高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+獨(dú)自在家時(shí)的恐懼與意外轉(zhuǎn)折+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)獨(dú)自在家時(shí)的恐懼與意外轉(zhuǎn)折1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Oneday,Iwasaloneathomebecausemyfamilyhadallgonetoanothercitytoattendawedding.Althoughitwasmyfirsttimestayingathome,Istillrefusedmymother’ssuggestiontogototheneighborJenkins’shouse.Thatoddoldman,wholookslikeabadguyinafairytale,isoftenlaughedatandtalkedaboutbynearbychildren.Itisobviousthatheisapersonwithoutfriends,exceptformykindparents.Asinstructedbymymother,Ilockedthedoor,didmyhomeworkfirst,andthenturnedontheTV.JustasIwasenjoyingmyfavoriteanimatedseries,athunderoussoundrangout,andthentheTVwentout.Evenworse,thelightswentoutandeverythingwentdark.Itriedtopullmyselftogetherandfindasourceoflight.Icouldhardlyseeanything,soIhadtowavemyarmsinfrontofmetoavoidhittinganyfurniture.ImovedtowardsthekitchencabinetwhereIcouldremembermymotherstoringsomecandlesforemergencies.4續(xù)寫原文Suddenly,Iheardfootstepscomingtowardsmyhouse.Myheartwasfilledwithtension.Whocouldthatbe?Itcan’tbeMomandDad,theyhavebeensettingoffforhalfaday,andbynowtheymayhavearrivedattheirdestination.That’sthethief!Iconfidentlytoldmyself.Myheartracedasthefootstepsgrewcloser,andInervouslygraspedakitchenknifetodefendmyself.ButbeforeIcouldevengraspit,agentleknockcameonthedoor,followedbyafamiliarvoice.“Hello?Iseverythingalrightthere?”ItwasMr.Jenkins.Howwasithim?Didhewanttostealthingswhilemyparentsarenotaround?Despitemyinitialfear,somethingabouthistonefeltreassuring.Ihesitatedforamoment,andthencautiouslyapproachedthedoor.“Mr.Jenkins?Whatareyoudoinghere?”Iaskedthroughthelockeddoor.5段首句Paragraph1：“Canyouopenthedoor?”herepliedinasteadyvoice.Paragraph2：Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了“我”獨(dú)自在家的經(jīng)歷。家人去外地參加婚禮，“我”拒絕去鄰居詹金斯先生家，因?yàn)樗１缓⒆觽兂靶ψh論，看起來像壞人?！拔摇卑茨赣H指示鎖門、做作業(yè)后看電視，卻遭遇停電，屋內(nèi)一片漆黑。正摸索找蠟燭時(shí)，聽到有人朝家走來，“我”以為是小偷，心提到嗓子眼，還緊張地拿起菜刀準(zhǔn)備自衛(wèi)。結(jié)果是詹金斯先生敲門詢問情況，這讓“我”十分意外，也打破了對(duì)他的固有偏見，后續(xù)可能會(huì)改變對(duì)他的看法，故事在此留下懸念，引發(fā)讀者對(duì)鄰里關(guān)系的思考。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：“Canyouopenthedoor?”herepliedinasteadyvoice.在門后，內(nèi)心十分糾結(jié)，一方面還是有些害怕，畢竟之前對(duì)他印象不佳；另一方面，他的聲音又讓我覺得或許他沒有惡意。猶豫了好一會(huì)兒，我才小心翼翼地將手搭在門把手上，緩緩轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。門開了一條縫，我警惕地看著他。只見詹金斯先生手里拿著一支手電筒和一盒火柴，他輕聲說：“孩子，我想著你可能需要這些。停電了，一個(gè)人在家會(huì)害怕吧。”看著他真誠的眼神，我心中的防備漸漸放下，把門完全打開，讓他進(jìn)了屋，同時(shí)為自己剛剛的胡亂猜測感到有些不好意思。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.當(dāng)我們坐在廚房的桌子旁，詹金斯先生開始講起他小時(shí)候的趣事。他的表情變得生動(dòng)起來，眼睛里閃爍著光芒，繪聲繪色地描述著他和小伙伴們?cè)谔镆袄锉寂苕覒颍绾瓮低档卦卩従蛹业臉渖险?，還有一次不小心掉進(jìn)泥坑卻哈哈大笑的經(jīng)歷。我聽得入了迷，跟著他一起歡笑，剛才的緊張和恐懼早已煙消云散。搖曳的燭光映照著我們，在這溫馨的氛圍里，我突然意識(shí)到自己之前對(duì)他的看法是多么狹隘和錯(cuò)誤。他根本不是我想象中那個(gè)孤僻古怪的人，而是一個(gè)有著溫暖內(nèi)心、充滿生活智慧的鄰居。這次意外的交流，讓我徹底改變了對(duì)他的印象，也讓我明白了不能以貌取人的道理。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)"Canyouopenthedoor?"herepliedinasteadyvoice.MyheartpoundedinmychestasIstoodfrozenforamoment.Iwasstillfilledwithdoubtsandfears,buttherewasalsoaglimmerofcuriosityaboutwhathereallywanted.Afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,Isummonedthecouragetomoveclosertothedoor.Withashakyhand,Ireachedforthelockandslowlyturnedit.Asthedoorcreakedopenslightly,Ipeekedoutthroughthenarrowgap.TherewasMr.Jenkins,holdingaflashlightinonehandandaboxofmatchesintheother."Ithoughtyoumightbeinneedoftheseinthedark.Itcanbescarybeingaloneduringapoweroutage,"hesaidsoftly,withareassuringsmile.Hiswordsandthekindnessinhiseyesmademefeelabitguiltyformypreviousunfoundedsuspicions.Itookadeepbreathandopenedthedoorwider,allowinghimtostepinside.13范文呈現(xiàn)Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.Hisfacelitupwithanostalgicglowasherecountedtalesofhismischievousadventures.Hetoldmeaboutthetimeheandhispalstriedtobuildatreehouseandendedupwithawobblystructurethatbarelyheldtogether.Andthentherewastheincidentwhentheyattemptedtomaketheirown"secretpotion"usingvariousingredientsfromthekitchen,whichofcourse,turnedouttobeagooeymess.Icouldn'thelpbutlaughalongwithhim,completelyengrossedinhisvividnarratives.Thewarmlightofthecandlesflickered,castingacozyambiancearoundus.Inthatmoment,IrealizedhowwrongIhadbeenabouthim.HewasnotthestrangeandunfriendlypersonIhadperceived.Instead,hewasakind-heartedneighborwithawealthofinterestingexperiencesandabigheart.Thisunexpectedencounterwastrulyaturningpoint,andIknewthatfromthenon,myviewofhimwouldbeforeverchanged.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)"Canyouopenthedoor?"herepliedinasteadyvoice.Tremblingwithamixtureoffearandhesitation,Istoodrootedtothespot.ItwasnotuntilIheardthesincerityinhistonethatImusteredthecouragetoapproachthedoor.Withahandthatshookslightly,Iunlockedit.TherestoodMr.Jenkins,holdingaflashlightandaboxofmatches."Ithoughtyoumightbeinneedofthese,"hesaidgently.LittledidIknowthatthisencounterwouldchangemyperceptionofhim.Embarrassedbymypriorunfoundedjudgment,Ilethimin.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Aswesatatthekitchentable,Mr.Jenkinsbegantosharehisfunnychildhoodstories.Wi