讀后續(xù)寫+旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬之緣與意外之善+講義 高三下學(xué)期第二次模擬考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。CedarPointwasanamusementparkinOhioIhadbeenexpectingtovisitasachild.Welivedclosetothepark,soIoftenheardthescreamsofpeopleontherollercoaster,sawthetiredkidswiththeirparentswhentheyleft.Sometimes,Ilookedwistfullyatthelightsthroughmywindowatnight.WhenIwasnine,mygrandmothermanagedtosavealittlebitofmoneyhereandthereandtookmethereonedaythatsummer.Iyelled,excitementbubblinginsideme.Aswearrivedattheparkforthefirsttime,kidswereeverywhere,eatingpopcorn(爆米花)andblowingbubbles.Myeyeswidenedindelightatthescene.Iwantedtodoallthosethings,butdeepdown,Iknewwedidn’thaveenoughmoney.Wecouldonlyaffordtobuyaticketonlyforonerideforfifteenminutes.Ipulledmygrandmothertowardtheticketwindowtobuyaticketforthecarousel(旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬).ItwasexactlyasIhadimagined,straightoutofamovie.Mygrandmothersmiledfondlyandleaneddown,givingthetickettotherideoperator,MrSalas.Lettinggo,Irushedtotheride,stoppingonlytopickwhichhorsetositon.Theywereallsobeautiful,comingindifferentcolorswith’differentexpressions‘ontheirplasticfaces.Tome,itfeltlikethedecisionofalifetime.“Comeon,sweetie!Therideisgoingtostart!”mygrandmothercalledout,laughingatmyindecision.Seeingthat,MrSalasalsosmiledwarmly.Finally,Ipickedthehorsewiththepinkhairandbluesaddle.Inthefollowingminutes,Iwasabsorbedinenjoyingtheride,forgettingmyfamilywasstruggling.Mygrandmotherwavedeachtimetheridepassedherby.MrSalaswatchedmefromadistance.Sadly,thecarouselrideendedmuchtooquickly.Mygrandmotherwaswaitingandtookmyhand.Igotdownfromthehorseunwillingly,feelingbittersweet.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：作者小時候一直期待去俄亥俄州的雪松點游樂園，九歲那年夏天，祖母好不容易攢了些錢帶他去，但只夠買一次15分鐘的旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的票。作者盡情享受了這次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬之旅，結(jié)束時雖有些不舍，但也只能無奈離開。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：作者一家經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)，只買得起一次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的票?；貞?yīng)：MrSalas被作者的純真快樂所打動，送了全天通票，讓作者有機(jī)會體驗更多游樂設(shè)施，解決了因經(jīng)濟(jì)條件無法盡情游玩的問題，給了作者一個意外的驚喜，也使故事充滿溫情。伏筆：作者對游樂園充滿期待，聽到過山車的尖叫、看到離開的疲憊孩子和夜晚的燈光，都表現(xiàn)出他內(nèi)心的渴望。回應(yīng)：得到全天通票后，作者終于可以盡情體驗游樂園的各種項目，滿足了他一直以來的愿望，使他從之前的只能短暫體驗變得可以充分享受游樂園的樂趣，回應(yīng)了前文的期待。伏筆：MrSalas看到作者挑選木馬時的猶豫不決，以及祖母的呼喚和作者的投入，他全程關(guān)注著作者?；貞?yīng)：這促使他后來做出送票的決定，他的關(guān)注和微笑為送票行為做了鋪墊，使他的善舉不顯得突兀，也體現(xiàn)了他善良、細(xì)心的性格特點，推動了情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬的美麗和作者認(rèn)為挑選木馬是“一生的決定”，凸顯了這次短暫體驗對作者的重要性?；貞?yīng)：全天通票讓作者有更多類似重要而美好的體驗，強(qiáng)化了游樂園在作者心中的美好印象，同時也升華了MrSalas的善舉的意義，從讓作者享受一次旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬變成了給他一個難忘的游樂園歡樂時光。伏筆：作者在旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬上的快樂和結(jié)束時的不舍，表現(xiàn)出他對游樂園的喜愛和對更多游玩機(jī)會的渴望。回應(yīng)：全天通票使作者的渴望得以實現(xiàn)，他可以盡情享受各種游樂設(shè)施，情感上從之前的不舍變?yōu)榕d奮和感激，豐富了情感線，也使故事更加完整和感人。續(xù)寫要點情感線：第一段：作者和祖母起初對MrSalas的接近感到有些驚訝，隨后從他的微笑和話語中感受到善意，心中滿是疑惑和好奇，不知道他要做什么，同時也有一絲期待。第二段：當(dāng)MrSalas拿著全天通票回來時，作者和祖母先是震驚，不敢相信這是真的，接著轉(zhuǎn)為極度的喜悅和感激，作者興奮地想要去體驗更多游樂設(shè)施，祖母則為陌生人的慷慨而感動，對人性的美好有了更深的體會，整個氛圍充滿了溫暖和幸福。故事線：第一段：MrSalas帶著微笑走過來，夸贊作者在旋轉(zhuǎn)木馬上的快樂模樣讓他很感動，詢問了作者的一些情況，然后說他去去就回，讓作者和祖母在原地等候，作者和祖母面面相覷，不知道他葫蘆里賣的什么藥，但還是站在那里等待。第二段：過了一會兒，MrSalas拿著一張雪松點游樂園的全天通票回來，遞給作者，說他希望作者能在游樂園度過愉快的一天，因為他從作者的眼中看到了對游樂園的熱愛和渴望。作者接過票，激動得說不出話來，祖母也眼眶濕潤，不停地向MrSalas道謝。作者拿著票，迫不及待地沖向其他游樂設(shè)施，開始了他快樂而難忘的一天。主旨升華句Inthemostunexpectedmoments,kindnesscanblossomlikeaflower,spreadingitsfragranceandturningasimpledayintoamemorythatwarmstheheartforever.（在最意想不到的時刻，善良能如花朵般綻放，散發(fā)芬芳，將平凡的一天變成永遠(yuǎn)溫暖心靈的回憶。）Sometimes,thesmallestactsofgenerositycanopenthedoortoaworldofjoyandwonder,remindingusthateveninthefaceofhardship,therearealwaysangelsamongus,readytomakeourdreamscometrue.（有時，最微小的慷慨之舉能打開一扇通往歡樂和奇妙世界的門，提醒我們即使身處困境，身邊也總有天使，隨時準(zhǔn)備讓我們的夢想成真。）Asingleactofkindnesscanbethesparkthatignitesachainreactionofloveandhappiness,provingthatinaworldthatoftenseemscold,thewarmthofthehumanspiritcanstillshinebrightlyandtransformlives.（一個善舉可以成為點燃愛與幸福連鎖反應(yīng)的火花，證明在這個看似冷漠的世界里，人類精神的溫暖仍然可以閃耀光芒，改變生活。）Thekindnessofastrangerislikearayofsunshineonacloudyday,breakingthroughthegloomandilluminatingthepathtoadayfilledwithlaughter,adventure,andcherishedmemories.（陌生人的善良就像陰天里的一縷陽光，穿透陰霾，照亮了通往充滿歡笑、冒險和珍貴回憶的一天的道路。）Inthesimplegestureofgivingaticket,MrSalasshowedusthattruewealthliesnotinmoney,butintheabilitytoshareloveandcreatehappiness,leavinganindeliblemarkonayoungheartandteachingusallthepowerofkindness.（在送出一張票的簡單舉動中，MrSalas向我們展示了真正的財富不在于金錢，而在于分享愛和創(chuàng)造幸福的能力，在一顆年輕的心上留下了不可磨滅的印記，并讓我們都懂得了善良的力量。）寫作示范第一篇Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Helookedatmeandsaid,"Youngman,Isawhowmuchyouenjoyedthatride.Youhaveaspecialkindofjoythat'scontagious."Iblushedandhidbehindmygrandmotheralittle.Hethenaskedmygrandmotherafewquestionsaboutourdayandourfamily.Afterchattingforabit,hesaidhe'dberightbackandaskedustowait.MygrandmotherandIexchangedpuzzledglances,butwenodded.Aswewatchedhimwalkaway,Icouldn'thelpbutwonderwhathewasupto.Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.Igaspedindisbelief,andmygrandmother'seyesfilledwithtears.MrSalashandedthetickettomeandsaid,"Iwantyoutohaveagreatdayhere.Youdeserveit."Iwasoverjoyedandthankedhimoverandover.Mygrandmotherhuggedhimtightly,unabletoexpresshergratitudeinwords.Withtheticketinhand,Ifeltliketheluckiestkidintheworld.Iranofftothenearestride,myheartfilledwithexcitementandanewfoundfaithinthekindnessofstrangers.ThatdayatCedarPointbecameoneofthemostmemorabledaysofmylife,allbecauseofMrSalas'sincredibleactofkindness.第二篇Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Hecroucheddowntomylevelandsaid,"Youknow,kid,youlookedlikeyouwerehavingthetimeofyourlifeonthatcarousel.ItremindedmeofwhenIwasachildandhowmuchthesesimplejoysmeant."Istaredathim,alittleconfusedbutalsotouchedbyhiswords.Hethenpattedmyheadandtoldmygrandmotherhehadanidea.Hewalkedawaybriskly,leavinguswithasenseofanticipation.Mygrandmothersqueezedmyhand,andwewaited,ourheartspoundingwithamixtureofcuriosityandhope.Afterawhile,MrSalasreturned,withanall-inclusiveticketforCedarPointfortheentireday.Myjawdropped,andIcouldhardlybelievemyeyes.Mygrandmotherletoutasmallcryofsurprise.MrSalasgrinnedandsaid,"Ijustcouldn'tletthislittleone'sdayendsosoon.Iwanthimtoexperienceallthefunthisplacehastooffer."Iwasspeechlesswithgratitude.Mygrandmotherthankedhimprofusely,andIhuggedthetickettomychestasifitwerethemostpreciousthingintheworld.Fromthatmomenton,Idashedfromoneridetoanother,mylaughterechoingthroughthepark.Thatday,notonlydidIgettoenjoythewondersofCedarPoint,butIalsolearnedthatkindnesshasthepowertoturnanordinarydayintoanextraordinaryadventure,andthattheworldisfullofgood-heartedpeoplewaitingtomakeadifference.參考答案Atthatmoment,MrSalasapproacheduswithawarmsmileonhisface.Heaskedwhywedidn’tcontinuetoridethecarousel.Mygrandmotherexplainedtohimthatweonlyhadenoughmoneyforoneride.Henoddedinunderstanding.Butthen,hiseyesheldaglimmerofkindnessandunderstandingashelookedatmeandmygrandmother.Hesaidgently,“Excuseme,ma’am.Ic