Module5+Loo k+after+yourself+作文講義 外研版英語(yǔ)九年級(jí)下冊(cè)+

初中作文外研社九下M5Lookafteryourself外研社九下M4Lookafteryourself本模塊的話(huà)題是“健康生活”。學(xué)生在具體的寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn):1.能夠介紹自己健康的生活習(xí)慣,制定健康生活計(jì)劃;2.能夠從飲食健康、生活作息、樂(lè)觀心態(tài)等方面提出有關(guān)健康生活的建議。作文1：為了宣傳6月6日“全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日”,你校英語(yǔ)報(bào)《校園周報(bào)》正在組織征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示,結(jié)合實(shí)際生活寫(xiě)一篇題目為“Howtoprotectoureyes”的英語(yǔ)短文投稿。詞數(shù)80~100。提示:1.眼睛的重要性;2.保護(hù)眼睛的措施?；A(chǔ)版本：Asisknown(眾所周知),eyesarethewindowofourmind（心靈的窗戶(hù)）.Withoureyes,wecanseethebeauties=beautifulviews

aroundus.Therefore,itisveryimportanttoprotectoureyes.Therearesomethingsweshoulddotoprotectoureyes(引入我們要給出的建議).

Firstly,weshouldhaveagoodhabit.Trynottoreadinbedorinabus,which

canbeveryharmfultooureyes.Secondly,

agoodrestalsoplaysanimportantpartin（起著重要的作用）

protectingoureyes.So

wearesupposedto（應(yīng)該）

getenoughsleepandavoidworkingforalongtime.Lastly,

eatingtherightfoodhelps.Itisadvisable/agoodidea

toeatvegetables,suchastomatoesandcarrots.Hopefully,everyonecanfollowmyadvice

andhaveagoodeyesight(視力).分析：這篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，用詞還不錯(cuò)，適合同學(xué)們好好學(xué)習(xí)，因?yàn)檫@樣的文章好模仿，同學(xué)們也能夠達(dá)到這樣的水平。進(jìn)階版本：Itiswidelyacknowledgedthat(普遍承認(rèn)的是)

eyesserveas（作為）

themostimportantpartforustosensethebeautyoftheworld（感知世界的美麗）.However,nowadayspeopleareso

busyusingtheireyesforworkandfunthat

theyforgettotakegoodcareofthem.Itishightimethat（是時(shí)候...）

weprotectedoureyes.Herearesometipsforagoodpairofeyes.Firstofall,

formingagoodhabit(養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣)

benefits（有助于）

oureyes.Thus,

wearenotsupposedtoreadinbedorinabus.

Besides，

itisofsignificantimportance

togetsufficient/enough

restforoureyes.Don’tuseyoureyesforalongtimeandlookatgreenstuffs(物品)

whenfeelingtired.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisabletohaveabalanceddiet,whichcancontributeto(有助于)

agoodeyesightbyeatinglotsofvegetables.Hopefully,myadvicehelpsandeveryonecanalwayshaveagoodeyesighttofeelthebeautyoftheworld.作文2：[2021·江蘇宿遷改編]公眾健康日(7月7日)旨在倡導(dǎo)“全民健康,快樂(lè)為本”的理念。隨著生活水平的提高,健康越來(lái)越受到重視。你校準(zhǔn)備組織一個(gè)關(guān)于“健康”主題的演講活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示,準(zhǔn)備一篇題為“Howtoliveahealthyandhappylife”的演講稿參加活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn):1.身體健康:健康飲食、適當(dāng)鍛煉、充足睡眠;2.心理健康:積極樂(lè)觀、與人為善、善于溝通;3.希望:……注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右,開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。分析：因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)給得很多，按照要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)，就很簡(jiǎn)單，同時(shí)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，只用關(guān)注內(nèi)容就夠了。進(jìn)階版本：HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeHi,mydearclassmates,Withtheimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreattentiontobothourphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?（該部分為給出的開(kāi)頭，直接引入我們的建議）Firstly,ahealthybodyisthebasisofeverything(健康的身體是一切的基礎(chǔ)).Notonlyshould

weeathealthily,butalsoworkproperlyeveryday.Besides,enough/adequate(充足的)sleepisgreatlyneededforustohaveaclear/sharpmind(清醒的/敏銳的頭腦)

andhealthygrowth(健康成長(zhǎng)).Moreover,mentalhealthisequally(同等地)/asimportantasphysicalhealth.Asaresult,

weshouldstay/keeppositiveandactive(樂(lè)觀和活躍)

inourlives.Meanwhile(同時(shí)),relationshipiscrucial(重要的)

inourschoollifeandweneedtogetalongwellwithothers.

Itisnaturalto

feeldown/upset/sad/frustrated/beatdown(上述的都是沮喪的意思)

sometimes,justcommunicatewithothers,whichhelpsyougetbetter/releaseyourpressure(釋放壓力).Hopefully,everyonecanhaveahealthybodyandmindsothattheycanbetterenjoytheirlives.That’sall,thankyou.作文3：據(jù)報(bào)道，我國(guó)青少年的健康狀況令人擔(dān)憂(yōu)。最近的調(diào)查結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)許多問(wèn)題：一分鐘跳繩堅(jiān)持不到50秒，跑步到終點(diǎn)直接累倒在地，看不清視力表……作為一名中學(xué)生，你將如何提高自身的身體素質(zhì)？請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖片提示，談?wù)勛约旱拇蛩?，必須包括文中圖片所給信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意：1．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；2．書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚；3．80詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。進(jìn)階版本：MyplantobehealthierItisreportedthatmanyyoungpeopleinChinaarebecomingunfit.Withoutregularexercise,studentsarebecomingweaker.Inordertobehealthier,Iwill正文：takefollowingsteps.(采取以下措施)Firstly,

itisofgreatimportance/crucial/essential(重要的)

tohaveenough/adequate/sufficient(充足的)

sleep.That’sbecause

agoodsleepcanmakeusenergetic（精力充沛的）

alldaylong（一整天）.Besides,Iwilltrytohaveahealthydiet.So

Iamgoingtoeatmorefruitandvegetableswhileavoid(避免)

eatingjunkfood.Moreover,Idecidetospendmoretimeexercisingwithfriendsinsteadof(而不是)

playingcomputergames.Inthisway（通過(guò)這種方式）,

Icannotonlybecomefit,butalsobuildbetterrelationshipwithothers.Lastbutnotleast,agoodattitudeisbeneficialfor（對(duì)...有好處的）physicalhealth,soIwillstaypositiveandhappy.(有關(guān)這種計(jì)劃，安排的寫(xiě)法，可以參考這篇文章，每次一個(gè)計(jì)劃可以解釋自己的計(jì)劃，或者進(jìn)一步拓展說(shuō)明計(jì)劃的具體內(nèi)容，或者闡述通過(guò)這種方式，能帶來(lái)的好處，這篇文章模仿起來(lái)并不難，可以好好參考以下)Hopefully,Icanfollowmyplanandbecomehealthier.作文4：“民以食為天”，飲食的安全和健康受到越來(lái)越多的關(guān)注和重視。請(qǐng)你以“Saynotojunkfood”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：1．垃圾食品盡管美味，但對(duì)健康無(wú)益，而且其過(guò)多的包裝會(huì)產(chǎn)生更多的垃圾；2．遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品，還應(yīng)選擇正確的生活方式，如：(1)三餐要有規(guī)律，少吃零食、快餐；(2)多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身體必需營(yíng)養(yǎng)；(3)多參加戶(hù)外活動(dòng)……寫(xiě)作要求：1．100詞左右，開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2．內(nèi)容必須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：過(guò)多包裝overpackaging；有規(guī)律地regularly；營(yíng)養(yǎng)nutritionSaynotojunkfood：Nowadays(現(xiàn)如今),greatattentionhasbeenpaidtofoodsafetyandhealthydiet（視頻健康）.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldsaynotojunkfood.Admittedly(眾所周知的),junkfoodismadedelicious/palatable(可口的)andattractive,whichmakesitenjoygreatpopularity(受歡迎).Besides,

overpackagingaddspressure(增加壓力)/causesmorewastes（造成浪費(fèi)）

totheenvironment.However,

overeating（過(guò)度食用）

junkfoodisharmful/dangerous/detrimental(有害的)

toourhealth.Tostayawayfromjunkfood,thetipsareasfollows(技巧如下).Firstly,

itisofgreathelptoeatthreemealsregularly.Asaresult,youaremorelikelyto（更可能）

avoid/resist(避免/抵制)eatingsnacksandjunkfood.Secondly,

eatmorevegetables