專題六-書面表達(dá)-09-祝賀類(解析版)

體裁命題形式寫作主題2022新高考I卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談II卷應(yīng)用文邀請(qǐng)信寫郵件邀請(qǐng)外教進(jìn)行一次訪談全國(guó)卷乙卷說(shuō)明文投稿利用填表調(diào)查結(jié)果給報(bào)社投稿甲卷應(yīng)用文投稿以世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿2021新高考I卷應(yīng)用文投稿校刊youth慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福II卷應(yīng)用文投稿?？痽outh慶祝十周年，向?？磉_(dá)自己經(jīng)歷，并送上祝福全國(guó)卷乙卷應(yīng)用文發(fā)言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”為主題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽甲卷應(yīng)用文征求建議征求外國(guó)朋友建議，哪些中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國(guó)友人2020全國(guó)卷I卷應(yīng)用文投稿寫一篇以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題投稿參賽II卷應(yīng)用文日記寫一篇英文短文介紹上周末采摘活動(dòng)III卷應(yīng)用文求助信給外教寫一封信，請(qǐng)幫忙指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)中，祝賀信使用的頻率很高，當(dāng)親友晉升、畢業(yè)、獲獎(jiǎng)等時(shí)會(huì)寫祝賀信。祝賀信的用詞應(yīng)親切有禮，表達(dá)出真誠(chéng)的喜悅之情。結(jié)構(gòu)一般如下：①、點(diǎn)明祝賀事由并表示祝賀②、詳述祝賀的事情并肯定對(duì)方為此付出的努力③、再次祝賀并表示祝愿素材精粹【高分句型】首段：表明寫信目的I'mwritingtocongratulateyouon...../Hearingthatyou.....，I'mwritingtocongratulateyou.我寫信是為了祝賀你…/獲悉你……，我寫信向你表示祝賀。Goodnewstravelsfast！Pleaseacceptmysincere/warmcongratulationson.....好消息傳得快！請(qǐng)接受我對(duì)……真誠(chéng)的/熱烈的祝賀。主體部分：陳述對(duì)方獲得成功的原因Youwouldnothaveachievedthiswithoutdiligenceandperseverance.沒有勤奮和毅力，你是不可能做到這一點(diǎn)的。Personally，itisyourutmosteffortsto......thatleadtoyourbrilliantachievements.在我看來(lái)，正是你對(duì)…付出的最大努力給你帶來(lái)輝煌成就。尾段：再次表示祝賀Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer！祝你前程似錦/事業(yè)有成！I'msureatalentedpersonlikeyouwillmakegreaterachievementsandliveafullerlife.我相信像你這樣有才華的人將會(huì)取得更大的成就，過(guò)上更充實(shí)的生活。佳作共賞DearMr.Johns，Goodnewstravelsfast！I'msoexcitedtohearthatyouhavebeenratedasoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.I'mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulationstoyou.Icansincerelysaythatyoudeservethetitle.Wehaveseenhowmucheffortyouhaveputinteaching.Besides，kindandknowledgeable，youalwayshaveawayofmakingyourclasslivelyandinteresting.HowluckyIamtobeyourstudent！IhopeonedayIcanbeateacherlikeyou.Pleaseacceptmysincerestcongratulationsandbestwishes.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua*注：本書"佳作共賞"欄目中畫波浪線的部分可作模板背誦。（2022·四川省內(nèi)江市第六中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假如你是李華。最近收到筆友John的電子郵件，得知他在學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽（Englishcompetition）中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)跟據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫封電子郵件。1.祝賀他取得的優(yōu)異成績(jī)；2.告訴他你在學(xué)習(xí)中的苦與樂(lè)；3.請(qǐng)他介紹他的學(xué)習(xí)方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJohn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyougotthefirstprizeintheEnglishcompetitioninyourschool.Congratulations!Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.It'sbeentwoyearssinceIenteredtheseniorhighschool.SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.ButIfeelcontentmoreoftenbecausestudyoccupiesmostofmytime,forIknowsuccessliesinhardwork.OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.Youaresogoodatstudying,sowouldyoupleaseintroducesomeofyourlearningmethodstome?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生向筆友John寫一封信，祝賀John在英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，并分享自己在學(xué)習(xí)中的苦與樂(lè)，向他求教學(xué)習(xí)方法。【詳解】1.詞匯積累高興：glad→happy導(dǎo)致、帶來(lái)：contributeto→resultin/leadto沮喪的：depressed→dejected/disheartened源自于：liein→resultfrom2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.拓展句：OnlyifIcanmakeeveryeffort,Icanrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）（2022·山東師范大學(xué)附中模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華。你校交換生Henry在校英語(yǔ)報(bào)舉行的“留學(xué)生講中國(guó)故事”征文比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，并將代表學(xué)校去市里參加比賽，他寫信向你征求意見。請(qǐng)你給他封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示祝賀；2．詢問(wèn)備賽情況并給出建議；3．預(yù)祝成功。注意：1．寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearHenry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHenry,Hearingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheessaycompetitionof“ForeignStudentsTellingChineseStories”heldbyourschoolEnglishnewspaper,IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations.AsfarasIknow,youwillgotothecitytoparticipateinthecompetitiononbehalfofourschool.I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.Igreatlysupportyouractiveparticipationinthiscompetition.Thecompetitioncallsfordailypractice,confidenceandperseverance.Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.Besides,youshouldhaveenoughsleepandgetfamiliarwiththecompetitionrulesandenvironment.Practicemakesperfect!Lookingforwardtoyourexcellentperformanceandbeingawardedinthecompetition.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給交換生Henry回信，對(duì)他獲得“留學(xué)生講中國(guó)故事”征文比賽一等獎(jiǎng)表示祝賀，同時(shí)詢問(wèn)備賽情況并給出建議，最后預(yù)祝成功?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累比賽：competition→match建議：suggestion→advice此外：besides→what’smore參加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.拓展句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowyoucanprepareforthecompetition.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations..(運(yùn)用了so…..that…..句型)【高分句型2】Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句的省略)（2022·寧夏·石嘴山市第三中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會(huì)期間提供志愿者服務(wù)，并被評(píng)為優(yōu)秀志愿者。請(qǐng)你給他寫封電子郵件，表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對(duì)安排的相關(guān)事宜；注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAnn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearAnn，KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.AndI'dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I'msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生對(duì)于你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會(huì)期間提供志愿者服務(wù)，并被評(píng)為優(yōu)秀志愿者的事情，寫封電子郵件，表示祝賀?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：selected→chosen此外：Inaddition→what’smore高興：happy→glad/pleased渴望：beeagerto→longfor2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.拓展句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefood,whichwascookedbymyself.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.（運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語(yǔ)。）【高分句型2】Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.（運(yùn)用了連詞who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。）（2022·吉林長(zhǎng)春·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，聽說(shuō)英國(guó)朋友John所在的籃球隊(duì)獲得了學(xué)?；@球比賽的冠軍。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.祝賀獲獎(jiǎng)；2.肯定付出；3.期待見面交流。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJohn,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupinthebasketballcompetition.Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.Asyoutoldmebefore,therewereservealoutstandingbasketballteamscompetinginthisbasketballgame,andit’sreallyhardtowinthisgame.However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopractiseplayingbasketball.Yourpassionforbasketballsometimesexceedsmyimagination.Youdeservetowinthisprize!Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生按要求給英國(guó)朋友John寫一封電子郵件，祝賀他所在的籃球隊(duì)獲得了學(xué)?；@球比賽的冠軍?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累開心的：delighted→glad/cheerful出色的：outstanding→excellent/remarkable熱情：passion→enthusiasm值得：deserve→beworthyof2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball.拓展句：Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball,soyoumadeitatlast.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.(運(yùn)用how引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.(運(yùn)用sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句)（2022·河南·寶豐縣第一高級(jí)中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Ann在北京冬奧會(huì)期間提供了志愿服務(wù)并且被評(píng)選為優(yōu)秀志愿者。請(qǐng)你給她寫封電子郵件表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對(duì)的安排。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAnn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAnn,KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.AndI’dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I’msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給新西蘭朋友Ann寫封電子郵件，對(duì)她被評(píng)選為北京冬奧會(huì)優(yōu)秀志愿者表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.告知慶祝派對(duì)的安排。【詳解】1.詞匯積累選擇：select→choose高興的：happy→delighted禮物：gift→present提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.拓展句：IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening,thepurposeofwhichistocelebrateyourachievement.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)（2022·全國(guó)·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友John獲得了在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.祝賀獲獎(jiǎng)；2.肯定付出；3.期待見面交流。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.IknowyouwerenotverygoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpractisedspeakingChinesealmosteveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.”Andyoureffortspaidoffatlast!Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoonandcatchinguponalltheupdates.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給你的英國(guó)朋友John寫一封電子郵件，祝賀他在華高中留學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累想要：wouldliketo→wantto比賽：competition→match冠軍：champion→winner期望：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展句式轉(zhuǎn)換原句：IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.拓展句：KnowingthatyouhavewonthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyou.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.（運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句）（2022·北京·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生好友Andy在你市舉辦的“中國(guó)成語(yǔ)大會(huì)”比賽中獲得了外國(guó)選手組一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧他付出的努力；3.期待交流。參考詞匯：中國(guó)成語(yǔ)大會(huì)：ChineseIdiomContest注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAndy,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAndy,Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.Forseveralyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChineseidioms,NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.Youdeservetheprize.Hopetohaveatalkwithyouandexchangeourexperienceoflearningidioms.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。你的留學(xué)生好友Andy在市舉辦的“中國(guó)成語(yǔ)大會(huì)”比賽中獲得了外國(guó)選手組一等獎(jiǎng)。要求考生給他寫一封電子郵件?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累提供：offer→provide驚奇：surprise→astonishment比賽：contest→competition熱情：enthusiasm→warmth2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.拓展句：WhenIlearnthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.（運(yùn)用了notonly…butalso…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒裝）（2022·湖南常德·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）在2022年北京冬奧會(huì)上，EileenGu（谷愛凌）獲得了兩金一銀的好成績(jī)，她的自信、聰慧和勤奮給我們留下了深刻印象。假設(shè)你是李華，你校外刊開設(shè)了“WhatIwanttosaytoEileenGu”專欄，請(qǐng)你給她寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.對(duì)她的成就表示祝賀；2.作為同齡人她對(duì)你的影響和啟迪；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按以下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearEileen,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Iamimpressedbyyourconfidence,intelligenceanddiligence.Yourattitudetowardslifewillneverstopinfluencingmythoughtsandactions.Wishyouliveamorewonderfullife.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給我國(guó)選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封信，祝賀她在北京冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)上贏得了兩金一銀的好成績(jī)、她對(duì)你的影響和啟迪以及表達(dá)對(duì)她的祝愿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累為……作貢獻(xiàn)：contributeto→makeacontributionto以……為驕傲：beproudof→takepridein鼓舞：inspire→encourage決定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）（2022·北京·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你用英文給我國(guó)選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封祝賀信。她在第24屆北京冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)上贏得兩金一銀獎(jiǎng)牌，為中國(guó)隊(duì)獎(jiǎng)牌數(shù)名列前三做出了突出貢獻(xiàn)。內(nèi)容包括：1．表示祝賀；2．她在奧運(yùn)會(huì)上的優(yōu)異成績(jī)；3．個(gè)人感想。注意事項(xiàng)：1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右；2．開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使語(yǔ)句連貫、通順。DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Theotherday,whenwatchingtheraceonTV,Iwasfullyattractedbyyourexcellentperformanceinyourevents.AndIfeltthrilledandcheeredforyouthemomentyoureachedyourgoalsskillfullyandsuccessfully.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給我國(guó)選手谷愛凌（EileenGu）寫一封祝賀信，祝賀她在第24屆北京冬季奧運(yùn)會(huì)上贏得兩金一銀獎(jiǎng)牌，為中國(guó)隊(duì)獎(jiǎng)牌數(shù)名列前三做出了突出貢獻(xiàn)。【詳解】1.詞匯積累以……為驕傲：beproudof→takepridein興奮的：thrilled→excited實(shí)現(xiàn)：reach→achieve決定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句和which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）（2022·四川·石室中學(xué)模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。你的學(xué)長(zhǎng)兼好友林波被北京大學(xué)錄取，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件表示祝賀。內(nèi)容如下：1．表示祝賀；2．你的感受和評(píng)價(jià)；3．請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法。注意：1．詞數(shù)100詞左右；2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLinBo,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLinBo,How'severythinggoing?HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.Beingyourbestfriend,I’mmorethanproudofyou.Asamatteroffact,itcameasnosurprisetomethatyoumadeit.Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.Itwasallyoureffortthatpaidoff.Asaseniorthreestudent,whatworriesmeisthatmygradesareaverage.Wouldyoupleasebekindenoughtosharewithmesomeusefulmethodsoflearning,whichwillbeofsignificancetome?Again,congratulations!Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreplytomeandgivemesomesuggestionsatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua【解析】【導(dǎo)讀】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信，假定你是某中學(xué)學(xué)生李華。你的學(xué)長(zhǎng)兼好友林波被北京大學(xué)錄取，請(qǐng)你寫封郵件表示祝賀。內(nèi)容如下：1．表示祝賀；2．你的感受和評(píng)價(jià)；3．請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累一……就：themoment

→assoonas自豪：beproudof→takepridein成功：makeit→succeedindoing實(shí)用的：useful→practical2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.拓展句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasimmediatelyIheardthegoodnews.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))[高分句型2]Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)（2022·全國(guó)·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter在中國(guó)象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)?，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示祝賀，要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示祝賀；2.贊揚(yáng)對(duì)方的付出；3.向?qū)Ψ綄W(xué)習(xí)。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

LiHua【答案】DearPeter,

It'swonderfulthatyouhavewonfirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetitionasaforeigner.Icouldhardlywaittoexpressmysincerecongratulationstoyou.

Inthepastfewyears,youhavespentyourabundanttimeimprovingyourskills.Itisyourdevotion,diligenceanddeterminationthatleadtoyoursuccess.Yousetagoodexampleformeandpushmetomoveforward.Asachesslover,Iwanttoinviteyoutoteachmechessskillsinordertorenewmylevel.

Pleaseletmeknowwhenyouareavailable.Bestwishestoyou.

Yours

LiHua【解析】【詳解】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Peter在中國(guó)象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)?，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示祝賀。【詳解】1.詞匯積累急切做某事：beeagertodo→couldhardlywaittodo祝賀：congratulatesb.onsth→expressone’ssincerecongratulationstosb.大量的時(shí)間：enoughtime→abundan