中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作思路-積極心態(tài)

中考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作思路--積極心態(tài)書(shū)面表達(dá)(共1小題；滿(mǎn)分20分)積極的心態(tài)對(duì)于我們非常重要。假定你是李華，英語(yǔ)課上老師組織了主題為“ThePowerof

PositiveThinking"的討論和分享。請(qǐng)結(jié)合以下要點(diǎn)，通過(guò)一件你自己的具體事例，談一談積極心態(tài)對(duì)于你的幫助并分享你對(duì)如何調(diào)整心態(tài)、積極樂(lè)觀看待事物的建議。要點(diǎn)：1.

一件具體事例2.兩點(diǎn)你的建議注意：1.

短文需回答以上全部問(wèn)題，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和地名：3.詞數(shù)80～100。分析：-我們需要一件具體的事例來(lái)說(shuō)明積極心態(tài)對(duì)于你的幫助-分享你的兩點(diǎn)建議：如何調(diào)整心態(tài)、積極樂(lè)觀看待事物的建議因?yàn)樾枰f(shuō)明的內(nèi)容比較多，因此每個(gè)點(diǎn)都很難展開(kāi)來(lái)寫(xiě)，所以都需要精煉每個(gè)要點(diǎn)。基礎(chǔ)版本：1.引入話(huà)題：Asisknown=Asweallknow=Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat(廣泛認(rèn)可的是：)

positivethinkingplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife,especiallywhen

wemeetproblems.評(píng)價(jià)：遇事不決，就說(shuō)明我們做這件事情在我們的生活中非常重要。2.你要說(shuō)明的事情：Once,

=Istillrememberonetimewhen=Whatimpressed（留下...印象）

memostisonetimewhen

...這里需要又一個(gè)思路，分成三~四層來(lái)寫(xiě)1.你經(jīng)歷了什么事情（總體描述）Itookpartina(n)...competition.(任何比賽或者活動(dòng)都可以，但是注意能力不夠的同學(xué)不要標(biāo)新立異，因?yàn)檫@樣可能因?yàn)樽约河⒄Z(yǔ)水平的限制，反而表達(dá)有誤)2.你遇到了什么困難（制造沖突）ThecompetitorswereverystrongandIwastooeager(渴望)

towin,soIwastoonervoustopreparewell.(competitors的強(qiáng)大是外界的矛盾，你的tooeager是心態(tài)的問(wèn)題)3.你如何解決這問(wèn)題（體現(xiàn)文章中你所要論述觀點(diǎn)的重要性）Luckily,Icalmeddownandbelievedthat-everythingwouldbeOKaslongasItriedmybest.(只要盡全力，一切都會(huì)好)-processwasmoreimportantthanresult.

(過(guò)程比結(jié)果更重要)這里兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)二選一就可以了，體現(xiàn)了好心態(tài)的重要性4.你最后獲得了什么結(jié)果（有時(shí)候可以省略，但是盡量提一下）Intheend,althoughIdidn’tgetthefirstprize,Istillgotasatisfyingresult.

(雖然沒(méi)有贏，但是還是獲得了滿(mǎn)意的結(jié)果；當(dāng)然，可以寫(xiě)自己獲得了滿(mǎn)意的結(jié)果，因?yàn)槟阒档?3.分享你的建議：1.引入：Therearetwosuggestionsabouthavingpositivethinking=Twosuggestionsabouthaving

positivethinkingareasfollows,whichcanofferyoupower.(這句話(huà)點(diǎn)個(gè)題，表示positivethinking能夠給你power)2.第一點(diǎn)建議：Foronething,itisagoodidea=itisimportant=itisofgreatimportancetocalmdown/focusonprocess(關(guān)注過(guò)程)

whenmeetingtheproblem.Becausewecanmakeafullpreparationinsteadoffeelingworriedallthetime.3.第二點(diǎn)建議：Foranother,wearesupposedto/expectedtotrust/believeinourselves.Inthisway，wehavethecouragetofaceanyresultandmakeprogressineverychallenge.(我們能夠有勇氣面對(duì)任何結(jié)果，以及在每次挑戰(zhàn)中取得進(jìn)步)4.結(jié)尾：再次重申我們要在以后的生活中有積極的思想。Tosumup,lifeisfullofupsanddowns(生活中總是起起落落)

=itisunavoidable/inevitable(不可避免的)

tomeetchallengesinourlife,butpositivethinkingcangiveuspowertogetoverthedifficulties.作文完整版提煉：Asisknown,

positivethinkingplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife,especiallywhen

wemeetproblems.Istillrememberonetimewhen

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competition.

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Intheend,althoughIdidn’tgetthefirstprize,Istillgotasatisfyingresult.Twosuggestionsabouthaving

positivethinkingareasfollows,which

canofferyoupower.Foronething,itisimportanttofocusonprocess(關(guān)注過(guò)程)

whenmeetingtheproblem.Because

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wehavethecouragetofaceanyresultandmakeprogressineverychallenge.Tosumup,itisunavoidabletomeetchallengesinourlife,but

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cangiveuspowertogetoverdifficulties.好詞好句積累：-positivethinkingplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife-積極思考在我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪邪缪葜匾巧?especiallywhenwemeetproblems-尤其是當(dāng)我們遇到問(wèn)題時(shí)-Twosuggestionsabouthavingpositivethinking-關(guān)于保持積極思維的兩點(diǎn)建議-focusonprocesswhenmeetingtheproblem-遇到問(wèn)題時(shí)關(guān)注過(guò)程-makeafullpreparationinsteadoffeelingworriedallthetime-做充分的準(zhǔn)備而不是一直擔(dān)心-believeinourselves-相信自己-havethecouragetofaceanyresult-有勇氣面對(duì)任何結(jié)果-makeprogressineverychallenge-在每一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)中取得進(jìn)步-unavoidabletomeetchallengesinourlife-在生活中遇到挑戰(zhàn)是不可避免的-positivethinkingcangiveuspowertogetoverdifficulties-積極思考可以給我們克服困難的力量基礎(chǔ)版本2:Positivethinkingisveryimportantinourdailylives,especiallywhenwefaceproblems.Irememberonceduringarunningcompetition,theotherrunnerswereverystrong,and

Iwasso

eagertowinthat

Ibecametoonervoustoprepareproperly.However,once

Icalmeddownandbelievedindoingmybest,Imanagedbetterthanexpected.Eventhough

Ididn'twinfirstplace,Iwasstillhappywithmyperformance（表現(xiàn)）.Herearetwotipsforstayingpositive:First,concentrateon（專(zhuān)注）

theprocesswhenyoufaceaproblem.Thishelpsyoupreparewellandkeepsyoufromworryingtoomuch.Second,believeinyourself.Thisgivesyouthecouragetoacceptanyoutcome（結(jié)果）andkeepimprovingwitheachchallenge.Insummary,whilewecan'tavoidchallengesinlife,positivethinkinghelpsusdealwiththemeffectively（有效地）.這個(gè)是上面版本的精簡(jiǎn)版本，也可以作為參考：好詞好句積累：-toonervoustoprepareproperly-太緊張，無(wú)法適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備-onceIcalmeddownandbelievedindoingmybest-一旦我冷靜下來(lái)并相信盡我最大努力-managedbetterthanexpected-表現(xiàn)得比預(yù)期好-happywithmyperformance-對(duì)我的表現(xiàn)感到滿(mǎn)意-concentrateontheprocess-專(zhuān)注于過(guò)程-helpsyoupreparewellandkeepsyoufromworryingtoomuch-幫助你準(zhǔn)備得很好并防止你過(guò)度擔(dān)心-givesyouthecouragetoacceptanyoutcome-讓你有勇氣接受任何結(jié)果-keepimprovingwitheachchallenge-在每一個(gè)挑戰(zhàn)中持續(xù)進(jìn)步-wecan'tavoidchallengesinlife-我們無(wú)法避免生活中的挑戰(zhàn)-positivethinkinghelpsusdealwiththemeffectively-積極思考幫助我們有效地大神版本：Positivethinkingiscrucial（重要的）

inourdailylives,particularly（尤其）

whenweencounter（遇到）

challenges.Ivividlyrecall（生動(dòng)地回憶）

atimewhenIparticipatedin（參加）

arunningcompetition.Thecompetitorswereformidable=strong（強(qiáng)大的）,andmyeagernesstowinleftmetooanxioustoprepareeffectively.However,bycalmingdownandbelievinginmybesteffort,Imanagedtoovercomemynerves.AlthoughIdidn'twinfirstprize,Iachievedaresultthatsatisfiedme.I'dliketooffertwopiecesofadviceonmaintaining（維持）

apositivemindset（積極的心態(tài)）,whichcanempower（給...提供能量）

you.Firstly,it'simportanttofocusontheprocesswhenfacingachallenge.Thisapproach（方法）

allowsforgood

preparation,reducingunnecessaryworry（減少不必要的擔(dān)心）.Secondly,believinginyourselfisofgreatsignificance.Thisbeliefinstills（注入）

thecouragetoacceptanyoutcomeandcontinuously（持續(xù)不斷的）

progressthrougheachchallenge.Inconclusion,facingchallengesisaninevitable（不可避免的）

partoflife,butadopting（采用）

apositivemindsetcanprovidethestrength（力量）

toovercometheseobstacles（障礙）=challenges.Herearethekeyphrasesandsentencesfromthetextabouttheimportanceofpositivethinking:好詞好句積累：-particularlywhenweencounterchallenges-尤其是當(dāng)我們遇到挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)-vividlyrecallatimewhe