讀后續(xù)寫-街頭驚遇大猩猩托尼的險象環(huán)生與奇妙邂逅講義-河南省焦作市2024-2025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期期中考試英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Tonywaswalkingdownthestreet.Hewastryingtogettoastorebeforeitclosed,andhewasnotthinkingaboutanythingbutthat.Hehadhisshoppinglistinhandandwasrushingthroughthecrosswalks,tryingtoavoidgettinghitbycars.Arrivingatacrosswalk,Tonystopped,waitingforthegreenlighttocross.Theflashingredhandshowedhimnottowalk,butinfact,hedidconsiderwhethertogothroughtheredlight,astherewerenotmanycars.Still,itdidn’tseemlikeagoodidea,sohecontinuedtowait.Notfaraway,heheardamantalkingonthephone,sayingsomethingaboutanimals.Outofnowhere,agorilla（大猩猩）appearedandheadedovertoTonyonitsfeet.ThereweresomanypeoplearoundthatTonydidn’tnoticeitatfirst,hismindtotallyfocusedonthestore,whichhecouldseefaraway,justablockortwoahead.Anxious,Tonyrecheckedhislist.Ifhedidn’tgeteverythingonthelist,hismotherwouldbeangry.Heoftenforgotsomething,sohewantedtomakesurehediditrightthistime.Justashewascheckinghislistcarefully,hefeltataponhisshoulder.“Pardonme,”Tonysaid,steppingtooneside,incaseithadbeenhisproblem.Hefeltanothertap.“Hey,watchyourself.”Tonylookedoverinanger,onlytorealizehiswarningfellondeafears—orrather,hairyones.Hewasnosetonosewithagorilla!Hesteppedback,suddenlyfearful.Thegorillamadeashort,lowsoundandfollowedhim.Tonylookedaroundhimselfindisbelief.Allaroundhimwerepeoplewhowerewatchingwithgreatinterest.Somelookedafraidandwerebackingaway.Somewhisperedbehindtheirhandsandwatchedwithwideeyes.Afewevenhadtheirphonesoutandwererecordingvideosortakingpictures.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：托尼正匆忙趕在商店關(guān)門前去購物，他全神貫注于購物清單和趕路，在一個十字路口等待綠燈時，一只大猩猩突然出現(xiàn)并走向他。周圍有很多人在圍觀，托尼起初未察覺，發(fā)現(xiàn)后十分驚恐，而大猩猩只是與他互動，之后飼養(yǎng)員趕來帶走了大猩猩，托尼繼續(xù)前往商店并與收銀員分享了這段奇特經(jīng)歷。伏筆以及回應(yīng)：伏筆1：托尼匆忙趕路且只專注于購物清單，暗示他可能會因分心而遭遇意外情況，續(xù)寫中他被大猩猩的出現(xiàn)嚇了一跳并陷入慌亂。伏筆2：托尼聽到不遠處有人談?wù)搫游铮瑸榇笮尚傻某霈F(xiàn)做了鋪墊，續(xù)寫中飼養(yǎng)員的出現(xiàn)也與動物相關(guān)話題相呼應(yīng)。伏筆3：托尼考慮過闖紅燈但放棄了，體現(xiàn)他有基本的規(guī)則意識，續(xù)寫中他在面對大猩猩時雖害怕但也嘗試友好應(yīng)對。伏筆4：周圍有很多人且有人在錄像拍照，預(yù)示著這一事件會被更多人知曉，續(xù)寫中托尼會在商店分享這段經(jīng)歷。伏筆5：托尼擔(dān)心買不全東西媽媽會生氣，突出他的任務(wù)緊迫性，續(xù)寫中他在大猩猩事件后仍繼續(xù)完成購物任務(wù)。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：情感線：極度震驚與害怕，隨后在大猩猩未表現(xiàn)出攻擊性時嘗試鎮(zhèn)定并友好相處，內(nèi)心依舊緊張不安。故事線：托尼身體微微顫抖，試圖與大猩猩保持距離但又不敢有大動作。他輕聲與大猩猩交流，盡管知道它可能聽不懂，只是希望緩解緊張氣氛。當(dāng)飼養(yǎng)員出現(xiàn)時，他既松了一口氣又好奇大猩猩為何會出現(xiàn)在這里。第二段：情感線：如釋重負，帶著些許興奮和感慨，從奇特經(jīng)歷中逐漸恢復(fù)平靜并回歸日常。故事線：托尼在前往商店的路上整理自己的思緒和衣服，試圖讓自己看起來正常些。進入商店后，他在挑選商品時仍會時不時想起大猩猩的模樣。與收銀員講述經(jīng)歷時，他的語氣從緊張到輕松，最后帶著購物袋滿意地離開。主旨升華句：“Lifeisfullofunexpectedencountersthatcanbothstartleandamazeus,teachingustoembracetheunknownwithanopenheart.”（生活充滿了意想不到的邂逅，既會讓我們驚愕又會使我們驚嘆，教導(dǎo)我們以開放的心態(tài)擁抱未知。）“Eveninthemostordinaryofdays,extraordinaryeventscanoccur,remindingusthattheworldisfullofsurpriseswaitingtobediscovered.”（即使在最平凡的日子里，非凡的事件也可能發(fā)生，提醒我們世界充滿了等待被發(fā)現(xiàn)的驚喜。）“Anunexpectedmeetingwithawildcreaturecanbreakthemonotonyofourroutineandofferauniqueperspectiveonthewondersofnature.”（與野生動物的意外相遇可以打破我們?nèi)粘５膯握{(diào)，并提供對自然奇觀的獨特視角。）“Inthefaceoftheunexpected,ourabilitytoremaincalmandadaptdeterminesnotonlyourimmediateexperiencebutalsoourgrowthasindividuals.”（面對意外情況，我們保持冷靜和適應(yīng)的能力不僅決定了我們當(dāng)下的經(jīng)歷，也決定了我們作為個體的成長。）“Thestrangeencounterwiththegorillashowsthattheboundariesbetweenthehumanworldandthewildcansometimesblur,leadingtomomentsofwonderandselfreflection.”（與大猩猩的奇特相遇表明人類世界與野外之間的界限有時會模糊，帶來驚奇和自我反思的時刻。）寫作示范一：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hismindwentblankforasecond.Hecouldfeelhispalmssweatingandhislegsturningweak.Thegorilla,however,didn'tseemtohaveanyaggressiveintentions.Itjuststoodthere,lookingatTonywithitsbig,curiouseyes.Tonyforcedhimselftosmile,tryingtoappearfriendly.Heslowlycroucheddown,hopingtoshowthathemeantnoharm.Thegorillamimickedhisaction,whichmadeTonyabitlessnervous.Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hefeltastrangemixtureofemotions.Hewasstillabitshakyfromtheencounterbutalsofeltasenseofadventure.Hecontinuedhiswalktothestore,hisstepsabitslowerthanbefore.Whenheenteredthestore,hecouldn'thelpbutsharehisstorywiththefirstpersonhesaw.Thecashierlistenedwithgreatinterest,andTonyfeltproudtohavehadsuchauniqueexperience.Hefinallypletedhisshoppingandleftthestore,lookingforwardtotellinghisfriendsandfamilyaboutthisamazingencounter.寫作示范二：Tony’sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hewasterrifiedbuttriednottoshowit.Hethoughtaboutrunningbutwasafraidtoprovokethegorilla.Sohejuststoodthere,frozen.Thegorillathentookastepcloser,andTonyclosedhiseyesinstinctively.Butinsteadofattacking,thegorillagentlytouchedhisarm.Tonyopenedhiseyesandsawthegorilla'scalmface.Asthegorillawasledaway,Tonyletoutadeepbreathinrelief.Hewasamazedbywhathadjusthappened.Hestartedwalkingtothestoreagain,hisheartstillpounding.Ashewalked,hereplayedtheencounterinhismind.Whenhegottothestore,hetoldthestorytothestoreowner.Theownerwasastonishedandaskedalotofquestions.Tonyansweredthemwithasmile,feelingthatthisencounterhadmadehisdaymoreinteresting.Heboughthisthingsandleft,knowingthatthiswouldbeastoryhewouldrememberforalongtime.Onepossibleversion:Tony'sheartskippedabeatwhenherealizedthesituation.Hehadneverimaginedgettingsoclosetoagorilla.Thegorillaalsoseemedconfused,itsdarkeyesmovingbackandforthbetweenTonyandthepeoplearoundthem.Theman,whoTonynoticedtalkingonhisphonejustnow,approachedcarefully,tryingtoassessthesituation.Hereachedhishandtowardsthegorilla,speakinginafortingvoice,"Easy,easy.I'mheretohelpyou."Thegorillahesitatedfor