高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：媽媽的慈善罐傳遞愛與溫暖

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)媽媽的慈善罐，傳遞愛與溫暖1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Ialwaysthinkofmymotherasasuperhero,becausesheneverrunsoutofroominherheartforanyoneoranything.Icouldwriteaboutallofthewonderfulthingsshehasdone,butIwanttofocusononeprojectshedoeseveryyearthathasshapedmywholefamilyandeveryonearoundus:Shesavesmoney,andsheputsitinalittlejar(罐子)thatwerefertoas“TheCharityJar”.Everyyear,shetakesthismoneyandputsittowardsomething—anactofkindness,anythingthatcanhelpsomeone.Sometimes,shebuyssomethingforanorganizationthatneedsit.Ifyouaskheraboutthistradition,shewilltellyouthatsheiscarryingonsomethingthathermotherusedtodoaroundtheholidays.Ifyouaskanyoneelsewhoknowsher,however,theywilltellyouthatshehasahugeheart.Shemanagestogetourwholefamilyinvolved(參與)inthismovementeveryyear.Lastyear,shehelpedanorganizationwhereIvolunteered—Ruth’sPlace—ahomelesswomen’sshelterinWilkes-Barre,Pennsylvania.4續(xù)寫原文IhadbeenhelpingaprofessorrunawritingworkshopintheshelterwhenInoticedthewishlistonthewall:warmclothes,acoffeemakerandsupplies.Itoldmymom,andwithinaday,shehadalreadyaskedifourfamilywantedtohelpRuth’sPlace.Weallagreedanddecidedthatthecoffeemakerandsupplieswouldbethebestthingsforourfamilytoworkontogether.Afewdayslater,Momfoundacoffeemakeronline,andshowedittous.Withafewclicks,itwasonitsway.Shealsobaked(烘焙)freshchocolatecupcakesforthewomenintheshelter.Wegatheredtherestofthesuppliesandcalledthesheltertofindadaywhenwecoulddeliverthem.5段首句Paragraph1：ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.Paragraph2：Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”視媽媽為超級英雄，她每年都有個特別的傳統(tǒng)——將攢下的錢放進“慈善罐”，用于幫助他人。這一傳統(tǒng)源于外婆。去年，“我”在一家為無家可歸女性設(shè)立的庇護所做志愿者，向媽媽提及那里的愿望清單。媽媽很快組織全家參與，購買了咖啡機等物資，并烤制了巧克力紙杯蛋糕，準(zhǔn)備送去庇護所。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.那天，我小心翼翼地開車載著媽媽前往庇護所，心里既興奮又緊張。一路上，媽媽不停地念叨著希望這些東西能給大家?guī)韼椭?。到達后，工作人員熱情地迎了上來，媽媽滿臉笑容，親切地和他們打招呼。緊接著，我們開始搬運物資。媽媽把咖啡機搬到屋內(nèi)，詳細地向工作人員介紹它的功能和使用方法，還不時詢問他們是否還有其他需求。隨后，媽媽又將香噴噴的巧克力紙杯蛋糕端給庇護所的女士們，她們圍攏過來，眼中滿是驚喜與感動。媽媽拉著她們的手，關(guān)切地詢問她們的生活狀況，現(xiàn)場充滿了溫馨。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.離開時，我們收獲了滿滿的感激。女士們和工作人員紛紛走上前來，真誠地向我們道謝。一位女士含著淚說，這些物資和蛋糕讓她們感受到了久違的溫暖。工作人員也表示，我們的幫助對庇護所意義重大。聽著這些真摯的話語，我和媽媽都深受觸動。媽媽對我說，幫助他人能收獲最純粹的快樂。這次經(jīng)歷讓我深刻理解了媽媽的善舉，我暗下決心，以后也要像媽媽一樣，用自己的力量去幫助更多的人，將這份愛傳遞下去。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterveryslowly.Iwasbothexcitedandnervousontheway.Momkeptsayingthatshehopedthesethingscouldbringhelptoeveryone.Whenwearrived,thestaffgreeteduswarmly.Momhadabigsmileonherfaceandgreetedthemaffectionately.Thenwestartedtocarrythesupplies.Momcarriedthecoffeemakerintotheroomandintroduceditsfunctionsandusagemethodstothestaffindetail.Shealsoaskedthemfromtimetotimeiftheyhadanyotherneeds.Afterthat,Mombroughtthefragrantchocolatecupcakestothewomenintheshelter.Theygatheredaround,withsurpriseandgratitudeintheireyes.Momtooktheirhandsandaskedthemabouttheirlivingconditionswithconcern.Thescenewasfullofwarmth.13范文呈現(xiàn)Asweleft,weweremetwithheartfeltthanks.Thewomenandthestaffcameuptousonebyoneandthankedussincerely.Awomansaidwithtearsinhereyesthatthesesuppliesandcupcakesmadethemfeelthelong-lostwarmth.Thestaffalsosaidthatourhelpwasofgreatsignificancetotheshelter.Hearingthesesincerewords,mymomandIweredeeplytouched.Momsaidtomethathelpingotherscouldbringthepuresthappiness.Thisexperiencemademedeeplyunderstandmymom'skindness.Isecretlymadeupmymindthatinthefuture,Iwouldalsousemyownstrengthtohelpmorepeople,justlikemymom,andpassonthislove.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThatdayIdrovemymomtotheshelterataleisurelypace,myheartbrimmingwithablendofexcitementandnervousanticipation.Throughoutthejourney,Momincessantlyexpressedherhopethattheitemswewerebringingwouldbringmuch-neededassistancetothoseattheshelter.Uponourarrival,thestaffwelcomeduswithopenarms,andMom,wearingaradiantsmile,greetedthemwithgenuinewarmth.Withoutdelay,wesetaboutunloadingthesupplies.Momcarefullycarriedthecoffeemakerintothebuildingandmeticulouslyexplaineditsfunctionsandoperationtothestaff,pausingperiodicallytoinquireiftheyhadanyadditionalrequirements.Subsequently,shepresentedthefreshly-bakedchocolatecupcakestothewomenintheshelter.Drawnbytheenticingaroma,theygatheredaround,theireyeswidewithsurpriseandgratitude.Mom,takingeachwoman'shandinhers,engagedinaheartfeltconversation,showingdeepconcernfortheirlivingconditions.Theentirescenewassuffusedwithwarmth.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Aswepreparedtoleave,achorusofheartfeltthanksensued.Thewomenandthestaffapproachedusonebyone,expressingtheirgratitudewithutmostsincerity.Onewoman,hereyesglisteningwithtears,sharedthatthesuppliesandcupcakeshadrekindledasenseofwarmththeyha