讀后續(xù)寫-汽車故障遇到陌生人伸出援手的故事+講義 高三上學(xué)期調(diào)研考試四英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Inthefallof2023,onaparticularlycoolandwindyday,whenCoreyWidmerwasmakinghiswaythroughthecityinhiscar,itsuddenlybrokedownandbecameunresponsive,muchlikealifelessanimalrefusingtomove.Hiscarhadbeengivinghimtrouble,soheleftworkearlytodriveittoanautopartsstoretohaveitchecked.Butonthewaythere,itdiedandtrappedhiminthemiddleofrush-hourtraffic.Therewerecarsallaroundhim,infront,behind,andonbothsides.Widmerfeltdowntodeath.Theairwasfilledwiththesoundsoftrumpets(喇叭)andhisheartwasbeatingfast,addingtohisgrowingpanic.Hecouldn’thelpbutthink,“WhatamIgoingtodo?”Thissinkingfeeling,acommononethatmanyhumansmightexperienceinsuchterriblesituations,filledhimwithfear.Justwhenhethoughtallhopewaslost,aflashofhopeappeared.“Thedriverjumpedoutofthecarbehindmine,”Widmersaid.Hemouthedthewords,“Doyouneedhelp?”AfterWidmercrazilynoddeda“Yes”,themanpurposefullybravedthetraffic,hisfiguresidesteppingbetweenthecarswithasurprisinggraceundersuchpressure.Asthetrafficlightturnedgreenandthecarsbegantomove,themanpositionedhimselfbehindWidmerandwildlywavedhisarmslikeadeterminedconductorleadingaself-willedorchestra(管弦樂隊(duì)),signalingothervehiclestogoaround.Thankstohisefforts,hemanagedtodirectthetrafficandcreateenoughspaceforhimandWidmertopushthecarovertothesideoftheroad.Widmerthankedhimwholeheartedly,andafterasimple“You’rewelcome”,themanreturnedtohiscar.However,toWidmer’ssurprise,themandrovehiscarandparkeditnexttoWidmer’s.HetoldWidmerthatheusedtobearepairmanworkinginarepairshopandthatthereweresometoolsinhiscar.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。HeofferedtocheckWidmer’scar.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Widmerwasoverjoyedandcouldn’tthankthemanenough.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意在2023年秋天一個寒風(fēng)凜冽的日子，CoreyWidmer駕車途中車子突然故障，被困在擁堵的路中央，周圍車水馬龍，他滿心恐慌。就在絕望之際，后車司機(jī)挺身而出，不僅幫忙指揮交通，將車推至路邊，還因曾是修理工，主動提出檢查故障車輛，故事展現(xiàn)了陌生人在困境中伸出援手的暖心一幕，傳遞人性溫暖與善意。二、故事山分析開場：描繪秋末寒風(fēng)中，CoreyWidmer駕車遭遇汽車突發(fā)故障，被困車流，奠定緊張氛圍基調(diào)。發(fā)展：隨著車流涌動、喇叭聲嘈雜，Widmer的恐慌加劇，突出困境。危機(jī)（伏筆1）：車子毫無預(yù)兆地熄火，Widmer不知如何是好，后續(xù)可寫若無人幫忙，他可能面臨長時(shí)間滯留、耽誤要事等更糟狀況。高潮：后車司機(jī)果斷下車，穿梭車流指揮交通，展現(xiàn)英勇助人之舉，成為情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)?；芈洌核緳C(jī)泊好車，準(zhǔn)備用工具幫Widmer修車，回歸相對平穩(wěn)但仍充滿期待的節(jié)奏，等待問題解決。三、伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：提及車子此前就有問題，續(xù)寫中可寫司機(jī)檢查時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)是老毛病積累所致，解釋故障根源，讓W(xué)idmer恍然大悟。伏筆：司機(jī)曾是修理工，續(xù)寫他憑借精湛技藝，快速精準(zhǔn)找出問題，如某個關(guān)鍵零件松動，彰顯專業(yè)。伏筆：司機(jī)帶了工具，續(xù)寫他熟練使用工具修理，工具的齊全為解決問題提供保障，使情節(jié)合理推進(jìn)。伏筆：Widmer滿心感激，續(xù)寫他在一旁幫忙遞工具、學(xué)技巧，體現(xiàn)他的積極配合與感恩回報(bào)。四、續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段：HeofferedtocheckWidmer’scar.詳細(xì)描繪司機(jī)打開引擎蓋后，專注檢查的神情與動作，如眉頭緊鎖，雙手在復(fù)雜線路、零件間仔細(xì)摸索。寫他邊檢查邊向Widmer解釋可能的故障原因，用專業(yè)術(shù)語夾雜通俗講解，讓W(xué)idmer似懂非懂又滿懷希望。第二段：Widmerwasoverjoyedandcouldn’tthankthemanenough.著重刻畫車子修好重新啟動瞬間，Widmer的激動反應(yīng)，像歡呼雀躍、眼眶濕潤。描述他緊緊握住司機(jī)雙手不停道謝，還詢問聯(lián)系方式，想日后報(bào)答，展現(xiàn)真誠感恩。五、情感線起初，Widmer因車子故障陷入極度焦慮、無助；看到后車司機(jī)示意幫忙，燃起一絲希望，稍感安心；司機(jī)幫忙推車、準(zhǔn)備修車時(shí)，他滿是期待；車子修好后，變?yōu)闊o盡感激，情感隨情節(jié)推進(jìn)層層升溫，從絕望谷底攀至溫暖高峰。六、故事線2023年秋，Widmer駕車上班途中車子出故障。車子在去汽修店路上徹底熄火，被困車流。后車司機(jī)主動詢問并幫忙指揮交通。司機(jī)將車移至路邊，提出修車。司機(jī)檢查并修好車子。Widmer感恩道別，帶著溫暖繼續(xù)前行。七、主旨升華句Inthedarkestmoments,asmallactofkindnesscanbethebrightestlightthatguidesusthrough.（在最黑暗的時(shí)刻，一個小小的善舉可能是指引我們走出困境的最亮光芒。）Sometimes,thekindnessofstrangersisthemostunexpectedyetpreciousgiftlifegivesus.（有時(shí)，陌生人的善意是生活給予我們最意想不到卻又無比珍貴的禮物。）Ahelpinghandintroublenotonlyfixestheproblembutalsowarmstheheartandrestoresfaithinhumanity.（困境中的援手不僅解決了問題，還溫暖了心靈，重拾對人性的信心。）Whenlifethrowsusacurveball,it'sthekindnessaroundusthathelpsusswingbackandhitahomerun.（當(dāng)生活給我們出難題時(shí)，是身邊的善意幫助我們扭轉(zhuǎn)局面，打出全壘打。）Thebeautyofhumanityliesinthoseunpromptedactsofkindnessthatturnstrangersintoangels.（人性之美在于那些自發(fā)的善舉，讓陌生人變成天使。）寫作示范第一篇Asthecoolwindwhippedthroughthecitystreetsthatautumnday,CoreyWidmersathelplesslyinhisstalledcar.Thecacophonyofhornsandthechaosofrush-hourtrafficonlyaddedtohisdistress.Butthen,likeaknightinshiningarmor,thedriverfrombehindcametohisrescue.HeofferedtocheckWidmer’scar.Crouchingdownbesidethefrontbumper,hegentlyliftedthehood,hiseyesnarrowingastheyscannedthemazeofmetalandwires.Hisfingerstracedalongtheengineparts,pausingeverynowandthentogiveagentletugoracloserinspection.“Lookslikethefuelpumpmightbeactingup,”hesaidinacalmvoice,glancingoveratWidmer.“It’sacommonissuewithcarsthisage.Don’tworry,we’llgetitsorted.”Asherummagedthroughhistoolbox,hecontinuedtoexplaintheprobleminlayman’sterms,easingWidmer’snerves.Widmerwasoverjoyedandcouldn’tthankthemanenough.Whentheenginefinallyroaredbacktolife,ahugegrinspreadacrossWidmer’sface.Hepracticallyleapedoutofthecarandthrewhisarmsaroundthestranger.“IthoughtIwasdoomed!You’reanabsolutelifesaver,”heexclaimed,hisvoicechokedwithemotion.ThemanjustchuckledandpattedWidmerontheback.“GladIcouldhelp.Drivesafenow.”AsWidmerwatchedhimdriveaway,heknewthisrandomactofkindnesswouldstaywithhimforalongtime,areminderthateveninthemostfranticoftimes,humanitystillshonethrough.第二篇Onthatblusteryfallafternoonin2023,CoreyWidmer’sworldcametoascreechinghaltwhenhiscarconkedoutinthemiddleofbumper-to-bumpertraffic.Fearandpanicgrippedhimashewatchedtheseaofcarssurroundinghim,withnowayout.Buthopewasjustaroundthecorner.Themomentthedriverbehindhimhoppedoutandsignaledhisintentiontohelp,Widmerfeltaglimmerofrelief.HeofferedtocheckWidmer’scar.Withpracticedhands,hepoppedopenthehoodandleanedin,hisbrowfurrowedinconcentration.Hishandsmoveddeftly,checkingconnectionsandlisteningintentlyforanytelltalesounds.“Ah,hereitis,”hemurmuredafterafewminutes.“Yoursparkplugsarewornout.It’saneasyfix.”Asheworked,hesharedlittletipsandtricksaboutcarmaintenance,makingthewholeprocesseducationalforWidmer.Widmerwasoverjoyedandcouldn’tthankthemanenough.Thesecondthecarpurredsmoothlyagain,Widmer’seyeswelledupwithtearsofgratitude.Heshooktheman’shandvigorously,notwantingtoletgo.“Idon’tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyou.Thismeanstheworldtome,”hesaid,hisvoicetrembling.Themansmiledwarmly.“Weallneedahandsometimes.Takecare.”AndasWidmerpulledbackontotheroad,hecarriedwithhimnotjustaworkingcar,butaheartfullofappreciationforthekindnessofstrangers.Onepossibleversion:HeofferedtocheckWidmer’scar.Hebegantoinspectthebatteryandotheressentialparts.Hisexpe