Unit 1《 Writing-Write a letter of advice》課件2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期英語(yǔ)人教版（2019）必修第一冊(cè)

Writing—WritealetterofadviceUnit1TeenageLife欄目索引寫作指導(dǎo)話題詞匯話題句式典例展示寫作指導(dǎo)建議信是寫信人向收信人對(duì)某事提出的建議和忠告。建議信可能是寫給個(gè)人，也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織或機(jī)構(gòu)，信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由。建議信要寫得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly,secondly,thirdly或tobegin/startwith,then,later,lastbutnotleast等依次陳述建議，具體為：第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己，注意語(yǔ)氣。第二段：應(yīng)該首先肯定對(duì)方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對(duì)具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬(wàn)不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。第三段：對(duì)提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。話題詞匯feedbackn．反饋suggestionn.建議proposaln.建議venturev.冒昧做某事beneficialadj.有益的advisev.建議suggestv.建議recommendv.推薦，勸告wiseadj.明智的話題句式1．段首常用語(yǔ)(1)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...(2)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.2．表達(dá)“建議”常用語(yǔ)(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...(3)You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...(4)AsfarasIamconcerned.../Inmyopinion...(5)Foronething...,foranother...(6)IfIwereyou,Iwould...(7)Itseemstomethatyoucould...3．段尾常用語(yǔ)(1)Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...(2)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.(3)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.(4)Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.(5)Iwillbereadyforfurtherdiscussingthismatterintodetails.典例展示為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開(kāi)辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說(shuō)了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說(shuō)明理由。注意：1．詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右；2．信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；3．信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣，情緒StepOne審題謀篇

體裁建議信話題對(duì)生活和學(xué)習(xí)的建議時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱第二人稱1．控制你的脾氣 ________________2．體育鍛煉 _______________3．有效的 ________4．去除 ________5．保持樂(lè)觀 ____________________6．積極的生活態(tài)度_________________________controlyourtemper

StepTwo詞匯運(yùn)用

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remainoptimisticabout

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1．完成句子①最重要的是學(xué)會(huì)控制你的脾氣Themostimportantthingis________________________________________________.②你不可能做或者說(shuō)出你會(huì)后悔的事。Youmaynotdoorsay_______________________.to

StepThree句式表達(dá)learn

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anything

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③事實(shí)情況是人人都會(huì)有這樣的一段時(shí)期，在這期間事事不順，因此你不必?fù)?dān)心過(guò)多。______________isthateveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiods________________________________________________________，soyoudon'thavetoworrymuch.The

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2．句式升級(jí)④用sothat/inorderthat合并句①和②。Themostimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper________________youmaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.⑤把句③用it改寫成主語(yǔ)從句。___________everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong，soyoudon'thavetoworrymuch.sothat/inorderthat

Itistruethat

StepFour連句成篇First，talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second，gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird，remainoptimisticabo