公開(kāi)課課件 如何在高考英語(yǔ)作文中增加細(xì)節(jié)

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2021/6/271假定你是李華。上周日在地鐵站撿到了英國(guó)人Steven的護(hù)照。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給你市某英文報(bào)社編輯寫(xiě)一封信，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)述時(shí)間過(guò)程;2.交代護(hù)照相關(guān)信息;

3.委托報(bào)社刊登招領(lǐng)啟事.注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。廣東一模書(shū)面表達(dá)2021/6/272一個(gè)問(wèn)題主體信息寫(xiě)完往往只有60-70個(gè)字，不足100詞，怎么彌補(bǔ)詞數(shù)？需要“適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫”。2021/6/273Deareditor,I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.I’mwritingtotellyouapieceofurgentinformation.IpickedupapassportlastSundayinthesubwaystationwhenIwastakingaridehome.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonawaitingbench.TheownerofitisStevenwhocomesfromEngland.Havinglostthepassport,hemustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.SoIneedyourhelp.Iwishyoucouldpostanoticeonyournewspapertotellhimaboutthemissingpassport,so

thathecangetitback.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua結(jié)果交際語(yǔ)心理感受具體化同位語(yǔ)原因2021/6/274如何適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)增加同位語(yǔ)補(bǔ)全前因后果或目的適當(dāng)將寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容具體化寫(xiě)出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)或后果補(bǔ)充功能性（交際性）語(yǔ)言2021/6/275Whatkindofinformationcanoftenbeaddedtoyourarticle?1增加同位語(yǔ)1IamLiHua,_________________________________(我們學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席)./_________________________________________(來(lái)自中國(guó)的一位交換生).2.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,________________________________________(希望是一位跟我有相同興趣的女孩).ChairmanoftheStudents’Unionofmyschool.anexchangestudentfromChina.hopefullyagirlwithinterestssimilartomine.2021/6/2762.補(bǔ)充前因后果或目的___________________________________________(因?yàn)橹滥銓?duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化很感興趣），Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity.______________________________________________________________________(為了獲得一些實(shí)踐經(jīng)驗(yàn))I’mplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.(1)KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,(2)Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,______________________________________________________________________(由于我有過(guò)丟身份證的經(jīng)歷），IcanfeelhowanxiousMrStevenwillbenow.(3)SinceIhavetheexperienceoflosingmyIDcard,2021/6/277（1) Theactivitywillbeheld____________________________________________(具體時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)）(2)IknowtheownerisSteven__________________________(相關(guān)身份信息)

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__________________________________________________________________________(具體存在問(wèn)題如錯(cuò)印、缺頁(yè)等)3.適當(dāng)將寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容具體化

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inClassroom501.fromEngland,aged38,married.thereweresomemisprintsandpagesfrom23-45weremissing.2021/6/2784增加結(jié)果或者是效果(1)Ithinkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,

__________________________________________________________(這必將有助于你學(xué)到更多的中國(guó)文化）(2)Wecansetoutearly,____________________________________(以便我們有更多的時(shí)間閱讀和挑選圖書(shū)）

(3)Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_________________________________________(變得無(wú)法使用)

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whichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.makingitimpossibletouse.2021/6/2791___________________________________________________________________（如果你能幫我這個(gè)忙，我將不勝感激（2）_________________________________（期待著你的早日回復(fù)）5.補(bǔ)充功能性（交際性）語(yǔ)言(3)____________________________________________________________________(如果有什么能幫到你的，請(qǐng)不要猶豫告訴我）Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavour.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.2021/6/2710

practice(addreasonabledetails）

1.I’mLiHua,___________________.(同位語(yǔ))

2.I’mwritingtoaskyoutohelpmefindtheownerofapassport,___________________.(具體來(lái)源等)

3Withcaution,Iopenedtheplasticbag,______________________________.（結(jié)果）

4Lastweek,IboughtanEnglishdictionaryfromyouronlinebookstore____________________________________(目的/原因)

5________________________________________________________(若你能考慮我的建議，我將不勝感激)..2021/6/2711假如你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter來(lái)信向你咨詢(xún)?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)封回信。要點(diǎn)：1、參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班。

2、看中文書(shū)刊、電視。

3、學(xué)唱中文歌曲。

4、交中國(guó)朋友。注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右。

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好.DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.2021/6/2712

Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinese.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.

2021/6/2713

DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou'llbeabletolearnfromtheteachersandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou'lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.Inaddition,YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.

TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHua2021/6/2714(2016全國(guó)課標(biāo)卷)假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿(mào)公司兼職，已寫(xiě)好申請(qǐng)書(shū)和個(gè)人簡(jiǎn)歷（resume）。給外教MsJenkins寫(xiě)信，請(qǐng)她修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。2021/6/2715

I'myourstudentLiHua.I'mapplyingforapart-timejobataforeigncompanyinmycityduringthesummervacation.CouldyoucorrectthelanguageandtheformatoftheapplicationletterandresumeIhavewritten?Theyareintheattachment.2021/6/2716

DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.