高中英語讀后續(xù)寫練習+少年守護魚鷹勇對偷獵危機+課件-2025屆高三上學期英語一輪復習專項

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習少年守護魚鷹，勇對偷獵危機1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Myname’sDonBall.I’mfifteenandIgotoBluewayComprehensiveSchool,Mikeisthesameageandgoestothelocalgrammarschool,butwe’vebeenfriendssincejuniorschool,WebothliveinthevillageofSaltley,whichisintheMidlands.We’vebeenbirdwatchingtogethersincewewere11.Isupposewe’requitegoodatitnow,becausewedoitregularly,readaboutit,usetheNettofindoutaboutbirds,andwe’remembersofaclubforbirdwatchers,too.Wehaveasecretplace,namedRP,towatchbirds.RPisthenamewegavetoasetofthreesmalllakessurroundedbywoods.TheyarecalledRedman’sPoolsonlargemaps,butlotsofpeopledon’tknowtheyaretherebecausetheyarehiddenbytrees.4續(xù)寫原文Oneday,Miketoldmethathesawosprey(魚鷹)there,whichsurprisedme.Thereweren’tanyinBritainbecausethey’dbeenhuntedtoomuch.TheywereprotectedbytheRSPB,becauselotsofpeoplewantedtheeggsfortheircollections.BynowtheospreyshadfinishedbuildingtheirnestatthetopofoneofthepinetreesontheislandinthemiddleofBigPool,Ofcourse,westillwenttowatchthemeveryweekend,andacoupleofnightsafterschool,nowthatthedaysweregettinglonger.5續(xù)寫原文OneSaturdayweweresurprisedtofindawhitecarparkedontheroadsidenearthetrack,andaswewheeledourbikesdownthetracktoRedman’sPoolswesawamiddle-agedmanwalkingalongthesideofthepoolswithalargeblueplasticbagoverhisshoulder.Hestoppedatthepointwherethebankwasclosesttotheislandandstarteddoingsomethingwiththebag.IwashorrifiedbywhatIsaw.Themanhadtakenasmallinflatable(可充氣的)plasticboatoutofhisbluebag,andhewasblowingitup.6段首句Paragraph1：Hewasgoingtorowovertotheospreys’island!Paragraph2：Seeinghimclimbingupthetree,Iknewitwasthetimetocallthepolice.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析915歲的唐?鮑爾和朋友邁克自小學起就是好友，他們都熱愛觀鳥。在名為RP的秘密觀鳥地，原本絕跡于英國的魚鷹出現(xiàn)并筑巢。一天，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)一輛白色轎車停在附近，一個中年男子背著藍色塑料袋走向池塘。男子從袋中拿出充氣船，準備劃船前往魚鷹所在的島嶼，這讓他們意識到危險。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:

Hewasgoingtorowovertotheospreys’island!他打算劃船前往魚鷹所在的島嶼！我和邁克瞬間瞪大了眼睛，內(nèi)心充滿了震驚與憤怒。我們深知魚鷹是極其珍貴且受保護的鳥類，這個男子的舉動必定不懷好意。我們立刻大聲呼喊：“喂！你在干什么！快停下！”然而，男子仿佛沒有聽見一般，依舊自顧自地忙碌著。他迅速將充氣船吹好，放入水中，隨后準備登上船。看著他一步步靠近魚鷹的巢穴，我們心急如焚。邁克緊緊握住拳頭，低聲說：“絕不能讓他得逞！”我們一邊留意著男子的動向，一邊試圖尋找阻止他的辦法。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Seeinghimclimbingupthetree,Iknewitwasthetimetocallthepolice.看到他爬上樹，我知道是時候報警了。我顫抖著雙手掏出手機，快速撥通了報警電話。我向警察清晰地描述了男子的位置、外貌以及他正在對魚鷹巢穴進行破壞的緊急情況。與此同時，邁克在一旁不斷觀察著男子的舉動，隨時向我匯報。男子在樹上翻找著什么，似乎在尋找魚鷹的蛋。時間一分一秒過去，每一秒都讓人煎熬。終于，我們聽到了遠處傳來警笛聲，心中燃起了希望。警察迅速趕到現(xiàn)場，將男子制服。魚鷹和它們的巢穴終于安全了，我和邁克長舒了一口氣，為成功保護了這些珍貴的鳥兒而感到無比欣慰。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Hewasgoingtorowovertotheospreys’island!MikeandIwereimmediatelywide-eyed,filledwithshockandanger.Wewerewellawarethatospreyswereextremelypreciousandprotectedbirds,andthisman'sactionsweresurelymalicious.Weimmediatelyshoutedatthetopofourvoices,"Hey!Whatareyoudoing!Stoprightnow!"However,themanseemedtoturnadeafearandcontinuedhisactions.Hequicklyinflatedtheplasticboatandputitintothewater,thenpreparedtogetonboard.Watchinghimgettingcloserandclosertotheospreys'nest,wewereextremelyanxious.Mikeclenchedhisfiststightlyandsaidinalowvoice,"Wemustn'tlethimsucceed!"Wekeptacloseeyeontheman'smovementswhiletryingtofindawaytostophim.14范文呈現(xiàn)Seeinghimclimbingupthetree,Iknewitwasthetimetocallthepolice.Itookoutmyphonewithtremblinghandsandquicklydialedthepolicenumber.Iclearlydescribedtothepolicetheman'slocation,appearance,andtheurgentsituationofhimdestroyingtheospreys'nest.Meanwhile,Mikekeptobservingtheman'sactionsbesidemeandreportedtomeatanytime.Themanwasrummagingaroundinthetree,seeminglylookingfortheospreys'eggs.Everysecondpassedwasagonizing.Finally,weheardthesoundofpolicesirensinthedistance,andhopeignitedinourhearts.Thepolicearrivedatthescenequicklyandsubduedtheman.Theospreysandtheirnestwerefinallysafe.MikeandIletoutalongsighofrelief,feelingextremelygratifiedforsuccessfullyprotectingthesepreciousbirds.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Hewasgoingtorowovertotheospreys’island!Instantly,MikeandIwererenderedwide-eyed,ourheartspoundingwithapotentmixofshockandindignation.Beingacutelyawarethatospreyswereofgreatpreciousnessandunderstrictprotection,weknewalltoowellthatthisman'sactionsreekedofmalice.Withouthesitation,webellowedatthetopofourlungs,"Hey!Ceaseyouractionsimmediately!Whatonearthareyouupto?"Nevertheless,themanremainedimpervioustoourpleas,continuinghispreparationsunabated.Withremarkablespeed,heinflatedtheplasticboatandlauncheditintothewater,thenmadetoboardit.Aswewatchedhiminchclosertotheospreys'nest,asenseofoverwhelminganxietygrippedus.Mike,hisknuckleswhitefromclenchinghisfists,mutteredunderhisbreath,"Wesimplycannotlethimgetawaywiththis!"Withunwaveringfocus,wemonitoredtheman'severymove,allthewhilerackingourbrainsforameanstohalthisnefariousplan.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Seeinghimclimbingupthetree,Iknewwithoutashadowofadoubtthatitwashightimetocallthepolice.Withhandsshakinguncontrollably,Ifumbledformyphoneandpunchedintheemergencynumberwithurgency.Iprovidedthepolicewithameticulousdescriptionoftheman'swhereabouts,physicalappearance,andthediresituationofhimmaraudingtheospreys'nest.Simultaneously,Mike,positionedbesideme,keptavigilanteyeontheman'sactions,relayingupdatestomewithoutdelay.Theman,meanwhile,was