讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+意外邂逅獨(dú)角獸：一場(chǎng)關(guān)于成長(zhǎng)的旅程+講義 高三下學(xué)期第二次質(zhì)量監(jiān)測(cè)英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫(xiě)的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。MynameisFauna,butMomandDadsometimescallmeMagpie,sinceItalkalot.Theycallme“animalmagnet,”too;becauseanimalslikeme.Idon’tmindatallbecauseIlikethem,too.Infact,whatIreally,reallywantisapetofmyown.Mydadhasapetfish,andIlikeitalot

—butIwouldstilllikeapetthat’sallmine.“Please?Iaskedmyparents.“Prettyplease,withcherriesandchocolateandwhippedcreamontop?”“We’llsee!”“I’llwalkitandfeeditandbrushit....well,unlessithasscalesorsomething.ThenI’llpolishthemrealnice.”“We’llsee.”Finally,though,“we’llsee”wasupgradedto“soon.”“Let’sdosomeresearch,”saidDad,“andseewhatkindofpetisbestforyou.”“Andkeepyoureyespeeled,”saidMom.“Youneverknowwhenanopportunitywillcomealong.”O(jiān)nedidcomealong.IwasonmywayhomefromschoolwhenIsawaunicorn(獨(dú)角獸)standinginbackofBakerTrembly’sshop.Hewasnibblingstalebiscuitsoutofthetrashcan.Ithoughthemightbeawildunicorncomeintotown,buthetrotted(小跑)rightuptomewhenIheldouttheappleIhadinmybackpack,leftoverfromlunch.“Itfollowedmehome!”Itoldmyparents,afterImanagedtoleadtheunicorntoourfrontgate.“CanIkeepit?”“Ihopeyouwerecareful,”saidmydadwithafrown.“Unicornscanbedangerous.”“Notthisone!He’sverysweet.Andhe’sjustwhatIwant!.Icankeephim.inthegarden.”“Hedoeslooksweet,”saidmymom.“Let’scheckhistags(標(biāo)牌).”Tags?Ihadn’tevennoticedhisthinsilvercollar,I’dbeensoexcited.注意：1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Fauna非常想要一個(gè)屬于自己的寵物，父母說(shuō)要做些研究來(lái)確定哪種寵物適合她，還讓她留意機(jī)會(huì)。一天Fauna在放學(xué)回家路上看到一只獨(dú)角獸在吃BakerTrembly商店后面垃圾桶里的餅干，她用午餐剩下的蘋(píng)果把獨(dú)角獸引到了自家前門(mén)，請(qǐng)求父母讓她養(yǎng)這只獨(dú)角獸，父母發(fā)現(xiàn)獨(dú)角獸戴著有電話號(hào)碼的銀項(xiàng)圈，故事由此續(xù)寫(xiě)。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆：Fauna一直渴望有一個(gè)屬于自己的寵物，這為她發(fā)現(xiàn)獨(dú)角獸后極力想留下它做鋪墊?；貞?yīng)：當(dāng)?shù)弥?dú)角獸可能有主人時(shí)，F(xiàn)auna內(nèi)心從期待轉(zhuǎn)為失落，但最終在與獨(dú)角獸主人的交流中學(xué)會(huì)了理解和成全，體現(xiàn)了她在追求寵物過(guò)程中的成長(zhǎng)，也呼應(yīng)了她對(duì)寵物的渴望，使情感線更加豐富。伏筆：父母提到要做研究確定適合Fauna的寵物，暗示寵物的選擇并非隨意，需要考慮多方面因素，這為獨(dú)角獸有主人且需要?dú)w還這一情節(jié)做了伏筆?；貞?yīng)：獨(dú)角獸有主人這一事實(shí)符合父母所說(shuō)的要慎重選擇寵物的理念，同時(shí)也教育了Fauna不是所有喜歡的動(dòng)物都能成為自己的寵物，推動(dòng)了故事的發(fā)展和主題的深化。伏筆：Fauna用蘋(píng)果輕易地將獨(dú)角獸引到自家前門(mén)，顯示出獨(dú)角獸對(duì)食物的需求和它可能不太怕人的性格，這為后面獨(dú)角獸與主人的關(guān)系以及它走失的原因做了暗示。回應(yīng)：獨(dú)角獸主人Sari提到獨(dú)角獸是因?yàn)楸皇澄镂呤?，與前文Fauna用蘋(píng)果引它的情節(jié)相呼應(yīng)，使故事邏輯更加連貫，也解釋了獨(dú)角獸出現(xiàn)在這里的原因，豐富了故事細(xì)節(jié)。伏筆：Fauna一開(kāi)始沒(méi)有注意到獨(dú)角獸的銀項(xiàng)圈，體現(xiàn)了她的興奮和粗心，同時(shí)也為后續(xù)發(fā)現(xiàn)項(xiàng)圈上的電話號(hào)碼以及聯(lián)系主人的情節(jié)設(shè)置了懸念?；貞?yīng)：發(fā)現(xiàn)電話號(hào)碼后聯(lián)系主人，推動(dòng)了故事向歸還獨(dú)角獸的方向發(fā)展，解開(kāi)了之前獨(dú)角獸身份不明的懸念，使故事節(jié)奏緊湊，情節(jié)跌宕起伏。伏筆：父母對(duì)獨(dú)角獸的態(tài)度比較謹(jǐn)慎，擔(dān)心其危險(xiǎn)性，這為后面他們支持Fauna歸還獨(dú)角獸做了鋪墊，也體現(xiàn)了父母在教育孩子過(guò)程中的理性和責(zé)任感?；貞?yīng)：父母在整個(gè)過(guò)程中引導(dǎo)Fauna做出正確的選擇，幫助她理解寵物所有權(quán)和責(zé)任的重要性，使故事不僅是關(guān)于寵物的故事，更是Fauna成長(zhǎng)的故事，深化了文章的內(nèi)涵和教育意義。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)情感線：第一段：Fauna看到項(xiàng)圈上的電話號(hào)碼時(shí)，心情瞬間變得復(fù)雜，既有些失望，因?yàn)榭赡軣o(wú)法留下獨(dú)角獸，又有些好奇和擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心獨(dú)角獸的主人會(huì)責(zé)怪它亂跑。她懷著忐忑的心情撥打了電話，等待主人的到來(lái)，此時(shí)她對(duì)獨(dú)角獸的喜愛(ài)和不舍愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈，但也知道應(yīng)該做正確的事。第二段：當(dāng)Sari說(shuō)她和獨(dú)角獸從未分開(kāi)過(guò)時(shí)，F(xiàn)auna看到了他們之間深厚的感情，心中的不舍逐漸轉(zhuǎn)化為理解和成全。雖然難過(guò)，但她也為獨(dú)角獸能回到主人身邊而感到欣慰，感受到了一種超越個(gè)人喜愛(ài)的大愛(ài)，完成了從單純的渴望擁有到學(xué)會(huì)放手和祝福的情感升華。故事線：第一段：Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Itookadeepbreathanddialedthenumberwithtremblinghands.AwomannamedSariansweredthephone.ItoldherIhadfoundherunicorn.Shesoundedveryrelievedandsaidshewouldcomerightover.Whilewewaited,Istrokedtheunicorn'smaneandwhisperedtoitthatitsownerwascoming.Theunicornseemedtounderstandandnuzzledmyhand.WhenSariarrived,sheranuptotheunicornandhuggedittightly.第二段：“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmefortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadgottenlostwhilefollowingthesmelloffood.IfeltapangofsadnessknowingIcouldn'tkeephim,butseeingthejoyonSari'sfacemademerealizeitwastherightthingtodo.AsSariledtheunicornaway,Iwavedgoodbyewithasmile,eventhoughthereweretearsinmyeyes.Iknewthatoneday,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetforme,anditwouldbemineintherightway.主旨升華句Trueloveisnotaboutpossession,butabouttheabilitytoletgowhenit'snecessary,allowingtheoneswecareabouttobewheretheytrulybelong.（真正的愛(ài)不是占有，而是在必要時(shí)放手，讓我們所關(guān)心的人回到他們真正屬于的地方。）Sometimes,themostdifficultchoiceswemake,likegivingupsomethingwedesire,aretheonesthatteachusthegreatestlessonsaboutresponsibilityandkindness.（有時(shí)，我們做出的最艱難的選擇，比如放棄我們渴望的東西，正是那些教會(huì)我們關(guān)于責(zé)任和善良的最重要課程的選擇。）Inthejourneyoflife,wemayencountermanytemptations,butitisourabilitytomaketherightdecisions,evenwhenithurts,thatdefinesourcharacterandshapesourfuture.（在人生的旅途中，我們可能會(huì)遇到許多誘惑，但正是我們即使在痛苦時(shí)也能做出正確決定的能力，定義了我們的性格并塑造了我們的未來(lái)。）Thepathtomaturityisoftenpavedwiththebittersweetexperiencesoflettinggo.Itisthroughtheseactsthatwelearntocherishthethingsthataretrulymeantforusandgrowintobetterversionsofourselves.（通往成熟的道路往往是由放手的苦樂(lè)參半的經(jīng)歷鋪就的。正是通過(guò)這些行為，我們學(xué)會(huì)珍惜真正屬于我們的東西，并成長(zhǎng)為更好的自己。）Loveandkindnessextendbeyondourowndesires.Whenwechoosetodowhat'srightforothers,wenotonlybrightentheirlivesbutalsodiscoverthebeautyandstrengthwithinourselves.（愛(ài)和善良超越了我們自己的欲望。當(dāng)我們選擇為他人做正確的事情時(shí)，我們不僅照亮了他們的生活，也發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己內(nèi)心的美麗和力量。）寫(xiě)作示范第一篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.MyheartsankalittleasIrealizedtheunicornprobablyhadanowner.Ishowedthetagtomyparents,andwedecidedtocallthenumber.Awomananswered,andshesoundedfrantic.Shesaidherunicornhadgonemissingandshehadbeensearchingeverywhere.Itoldherwherewewere,andshesaidshe'dberightthere.Whilewewaited,Igavetheunicornsomemoreapplesandtalkedtoitsoftly.Itolditthatitsownerwascomingandthatithadbeenverybrave.Whenthewomanarrived,sherushedovertotheunicornandhuggedittightly.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmeprofuselyfortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadmanagedtoslipaway.IfeltabitsadthatIcouldn'tkeeptheunicorn,butseeingthehappinessonSari'sfacemademefeelbetter.MyparentsputtheirarmsaroundmeandtoldmethateventhoughIcouldn'thavethisunicorn,therewouldbeotheropportunitiesformetogetapet.Inodded,realizingthatsometimes,doingtherightthingmeanslettinggoofwhatwewant.AndIknewthatwhenthetimewasright,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetthatwasmeantforme.第二篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Iwashesitanttocallatfirst,fearingthatIwouldlosethechancetokeeptheunicorn.Butmyparentsencouragedmetodotherightthing.Idialedthenumber,andaladynamedSaripickedup.ShewasoverjoyedtohearthatIhadfoundherunicorn.Shetoldmethathewasveryprecioustoherandthatshehadbeenworriedsick.Aswewaitedforhertoarrive,Isatwiththeunicorn,pettingitgently.WhenSarishowedup,shehadtearsinhereyes.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Sheexplainedhowtheunicornhadgottenoutbyaccident.Icouldseethestrongbondbetweenthem.Althoughitwashard,IknewIhadtogivetheunicornback.Sarithankedmeagainandagain,andsheevengavemeasmallunicorncharmasatokenofhergratitude.Astheywalkedaway,Iwatchedwithamixtureofsadnessandhappiness.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thethingswelovethemostaren'talwaysmean