2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+礦洞救援：生死一線的兄弟情+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)礦洞救援：生死一線的兄弟情1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Steve,21,wasleadingasmallteamintoanabandoned(廢棄的)minenearParadisePines,California.Withhimwerehis19-year-oldbrotherAllen,andafishingfriend,32-year-oldBobbyErler.Afteracoupleofhoursofexploring,Stevesuddenlyfelttheearthgivewayunderhim.Thedrainageshaft(排水井)!Hisfingersclawedhelplesslyatthewetsoilashefell.Hewasfallingintodarkness,hisbodystrugglingagainstthewallsoftheshaft.20feetaway,Allenheardaloudcry.“I’mclimbingdown,”hetoldBobby.Withhistorch(手電筒)underhisarm,Allenslidrapidlydownthepipe.“I’mcoming,Steve!”heyelledseveraltimes.Noanswer.AsAllenslidtowardsthebottomofthemineshaft,hesawStevefloatingfacedowninthewater.HeslippedhisarmsroundSteveandpattedhimontheback.WatercameoutofSteve’smouthcontinuously.4續(xù)寫原文“I’mgoingtodie,right?”Stevesaidinaweakvoice.“Noway,”Allensaid.“Bobby’sgoingforhelp.”At3:20pm,Bobbysteppedthroughthedoorofthelocalfirestation,amileandahalffromthetopofthecanyon(峽谷).“Myfriends.Trapped,”hesaid,outofbreath.“LastChanceMine.Youhavetohurry!”O(jiān)nehundredmilesaway,BobTrussell’sphonerangat5pm.LeaderoftheLassenCountySearchandRescueTeam,Trussell,44,hadtheonlyteaminnorthernCaliforniatrainedtoleadminerescues.“I’llpulltogethermyteam,”hesaid,“butit’lltakesometimetogetthere.”Anhourlater,hewasleadingalineofsixtruckstowardsParadisePines.Suddenly,Stevefellunconscious(不省人事的).Allenwonderedhowlongtheycouldholdon.5段首句Paragraph1：SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Paragraph2：Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了史蒂夫帶領(lǐng)團隊在廢棄礦洞探險時掉進(jìn)排水井，弟弟艾倫不顧危險下去營救。艾倫發(fā)現(xiàn)史蒂夫臉朝下浮在水中，設(shè)法讓他吐出積水。與此同時，鮑比去消防局求助，救援隊隨后趕來。在等待救援的過程中史蒂夫失去意識，最終被救出送往醫(yī)院。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.艾倫發(fā)現(xiàn)史蒂夫掉進(jìn)排水井后，迅速順著管道下滑，在黑暗中摸索著靠近史蒂夫。他發(fā)現(xiàn)史蒂夫臉朝下浮在水中，急忙將他扶起，讓他吐出積水。艾倫不斷鼓勵史蒂夫，同時呼喊著希望有人能聽到。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.鮑比向消防局求助后，救援人員迅速趕來。他們順著管道下到排水井，將史蒂夫和艾倫救出。史蒂夫被送往醫(yī)院，艾倫守在他身邊。最終史蒂夫脫離危險，兄弟倆劫后余生。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Itwasabeamoflightfromtherescueteam'sflashlight.Thelightgrewbrighterastheyloweredaropedowntheshaft.AllenquicklytiedtheropearoundSteveandhimself.Withthehelpoftheteamabove,theywereslowlypulledup.Astheyreachedthetopoftheshaft,therescueteamquicklycarriedStevetothewaitingambulance.13范文呈現(xiàn)Stevewasrushedtothehospitalatonce.Thedoctorsimmediatelybegantotreathim.Allenwaitedanxiouslyoutsidetheemergencyroom.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,thedoctorcameoutandtoldAllenthatStevewasoutofdanger.Allenfeltahugereliefwashoverhim.Hewasgratefulfortherescueteam'seffortsandthehelptheyhadreceived.Steve'srecoverywasalongprocess,butwiththesupportofhisfamilyandfriends,hewasable14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Itwasabeamoflightfromtherescueteam'sflashlight,cuttingthroughthedarknessoftheshaft.Thelightgrewbrighterastherescueteamloweredaropedown.AllenquicklytiedtheropearoundSteveandhimself,hishandsshakingwithurgency.Withthehelpoftheteamabove,theywereslowlypulledup,thesoundoftheirbootsscrapingagainsttheroughwallsoftheshaft.Astheyreachedthetop,therescueteamrushedtocarryStevetothewaitingambulance.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Stevewasrushedtothehospitalatonce.Thedoctorsimmediatelybegantotreathim,theirfacesseriousandfocused.Allenwaitedanxiouslyoutsidetheemergencyroom,hisheartpoundingwithworry.Afterwhatseemedlikehours,thedoctorcameoutandtoldAllenthatStevewasoutofdanger.Allenletoutasighofrelief,feelingawaveofgratitudetowardstherescueteam.Steve's