【維克多英語(yǔ)】近五年新高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)范文

年1月浙江卷Onepossibleversion:Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.WhenIwalkedpastthemilkinghouse,Icastanunconsciousglanceatit.Thenmixedfeelingscameoverme.Maybeanotherlittlecreaturewastrapped?OrmaybeIwouldmeet"her"again?Whateverthereason,everynerveinmybodywasscreamingatmetostepinsideforacloserlook.Butnothinghappened."Forgetit,itwasjustabird,"Iletoutadeepsighandmademywayout.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.Thereshewas,flappingherwingsandapproachingme.Acryofjoyescapedmythroat."Hey,oldgirl!Howiseverythinggoing?"Icalledsoftly.Thenshelandedinmycuppedhandsandstaredintomyeyes.Istrokedherfeathersgently.Momentslater,sheutteredasqueakingcall,spreadherwingsandflewintothesky.Thememorysheleftwithmewillremain,remindingmethattherearethingsinnaturethatexistoutsidethelawsandunderstandingofman.（范文提供：山東淮坊一中王春成老師）2022年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試新高考I卷Onepossibleversion:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Hehunghishead,tryingtoavoideyecontactwithme.Itwasatrickymoment,callingforagoodchoiceofwords.Havingthoughtitover,Imentionedsomeeventswhichwonpeople’spraiseforhisdeterminationandperseverance.Hisfacebegantolighten.Headdedthateventhejudgesthumbedupathim.Thewhistlewentoffandthecompetitorsbegantotaketheirplaces.Tomyjoy,Davidslowlyrosetohisfeet.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Davidstoodfirmlyinhisposition,ignoringanythingaround.Pushingforwardwithoutbalance,hewasleftbehind.However,whenhecameintosight,thespectatorsburstintothunderouscheersandapplause.Inspiredbytheenthusiasmandencouragement,Davidquickenedhispaceinhighspirits.Itturnedoutthatheachievedhisbestrecordever.Seeinghisconfidentsmiles,Isighedinrelief.Withthepowertoconquerhimself,hecanconqueranythingonthewaytoapromisingfuture.(155詞)2022年1月浙江卷Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Seriousasmyteammatewas,wegraduallygrewingoodtunewitheachother.Hehadawaywithtechnicalthingsandapproachedeverydetailwithaclearpurpose.AndIsparednoefforttodomybit,collectingdataandrecordingresultscarefully,soastomakeupformyacademicdisadvantage.Ifullydiscussedmyideasandsharedmyinsightswithhim,whowasonceindifferentbutlaterlistenedtomewithcloseattention.Weweremakingsteadyprogresswithourproject.Paragraph2:OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtohospitalforaseriousdisease.ThemomentIsawhimlyinghelplesslyinbed,IdecidedIhadtoactaloneanddomybest.IassuredhimIwouldnotlethimdownandheshouldconcentrateonrecovering.Ipouredmoretimeandenergyintothatprojectthaneverbefore,andfinallypresentedourfindingstotheclass,whichsurprisinglyearnedusanexcellentgrade!WhenItoldhimaboutoursharedsuccess,hesmiled.Ithadtodowithtrustandthejoyofsharingacommonprize.（續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)170）2021年新高考全國(guó)I&II卷Onepossibleversion:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Undertheguidanceoftheirfather,theytookpositiveactionsandstartedalloveragain.Theymadethebreadandthenwentoncookingporridge.Fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Itwasallrightthistime.Deliciousbreakfastwasready.Howhappytheywere!Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,whichshedidn’texpect.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightlyandkissedthemagainandagain.2021年6月浙江卷Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.IwasgladthatIfinallygotthepaymentafterworkinghardfortwoweeks.OnmywayhomeIcreatedmanyplanstospendthemoney.Uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingupset.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?”askedmymom.“Threehundreddollars,butwehaveonlytwohundredonhand,”answeredmydad.Paragraph2:Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownhalfway.Hehadalwaysintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn’taffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatIshoulddo.Steppingforward,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatIreceivedformywork.Ithinkitwouldhelpyouinsomeway.”GreatlytouchedbywhatIsaid,mydadhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,lmadeupmymindthatIwouldcontinuetheworkonthefarmandcontributetomyfamily’shousehold.Afterall,lhadgrownup.2021年1月八省聯(lián)考Onepossibleversion:WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Ishookmyheadandsaidno,wonderingwhysheaskedsuchaquestion—wasshegoingtotreatmetolunchorsomething?“Waitaminute,”saidthegirl,andthenshewentbacktothetruck.Afterafewminutesshecamebackwithapaperbag.“HerearesomeMexicansnacksandyoucanhavesomewhenyouarehungry,”thegirlsmiled.Iwassosurprisedandtouchedthatwordsalmostfailedme.Ijustsaida“WOW!”insteadofa“Thankyou!”whenItookthebag.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.WhenIsawwhatwasinthebag,Iwasovercomewithamixtureofrespectandgratefulness.Inadditiontothesnacks,therewasthe$20bill.Whatakindandrespectablefamily!Theyareaperfectexampleofwhatkindnessreallymeans.AndI’msureIwillpayitforward.（145）

Onepossibleversion:WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI’dhadlunch.Ofcoursenot,forIhadbeentrappedthereforquiteafewhours.Shethenhadawordwithherparentsandwentbacktotheirtruck.Afewminuteslatershecamebackwithapaperbag.“That’sMommy’shand-madetaco,”explainedthegirl.“It’ssoyummythatyoumustloveit.”IwasstarvingtodeathafterallthatexhaustingworksoItooktheMexico-originatedfood,gratefulanddeeplymoved.Thenwewavedgoodbyetoeachother.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Insidethebagwasachickentaco.Thenextfewminutessawmywolfingdownthedeliciousfood.TearswelledupasIwaschewing.Itwasawesometoknowthatwhilemanypeopletendtoignorethoseinneed,therearesomekind-heartedoneswhogooutoftheirwaytolendahand.Thegooddeedtheforeignfamilydidwillneverescapeme.Iamgoingtopassitdowntocreateamuchfriendlierworld.（163）2020年7月山東卷Onepossibleversion:WhenMrs.Meredithheardoftheidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.ThenMrs.Meredithsearchedtheinternetandorderedahouseholdpopcornmachine.Afterthat,Mrs.Meredith,togetherwithherthreechildren,paidanothervisittothefamilyandtoldthemaboutthepopcornplan.Needlesstosay,theyweredeeplymoved,especiallyBernardwhofinallyfoundawaytomakemoneyforhisfamily.Afewdayslater,themachinewasdeliveredtoMrs.Meredith’sdoorstep.Anditwasn’tlongbeforetheygotthehangofusingthemachinetomakepopcorn.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Althoughitwasahardtimeandthingsweretightforeverybody,Bernard’sbusinessworkedoutquitewell.Hecarriedthepopcornonhissmallbike,goingfromdoortodoortosellit.Peopleweresurprisedtoseesuchalittle,poorly-dressedboysellingpopcornattheirdoors,buteventuallyalmostallofthemwouldbuyabagortwo.ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.(續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)：164)2021年1月浙江卷Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearingmecrying,dadcameandhelpedmelaymyheadonthetable,somyneckcouldrestforawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,honey.Ihavetocutthispumpkininhalf.”Ihadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtotheknifemovingonthepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Thenmomtoldmeshehadjustfilmedmemanagingtopullmyheadoutofthepumpkin.Paragraph2ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.ActuallymymomhadaskedwhethershecouldpostitontheInternet,becauseafterallIwassoembarrassedandlookedsosillyinit.Anyway,Inoddedandsupportedheridea.ItturnedoutthatpeoplelikedandforwardeditcrazilyontheInternet,onlytomakemeanInternetcelebrity.(續(xù)寫(xiě)152詞)2020年7月浙江卷Onepossibleversion:Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!(續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)：153)2020年1月浙江卷PossibleVersion:Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.Sheloweredherheadtowatchitcuriously.Thenshebecamesoexcitedthatsheaccidentallyknockedovertheboxinanattempttogetcloser.Withtheboxtippingover,outcamethelittleone,whowasnotshyandinstantlygotfamiliarwithPoppy.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforethetwoplayedaroundthehouse,cheerfullyrunningaftereachother.Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hehadbeenmissinghisparentsandthedogsinceitwasthefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.WhentheboycaughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushingt