.Themorningwasgrowingwarmer.Perfectforsoccer.Jimlookedbacktowardthefield.Hecouldn’tseeit,buthecouldheartheexcitedvoicesasthegamecontinued.5段首句Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.Para2:TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8主題圍繞一場足球比賽失利后吉姆的情緒反應(yīng)和內(nèi)心思考展開。核心內(nèi)容是吉姆所在球隊(duì)在比賽即將結(jié)束時(shí)被對方進(jìn)球，輸?shù)舯荣?。吉姆心情沮喪，與隊(duì)友交流失利感受，在經(jīng)歷一系列情緒波動后開始反思比賽失敗原因，盡管比賽大部分時(shí)間表現(xiàn)出色，但最后幾秒的失敗讓他難以釋懷，而周圍其他球隊(duì)的興奮場景與他們的失落形成鮮明對比。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.情節(jié)開端：汽車?yán)嚷曇鸺纷⒁猓吹胶糜阉筒既R恩從車上下來。塔拉和布萊恩看到吉姆沮喪的樣子，關(guān)切地詢問發(fā)生了什么事。吉姆向他們講述了球隊(duì)剛剛輸?shù)舯荣惖慕?jīng)過，尤其是在比賽大部分時(shí)間表現(xiàn)出色卻在最后幾秒失敗的遺憾。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.情節(jié)發(fā)展：塔拉和布萊恩安慰吉姆，告訴他失敗是比賽的一部分，每一次失敗都是成長的機(jī)會。他們提到自己球隊(duì)也經(jīng)歷過類似的挫折，但從失敗中吸取了經(jīng)驗(yàn)，團(tuán)隊(duì)變得更加團(tuán)結(jié)和強(qiáng)大。塔拉還分享了一些自己在面對失敗時(shí)調(diào)整心態(tài)的方法，比如積極思考比賽中的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和不足，而不是只糾結(jié)于結(jié)果。布萊恩則鼓勵吉姆不要?dú)怵H，要保持對足球的熱愛。在這個過程中，吉姆的情緒逐漸有所好轉(zhuǎn)，開始認(rèn)真思考朋友們的話。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.情節(jié)銜接與準(zhǔn)備：隨著廣播通知塔拉和布萊恩所在球隊(duì)準(zhǔn)備上場比賽，他們停止了與吉姆的交談，開始做熱身運(yùn)動，互相鼓勵，展現(xiàn)出積極的團(tuán)隊(duì)氛圍。吉姆在一旁觀看，被他們的熱情所感染，回憶起自己球隊(duì)在比賽前也是如此充滿斗志，心中不禁泛起一絲感慨。12續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.比賽過程與吉姆的關(guān)注：比賽開始后，塔拉和布萊恩在場上積極奔跑、傳球、配合默契。吉姆的目光緊緊跟隨他們的身影，看到他們遇到困難時(shí)不放棄，努力爭取每一次機(jī)會，這讓吉姆深受觸動。他想起自己在比賽中的表現(xiàn)，意識到自己在最后時(shí)刻可能過于緊張，沒有更好地處理球權(quán)。同時(shí)，他也看到了塔拉和布萊恩所在球隊(duì)在比賽中遇到的一些問題，比如防守漏洞和進(jìn)攻時(shí)機(jī)把握不準(zhǔn)確，這讓他更加明白比賽的復(fù)雜性和團(tuán)隊(duì)協(xié)作的重要性。13續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.情節(jié)高潮與吉姆的領(lǐng)悟：在比賽的關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，塔拉和布萊恩所在球隊(duì)面臨落后的局面，但他們沒有放棄，通過一次精彩的戰(zhàn)術(shù)配合，布萊恩成功進(jìn)球，將比分扳平。這一刻，全場沸騰，吉姆也激動地為他們歡呼。這個進(jìn)球讓吉姆深刻領(lǐng)悟到，在比賽中無論遇到多大的困難，只要保持信念、團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作，就有可能扭轉(zhuǎn)局勢。他開始反思自己球隊(duì)在最后幾秒失敗的原因，不僅僅是運(yùn)氣不佳，可能還在于團(tuán)隊(duì)在關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻缺乏足夠的默契和堅(jiān)定的信念。此時(shí)，吉姆對足球比賽有了更深層次的理解，他決定從這次失敗中吸取教訓(xùn)，在未來的比賽中更加努力，提升自己和團(tuán)隊(duì)的實(shí)力。比賽繼續(xù)激烈進(jìn)行，吉姆滿懷期待地注視著場上的一切，內(nèi)心充滿了對未來的希望。14Part3范文呈現(xiàn)15范文呈現(xiàn)Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.“Howdidyoudo?”Taraaskedeagerly.“Terrible!”Jimrepliedinadowntone,stilltryingtofigureouthowtheopposingteamscoredthegame—winninggoaljustsecondsbeforetheendofthegame.BryanpattedJim’sshoulderasking,“Iswinningthegametheonlyreasonwhyyouplaysoccerandwhatreallymatterswhenplayingagame?”Hearingthis,Jimdidn’twanttogohomebutdecidedtofollowhisfriendsandwatchtheirgame.16范文呈現(xiàn)TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.JimwatchedwithfullattentionasTara’steamplayedfiercelyagainsttheiropposingteam.WhatimpressedhimmostwasthatalltheplayersinTara’steamcooperatedperfectlywithunwaveringresolveontheirfaces.Evenwhentheywereinatiewiththeopponent,theystayedpositiveandconfident.ItdawnedonJimthatsuccessdoesn’talwaysdependontheendresult,butratheronhowwefaceadversityandgrowfromit.17升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withacar’shornbeeping,Jim’sfriendsTaraandBryanjumpedoutofthecar.TheirfaceswerefilledwithconcernastheysawJim'sdejectedlook."Jim,weheardaboutthegame.It'sokay,man.It'snottheendoftheworld,"Tarasaid,givinghimareassuringhug.Bryannoddedinagreement,adding,"Youguysplayedgreatformostofthegame.That'swhatmatters."Theirwords,likeabalmtohiswoundedspirit,madeJimfeelalittlebetter.Standingthere,surroundedbyhisfriends,Jimrealizedthathewasn'taloneinthisdisappointment.18升級版范文呈現(xiàn)TherecametheturnforTaraandBryan’steamtoplaythegame.Jimwatchedthementerthefieldwithamixtureofenvyandanticipation.Asthegameprogressed,hesawhowtheycommunicatedeffectivelywitheachother,theireyesconstantlysearchingforopenteammates.Despitefacingtough