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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inabustlingcity,therelivedayoungwomannamedLily.Lilywasshyandoftenfounditdifficulttomakefriends.Shewouldwalkthroughthecrowdedstreets,feelingasenseofisolationamidsttheseaofpeople.Herdayswerespentmostlyalone,readingbooksinquietcornersofcafesortakinglongwalksinthepark.Sheyearnedforcompanionshipbuthershynessheldherback.Oneday,asshewasbrowsingthroughabookstore,shecameacrossanadvertisementforasocialeventatalocalcommunitycenter.Theideaofattendingsuchaneventfilledherwithtrepidation.Shedebatedwithherselfforhours,imaginingallthepossiblescenariosthatcouldgowrong.Butasmallvoiceinsideherurgedhertotakeachanceandbreakfreefromhershell.Finally,aftermuchinternalstruggle,shedecidedtoovercomehershynessandattend.Asshewalkedintotheroomfilledwithpeople,herheartpoundedwithnervousness.Thenoiseandchatterseemedoverwhelming.Shefoundaquietcornerandsatthere,observingothers.Herhandswerefidgety,andsheconstantlyquestionedherdecisiontobethere.Suddenly,afriendlywomannamedSarahapproachedherandstartedaconversation.LilywashesitantatfirstbutsoonfoundherselfengagedinapleasantchatwithSarah.Theydiscoveredtheyhadcommoninterestsinbooksandmusic.Astheeveningprogressed,Lilybegantorelaxandenjoythecompany.Sherealizedthatmaybesteppingoutofhercomfortzonewasn’tsobadafterall.TheeventendedwithLilyfeelingaglimmerofhopeandanewfoundsenseofcourage.Shehadtakenasmallsteptowardsbreakingfreefromherisolation.Littledidsheknowthatthisencounterwouldchangeherlifeinwaysshecouldn’tyetimagine.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式作答。Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:在繁華都市中,害羞的莉莉常感孤獨,難以交友。她偶然看到社區(qū)中心社交活動廣告,經(jīng)內(nèi)心掙扎后參加?;顒又校焉频纳c她交談,她們發(fā)現(xiàn)彼此在書籍和音樂上有共同興趣,莉莉逐漸放松并享受陪伴,活動結(jié)束時莉莉有了希望與勇氣,這次相遇將以意想不到的方式改變她的生活。伏筆以及回應(yīng):伏筆1:莉莉性格害羞且孤獨,與后文她克服困難參加活動形成對比,續(xù)寫中她會因友誼而逐漸改變性格。伏筆2:看到活動廣告時內(nèi)心的掙扎,預(yù)示著參加活動對她來說是重大突破,續(xù)寫中她會珍視因這次突破而獲得的友誼。伏筆3:活動中莉莉坐在角落觀察他人且手不安,體現(xiàn)她的緊張,與后文放松享受形成轉(zhuǎn)折,續(xù)寫中她會在友誼里變得更自信從容。伏筆4:莎拉主動搭話且交流愉快,為她們后續(xù)友誼發(fā)展做鋪墊,續(xù)寫中會有更多深入交流與相互影響。伏筆5:活動結(jié)束莉莉有新希望與勇氣,暗示友誼將推動她生活產(chǎn)生積極變化,續(xù)寫中會具體展現(xiàn)生活變化情況。續(xù)寫要點:第一段:情感線:興奮與期待,對新友誼充滿憧憬,又有一絲不安,擔(dān)心友誼能否長久維系。故事線:莉莉與莎拉互留聯(lián)系方式后,當(dāng)晚就迫不及待地給莎拉發(fā)消息,分享活動后的感受。她們約定周末一起去一家小眾書店,尋找一本她們都感興趣但難尋的舊書。莉莉在等待周末的過程中,不斷思考與莎拉的對話,滿心歡喜又有些忐忑。第二段:情感線:感激與幸福,因友誼帶來積極改變而感恩,變得開朗樂觀,對未來充滿信心。故事線:莉莉在莎拉的鼓勵下參加了讀書分享會,起初緊張,但在莎拉陪伴下逐漸放松并積極發(fā)言。她們還一起學(xué)習(xí)樂器,莉莉在莎拉幫助下克服困難,技藝漸長。莉莉開始主動與他人交流,社交圈不斷擴大,不再是那個孤獨害羞的女孩。主旨升華句:“Asingleactofsteppingoutofone'sshellcanopenthedoortoaworldoffriendshipandself-discovery.”(一次走出自我保護殼的行動可以打開友誼和自我發(fā)現(xiàn)的大門。)“Truefriendshiphasthepowertotransformtheshyestofsoulsintoconfidentindividuals,readytoembracelife'sadventures.”(真正的友誼有力量將最害羞的靈魂轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樽孕诺膫€體,準(zhǔn)備好迎接生活的冒險。)“Inthejourneyoflife,achanceencounterandtheresultingfriendshipcanbetheguidinglightthatleadsusoutofthedarknessofisolation.”(在人生旅途中,一次偶然相遇和由此產(chǎn)生的友誼可以成為引導(dǎo)我們走出孤獨黑暗的明燈。)“Thecouragetoovercomeshynessandconnectwithothersisthefirststeptowardsamorefulfillingandenrichedlife.”(克服害羞并與他人建立聯(lián)系的勇氣是走向更充實和豐富生活的第一步。)“Friendship,bornfromamomentofbravery,canrewritethenarrativeofourlives,paintingitwithcolorsofjoyandgrowth.”(源于勇敢瞬間的友誼可以改寫我們生活的故事,用喜悅和成長的色彩描繪它。)寫作示范一:Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Thatverynight,LilysentatexttoSarah,expressinghowmuchshehadenjoyedtheirconversation.Sarahrepliedpromptly,andtheymadeplanstovisitaquaintbookstoreontheweekend.Lilywasoverjoyed.Shespentthenextfewdaysinastateofeageranticipation,constantlythinkingaboutthetimetheywouldspendtogether.Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship.SarahencouragedLilytojoinabookclub.Atfirst,Lilywasextremelynervous,butwithSarahbyherside,shegraduallybecamemoreconfidentandstartedsharingherthoughtsandinsights.Theyalsotookuppaintingclassestogether.Lilydiscoveredahiddentalentwithinherself.ThankstoSarah,Lilywasnolongertheshy,isolatedgirl.Shehadbecomemoresociableandwaslivingamuchhappierandfulfillinglife.寫作示范二:Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Lilycouldn'twaittoreachout.Theytalkedonthephonethateveninganddecidedtogotoalocalmusicconcertthefollowingweek.Lilywasbothexcitedandabitnervous.Shecarefullychoseanoutfitandpreparedherselfmentally.Astimepassed,Lily’slifechangedsignificantlybecauseofthisnewfriendship.SarahintroducedLilytohergroupoffriends.Lilywasinitiallyhesitantbutwaswelcomedwithopenarms.Shestartedgoingongrouphikesandpicnics.Lilyalsobecamemoreassertiveinexpressingheropinions.SheevenvolunteeredtoorganizeacharityeventwithSarah.Hershynesshadbeenreplacedwithanewfoundconfidenceandazestforlifethatshehadneverexperiencedbefore.【答案】Aftertheevent,LilyandSarahexchangedcontactinformation.Theypromisedtomeetupagainsoon,andLilyfeltasenseofexcitementshehadn'texperiencedinalongtime.Overthenextfewweeks,theymetregularly,exploringnewcafes,attendingbookreadings,andeventryingoutamusicconcerttogether
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