浙江省臺(tái)州市2022-2023學(xué)年高一下學(xué)期期末英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫-露營(yíng)夜驚魂小貝拉的恐懼與釋然之旅講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。BellawasonlyfiveanditwasherfirstcampingtripwithMumandDad.Shewasexcitedbutwasalittlenervoustoo."Whatifthetentfallsoverandsquashesus?Whatifthewindblowsitaway?Whatifawolfesintothetentandeatsus?..,"shekeptaskingMum.ThismadeMumlaugh.Bellahadreadtoomanyfairystorieswithbigbadwolvesinthem.MumfortedBellathattherearen'tanywolvesinthecityoreveninthewholecountry,exceptinzoos.“Well,whatifoneescapedfromazoo?”askedBella.Mumlaughed,“Zooswerecarefulenoughnottolettheiranimalsescape.”ThenBellasoonforgotaboutwolvesastheystartedplanningforthecampingtrip.BellahelpedDadloadupthecar.Theyputinthetent,abigoneforthewholefamily.Thenthesleepingbags,blanketsandmore."It'scoldatnightwhenyou'resleepinginatent,"addedDad.Wheneverythingwaspacked,thecarwasfulltobursting.Dadstartedthecar,andsoontheywereleavingthecitybehindthem."Lookatthehills!"shoutedMumexcitedly,"Lookatthecowsonthegrass!"Theydroveup

awindingroad

untiltheyreachedthecampsite,whichbelongedtoafarmandwasinabigfield.Oncethetentwasup,Bellawenttoexplore.Thereweretreestoclimbandastreamforpaddling.Bellasattherewatchingthecowseatingthegrass.Thedayflewbyanditwasgettingdark.Astheywerereadyforsleep,strangerustling(沙沙聲)noisescamefromthefencenext

totheirtentinthedarkness."What'sthatnoise?Isitawolfapproaching?"BellaworriedandmovedclosertoMum."Maybeit'sjustthewind,"MumgentlypattedBella.Belladidn'tsayanythingmore.Theywerealltiredafteradayoutdoors,and

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intotheirsleepingbags.SoonMumandDadwereasleep.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.文章大意：五歲的Bella首次和父母露營(yíng)，因讀了太多童話故事而擔(dān)心帳篷被吹倒、狼來(lái)襲等問(wèn)題。父母安慰后她開(kāi)始期待露營(yíng)，幫忙準(zhǔn)備并一同前往營(yíng)地。到達(dá)后她盡情玩耍，夜晚準(zhǔn)備入睡時(shí)聽(tīng)到奇怪沙沙聲，懷疑是狼，在父母安撫下雖未再言語(yǔ)，但因緊張難以入眠。故事山分析：開(kāi)端：Bella首次露營(yíng)，因童話中的狼而充滿恐懼與擔(dān)憂，不斷向媽媽提問(wèn)，媽媽則耐心安慰，為露營(yíng)之旅奠定了既有期待又有隱憂的基調(diào)，也為后續(xù)可能出現(xiàn)的與“狼”相關(guān)的情節(jié)埋下伏筆。發(fā)展：Bella參與露營(yíng)準(zhǔn)備，一家人駕車前往營(yíng)地，途中欣賞風(fēng)景，到達(dá)后搭建帳篷并在營(yíng)地探索，享受白天的歡樂(lè)時(shí)光，暫時(shí)忘卻擔(dān)憂，情節(jié)逐漸推進(jìn)到露營(yíng)的核心場(chǎng)景。高潮：夜晚入睡時(shí)聽(tīng)到奇怪的沙沙聲，Bella心中對(duì)狼的恐懼再次被喚起，向媽媽詢問(wèn)后雖得到安撫但仍無(wú)法平靜，緊張氛圍達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)，故事的懸念和戲劇性增強(qiáng)。結(jié)局：續(xù)寫部分將圍繞Bella再次聽(tīng)到聲音后的反應(yīng)及最終如何化解恐懼展開(kāi)，使故事完整并呈現(xiàn)出情感的變化與升華。五處伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：Bella讀太多有狼的童話故事而擔(dān)心狼。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：再次聽(tīng)到聲音后，她更加堅(jiān)信是狼，內(nèi)心極度恐懼，但最終發(fā)現(xiàn)是農(nóng)場(chǎng)的小狗，與之前對(duì)狼的恐懼形成對(duì)比，消除了誤解。伏筆：媽媽安慰說(shuō)沒(méi)有狼且動(dòng)物園管理嚴(yán)格不會(huì)有狼逃脫。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：Bella盡管聽(tīng)到安慰，但夜晚的聲音仍讓她害怕，這凸顯出孩子內(nèi)心恐懼的難以消除，直到真相大白才徹底安心，體現(xiàn)出心理變化的過(guò)程。伏筆：營(yíng)地在農(nóng)場(chǎng)的大田野里。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：沙沙聲原來(lái)是農(nóng)場(chǎng)小狗發(fā)出的，合理利用了營(yíng)地的環(huán)境背景，使情節(jié)的轉(zhuǎn)折不突兀，解釋了聲音的來(lái)源。伏筆：Bella白天看到農(nóng)場(chǎng)里的奶牛等動(dòng)物。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：夜晚的“不速之客”也是農(nóng)場(chǎng)動(dòng)物之一，與白天的場(chǎng)景相呼應(yīng)，豐富了農(nóng)場(chǎng)這一故事背景的元素運(yùn)用。伏筆：Bella聽(tīng)到聲音靠近媽媽且未再言語(yǔ)但沒(méi)睡著。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：她因緊張而難以入睡，為后續(xù)進(jìn)一步探究聲音來(lái)源和解決恐懼心理做了鋪墊，推動(dòng)情節(jié)繼續(xù)發(fā)展。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：描述Bella再次聽(tīng)到聲音后的具體行動(dòng)，如小心翼翼地查看或緊張地等待。揭示聲音的來(lái)源，如原來(lái)是農(nóng)場(chǎng)的小狗，以及Bella得知真相后的反應(yīng)，如松一口氣、感到好笑等。情感線：

Bella最初是興奮與緊張交織，對(duì)露營(yíng)既期待又因狼的恐懼而不安。在準(zhǔn)備和白天游玩時(shí)興奮占據(jù)主導(dǎo)，暫時(shí)忘卻恐懼。夜晚聽(tīng)到聲音后，恐懼瞬間回歸且加劇，靠近媽媽尋求安慰卻難以平靜。當(dāng)發(fā)現(xiàn)聲音來(lái)源是小狗后，轉(zhuǎn)為釋然和輕松，從極度恐懼到放松的情緒變化貫穿故事始終，體現(xiàn)了孩子在面對(duì)未知時(shí)的心理成長(zhǎng)歷程。故事線：

Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Sheheldherbreathandlistenedcarefully.Thenoiseseemedtobegettingcloser.Tremblingwithfear,sheslowlypeekedoutofthetent.Tohersurprise,shesawalittledogfromthefarmwaggingitstailnearthefence.Realizingitwasthesourceofthenoise,Bellaletoutasighofrelief.Shegiggledandfinallyfeltatease,snugglingintohersleepingbagandfallingasleeppeacefully.主旨升華句：“Fearoftenmagnifiestheunknown,butcourageliesinseekingthetruthandfindingit'snotasdreadfulasimagined.”（恐懼常常放大未知，但勇氣在于探尋真相并發(fā)現(xiàn)并非如想象中可怕。）“Themonstersinourmindsaresometimesjustfriendlycreaturesindisguise,waitingtobediscovered.”（我們心中的怪物有時(shí)只是偽裝的友好生物，等待被發(fā)現(xiàn)。）“Inthefaceofthedarkandtheunknown,alittleexplorationcanturnterrorintolaughter.”（面對(duì)黑暗與未知，一點(diǎn)探索能將恐懼化為歡笑。）“Ourfearsarelikeshadowsthatvanishwhenthelightofrealityshinesuponthem.”（我們的恐懼如同陰影，當(dāng)現(xiàn)實(shí)之光照射時(shí)便會(huì)消散。）“Whatseemsscaryinthenightcanbeasourceoffortandamusementoncerevealed.”（夜晚看似可怕的東西一旦被揭示，可能成為安慰和樂(lè)趣的來(lái)源。）寫作示范一：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shemusteredupthecouragetounzipthetentslightlyandpeekout.There,inthemoonlight,wasasmall,furrycreature.Itwasapuppy!Ithadprobablybeencuriousaboutthenewarrivals.Bella'sheartratesloweddown.Shewhisperedtothepuppy,anditbarkedsoftlyinresponse.Withasmileonherface,Bellaclosedhereyesanddriftedofftosleep,herfearsreplacedbyasenseofwonder.寫作示范二：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shelaystill,hereyeswideopen.Afterawhile,shedecidedtowakeDad.Dadquietlygotupandtheybothwentoutsidetoinvestigate.Astheyroundedthetent,theysawalittledogsniffingaround.Dadlaughedandexplaineditwasjustafriendlypupfromthefarm.Bellalaughedtoo,feelingabitsillyforbeingsoscared.Shewentbacktothetentandsleptsoundly,knowingtherewerenowolvestofear.參考范文：Bellawastoonervoustofallasleepwhensheheardthatnoiseagain.Shewonderedwhatwashappeningwhensuddenly,sheheardmorerustling.Itsoundedlikesomethingwalkingaroundoutside.“Thiscampsiteisjustthekindofplaceawolfmightlike.What..whatifawolfdidescapefromazoo?”

Bellalayawake,shivering,astherustlingcontinued.1minute,2minutes.…….afterwhatseemedages,Bellacouldn’tbearitanylonger.Shecreptoutofthesleeping