2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：歲月相伴：與鄰居大衛(wèi)的難忘情誼+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)歲月相伴：與鄰居大衛(wèi)的難忘情誼1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenIwasaroundsixyearsold,wehadaneighbor,David,whowasrestoringanold40’sFordinhisgarage,andIwasacuriouskid,soIwouldgoacrossthestreetandvisithimasoftenasIcould.HewasthefirstpersontointroducemetoGo-Johandsoap,whichIthoughthadanunpleasantsmell.Heandhiswifeoccasionallyinvitedmetohavesupperwiththem,anditwastherethatIwouldlearnaboutburgerswithFrenchdressing.Eventually,hemovedaway.4續(xù)寫原文Afewyearsago,IranintoDavidagain.Hewenttothesamerestauranttohavebreakfast.Davidretiredandstillhadthat1940Fordandalsoamid-fortiestruckwhichhewouldalwaysdrive,oneortheother,tobreakfast.DavidandIenjoyedmanyconversationsaboutlife,cars,andcarshows.Irememberjustafewyearsago,hewassittingatalocalpizzajointwithhisdaughter,andIsatnexttohimtohaveaconversation.Iasked,“Where’syourwife?”Towhichhisfacewentblank,andhisdaughtertoldmehermomhadpassedaway.Atthatmoment,myheartachedbecause,afterhavinglostmywife,Iknewthatpainalltoowell.Fromthenon,InoticedwhenDavidcametobreakfast,hehadhiswife’sdogwithhim.Yep,hehadthatdogwithhimalways.Evenatcarshows,theyhadaclosebondwhichIunderstood.5續(xù)寫原文Ilookedforwardtocarshowseason.WhenIsawhimattheshows,italwaysputanemotionaltearinmyeyewatchinghimandthatdog.Iwantedtogetapictureofhimandhisdog,butIwasalwaysinahurryandkeptsayingIwouldgetitatthenextshow.However,withCOVID-19andallthefearout,carshowsweregettingcanceled,andDavidwasn’tatbreakfastmuchanymorebecausehedidn’twanttocatchit.6段首句Paragraph1：Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Paragraph2：David’sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9“我”六歲左右時，鄰居大衛(wèi)在車庫修復(fù)一輛40年代的福特汽車，“我”常去拜訪他，還在他家接觸到新事物。后來大衛(wèi)搬走，幾年前“我”又與他重逢，我們常聊生活、汽車和車展。大衛(wèi)的妻子去世后，他總帶著妻子的狗。因新冠疫情，車展取消，大衛(wèi)也不常來吃早餐了。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”大約一周前，我去取早餐時，問服務(wù)員坦尼婭：“你最近見過大衛(wèi)嗎？”坦尼婭的神情瞬間變得凝重起來，她輕輕地嘆了口氣說：“大衛(wèi)他……已經(jīng)走了?！甭牭竭@句話，我感覺仿佛被一道晴天霹靂擊中，整個人都僵在了原地。腦海中瞬間浮現(xiàn)出與大衛(wèi)相處的點(diǎn)點(diǎn)滴滴，那些一起聊汽車的歡樂時光，那些在車展上的相遇，還有他帶著妻子的狗時的溫馨畫面。我怎么也想不到，那個總是熱情和我交談的大衛(wèi)，就這樣突然離開了。我的心里空落落的，充滿了無盡的惋惜和不舍。我后悔自己總是因?yàn)榇颐Χ鴽]給大衛(wèi)和他的狗拍張照片，那些本可以留下的美好回憶，如今卻成了遺憾。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：David’sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.大衛(wèi)的去世讓我深刻地反思生命的意義。他的一生，有熱愛的汽車，有相濡以沫的妻子，即便妻子離去后，他也帶著對她的愛堅(jiān)強(qiáng)地生活。這讓我明白，生命的長度或許有限，但我們可以用愛和熱情去填充它的寬度。我們總以為時間還多，很多事可以以后再做，卻不知生命如此脆弱和無常。從那以后，我更加珍惜身邊的人，不再把事情拖延。我會主動和朋友聯(lián)系，花更多時間陪伴家人。大衛(wèi)雖然離開了，但他留給我的回憶和對生命的感悟，將永遠(yuǎn)影響著我。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Tanya'sexpressionturnedsadimmediately.Shetookasoftbreathandsaid,"Davidhaspassedaway."Hearingthis,Iwaslikebeingstruckbylightning.Istoodthere,frozen.MemoriesofbeingwithDavidfloodedintomymind.Thehappytimeswetalkedaboutcars,themeetingsatcarshows,andthewarmsceneswhenhewaswithhiswife'sdog.Icouldn'tbelievethatDavid,whowasalwayssoenthusiastictotalkwithme,wasgone.Myheartwasfilledwithgreatregretandloss.IregrettedthatIalwaysfailedtotakeaphotoofDavidandhisdogbecauseofbeinginahurry.Thosepreciousmemoriesthatcouldhavebeenleftbehindnowbecameregrets.14范文呈現(xiàn)David'sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.Hislifewasfilledwithhisbelovedcarsandhiswife.Evenafterhiswifepassedaway,hestilllivedwiththeloveforher.Thismademeunderstandthatthelengthoflifemaybelimited,butwecanfillitswidthwithloveandpassion.Wealwaysthinkthereisplentyoftimeandmanythingscanbedonelater,butwedon'tknowthatlifeissofragileandunpredictable.Sincethen,Ihavecherishedthepeoplearoundmemoreandstoppedprocrastinating.Iwillactivelycontactmyfriendsandspendmoretimewithmyfamily.AlthoughDavidhasleft,thememoriesheleftmeandtheunderstandingoflifewillalwaysinfluenceme.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Instantly,Tanya'scountenancecloudedoverwithsorrow.Withagentlesigh,shemurmured,"Davidhaspassedaway."Themomentthosewordsreachedmyears,Iwasasifstruckbyaboltoflightning.Istoodrootedtothespot,mymindawhirlwithmemoriesofDavid.Thejovialconversationsaboutcars,theencountersatcarshows,andtheheart-warmingmomentswhenhewasaccompaniedbyhiswife'sdogallcamefloodingback.ItwasalmostimpossibletofathomthatDavid,theever-enthusiasticconversationalist,wasnolongerwithus.Aprofoundsenseofregretandlosswelledupwithinme.IbitterlyregrettedmyconstanthastethathadpreventedmefromcapturingaphotoofDavidandhisdog.Thosepreciousmemoriesthatcouldhavebeenpreservedhadnowslippedthroughmyfingers,leavingbehindonlyavoidofremorse.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)David'sdeathhastrulymademereflectdeeplyonthemeaningoflife.Hislifewasrichwithhispassionforcarsandtheloveofhiswife.Evenafterhiswife'spassing,hecarriedon,buoyedbythelovetheyhadshared.Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatwhilethespanofourlivesmaybefinite,itistheloveandpassionweinfuseintoitthatgiveitdepthandmeaning.Alltoooften,weassu