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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)校園音樂(lè)劇尋犬記與我的成長(zhǎng)之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ineighthgrade,ourdirectoranddramateacherMr.LoomisaskedmetolookforadogforasupportingroleSandyinourschool’smusical.Itriedveryhard,butinvain.Iknewthisdoghadtohaveawinningpersonality,butitwouldalsohavetolookthepartandteamupwellwiththeleadingroleKayla.“Ashley,IthinkIcanhelpyougetadog,”offeredJohn,ourassistantdirector,whenwewerealldonefortheafternoon.“That’dbegreat,”Isaid,openingthestagedoor.“Ihavenoideawheretogetthispuppy.”Johnflashedasmileatme,“Itextedmyneighbor,whorunsthelocalshelter.Shetextedmerightbacksayingshecouldhelpus.Don’tworry!Mr.Loomisalwayssaystheaterisforeveryone.”4續(xù)寫原文Truerwordswereneverspoken.Mygiantbirthmarkthatcoveredhalfofmyfacewouldbetoomuchofadistraction.Ihadactedinonemusicalandlovedit,butafterwardIoverheardaladytellingMr.Loomishowkindithadbeenforhimtocastme.Afterthat,Istoppedperformingandworkedbehindthescenes.However,lookingfortheperfectSandylookedlikeanimpossibletask.Desperationforcedmetosayyes.HardlyhadwearrivedwhenJohn’sneighborinvitedustothebackyard.Therewesawthedog.“Thisisthedogyouwant!”sheannounced.“He’sobedientandcalm.”Asshesaidthat,thedogturnedaroundandkissedher.5續(xù)寫原文“He’sathree-leggeddog!”Iexclaimed,statingtheobvious.“Yes,”theneighborexplained.“Abandonedafteranaccident,hewasadoptedbymyfriend,whosawhisfantasticpotential.”“Thankyou!Takehimfortherehearsal(排練)onMondaymorning,please,”Johnsaidasweleft.AllMondaymorningIwasabsent-mindedintheclassroom.WouldheworkoutasSandy?Wouldhecheworbarkordoanythingbad?SuddenlyIheardthefamiliarvoiceofJohn.“Ashley,Mr.Loomiswillbewaitingforyouathisofficeduringthelunchbreak.”6段首句Paragraph1:Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.Paragraph2:OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了八年級(jí)時(shí),導(dǎo)演讓“我”為學(xué)校音樂(lè)劇尋找一只叫桑迪的狗,“我”久尋無(wú)果,助理導(dǎo)演約翰聯(lián)系了在動(dòng)物收容所工作的鄰居幫忙??吹揭恢蝗龡l腿的狗,“我”雖驚訝但還是帶它回去排練。“我”因臉上的胎記曾放棄表演轉(zhuǎn)做幕后,對(duì)這只狗能否勝任忐忑不安。不過(guò),在與它排練過(guò)程中,它表現(xiàn)出色,最終在周三晚的演出中,它自信地與凱拉登臺(tái),演出獲得成功,“我”也克服了內(nèi)心的障礙,重新體會(huì)到表演的快樂(lè)和意義。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Duringthelunchbreak,IwenttotheofficeofMr.Loomis.午休時(shí),我懷著忐忑的心情走向盧米斯先生的辦公室。一路上,我不停地在腦海中設(shè)想各種可能出現(xiàn)的場(chǎng)景,擔(dān)心他會(huì)對(duì)這只三條腿的狗不滿意。推開(kāi)門,我看到盧米斯先生正坐在辦公桌前,他微笑著讓我把狗帶進(jìn)來(lái)。當(dāng)狗乖巧地走到他身邊時(shí),盧米斯先生蹲下身子仔細(xì)觀察,臉上露出了驚喜的表情,他稱贊這只狗很有靈性,眼神中透露出的友善和專注非常適合桑迪這個(gè)角色。我懸著的心終于落了地,暗暗下定決心要和這只狗一起努力,讓它在舞臺(tái)上大放異彩。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaconfidentlyontothestage.周三晚上,我們的桑迪自信滿滿地跟著凱拉走上舞臺(tái)。聚光燈灑在它們身上,桑迪絲毫沒(méi)有表現(xiàn)出緊張或膽怯。它熟練地完成了每一個(gè)動(dòng)作,與凱拉的配合默契十足。臺(tái)下的觀眾被它的可愛(ài)和靈動(dòng)所吸引,不時(shí)發(fā)出陣陣笑聲和掌聲。當(dāng)演出結(jié)束,全場(chǎng)響起雷鳴般的掌聲時(shí),我激動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶。這只三條腿的狗不僅成功地完成了演出,更讓我重新找回了對(duì)表演的熱愛(ài)和信心,我知道,這次經(jīng)歷將成為我人生中一段難忘的回憶。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Duringthelunchbreak,IwalkedtowardsMr.Loomis'sofficewithapoundingheart.Alongtheway,variousscenarioskeptflashingthroughmymind,fearingthathemightbedissatisfiedwiththethree-leggeddog.Uponpushingopenthedoor,IsawMr.Loomissittingathisdesk.Hesmiledandaskedmetobringthedogin.Whenthedogwalkedobedientlyuptohim,Mr.Loomiscroucheddowntoobserveitcarefully.Tomyrelief,alookofpleasantsurpriseappearedonhisface.Hepraisedthedogforitsintelligenceandthefriendlinessandconcentrationinitseyes,whichwereverysuitablefortheroleofSandy.Withmyheartfinallyatease,Isecretlyresolvedtoworkhardwiththedogtomakeitshineonstage.14范文呈現(xiàn)OnWednesdaynight,ourSandyfollowedKaylaontothestagewithconfidence.Thespotlightshoneonthem,andSandyshowednosignofnervousnessortimidity.Itskillfullycompletedeveryaction,cooperatingwithKaylaseamlessly.Theaudiencewasattractedbyitscutenessandliveliness,burstingintolaughterandapplausefromtimetotime.Whentheperformanceendedandthethunderousapplausefilledthehall,Iwassoexcitedthattearswelledupinmyeyes.Thisthree-leggeddognotonlysuccessfullycompletedtheperformancebutalsohelpedmeregainmyloveandconfidenceinacting.Iknewthatthisexperiencewouldbecomeanunforgettablememoryinmylife.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Duringthelunchbreak,ImademywaytoMr.Loomis'soffice,myheartthumpinglikeadrum.AllmannerofanticipationsswirledwithinmeasIcontemplatedthepotentialreactionstothethree-leggedcanine.AsIentered,theresatMr.Loomis,hisexpressioninscrutable.Withbatedbreath,Iusheredinthedog.Instantly,Mr.Loomis'seyeslitupwithaglimmerofintrigue.Hekneltdown,andashedidso,itwasasifhehaddiscoveredahiddengem."Thisdog,"heexclaimed,"possessesaninnatecharmandafocusthatisnothingshortofperfectforSandy!"Awaveofreliefwashedoverme,andIvowedthenandtheretoensurethisremarkabledogwoulddazzleonthestage.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)OnWednesdaynight,asthecurtainrose,ourSandytrottedalongsideKaylawithanairofself-assurance.Thespotlightbathedtheminagoldenglow,andSandy,unfazedbytheaudience'sgaze,executedeachmovementw
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