書信寫作之演講稿、通知求助信-2025年高考英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)（新高考）

專題突破卷14書信寫作之演講稿，通知，求助信

最新高考真題

1.（2024?全國(guó)甲卷?高考真題）英語(yǔ)課要求做課堂展示，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片，以DevelopmentofTransportin

China為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.題目和首句已為你寫好。

DevelopmentofTransportinChina

Fromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormous

development.

【答案】

DevelopmentofTransportinChina

Fromthevehicleofhorsestotoday?sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormous

development.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccessto

differentwaysoftravelling.

Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreen

alternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,

makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscores

China?sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.Thesedevelopmentsillustrate

China'sjourneytowardsamodemandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewith

environmentalresponsibility.

Inshort,China9stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫

一篇發(fā)言稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯激活

提供：offer—provide

極大地：dramatically一tremendously

減少：reduce一decrease

總之：inshort一inanutshell

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreen

alternativefbrshorttrips.

拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasa

symbolofurbanmobility.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeople

accesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

【高分句型2]ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina'sjourneytowardsamodemandefficienttransportation

networkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.（運(yùn)用了that弓I導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2021?全國(guó)甲卷?高考真題）假如你是李華，你校計(jì)劃舉辦介紹中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的主題班會(huì)，并在英文網(wǎng)

站上展示。請(qǐng)你給外國(guó)友人Chris寫封信，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)朋友。內(nèi)容包括：

1.闡明寫信事由；

2.征求建議；

3.表達(dá)感謝。

注意：

1?字?jǐn)?shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearChris,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearChris,

Howareyoudoingthesedays?I'mwritingtoaskyousomeadvice.

InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglishwebsites,ourschool

isgoingtoorganizeclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture.Wecanchooseavarietyof

themes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,painting,papercuttingandsoon.I'mwonderingifyoucouldletme

knowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeoplefromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobe

interestedin.

Thankyouforyourhelp.Tdappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給Chris寫封信，向他了解哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)朋

友，內(nèi)容包括：闡明寫信事由，征求建議，表達(dá)感謝。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：advice一suggestion

推廣：promote^spread/popularize

選擇：choose一select

對(duì)...感興趣：beinterestedin—showinterestin

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句改為復(fù)合句

原句：Wecanchooseavarietyofthemes,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,painting,papercuttingandsoon.

拓展句：Thereareavarietyofthemesthatwecanchoosefrom,suchascalligraphy,martialarts,painting,paper

cuttingandsoon.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]InordertopromoteChinesetraditionalcultureandpostsomeclassmeetingsonEnglish

websites,ourschoolisgoingtoorganizeclassmeetings,thethemeofwhichistraditionalChineseculture.（使用了

Inordertodo...結(jié)構(gòu)表目的、“介詞+which”引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]I'mwonderingifyoucouldletmeknowwhichofthemyoulikebestandwhichofthempeople

fromoutsideofChinaaremorelikelytobeinterestedin.（使用了if和which引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）

2024年高考模擬真題

3.（2024?湖北襄陽(yáng)?三模）你校將舉辦以“講故事，話家風(fēng)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)以“Myfamilytradition”

為題寫一篇演講稿參賽。內(nèi)容包括：

L一件家風(fēng)小事；

2.對(duì)你的影響。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Myfamilytradition

【答案】參考范文

Myfamilytradition（愛）

Goodmorning,everyone!I'mgratefulfortheopportunitytosharewithyouacherishedfamilytradition

thathashadaprofoundimpactonmylife.

EverySundaymorning,myfamilygathersinthekitchentocooktogether.Aswemixingredientsand

createdeliciousdishes,weengageinlivelyconversationsandburstintoheartylaughter,fillingtheroomwiththe

aromaoffreshfoodandspices.Thecozywarmthofthisatmosphereservesasatestamenttotheprofoundlove

andcarethatarepouredintoeverymeal.

Thisfamilytraditionofcookinghastrulyenrichedmylife.Notonlyhasittaughtmetheinvaluablelesson

ofworkingtogethertowardsacommongoal,butalsotheimportanceofspendingqualitytimewithlovedones.

Mostimportantly,thistraditionhasshapedmeintoaresponsibleandself-disciplinedindividual.Thankyoufor

listening.

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“Myfamilytradition”為題寫一篇演講稿，參加學(xué)校將舉辦

的以“講故事，話家風(fēng)”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

感激：grateful—^appreciative

機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity—chance

影響：impact一influence

重要性：importance一significance

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Mostimportantly,thistraditionhasshapedmeintoaresponsibleandself-disciplinedindividual.

拓展句：Whatisthemostimportantisthatthistraditionhasshapedmeintoaresponsibleandself-disciplined

individual.

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1］Notonlyhasittaughtmetheinvaluablelessonofworkingtogethertowardsacommon

goal,butalsotheimportanceofspendingqualitytimewithlovedones.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝句）

【高分句型2］I'mgratefulfortheopportunitytosharewithyouacherishedfamilytraditionthathashada

profoundimpactonmylife..（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

4.（2024?廣東肇慶?三模）假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，英國(guó)某中學(xué)的部分師生即將訪問你校，并體驗(yàn)校園

傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇?dú)g迎辭，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歡迎；2.活動(dòng)介紹；3.表達(dá)祝愿。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Dearvisitingguests,

Thankyou!

［答案］Dearvisitingguests,

Onbehalfofallthestudentsinourschool,I'dliketoexpressourwarmestwelcometoyou.It'sreallya

greathonorfbrusthatyoucancomeandjoinusintheCampusTraditionalCulturalFestival.

ThepurposeofthefestivalistoenrichourschoollifeandcarryforwardChinesetraditionalculture.We

willorganizeaseriesofactivities,includingperformancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdances

andChinesemartialarts.Withoutdoubt,it'llbeagoodchancefbryoutogettounderstandChineseculturebetter.

Now,welcomeagain,ourdistinguishedquests!Isincerelyhopethatyouwillhavegreatfunhereandget

familiarwithChinesecultureaswell.

Thankyou!

Dearvisitingguests,

Ifsmyhonortostandhereonbehalfofallthestudents,andI'dliketoextendourwarmestwelcometo

yourcomingandjoiningusintheCampusTraditionalCultureFestival.

Aimedatenrichingourextra-curricularlifeandcarryingforwardtraditionalChineseculture,awiderange

ofactivitiesaredue/arranged/expected,whicharedividedinto3categories.Onecontainsaudiovisual

performancesontraditionalChinesemusicalinstruments,folkdancesandChinesemartialarts.Anotherinvolves

paper-cutting,makingteaandotherintriguinghands-onprojects.Whatcomesthelastistheinteractive

class-workshopswhereindividualsshareinsightsintogivencustomsandtraditions,makingforthecollisionand

blendofdistinctminds.Withtheserefreshingandspellbindingactivities,theremustbeonetoyourtasteand

you'llbetotallyimmersedinthecharmandvitality/vigourofChinesecultureandthusgainmoreinsightsintoit

aswell.

Welcomeagain,ourdistinguishedguests!Wesincerelyhopeeveryonewillhaveapleasantandmemorable

time.

Thankyou!

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)寫一篇?dú)g迎辭，歡迎英國(guó)某中學(xué)的部分師生來(lái)校訪問，

并體驗(yàn)校園傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié)活動(dòng)。解析以范文一為例。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express—>convey

機(jī)會(huì)：chance一opportunity

真誠(chéng)地：sincerely—>genuinely

玩得彳艮開心、：havegreatfirn一haveawonderfultime

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Withoutdoubt,it'llbeagoodchanceforyoutogettounderstandChineseculturebetter.

拓展句：ThereisnodoubtthatifllbeagoodchanceforyoutogettounderstandChineseculturebetter.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]IfsreallyagreathonorforusthatyoucancomeandjoinusintheCampusTraditional

CulturalFestival.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，it作形式主語(yǔ)）

【高分句型2]IsincerelyhopethatyouwillhavegreatfunhereandgetfamiliarwithChinesecultureaswell.（運(yùn)

用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）

5.（2024?四川成都?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）你校即將舉行一場(chǎng)以“Whenthebuyingstops,thekillingcan,too”為主題的英

語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇關(guān)于野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的演講稿參賽。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dearteachers,boysandgirls,

Thankyou!

【答案】

Dearteachers,boysandgirls,

I'mprivilegedtostandheretodelivermyspeech.

Asweallknow,ourplanetisourbeautifulhome,wherewildlifeandhumansshouldhavelivedtogether

harmoniously.However,moreandmorewildlifeisfacedwithextinction,whosehabitatsarebecomingsmalleras

newroadsandrailwayswerebuilt.Evenworse,tomakeprofit,huntersarekillingwildlife.Manyanimalsare

beingbutcheredtomeetbuyers5need,causingtheirpopulationtodropincreasingly.

Ifshightimethatweshouldchangeourwayoflifeandstophuntingwildlife.Ifeveryoneboycottsbuying

anyproductsmadefromwildlife,thekillingcanstop,too.Onlywhenwelearntoexistinharmonywithnature

canwestopbeingathreattoourplanet.

Thankyou!

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的演講稿參加英語(yǔ)演講比賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

榮幸的：privileged一honoured

建立：build一setup

滿足：meet—>satisfy

導(dǎo)致：cause-leadto

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Manyanimalsarebeingbutcheredtomeetbuyers5need,causingtheirpopulationtodropincreasingly.

拓展句：Manyanimalsarebeingbutcheredtomeetbuyers,need,whichcausestheirpopulationtodrop

increasingly.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Asweallknow,ourplanetisourbeautifulhome,wherewildlifeandhumansshouldhave

livedtogetherharmoniously.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，where引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

【高分句型2]However,moreandmorewildlifeisfacedwithextinction,whosehabitatsarebecomingsmalleras

newroadsandrailwayswerebuilt.（運(yùn)用了whose引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句，as引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句）

6.（2024?陜西榆林?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。為了迎接第二屆“全國(guó)生態(tài)日

（NationalEcologyDay）”的至！J來(lái)，你校將于2024年8月12日下午4:00-5:30在學(xué)校禮堂開展一次環(huán)保知識(shí)

競(jìng)賽。請(qǐng)你用英文寫一則通知。內(nèi)容包括：

1.競(jìng)賽主題、時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)；

2.報(bào)名方法；

3.鼓勵(lì)大家踴躍報(bào)名。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。

Notice

Dearfellowstudents,

TheStudentsUnion

【答案】Notice

Dearfallowstudents,

InordertocelebratethesecondNationalEcologyDayandraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,

theStudentsUnionisgoingtoholdacontestonhowtoprotectourhomeplanetat4:00-5:30pmon12August,

2024inthehall.

Ifyouareinterested,youcanstarttosignupattheStudentsUnionofficenow.Thecontestincludestwo

parts:quizanddebate.Formoredetailedinformation,pleasevisitourwebsiteandreadtherelatedinstructions.

Allstudentswhoareinterestedinchallengingthemselvesandprotectingourhomeplanetarewelcometo

participate!

TheStudentsUnion

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文：通知，要求考生以國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華的身份寫一則通知，告

訴大家你校將于2024年8月12日下午4:00-5:30在學(xué)校禮堂開展一次環(huán)保知識(shí)競(jìng)賽。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉辦：hold-launch

競(jìng)賽：contest—>competition

保護(hù)：protect—preserve

參力口：participate—>takepart

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Formoredetailedinformation,pleasevisitourwebsiteandreadtherelatedinstructions.

拓展句：Ifyouwanttogetmoredetailedinformation,pleasevisitourwebsiteandreadtherelatedinstructions.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Ifyouareinterested,youcanstarttosignupattheStudentsUnionofficenow.（運(yùn)用了if

引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Allstudentswhoareinterestedinchallengingthemselvesandprotectingourhomeplanetare

welcometoparticipate!（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）

7.（2024?湖北?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席，為推動(dòng)兩岸互動(dòng)和心靈溝通，你校將于5月18日舉辦一

次“兩岸一家親”英文演講比賽，請(qǐng)你以學(xué)生會(huì)名義發(fā)布一則通知，具體內(nèi)容如下：

1.演講的目的；

2.演講的具體安排；

3.演講的主要內(nèi)容及注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Notice

Dearschoolmates,

StudentUnion

【答案】Dearschoolmates,

WearedelightedtoannouncetheupcominguCross-StraitUnity^^EnglishSpeechContest,scheduledfor

May18th.Thepurposeofthiseventistopromotecross-straitinteractionandenhancemutualunderstanding.

Thecontestwillbeginat9a.m.intheschoolauditorium.Participantsarerequiredtosubmittheirtopicsin

advance,focusingonaspectsthatfosterclosertiesbetweenthetwosides.Pleaseensureyourspeechesare

well-preparedanddeliveredfluently.

Weencourageallstudentstoactivelyparticipateandwitnessthismeaningfulevent.Lefsworktogetherto

bridgethegapandcreateastrongerbondbetweenourcommunities.

StudentUnion

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以學(xué)生會(huì)主席的身份，就學(xué)校將于5月18日舉辦的“兩岸一

家親”英文演講比賽一事，以學(xué)生會(huì)名義發(fā)布一則通知。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

促進(jìn)：promote一facilitate

確保:ensure—>guarantee

流利地：fluently—smoothly

鼓勵(lì)：encourage-inspire

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Wearedelightedtoannouncetheupcoming“Cross-StraitUnity"EnglishSpeechContest,scheduledfor

May18th.

拓展句：Wearedelightedtoannouncetheupcoming"Cross-StraitUnity^^EnglishSpeechContest,whichis

scheduledforMay18th.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Thepurposeofthiseventistopromotecross-straitinteractionandenhancemutual

understanding.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式短語(yǔ)作表語(yǔ)）

【高分句型2]Participantsarerequiredtosubmittheirtopicsinadvance,focusingonaspectsthatfostercloser

tiesbetweenthetwosides.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

8.（2024?河南?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將于本周舉辦消防安全知識(shí)競(jìng)賽，請(qǐng)你寫一

則通知發(fā)布在校英文報(bào)上，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動(dòng)目的；

2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

NOTICE

TheStudentUnion

【答案】NOTICE

Thisweek,ourStudentUnionisorganizingaFireSafetyKnowledgeContest.Thepurposeofthiseventis

toenhanceeveryone'sawarenessoffiresafetyandtoimproveourabilitytorespondtofireincidentseffectively.

Thecontestwillcoveravarietyofactivitiesincludingafiresafetylecture,afireevacuationdrill,and

demonstrationsontheuseoffire-fightingequipment.

Wecordiallyinviteallteachersandstudentstoparticipateactivelyinthiseventtolearnmoreaboutfire

safetyandcontributetocreatingasafercampusenvironment.

TheStudentUnion

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。你校將于本周舉辦消防安全知識(shí)競(jìng)賽，要求考生寫一則通知發(fā)布在校

英文報(bào)上。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

目的：purpose—aim

活動(dòng)：event一activity

多樣的：avarietyoJvarious

誠(chéng)懇地：cordially一sincerely

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Thisweek,ourStudentUnionisorganizingaFireSafetyKnowledgeContest.

拓展句：Thisweek,ourStudentUnionisorganizingaFireSafetyKnowledgeContest,whichisgreatly

meaningful.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型11Thepurposeofthiseventistoenhanceeveryone9sawarenessoffiresafetyandtoimprove

ourabilitytorespondtofireincidentseffectively.（運(yùn)用了不定式結(jié)構(gòu)作表語(yǔ)）

【高分句型21Wecordiallyinviteallteachersandstudentstoparticipateactivelyinthiseventtolearnmoreabout

firesafetyandcontributetocreatingasafercampusenvironment.（運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）

9.（2024?吉林?一模）假定你是李華，一名高三學(xué)生。英語(yǔ)作文讀后續(xù)寫這一項(xiàng)讓你備受困擾。你計(jì)劃向

吉林大學(xué)張教授（此領(lǐng)域的專家）寫一封求助信。希望他給予指導(dǎo)。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）介紹困擾；（2）希望得到幫助。

注意：（1）詞數(shù)80左右：（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：讀后續(xù)寫continuationwriting

DearProfessorZhang,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearProfessorZhang,

FmLiHua,aseniorthreestudent.Recently,Fvebeenstrugglingwithmycontinuationwriting.Learning

thatyouareanexpertinit,Iamwritingtoseekadvicefromyou.

Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichbothermealot.Firstofall,Ihavedifficultyindesigningplot.In

addition,Iamatalosshowtoapplyproperexpressionstomywriting,whichmakesmefrustrated.

Facingtheproblems,I'manxious5togetyourhelp.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonhowtosolve

theseproblems?Lookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yourssincerely

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給吉林大學(xué)張教授（英語(yǔ)作文讀后續(xù)寫領(lǐng)域的專家）寫一封

求助信，希望他在英語(yǔ)作文讀后續(xù)寫方面給予指導(dǎo)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

最近：recently—>lately

專家：expert—>specialist

首先：firstofall一firstandforemost

面對(duì)...：face^befacedwith

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Recently,I'vebeenstrugglingwithmycontinuationwriting.

拓展句：Recently,Fvebeenstrugglingwithmycontinuationwriting,whichtroublesmealot.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Iamencounteringsomeproblemswhichbothermealot.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的限制性定

語(yǔ)從句）

[高分句型2]Inaddition,Iamatalosshowtoapplyproperexpressionstomywriting,whichmakesme

frustrated.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

10.（2024?河北滄州?三模）假設(shè)你是李華，希望在未來(lái)成為一名農(nóng)業(yè)專家，但是你的家長(zhǎng)并不支持，于是

你給外教Alice寫信，征求她的意見。內(nèi)容包括：

1.說(shuō)明你的想法；

2.家長(zhǎng)反對(duì)的理由；

3.征求老師的意見。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearAlice,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearAlice,

IfeelupsetthesedaysbecauseIhaveconflictswithmyparentsovermycareerchoice.

InspiredbyYuanLongping,agreatagriculturalexpert,Fmeagertodevotemyselftoagricultureinthe

future.However,myparentsarestronglyopposed.Theywishmetobecomealawyer,thinkingIwillfindagood

jobaftergraduation.Iamcaughtinadilemma.Idon'tknowwhetherIshouldobeymyparentsorpursuewhat

bringsmehappinessandsatisfaction.

Whatwouldyoudoifyouwereinmyposition?Ireallyhopethatyoucangivemesomeadvice.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給外教Alice寫一封信，就希望在未來(lái)成為一名農(nóng)業(yè)專家，

但是家長(zhǎng)并不支持這件事來(lái)征求她的意見。內(nèi)容包括：說(shuō)明你的想法、家長(zhǎng)反對(duì)的理由、征求老師的意見。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

奉獻(xiàn)，投身于：devote-dedicate

強(qiáng)烈地：strongly一violently

順從：obey—>beobedientto

建議：advice一suggestion

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：InspiredbyYuanLongping,agreatagriculturalexpert,I'meagertodevotemyselftoagricultureinthe

future.

拓展句：InspiredbyYuanLongping,whoisagreatagriculturalexpert,I'meagertodevotemyselftoagriculture

inthefuture.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Ifeelupsett