讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微專題（情緒表達(dá)）課件高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

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Learningobjectives:1.Learntoreadforthechangesofthecharacter’sfeelings.2.Learnhowtoexpressthecharacter’semotionvividlybyusingthekeywordsandfouradvancedsentencepatterns..3.Evaluatethepeers’worksonthebasisofcriteriagivenbytheteacher,expressyourownideasofmodification.4.Understandwhatvaluesshouldwetakewhenchoosingcareer.Howaretheyfeeling?Leadin“Iamhappy.”(換主語(yǔ)）開(kāi)心(的情緒)抓住了我。

Delightseizedme.（加介短）“一股開(kāi)心的情緒抓住了我”

Awaveofdelightseizedme.(加并列）“開(kāi)心與興奮的情緒抓住了我”

Delightandexcitementseizedme.(加副詞）“即刻地，一股開(kāi)心的情緒抓住了我”

Immediately,astrongsenseofdelightseizedme.(加時(shí)間狀從）“當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到那個(gè)好消息，一股開(kāi)心的情緒即刻抓住了我”

Immediately,astrongsenseofdelightseizedmeasIheardthegoodnews.1.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：“情緒名詞+動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)+sb”+as/whensbdosth當(dāng)某人做某事時(shí)，一股XX情緒涌上心頭。e.g.：Immediately,astrongsenseofdelightseizedme

asIheardthegoodnews..(情緒名詞）happiness/joy/delight

開(kāi)心gratitude/appreciation感激admiration

欽佩、贊賞anger/rage/fury狂怒sadness/sorrow悲傷fear/terror/fright/panic害怕guilt/regret/remorse愧疚悔恨astonishment/shock/surprise震驚nervousness/anxiety/stress不安（固定短語(yǔ)）seize抓住catch（過(guò)去式caught）strike（過(guò)去式struck）surround圍繞著takeholdof

控制washover讓人感到comeover包圍、支配envelop籠罩overwhelm

使難以承受+sb聽(tīng)到這個(gè)好消息時(shí)，一股開(kāi)心的情緒立刻涌上我心頭。1.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：“情緒名詞+動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)+sb”+as/whensbdosth當(dāng)某人做某事時(shí)，一股XX情緒涌上心頭。e.g.：Immediately,astrongsenseofdelightseizedme

asIheardthegoodnews..聽(tīng)到這個(gè)好消息時(shí)，一股開(kāi)心的情緒立刻涌上我心頭。Practice:（2022全國(guó)I卷）1.當(dāng)意識(shí)到如果沒(méi)有恰當(dāng)?shù)恼f(shuō)服，大衛(wèi)的情況可能會(huì)變得更糟，我感到擔(dān)憂和焦慮。2.當(dāng)大衛(wèi)終于下定決心繼續(xù)賽跑時(shí)，我感到欣慰和開(kāi)心。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid’ssituationmightgetworsewithoutproperpursuasion.ReliefanddelightcameovermewhenDavidfinallydeterminedtocontinuetherace.情緒形容詞2.非謂語(yǔ)：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2，

sbdosth,doingsth.感到XX和XX，某人做某事1，并做某事2e.g.：Delightedandjoyful,

Peterwalkedontothestage,

beginningtodeliverhisspeech.感到開(kāi)心和快樂(lè)，彼得走上舞臺(tái)，開(kāi)始發(fā)表演講。困惑puzzle

開(kāi)心delight壓力stress震驚astonishment焦慮anxiety生氣angerdedful

edanxiousangry2.非謂語(yǔ)：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2，

sbdosth,doingsth.感到XX和XX，某人做某事1，并做某事2e.g.：Delightedandjoyful,

Peterwalkedontothestage,

beginningtodeliverhisspeech.感到開(kāi)心和快樂(lè)，彼得走上舞臺(tái)，開(kāi)始發(fā)表演講。practice:（2022全國(guó)I卷）1.感到堅(jiān)定和受到鼓舞，David抬起頭，感激地看著我。2.（感到）放松的和快樂(lè)的，大衛(wèi)在越過(guò)終點(diǎn)線后立刻向我揮手，表達(dá)他的快樂(lè)和感激。Determinedandencouraged,Davidraisedhishead,lookingatmewithgratitude.Relaxedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,expressinghishappinessandgratitude.行為和情緒相反呢？3.讓步狀語(yǔ)從句：情緒形容詞+assbwas，sb(still)dosth.盡管某人（感到）XX，某人仍做某事e.g.：Nervousashewas,

Peterpluckedupcourageandmadehiswaytothestage.盡管很緊張，彼得仍鼓起勇氣走上舞臺(tái)。practice:1.（2022全國(guó)I卷）盡管還有一絲緊張，David決心完成賽跑。2.（2022廣州一模）盡管很著急和不情愿，我還是按照爸爸的要求去洗碗。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidstilldeterminedtofinishtherace.AnxiousandunwillingasIwas,IstilldidthedishesasDad’srequest.情緒的表達(dá)和肢體動(dòng)作有關(guān)聯(lián)嗎？4.獨(dú)立主格：身體部位+動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)，sbdosth.Eyesfilledwith

delightedtears,hethankedthepolicewithatremblingvoice.Face

gleamingwith

delight,Peterfailedtoutteraword.其他部位：Arms/legs/muscles

achingandknees

trembling,Ididsth...Practice:他走上舞臺(tái)，心砰砰直跳。Heartbeatingwithhappiness,hewalkedontothestage.3.讓步狀語(yǔ)從句：情緒形容詞+assb+be動(dòng)詞，sb(still)dosth.2.非謂語(yǔ)：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2，

sbdosth,doingsth.1.無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：“情緒名詞+動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)+sb”+as/whensbdosth4.獨(dú)立主格：身體部位+動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)，sbdosth.月考試卷Dadisaretiredpoliceofficer.Hehasmanystoriestotell.Here’sone.Inhisdistrictlivedaninfamous(聲名狼藉的)family.Thefamilyconsistedofastrugglingsinglemotherandherfoursons.Thethreeoldersonswereallbreakinglawsasacareer,likesellingdrugs,stealingitems,etc.Theyoungestwhowasabout10yearsoldwassuretofollowthesamepath.Manyofthepoliceofficersknewthemomandinturnsheknewthem.Sheevencalledsomepolicemenbytheirfirstnames,justlikemyfather.Shewasalwaysveryhelpfulwhenquestionedaboutwherehersonshadgone.Ononevisit,mydadhadaconversationwithher.Duringtheirtalksheexpressedherconcernsaboutthefutureofheryoungestboy.Shefeltpowerlessinguidinghimtothestraightandnarrow.Theenvironmentwouldnotallowit.Shebeggedmyfathertogiveheranidea.Mydadagreed.Heofferedtheonlysolutionhecouldthinkofonthespot.Heaskedtheconcernedmotherifshewouldallowher“baby”toleavetheinnercityandspendthesummerinthesuburbs(郊區(qū))atourhouse.Mydadhadthreesonsandadaughter(me).Theydiscussedtheplananddecidedthatitwouldbebeneficialfortheboytoseeanothersideoffamilylifewhichhehadneverexperienced.Soitwasdone.Wehadanewmembertoourfamilyforthesummer.Althoughwemusthaveseemedveryfamiliartohim,hehadnotroublefittingin.Wefoundhewasanhonestandfriendlyboyandgotalongwellwiththewholefamily.Heenjoyedthepoolinthebackyardandhequicklygetusedtoourwayoflife.Para1:Andthenwetookhimouttotakepartinallkindsofactivities.Para2:Afterthesummer,hewenttoschooltoliveadifferentlifefromhisbrothers.練習(xí)（月考試卷）第一段概述：Peter來(lái)到我們家，我們鼓勵(lì)他融入家庭的各項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，Peter內(nèi)心觸動(dòng)后，感激這一切，思考后決定去完成學(xué)業(yè)。思考：這些情節(jié)中，哪些位置適合加情緒描寫(xiě)，4種句式用哪種？參考情緒寫(xiě)法（放在最后“Peter改變以前的習(xí)慣和認(rèn)知/決定上學(xué)”之處）1.淚流滿