讀后續(xù)寫：硬漢騎手的溫柔心+講義-2025屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)

讀后續(xù)寫：硬漢騎手的溫柔心講義讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary（紀(jì)錄片）aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers-verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen-allwearinginsignia（徽章）thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub-standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意：（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.原文解讀與續(xù)寫思路原文講述了一位熱愛動(dòng)物的女士獨(dú)自去參加救助動(dòng)物紀(jì)錄片的故事。在前往活動(dòng)的路上，她遇到了一群外形“兇悍”的騎士，這讓她感到恐懼和不安。然而，這次經(jīng)歷最終讓她感受到人與動(dòng)物之間的美好聯(lián)系，并對(duì)騎士們有了全新的認(rèn)識(shí)。這個(gè)故事的情感轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)在于從“恐懼”到“釋然”，再到“感動(dòng)”。續(xù)寫時(shí)需要抓住以下要點(diǎn)：人物心理：恐懼、猶豫到釋然。情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折：騎士身份反轉(zhuǎn)，從讓人害怕到展現(xiàn)他們善良的一面。情感升華：通過騎士的行動(dòng)傳遞人性善良和動(dòng)物保護(hù)的主題。主旨點(diǎn)題：升華人與動(dòng)物和諧共處的重要性。第一段：內(nèi)心沖突與轉(zhuǎn)折續(xù)寫開頭：Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.情感描寫（固定句1）描寫主人公看到騎士時(shí)的恐懼與緊張。示例：AwaveofpanicsurgedthroughmeasInoticedtheroomwasfilledwithbikers.細(xì)節(jié)描寫（非固定句）展現(xiàn)騎士們的外貌與主人公的觀察。示例：Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andintimidatingstaresmademyheartraceevenfaster.動(dòng)作鏈推進(jìn)（固定句3）通過主人公的動(dòng)作，推動(dòng)情節(jié)向下一步發(fā)展。示例：Clutchingmytickettightly,Iquicklyfoundaseatattheback,tryingtoremainunnoticed.沖突鋪墊（固定句4）預(yù)示情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折，暗示騎士們并非主人公想象的那樣。示例：ButasIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingaprojectorandanothergentlypattingasmalldogbyhisside.情感推進(jìn)（非固定句）主人公從恐懼到疑惑，為轉(zhuǎn)折做鋪墊。示例：Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.第二段：情感升華與主題點(diǎn)明續(xù)寫開頭：Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.情節(jié)轉(zhuǎn)折（固定句5）揭示騎士的真實(shí)身份，帶來情感的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。示例：NosoonerhadthefilmstartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.環(huán)境描寫（非固定句）描寫放映廳溫暖的氛圍，為情感升華鋪墊。示例：Theroomwasfilledwiththesofthumoftheprojector,andthebikerswatchedthefilmwithquietreverence.動(dòng)作與情感結(jié)合（非固定句）通過騎士們的行為展現(xiàn)他們的善良和對(duì)動(dòng)物的熱愛。示例：Duringthescreening,onebikercradledatinypuppy,hisroughhandsgentleashefeditfromasmallbottle.結(jié)局升華（固定句9）主人公感悟人與動(dòng)物的和諧，情感得到升華。示例：Bytheendoftheevening,Ifeltawaveofgratitudeandwarmth,realizingthattruekindnessoftencomesinunexpectedforms.主題點(diǎn)睛（固定句10）點(diǎn)明故事主旨，傳遞動(dòng)物保護(hù)和善良的意義。示例：Thisexperiencetaughtmethatcompassiontranscendsappearancesandthateveryonecanplayaroleinmakingtheworldbetterforanimals.續(xù)寫范文Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.

AwaveofpanicsurgedthroughmeasInoticedtheroomwasfilledwithbikers.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andintimidatingstaresmademyheartraceevenfaster.Clutchingmytickettightly,Iquicklyfoundaseatattheback,tryingtoremainunnoticed.ButasIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingaprojectorandanothergentlypattingasmalldogbyhisside.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.

NosoonerhadthefilmstartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.Theroomwasfilledwiththesofthumoftheprojector,andthebikerswatchedthefilmwithquietreverence.Duringthescreening,onebikercradledatinypuppy,hisroughhandsgentleashefeditfromasmallbottle.Bytheendof