2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+周六奶奶的暖心餅干+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)周六奶奶的暖心餅干1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Istoodinfrontofthehouse,waitingforGrandma’sboxofcookies.EverySaturday,aboxofcookieswouldarriveonourdoorsteptiedwithabrownstring.AsfarasIcouldremember,Grandma,carryingthebox,wasalwaysthereontime.Jack,myyoungerbrother,hadalwaysbeenfonderofthecookies.Hewasstillchildish,maybenotunderstandingthevalueoftimewithfamily.Asforme,IwasalwaysGrandma’slittlegirl,andpossiblyshelovedmemorethanMom.TherewassomethingaboutGrandmathatmadehersospecial.Infact,seeinghereverySaturdaywasthehappiestthingallweekforme.4續(xù)寫原文Jackplayedintheyardandpickedflowersforthedinnertable.Momalwayswantedtheprettiestones,andJackjustknewwhichonesshewouldlovemost.“Theweatherreportsaystodaywillbearainyday.SowillGrandmastillcome?”Jackasked.“I’mnotsure,”Ianswered,lookingupatthesky.Thecloudsweredarkgrayandthick,whichjustmadememoreupset.However,Jackdidn’tseemtooexcitedaboutthecookiesthistime.Hewasarranginghisflowersattentively.5續(xù)寫原文“You’dbettercomein!Icanfeelafewraindropsonmyhead,”Momshouted.Jackquicklyrantowardsher,carryingmanyflowers.Someevenslippedoutofhishands,creatingacolorfultrailbehindhim.“Ibroughtyousomeroses,Mom!”Jacksaid,shoving(猛推)theflowersintoherhands.Ifoundheleftsomeflowersinhishand.Whowashegoingtogivethemto?Momthenlookedbackatme.“Wouldyouratherbeoutsideintherain?”shequestioned.Ishookmyhead.“It’sjustaboxofcookies.IcangetitnextSaturday,”Ithought.However,Iknewitwasmoreaboutthecookies—itwasalotoflovefromGrandma.Momgavemeasmallsmileandrepeated,“Iknewyouwouldn’twanttogetwet.Comein,baby.”Iwasabouttostepinsidewhenafamiliarvoicecame,“Jenny,I’mcoming!”IturnedbackandsawGrandmashuffling(拖著腳走)towardsme.6段首句Paragraph1：IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Paragraph2：“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了每周六，奶奶都會(huì)帶著一盒餅干來到家門口。弟弟杰克很喜歡餅干，還會(huì)為餐桌挑選花朵。一次周六，天氣不好，大家都覺得奶奶可能不會(huì)來了。然而，奶奶不顧風(fēng)雨，還是帶著餅干來了。奶奶的到來讓大家感受到了滿滿的愛，一家人圍坐在一起分享餅干，其樂融融。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.我沖向奶奶，張開雙臂緊緊抱住她。奶奶的身上帶著雨水的濕潤(rùn)，她的頭發(fā)被風(fēng)吹得有些凌亂，臉上卻依舊掛著溫暖的笑容。我拉著奶奶進(jìn)了屋，看到她鞋子也濕透了。我心疼地說：“奶奶，下這么大的雨，您還趕來，太辛苦了?！蹦棠堂嗣业念^，說：“答應(yīng)給你們的餅干，怎么能不送來呢?！彼脑捵屛倚睦锱?。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.“奶奶，您又帶來餅干了！”杰克開心地說。奶奶把盒子放在桌上，拿出一朵小花遞給杰克。杰克接過花，臉上滿是驚喜。奶奶笑著說：“這是給你的，你是個(gè)懂事的好孩子?！苯芸四弥ㄅ苋ソo媽媽看。我們圍坐在桌旁，一起吃著餅干，奶奶的笑容和話語讓整個(gè)家充滿了溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms.Grandmawaswetfromtherain,herhairwasabitmessy,andshehadawarmsmileonherface.Ihelpedherintothehouseandnoticedhershoeswerewet.Isaidworriedly,“Grandma,it'ssohardforyoutocomeinsuchaheavyrain.”Grandmapattedmyheadandsaid,“Ipromisedtobringyouthecookies,ofcourseImustcome.”Herwordsmademefeelwarminmyheart.14范文呈現(xiàn)“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jacksaidhappily.GrandmatookoutaflowerfromtheboxandgaveittoJack.Jacktooktheflowerwithsurpriseonhisface.Grandmasmiledandsaid,“Thisisforyou.You'reagoodboy.”Jackrantoshowtheflowertomom.Wesataroundthetableandsharedthecookiestogether.Grandma'ssmileandwordsmadethewholefamilyfullofwarmth.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IrushedtowardsGrandmawithopenarms,myheartpoundingwithjoyandconcern.Grandmawasdrenchedfromtherain,herhairdisheveledandherfaceradiatingwarmth.AsIhelpedherintothehouse,Inoticedhersoddenshoesandthewaterdrippingfromherclothes.“Grandma,it'ssohardforyoutocomeinsuchaheavyrain,”Iexclaimed,myvoicelacedwithworry.Grandmagentlypattedmyhead,hereyestwinklingwithloveasshesaid,“Ipromisedtobringyouthecookies,andIcouldn'tletyoudown.”Herwordsfilledmewithasenseofcomfortandgratitude.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Grandma,youbroughtthecookiesagain!”Jackexclaimed,hiseyeswidewithexcitement.Grandmareachedintotheboxandpulledoutaflower,handingittoJackwithawarmsmile.Jacktooktheflower,hisfacefilledwithsurpriseanddelight.“Thisisforyou,mydearboy,”Grandmasaid,hervoicesoftandaffectionate.Jackranofftoshowtheflowertomom,hisstepsquickandfullofenergy.Wesataroundthetable,thesmellofcookiesfillingtheair,andGrandma'ssmileandwordscreatingawarmandcozyatmosphere.Asweatet