讀后續(xù)寫全文模板（背誦50句）-2025年高考英語寫作?？碱}型專項突破（解析版）

專題18讀后續(xù)寫全文模板?背誦50句

基礎(chǔ)篇30句

第一段萬能10句

基礎(chǔ)篇30句中間連接10句

第2段萬能10句

第一段：萬能10句

1.Fixingmyeyesonit,Iwasoverwhelmedbymixedfeelings.

緊盯著它，我被復(fù)雜的感覺淹沒。

2.Hearingthat,sbfailedtoutterasingleword,totallyamazed.

聽到這，某人說不出話，全是驚訝

3.Thinkingaboutthesituation,Iwasfullyawarethatimmediateactionshouldbetaken.

考慮到當(dāng)時的情況，我完全意識到應(yīng)該立即采取行動，

4.Reflectingonwhathadhappened,Ihadamomentofenlightenment.回想發(fā)生的一切，我頓時恍然大悟

5.Thinkingforawhile,shecametorealizewhathappenedandwhattodo.思考了一會兒，她意識到發(fā)生了什么以

及該怎么做。

6.Inspired,hecollectedhimselfandmadeaquickdecision.

到鼓舞，他振作起來，迅速做出了決定。

7.Pluckingupcourage,hemadeuphismindtoaddressthechallenge.

鼓起勇氣，他下定決心迎接挑戰(zhàn)。

8.Withoutdelay,shebegantotakeaction.毫不拖延，她開始采取行動。

9.Raisingherhead,sherosetoherfeet.抬起頭，她站了起來。（積極）

10.Droppingherhead,shebitherlipshard.低下頭，她狠狠地咬了咬嘴唇。（消極）

中間?連接10句（可有可無）

1.Itoccurredallofasudden,catchinghimunprepared

事情發(fā)生得很突然，讓他措手不及。

2.Timeslippedawaylikeflowingwater.時間如流水般溜走。

3.Thingsbegantoturnaround.事情開始好轉(zhuǎn)

4.Anideahithimlikelightning.一個想法像閃電一樣擊中了他。

5.Itwasthenthatanideacameintomymind.

就在那時，一個想法出現(xiàn)在我的腦海中。

5.ItwasnotlongbeforeIcameupwithanidea.沒多久，我就想出了一個主意。

6.Myheartbeatwithdetermination.我的心因決心而跳動。（情緒）

7.Bittertearsstreameddownhercheeks.（情緒）苦澀淚水順著臉頰流下來。

9.Hermother'swordsmeltedthesoftestplaceinherheart.（情緒）

她媽媽的話融化了她心中最柔軟之處。

10.Gradually,hisastonishmentgavewaytounderstanding.（情緒）

他的驚訝讓路于理解。

第二段.萬能10句

1.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hestruggledandmanagedtomakeit.

仿佛過了幾世紀(jì)，他奮力并成功。

2.Itwasnotlongbeforethingsbegantoturnaround.沒過多久，事情就開始出現(xiàn)轉(zhuǎn)機。

3.Approachingherson,shebentdownandgatheredhimintoherarms.

走近兒子，她彎下腰，把他抱在懷里

4.Makingherwaytoherparents,shethrewherselfintotheirarms.

她走到父母身邊，撲進他們的懷抱

5.Movedtotears,shecouldn'tcontainheremotions.

感動到流淚，她無法控制自己的情緒。

6.Catchingsightofthescene,Iwasdeeplytouched,warmthwellingupinsideme.看到這一幕，我深受感動，溫

暖涌上心頭。

7.Suddenly,Ifeltawaveofwarmthmeltingthesoftestplaceinmyheart.我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔軟的

地方。

8.Gratitudesurroundedhimlikeabeamofsunlight,throwinghimintoaseaofkindnessandwarmth.

感激之情像一柬陽光包圍著他，把他扔進了善意和溫暖的海洋。

8.Sparingnoeffort,hestruggledandendeavored,insteadofgivingwaytoobstacles.不遺余力地，他奮斗和努力,

而不是向困難障礙讓步。

10.Withsunlightfallingonher,sheclosedhereyestofeelthewarmth,embracethemomentandenjoyasenseof

achievementandpride.

陽光灑在身上，她閉眼感受溫暖，擁抱當(dāng)下，享受成就感和自豪感。

進階篇20句

動作描寫6個復(fù)雜句

情緒描寫6個復(fù)雜6句

進階篇20句

連接6個復(fù)雜句

結(jié)尾2個升華句

1）動作描寫，六個復(fù)雜句

1,Hearingwhatshesaid,Iwasshockedbutalsogreatlyencouraged,mypreviousnervousnessanduncertainty

givingwaytoincreasingconfidenceanddetermination（句式:非謂語，主句，獨立主格.）

聽到她的話，我震驚但也受到極大鼓舞之前的緊張和不確定讓路于越來越多的信心和決心。

2.Catchingsightofthescene,Ifeltawaveofwarmthmeltingthesoftestplaceinmyheart.

（句式:非謂語，主句+非謂語）看到這幕，我感到一股暖流融化了心中最柔軟之處。

3、Fixingmyeyesonsth,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo,myheartbeatingwithdeterminatiol.

（句式:非謂語，主句，獨立主格）緊盯某物，我意識到該做什么，心堅定地跳動。

4、Thinkingaboutthesituation,Iwasfullyawarethatimmediateactionshouldbetaken.

考慮到當(dāng)時的情況，我完全意識到應(yīng)該立即采取行動。

5、Reflectingonwhathadhappened,Ihadamomentofenlightenment/epiphany.

回想發(fā)生的一切，我頓時恍然大悟。

6、Consideringwhathadhappened,heclearedhismindandinstantlyfiguredoutwhatshouldbedonenext.

考慮到發(fā)生了什么，他理清了思路，立即想出了下一步該怎么做。

3）情緒描寫?六個復(fù)雜句

1、Uncontrollably,hefeltawaveofdelightracinginhisheart.

（非謂語/取代“他開心”）不可控地，他感到一股開心在他內(nèi)心奔騰。

2.Instantly,anintensewaveofreliefandgratitudesurroundedhimlikeabeamofsunlight,throwinghimintoasea

ofkindnessandwarmth.

（無靈主語+非謂語）瞬間，強烈的釋然和感激像一束陽光包圍著他把他扔進了善良和溫暖的海洋，

3、Guiltyandashamed,shemadeheartyapologiesandconveyeddeepregrets,withbittertearsstreamingdownher

cheeks.

（句首形容詞做狀語+獨立主格）愧疚和羞愧，她衷心道歉表達深深的遺憾，苦澀的淚水順著臉頰流下。

4、Inspiredandhighlymotivated,shecollectedherselfandstruggledtoaddressthechallenge,hereyesshining

withmountingdeterminationandconfidence.

（形容詞做狀語+獨立主格）受到鼓舞和推動，她振作起來，努力應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)，眼里閃著遞增的決心和信心。

5、Movedtotears,Daviddashedtothemandthrewhimselfintotheirarms,withgoldensunlightfallingonthem

warmlyandcelebratinghisaccomplishment.

（非謂語+獨立主格/寫景）大衛(wèi)感動得熱淚盈眶，沖到他們身邊，撲進他們的懷里，全色的陽光溫暖地落在他

們身上，慶視他的成就。

6、Whatmadehimpridewasthathestruggledandendeavored,insteadofgivingwaytoobstacles.

（非謂語+獨立主格）讓他感到自豪的是，他奮斗和努力，而不是向困難障礙讓步。

4）連接六句

1、Afewmomentsslippedawaylikeflowingwaterbeforeheknewit.

在他不知不覺中，片刻時間如流水般溜走了。

2、Timepassingby,thingsbegantoturnaround.

時間流逝，事情開始好轉(zhuǎn)。

3>Itwasthenthatanideahithimlikelightning.

正是那時，一個想法像閃電般擊中了他。

4、Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hestruggledandmanagedtomakeit.

似乎過了幾個世紀(jì)，他奮力拼搏并成功了。

5、Itwasnotlongbeforehisastonishmentgavewaytounderstanding.

很快，他的驚訝就被理解所取代。

6、Hardlyhadherecalledwhathappenedwhenhecametorealizethetruth.

（倒裝句Hardlyhadsbdonesthwhensbdidsth.）他一回想發(fā)生的事，就意識到真相。

5）結(jié)尾升華2句

ItwasviatheuniqueexperiencethatIrealizedwhatmatteredmostwassthwithoutwhichIcouldn'thaveovercome

theissueandmadesuchachievement^只需改sth）

【強調(diào)句+賓從長句］正是通過這次獨特的經(jīng)歷，某人意識到某事最重要，沒有它某人就不可能克服困難，

取得如此成就。

NeverbeforehadIgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasengravedinmymindandhadaprofoundinfluenceon

meintherestofmylife.（無需改動）

【倒裝+定從】我從未有過如此獨特的經(jīng)歷它銘刻在我的腦海，對我的余生產(chǎn)生了深遠的影響。

全文句式10個（速成版）

動作+情緒+連接+升華

1.【動作描寫：看著某事1,某人做某事2］非謂語:Fixingone'seyesonsthl,sbdidsth2.

2.【連接句：正是那時，某人做某事】強調(diào)句:Itwasthenthatsbdidsth.

3.【動作描寫：2個動作】倒裝句"一.就，”:Hardlyhadsbdonesthlwhensbdidsth2.

4.【情緒+做某事十五官】形容詞句首+獨立主格:Delighted,sbdidsth,tearsrollingdown.

5.【動作描寫：做某事1后,做某事2］非謂語:Havingdonesth,sbdidsth.（銜接句）

6.【動作描寫：3個動作］排比:Withoutdelay,sbdidsthl,didsth2,anddidsth3.（銜接句）

7.【連接句：過了很久，做某事】名從:Afterwhatseemedlikeages,sbdidsth.

8.【情緒+做某事】無靈主語:Uncontrollably,asenseof情緒名詞seizedsbwhensbdidsth.

9.【升華/悟道理：直到那時才】強調(diào)句+盛擬語氣:Itwasthenthatsbrealizedwhatmatteredmostwassth,without

whichsbcouldn'thavedonesth.

10.【升華/結(jié)尾:經(jīng)歷亥（I腦?！康寡b句+被動句:Neverbeforehadsbgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasdeeply

engravedinsb'smindandhadaprofoundinfluenceonsbintherestofsb'slife.

全文模板10句（急救版）

1.Fixingher'seyesonthescene,shetriedtofigureoutwhattodo.（看著/聽至！1/想至！］..）

2.Itwasthenthatanideahitherlikelightning.（正是那時有想法）

3.Hardlyhadsherecalledwhathappenedwhenshecametorealizewhatshouldbedone.

4.Encouragedanddetermined,shecollectedherselfandstruggledtoaddressthechallenge,hereyesshiningwith

mountingconfidence^一回想就知道/鼓起勇氣，應(yīng)對挑戰(zhàn)，眼里有信心）

5.Havingcalmedoneselfdown,sbdidsth.（街接句/冷靜，做某事）

6.Withoutdelay,sbdidsthl,didsth2,anddidsth3.（街接句/寫情節(jié)，3個動作）

7.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,shestruggledandmanagedtomakeit.（成功做至！J）

8.Uncontrollably,anintensewaveofdelightandreliefsurroundedherlikeabeamofsunlight,throwingherintoa

seaofsweetvictory.（力口點情緒）

9.Itwasviatheuniqueexperiencethatsbrealizedwhatmatteredmostwassth,withoutwhichsbcouldn'thave

overcometheissueandmadesuchachievement4意識至Uxx重要）

10.Neverbeforehadsbgotsuchauniqueexperience,whichwasdeeplyengravedinsb'smindandhadaprofound

influenceonsbintherestofsb'slife,（經(jīng)歷深刻腦海，影響余生）

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Writing01

【河南省新未來聯(lián)考2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月月考英語試題】InAugust2014,IanSandler's

9-year-olddaughter,RileySandler,wenttoasleepawaycampforthesummer.Earlyonemorning,ataround1:30

a.m.,thefamilygotacallfromthecamp.

“ThevoiceontheotherendwassayingthatRileyhadsuddenlygotverysick,andtheyweretellingmethat

theyweretakinghertoahospitalandIneededtogetthererightaway,^^Sandlerremembered.

SandlerandhisfamilylivedinNewYorkCity.ThehospitalwhereRileywasbeingtransportedwasin

upstateNewYork,hoursaway.Hewastooshakenuptodrive,soSandlerbookedataxi.Heputinanaddressthat

wasinthegeneraldirectionofwhereheneededtogo.Whenthedriverarrived,Sandlerexplainedthesituation.

“Ijusttriedtocalmdownandexplain,'Mydaughterisgoingtothehospital.Itsgoingtobealongdrive.

Wouldyouhelpme?'AndIstillrememberhowkindthismanwas.Hesaid,4Ihavethreechildrenofmyown-

getin.We'llarrivetheresafeandsound5Andwedrove.^^

Itwascomfortingthatthedrivercouldempathizewith（感同身受）Sandler'ssituation.Hefeltacalmness

washoverhim-afeelingthatwassooninterruptedbyanotherphonecallaboutRiley.Shewasgoingtobemoved

toadifferenthospital,evenfurtheraway.

“IturnedtothedriverandIsaid,'We'regonnabegoingfurthernorth.5Andhedidn'tmissabeat.Wedrove

foranotherthreeandahalfhours.^^Whentheyarrivedatthehospital,Sandlertriedtogivethedrivermoney.But

themanrefusedtotakeit."Iremembertryingtotiphim,anddosomething.Hewouldn,tsakeacoin.Hejustknew

thiswastheworstthingthatcouldeverhappentoaparent."

注意:

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

AssoonasSandlerarrived,heheardthedoctorannouncethatRileywasoutofdanger.

Sandlerobtainedthedriver'scontactinformationthroughthetaxibookingapp.

【答案】

AssoonasSandlerarrived,heheardthedoctorannouncethatRileywasoutofdanger.Rileysufferedfroma

rareconditionthatblockedherairway,almostpreventingoxygenfromgettingintoherlungs.Afterseveralhoursof

rescue,thedoctorfinallytookherbackfromthehandsofdeath.Thatnightwasoneofthemostdifficult

experiencesSandlerhasevergonethrough.Fortunately,itturnedouttobegood.Yethestillthoughtaboutthetaxi

driverwhogothimtothehospital.

Sandlerobtainedthedriver'scontactinformationthroughthetaxibookingapp.Hetoldthedriverthegood

newsthathisdaughterwasoutofdanger,andtriedtogivehimthetaxifareagain,butthedriverinsistedonnot

takingthemoney.SoSandlersenthimamessage.C4Youhadnoreasontotakecareofmeinthewayyoudid.ButI

amsurethat10yearsafterwards,Iwillstillbesoincrediblygratefulforyourkindnessandforbringingmetomy

daughterthatnight.Thatwasoneofthekindest,sweetestthingsanyone'severdoneforme.^^

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了2014年8月，伊恩?桑德勒9歲的女兒萊利?桑德勒參加了一個不

睡覺的夏令營。一天清晨，大約凌晨1點半，這家人接到了營地打來的電話。電話那頭的聲音說萊利昏倒

了，于是伊恩叫了車趕往營地，最后在司機送伊恩趕到了醫(yī)院，伊恩見到了女兒。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“桑德勒一到醫(yī)院，就聽到醫(yī)生宣布萊利己經(jīng)脫離危險?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫萊利被搶

救的過程。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“桑德勒通過出租車預(yù)訂應(yīng)用程序獲得了司機的聯(lián)系信息?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼懸炼髀?lián)

系上司機后表示感謝的方式和感悟。

2.續(xù)寫線索：到醫(yī)院——得知到醫(yī)院——告訴司機——再次給他出租車費——伊恩感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

堵塞：block/clog

阻止：prevent/stop

走進：getinto/enter

情緒類

幸運地：fortunately/luckily

感激的：grateful/thankful

【點睛】[高分句型1]Yethestillthoughtaboutthetaxidriverwhogothimtothehospital.（運用了who引導(dǎo)定語

從句）

[高分句型2]Hetoldthedriverthegoodnewsthathisdaughterwasoutofdanger,andtriedtogivehimthetaxi

fareagain,butthedriverinsistedonnottakingthemoney.（運用了that弓|導(dǎo)的同位語從句）

Writing02

【安徽省皖豫名校聯(lián)盟2024-2025學(xué)年高三十月聯(lián)考】WayneBooneisa53-year-oldtruckdriverfora

paper-recyclingcompanyinSuffolk,Virginia.Everyday,hedrivestheempty18-heeltruckupInterstate64in

ChesapeaketowardVirginiaBeach,about50kilometersaway,wherehewillpickuphisfirstloadoftheday.One

morninginApril,thestrongwindsgaveWayneBoone'struckagoodwhipping（鞭打）.

HeplannedtochangeintotheleftlaneoftheG.A.TreakleMemorialBridgewhenthestormletlooseitsfull

force.RainhammeredBoone9swindshield.Windsgrewfierce.Ashewasturning,Boone9sfrontwheelsmetthe

wetsurfacejustasapowerfulwindblewthedriver'ssideofhistruck.Itfeltlikethewindliftedthetruckclearoff

thesurface.Histruckcrashedintotheguardrail（護欄）onthefarrightedge.

Hestruggledtoregaincontrol,butanotherwind,blowingmoreviolently,pusheditupwardfrombelow,

liftingthetruckcab（駕駛艙），withBooneinside,overtheedgeofthebridgebeforedroppingitagain.Ifhefeltany

hopeofsurvivalbefore,itdisappeared.Thetruckaimedstraightdowntowardthegrey-blackwater.Intheend,

Boone?struckwashangingoverthebridge,under21metersofwhichwasadeepriver.

Boonewasbadlyinjured,halfblindedbythebloodpouringintohiseyesandsufferingfromshock.He

forcedhimselftofocus.Ifhehadanychanceofescapingthecabandsurviving,hehadtogetoutofhisseatbelt.

Gatheringallhisstrength,hepulledhimselfbetweentheseatsandputhimselfbackasfarashecouldbehindthe

driver'sseat.Hestruggledtograbhismobilephone,butitwasoutofhisreach.Afterhewashunginthewindfor

anhour,waitingtodie,Boonewasalmostexhausted.Washegoingtogetoutofherealive?Hehadneverpanicked.

Hehadacceptedhisfate（命運）.Hewasreadytogoifthafswhatwasmeanttobewhenheheardanoisewas

drawingnearer.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens（汽韻.

WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Afewminuteslater,Booneheardtheapproachingsirens（汽笛）.Tohim,thenoisysoundcouldhavebeen

angelssinging.Hopefinallyfloodedthroughhimasarescuercamedownwitharope.Hesighedinreliefwhenthe

rescuergavehimstep-by-stepinstructionsforgettingoutofthewindowwhileattemptingtostayasstableas

possibleinthestorm.AftergettingaropearoundBoone,therescuerpulledhimoutthroughthewindowandfully

intothewildweather,andthensignaledtobepulleduptoasafeplace.

WhentherescuerandBooneappearedonthebridge,peopleshoutedwithjoy.Backonthebridge,Boone

wasdeliveredtosafetyandthenrushedtothenearesthospital.Peopleonthebridgeallspokehighlyofthe

rescuer?sbraveryandselflessness.Exhaustedashewasonhiswaytothehospital,Boonewasfullofgratitude.

Withouttherescuer'stimelyhelp,hecouldhavebeendead!Hewhisperedinhisheartformanytimes,"Thank

you!^^Andonlythendidherealizethataccidentismercilesswhilehumansaren't!

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了53歲的韋恩?布恩是維吉尼亞州薩?？耸幸患覐U紙回收公司的卡車

司機。某天在工作時他遇到了風(fēng)暴，他的卡車撞上了最右邊邊緣的護欄，布恩的卡車懸在橋上，橋下21米

是一條很深的河。布恩受了重傷，最后被救援人員救起送到了醫(yī)院。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾分鐘后，布恩聽到了越來越近的警笛聲”可知，第一段可描寫布恩被救助的過程以及

最終得救。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)救助者和布恩出現(xiàn)在橋上時，人們歡呼起來”可知，第二段可描寫布恩被送往醫(yī)院，

布恩充滿感激。

2.續(xù)寫線索：聽到警笛聲——施救——得救——送往醫(yī)院——充滿感激——布恩感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①意識至U：realize/beawareof

②回到：backon/return

③急忙：rushto/hurryto

情緒類

①疲憊：exhausted/tired

②殘忍：merciless/cruel

【點睛】[高分句型1]AftergettingaropearoundBoone,therescuerpulledhimoutthroughthewindowandfully

intothewildweather,andthensignaledtobepulleduptoasafeplace.（運用了動名詞作賓語）

[高分句型2]Exhaustedashewasonhiswaytothehospital,Boonewasfullofgratitude.（運用了as弓|導(dǎo)讓步狀

語從句的部分倒裝）

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【浙江省強基聯(lián)盟2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期10月聯(lián)考】Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglas

inhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,

Cassiewasknee-deepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt.

“Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!”Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow."Iamsorry,9,

Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfbgrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains.64Not

again!”Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds."Wegottago!”

Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedared

scarfaroundherhair,"Let'sgobacktothecampsite.9,Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadow

nowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoid

slidingdown.

“It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!”Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm*sstrength

increasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.It

wasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain.

“Cassie,overhere!”Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.

Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseethe

shelter.Itwasn*tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing.

“Smartthinking,Laura,“Cassiesaid,herteethchattering（打顫）withcoldasshepressedherbackpack

closetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,an

experiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidthey

know,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

“Checkyourbackpack,Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.

Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

“Checkyourbackpack,“Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopefill.“Wemighthavesomethingthatcan

helpusstartafire."Cassienodded,herfingerstremblingassheunzippedthesidepocketofherbackpack.Shewas

relievedtofindaflashlight,acompactemergencyblanketandasmall,waterproofpouchcontain