讀后續(xù)寫+從疏遠到親密：兄弟在足球賽中的和解+講義 高三下學期第二次模擬考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。MybrotherMatthewwasbecomingateenager.Noweverythingwaschanging.Hespentmostofhistimeindoorstalkingonthephone.Herefusedtodiveafterthefootballforfearofgettinghisjeansdirtywhenweplayedcatch.YetIkeptexpectingtoreturntothepastwhenIwashishero,hisbigbrotherand-hisbestfriend.ItwastoughfacingthefactthatIwasnolongerthecenterofmybrother'suniverse,andIworriedaboutwhereIfitinhisnewlife.IdiscoveredtheanswerduringMatthew'sseventh-gradeyear,whenheattendedasummercampandIservedasavolunteer.Hewasusuallythecenierofattention,blowingstrawwrappersatallofhisfriendsandshowingofffootballskills.Hewasthekideverybodyknewandloved.Itwashappyforhim,ButIbarelysawmybrotherthewholeweek.Ifeltbeingcastasidelikeanoldshoe.IwastheonewhohadtaughtManhewhowtoblowthewrappersofstrawsoffandplayfootball.Ihadbeenwithhimforeverymajormomentinhislifeuntilnow,andsuddenlyitwasasifnoneofthatmattered.Then,onthelastevening,MatthewcalledmeasIwasleaving."Chris!We'regonniaplayfootball.Youhavetocome!"Iblinkedinsurprise."Areyousure?Won’tembarrassyou?"Iasked."Itdoesn'tmatter.Justplay."hereplied.smiling.IfollowedMatthewtothefootballfield.Whenhiscoolnewfriendssawme.theylaughed."Ithoughtyouweregettingarealplayer!"oneoftheguysshouted,eyeswideningwithdisbelief."He'smybrother,"wasMarthew'sreply."Andhe'sreallygood!"IwoundupontheoppositeteamfromMatthew.Still,Iwantedtoscoreahundredtouchdownstoprovetomybrotherthathisfaithinmewasn'tmisplaced.Unfortunately,Inevergotthatchance.Theguysonmyteamsimplyrefusedtopasstheballtoanolderman.Exactlytheywouldn'tletmeanywherenearit。注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ThatfootballgamemighthavebeenthemostfrustratingoneI'deverplayed."He’smybrother!"Matthewsaidproudlytoallhisfriends.文章大意“我”的弟弟Matthew進入青春期后，一切都發(fā)生了變化。他不再像從前那樣與“我”親密無間，而是把更多時間花在室內打電話上，也不再像以前一樣盡情玩耍，這讓“我”感到失落和擔憂，不知道自己在他的新生活中處于何種位置。在Matthew七年級參加夏令營時，“我”作為志愿者一同前往。期間，Matthew成為眾人焦點，與“我”相處時間甚少，直到最后一晚，他邀請“我”一起踢足球，故事在此處續(xù)寫，講述這場足球賽的經過以及它對“我”和Matthew關系的影響，突出親情在成長與變化中的珍貴與堅韌。故事分析伏筆與回應：伏筆：Matthew進入青春期后行為的改變，如拒絕踢球怕弄臟牛仔褲，常待在室內打電話，暗示他與“我”的關系疏遠。

回應：在夏令營中，他起初很少與“我”交流，專注于和新朋友玩耍，使“我”感到被冷落，進一步強化了這種疏遠感；而最后邀請“我”踢球，則是關系轉變的開始，回應了前文的疏遠伏筆，展現(xiàn)親情的紐帶作用。伏筆：“我”一直期待回到過去與Matthew的親密時光，為“我”在夏令營中對他的關注以及因他的忽視而產生的失落情緒做鋪墊。

回應：足球賽中“我”努力表現(xiàn)，想證明自己，體現(xiàn)“我”對恢復親密關系的渴望；比賽結束后Matthew的維護和關心，讓“我”感受到親情仍在，回應了“我”內心的期待，使故事情感更加完整。伏筆：Matthew在夏令營中是眾人焦點，展示各種技能，這使他在朋友面前有了一定的形象和地位，也為他在足球賽中朋友對“我”的態(tài)度以及他的回應埋下伏筆。

回應：比賽中朋友嘲笑“我”，而Matthew堅定地維護“我”，表明他雖然有了新朋友，但依然重視與“我”的兄弟情，突出了親情高于其他關系的主題，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。伏筆：“我”教會Matthew吹吸管包裝紙和踢足球等技能，這些曾經共同的回憶在他有了新朋友后被暫時擱置，凸顯“我”的失落。

回應：在足球賽中，“我”渴望通過這些技能表現(xiàn)自己，重新獲得Matthew的認可；最終Matthew的肯定讓這些回憶再次被重視，強化了親情的珍貴，使故事前后呼應。伏筆：“我”作為志愿者參加夏令營，有機會近距離觀察Matthew的新生活，這為故事中“我”的情感變化和與Matthew的互動提供了場景和契機。

回應：在夏令營的一系列經歷，包括被冷落和最后的足球賽，都因“我”的參與而發(fā)生，使故事圍繞“我”與Matthew的關系展開，突出了親情在成長過程中的重要性和復雜性。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：ThatfootballgamemighthavebeenthemostfrustratingoneI'deverplayed.Despitemyefforts,myteamcontinuedtoignoreme,andIcouldn'tshowMatthewwhatIwascapableof.Asthegameended,Iwalkedoffthefield,feelingdefeatedandabitembarrassed.ButbeforeIcoulddwellonit,Matthewcamerunningover.Heputhisarmaroundmyshoulderandsaid,"Don'tworryaboutthem.You'restillthebestbrotherever."Hiswordswarmedmyheartandmademerealizethatourbondwasstrongerthananymomentaryembarrassment.第二段："He'smybrother!"Matthewsaidproudlytoallhisfriends.Thenheturnedtomeandsaid,"Let'sgogetsomeicecream,justlikeweusedto."Aswewalkedaway,Ifeltasenseofreliefandhappiness.Thatnight,wetalkedandlaughedlikeoldtimes,sharingstoriesaboutoursummers.Fromthatdayon,IunderstoodthateventhoughMatthewwasgrowingupandhislifewaschanging,ourrelationshipasbrotherswouldalwaysremainspecial.Wemighthaveourdifferencesandchallenges,butthelovewehadforeachotherwouldendure.情感線：起初，“我”因Matthew的成長變化而感到失落、擔憂和被冷落；在足球賽中，因隊友的忽視而感到沮喪和尷尬；比賽結束后，Matthew的安慰和邀請讓“我”感到溫暖和欣慰；最后，通過交流和相處，“我”重拾快樂，感受到親情的珍貴與永恒，情感變化細膩，體現(xiàn)了親情在經歷波折后依然堅韌的主題。故事線：Matthew進入青春期，與“我”關系疏遠。參加夏令營，Matthew受關注，“我”被冷落。最后一晚Matthew邀請“我”踢足球。足球賽中“我”被隊友忽視，感到沮喪。比賽結束，Matthew安慰“我”。續(xù)寫部分，Matthew帶“我”吃冰淇淋，關系回暖。主旨升華句：Bloodisthickerthanwater,andnoamountofchangeordistancecantrulyseverthebondoffamily.（血濃于水，無論多少變化或距離都無法真正切斷家庭的紐帶。）Inthejourneyoflife,theloveofasiblingisaconstantstarthatshinesthroughthedarkesttimesofchangeandgrowingapart.（在人生旅途中，兄弟姐妹的愛是一顆恒定的星，在變化和疏遠的最黑暗時刻閃耀。）Truefamilylovewithstandsthetestoftimeandthewindsofchange,remainingsteadfastandunyielding.（真正的親情經得起時間的考驗和變化的風浪，始終堅定不移。）Thetiesthatbindusasfamilyarenoteasilybroken;theyarewovenwiththreadsoflove,patience,andunderstanding.（將我們作為家庭聯(lián)系在一起的紐帶不容易斷裂；它們是用愛、耐心和理解的線編織而成的。）Aswegrowandchange,thelovewesharewithourfamilymembersistheanchorthatkeepsusgroundedandremindsusofwhoweareandwherewecomefrom.（隨著我們成長和變化，我們與家人分享的愛是讓我們保持腳踏實地的錨，提醒我們自己是誰以及我們來自哪里。）寫作示范第一篇

ThatfootballgamemighthavebeenthemostfrustratingoneI'deverplayed.Ifeltlikeanoutsideronmyownteam,chasingafteraballthatnevercamemyway.Thejeersandlaughterfromtheotherboysstung,butwhathurtmostwasthethoughtthatImightbelosingmyconnectionwithMatthew.Asthefinalwhistleblew,Itrudgedoffthefield,myheadhunglow.Butthen,Matthewjoggeduptome,hisfaceflushedwithexcitement."Hey,Chris,don'tletthemgettoyou.You'restillmyfavoritebrother,andthatgamedoesn'tchangeanything."Hiswordswerelikeabalmtomywoundedpride."He'smybrother!"Matthewsaidproudlytoallhisfriends.Hethengrabbedmyarmandledmetowardsthecampcafeteria."Let'sgograbasoda.Iwanttohearaboutwhatyou'vebeenupto."Aswewalked,hetoldmehowmuchhehadmissedouroldtimestogetherandhowhewassorryifhehadmademefeelleftout.Thatevening,wesatunderthestars,sharingstoriesandlaughing.Irealizedthatourrelationshipwasevolving,butthelovebetweenuswasasstrongasever.Wemightnotbeascloseasweoncewere,butwewerestillbrothers,andthatwassomethingnoonecouldtakeaway.第二篇

ThatfootballgamemighthavebeenthemostfrustratingoneI'deverplayed.Myteammates'indifferencemademefeelinvisible,andIwassureMatthewwouldbedisappointed.Butasthegameended,Matthewrushedovertome."Chris,Iknowitwastoughoutthere,butthanksforplaying.Youmeanmoretomethananyoftheseguys."Hiseyesweresincere,andIcouldseethathegenuinelycared.Westartedwalkingbacktothecabins,andhetoldmeabouthisweekatcamp,sharingdetailshehadn'tbotheredwithbefore."He'smybrother!"Matthewsaidproudlytoallhisfriends.Thenheturnedtomeandsaid,"Let'sgotothelake.Iwanttoshowyousomething."Wewalkedtothewater'sedge,andhepointedouttheconstellationshehadlearnedabout.Aswelayonthegrass,lookingupatthesky,hesaid,"Iknowthingshavebeendifferent,butyou'llalwaysbemybigbrother.Iloveyou."Inthatmoment,Iunderstoodthatgrowingupdoesn'tmeangrowingapart.Ourbondwasunbreakable,andwewouldfacethechangesoflifetogether,withloveandunderstandingasourguide.【答案】

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