高考英語讀后續(xù)寫專題之優(yōu) 秀品質(zhì)類+基思的心靈覺醒：歸還手機(jī)之路+講義

閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyinhertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphoneonthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeith,“Keith,thegirlleftbehindherhandphone.”Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthemarket.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon’tneedone.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.”Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword,“Iwanttotakethehandphone.”Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.“Youcan’t!Whatiftheownercomestolookforit?”Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.Then,hetookMary’shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetookoutthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewaspolishingithappily.ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatheraboutthis?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.”Keithsaidquickly,“Iwillsayafriendlentittome.”Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo.”O(jiān)hdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone.“Thisisthegirl’sphonenumber.Whydon’twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocomeandtakebackherhandphone.”Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Marywasveryhappytohearthat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：瑪麗和基思在咖啡館遇到一位女士落下手機(jī)，基思因一直渴望擁有手機(jī)便想據(jù)為己有，瑪麗雖勸阻但基思不聽，回家后瑪麗看到手機(jī)上的號碼想聯(lián)系失主，而基思還編造謊言應(yīng)對父母。五處伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：基思拿走手機(jī)時手在顫抖。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：夜晚輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)難以入眠，內(nèi)心飽受良知的譴責(zé)，體現(xiàn)出他拿手機(jī)時雖一時沖動但內(nèi)心并不坦然。伏筆：瑪麗看到手機(jī)上的電話號碼并提議聯(lián)系失主。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：基思最終聽從瑪麗建議撥打該號碼，聯(lián)系上失主歸還手機(jī)，使故事有了合理的結(jié)局走向。伏筆：基思說要對父親撒謊是朋友借給他手機(jī)。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：歸還手機(jī)后基思向父親坦白錯誤，父親原諒他，表明基思認(rèn)識到自己的錯誤并勇于改正。伏筆：基思拿手機(jī)時的貪婪與興奮。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在經(jīng)歷內(nèi)心掙扎后，他體會到占有不屬于自己東西帶來的不安，從而更深刻理解誠實(shí)的重要性。伏筆：瑪麗一直勸阻基思。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：基思?xì)w還手機(jī)后瑪麗為他的轉(zhuǎn)變感到高興，突出瑪麗堅守正直觀念以及對哥哥改正錯誤的欣慰。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：

第一段：描述基思在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)反側(cè)的內(nèi)心活動，如對自己行為的愧疚、對被發(fā)現(xiàn)的擔(dān)憂等。提及他最終的決定，例如決定聽從瑪麗建議聯(lián)系失主歸還手機(jī)。第二段：講述基思?xì)w還手機(jī)的過程以及失主的反應(yīng)。說明此事對基思的影響，如他向父親坦白并得到原諒，以及他自己從中學(xué)到的教訓(xùn)。情感線：

基思拿走手機(jī)時是興奮與貪婪的，回家后面對瑪麗的勸阻有一絲慌張與抵觸。夜晚躺在床上則陷入深深的愧疚與不安之中，內(nèi)心在道德與欲望間掙扎。決定歸還手機(jī)后有了解脫感，歸還過程中帶著誠懇與悔意，最后得到原諒時是如釋重負(fù)且心懷感恩，認(rèn)識到誠實(shí)的珍貴。故事線：

那天晚上，基思在床上輾轉(zhuǎn)難眠，腦海中不斷浮現(xiàn)出拿走手機(jī)的場景以及失主焦急的模樣，內(nèi)心充滿愧疚與不安。最終，他決定聽從瑪麗的話，撥打手機(jī)上的號碼聯(lián)系失主。第二天，基思與失主碰面歸還手機(jī)，失主對他表示感謝并夸贊他誠實(shí)?；蓟丶液笙蚋赣H坦白了一切，父親欣慰地原諒了他，基思也深刻認(rèn)識到誠實(shí)才是做人之本，不應(yīng)被一時貪念左右。主旨升華句：“Honestyisthebestpolicy,andthepathtotruepeaceofmind.”（誠實(shí)為上策，是通往內(nèi)心真正平靜的道路。）“Onemomentofgreedmayleadtoalongnightofregret,butrepentancecanrestoreourmoralcompass.”（一時的貪婪可能導(dǎo)致長夜的悔恨，但悔改能重塑我們的道德準(zhǔn)則。）“Thechoicebetweenrightandwrongdefinesourcharacter,andchoosingrightalwaysbringsthegreatestrewards.”（對錯之間的抉擇定義了我們的品格，而選擇正確總是會帶來最大的回報。）“Admittingourmistakesisthefirststeptowardsredemption,andasignoftruegrowth.”（承認(rèn)錯誤是救贖的第一步，也是真正成長的標(biāo)志。）“Inthefaceoftemptation,thestrengthofourintegritydeterminesthequalityofourlives.”（面對誘惑時，我們正直的力量決定了我們生活的品質(zhì)。）寫作示范一：Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hismindwasinturmoil.Theimageofthegirlsearchingforherlostphonehauntedhim.Hethoughtaboutthedisappointmenthisparentswouldfeeliftheyknewhehadstolenit.Guiltgnawedathisconscience.Finally,herealizedhecouldn'tlivewiththisburden.Hegotup,foundthephone,anddialedthenumberMaryhadseen.Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Thenextday,Keithmetthegirlandreturnedherphone.Thegirlwasextremelygratefulandpraisedhishonesty.Backhome,Keithmusteredthecouragetotellhisfatherthewholestory.Hisfather,insteadofscoldinghim,huggedhimandsaidhewasproudofKeithfordoingtherightthing.Keithlearnedthathonestywasmorepreciousthananypossession.寫作示范二：Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hecouldn'tshakeofftheuneasyfeeling.Herememberedhisparents'teachingsabouthonestyandhisownvalues.Thephonethathadseemedsodesirablenowfeltlikeahotpotato.Heknewhehadmadeawrongchoice.Afterhoursofstruggle,hedecidedtomakeitright.HewokeMaryandtoldherhewantedtoreturnthephone.Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Keithcalledthenumberandarrangedtomeetthegirl.Whenhehandedoverthephone,thegirl'ssmileofreliefmadehimfeelashamedofhisearlieractions.Afterward,Keithwenttohisfatherandconfessed.Hisfatherforgavehim,sayingthateveryonemakesmistakesandwhatmattersislearningfromthem.Keithunderstoodthataclearconscienceisworthmorethananyill-gottengains.【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewasfeelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofherhandphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.T