讀后續(xù)寫-勇氣與和解：Leah的音樂之旅+居+講義 高三上學期12月聯(lián)考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。LeahhadbeentryingforAuditions(試演)forAll-StateBand.Then,thedaybeforetheaudition,shemetintoRachelJacobs.“So,Leah,IhearyouareauditioningforAll-State.Doyoureallywanttoembarrassyourself?”Rachelsaidsnottily(自負的).RachelandLeahhadbeenfightingforfirstchairintheschoolbandeversinceLeahhadgottenit.“Rachel,I’mstillfirstchair,”Leahreplied.Thatafternoon,Mr.Johnson,theschoolbanddirector,stooduptomakeanannouncement.“Kids,”hesaid,“todayRachelJacobswouldliketochallengeLeahFosterforfirstchair.”Leahwasn’tworried;Rachelhadchallengedherfourtimesandnothinghadcomeofit.However,Leahhitthenotewrong,andhersoundwasnotgoodatall.Rachel,ontheotherhand,playedperfectly.Leahwasshameful.Itwasoneofthebandpiecessheshouldhaveknown.Rachelwasgivenfirstchair,andLeahleftthebandroomwithtears.Shewentthroughtherestofherclassesinahaze.“We’releavingfortheauditioninonehour!”saidMr.Fosterthenextmorning.“Idon’tfeelwell.Maybenextyear,”saidLeah.Thensheburstintotearsandranfromtheroom.Hermomfollowedherintoherbedroomandsatonthefootofherbed.“Oh,Leah.Firstofall,I’veheardyouplayyoursong,andyou’renotgoingtoshameyourself.Braveryisn’taboutnotbeingscared—itmeansdoingsomethingdespitethefactthatyou’reafraid.Andifyougooutthereanddoyourbest,we’llbeproudofyou,nomatterwhattheoutcome.”Leah’smomsmiled.“Sowhatdoyousay?Dowehaveanauditiontogoto?”“Yeah,Iguess,”Leahreplied.“Goodgirl!Getdressednow.Westillhavehalfanhour.”Leahsatoutsidetheauditionroomnervouslygraspingherflute(笛子).Finally,theycalledhername.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:“Congratulations!Youdeserveit,”Leahsaid,stickingoutherhands.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了Leah在參加All-StateBand試演前的一系列經(jīng)歷。Leah在學校樂隊中與Rachel爭奪第一把交椅，兩人之間的競爭一直很激烈。在一次挑戰(zhàn)中，Leah因為緊張而表現(xiàn)不佳，失去了第一把交椅的位置。第二天，面對即將到來的試演，Leah一度想要放棄，但在母親的鼓勵下，她重新振作，勇敢地參加了試演。最終，Leah在試演中表現(xiàn)出色，贏得了評委的認可，并與曾經(jīng)的對手Rachel建立了新的友誼。這個故事展現(xiàn)了勇氣、自我挑戰(zhàn)和友誼的重要性.故事山分析引入：Leah在學校樂隊中與Rachel爭奪第一把交椅，兩人之間的競爭一直很激烈.上升：Rachel挑戰(zhàn)Leah，Leah在挑戰(zhàn)中表現(xiàn)不佳，失去了第一把交椅的位置.高潮：Leah在母親的鼓勵下，勇敢地參加了All-StateBand的試演.下降：Leah在試演中表現(xiàn)出色，贏得了評委的認可.結局：Leah與Rachel建立了新的友誼，兩人的關系得到了改善.五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應伏筆：Leah與Rachel之間的競爭關系.回應：在續(xù)寫中，Leah在試演中的出色表現(xiàn)贏得了評委的認可，同時也贏得了Rachel的尊重，兩人關系有所改善.伏筆：Leah在挑戰(zhàn)中表現(xiàn)不佳，失去了第一把交椅的位置.回應：在續(xù)寫中，Leah在母親的鼓勵下，重新振作，勇敢地參加了試演，最終表現(xiàn)出色.伏筆：Leah在母親的鼓勵下，重新振作.回應：在續(xù)寫中，Leah在試演中表現(xiàn)出色，證明了母親的話是正確的，勇氣不是不害怕，而是盡管害怕也要去做.伏筆：Leah對音樂的熱愛.回應：在續(xù)寫中，Leah在試演中的出色表現(xiàn)展現(xiàn)了她對音樂的熱愛和執(zhí)著.伏筆：Leah與Rachel之間的緊張關系.回應：在續(xù)寫中，Leah在試演中的出色表現(xiàn)贏得了Rachel的尊重，兩人關系有所改善，甚至提出一起練習的建議.續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段：Leah在試演中的出色表現(xiàn)，贏得了評委的認可.第二段：Leah與Rachel的關系得到改善，兩人建立了新的友誼.情感線Leah在與Rachel的競爭中經(jīng)歷了挫敗和自我懷疑，但在母親的鼓勵下，她重新振作，勇敢地面對挑戰(zhàn)。在試演中，Leah的出色表現(xiàn)不僅贏得了評委的認可，也贏得了Rachel的尊重，兩人之間的關系得到了改善，建立了新的友誼。這個故事展現(xiàn)了勇氣、自我挑戰(zhàn)和友誼的重要性，也讓我們看到了Leah在面對困難時的成長和蛻變.故事線Leah與Rachel在學校樂隊中的競爭.Rachel挑戰(zhàn)Leah，Leah在挑戰(zhàn)中表現(xiàn)不佳，失去第一把交椅.Leah在母親的鼓勵下，重新振作，勇敢地參加試演.Leah在試演中的出色表現(xiàn)，贏得評委的認可.Leah與Rachel的關系得到改善，建立新的友誼.Leah在音樂道路上的成長和蛻變.主旨升華句Courageisnottheabsenceoffear,butthedeterminationtoproceeddespiteit.Truecompetitionisnotaboutdefeatingothers,butaboutchallengingandimprovingoneself.Musicisapowerfulmediumthatcanbridgegapsandfosterunderstandingandfriendship.Supportfromlovedonescanprovidethestrengthneededtoovercomeobstaclesandachievesuccess.Growthandtransformationoftencomefromfacingandovercomingourfearsandchallenges.兩篇寫作示范寫作示范一Leahsteppedontotheauditionstage,herheartpoundingwithamixofnervesanddetermination.Assheraisedherflute,sherecalledhermother'swordsaboutbraveryandthejoyofplayingmusic.Withadeepbreath,shebegantoplay,eachnoteresonatingwithconfidenceandpassion.Theaudiencelistenedinsilence,captivatedbyherperformance.Asshefinished,awaveofapplausefilledtheroom,andLeahfeltasenseofaccomplishmentandpride.Shehadnotonlyfacedherfearsbutalsosharedherloveformusicwithothers.Aftertheaudition,LeahfoundRachelwaitingforher.“Congratulations!Youdeserveit,”Leahsaid,extendingherhand.Rachel,surprisedbyLeah'sgraciousness,shookherhandandsmiled.“Thankyou,Leah.Ididn'texpectyoutoplaysowell.”Leahlaughed,feelingasenseofcamaraderie.“I'vebeenpracticingalot,andIrealizedthatit'snotjustaboutwinning.It'saboutenjoyingthemusicanddoingwhatIlove.”Rachelnodded,anewrespectinhereyes.“You'reright.Maybewecanpracticetogethersometime?”Leahagreed,feelingaweightliftedoffhershoulders.Shehadnotonlyperformedwellbutalsomadeanewfriendintheprocess.寫作示范二AsLeahsteppedontotheauditionstage,shefeltasurgeofenergyanddetermination.Herfingerstrembledslightly,butshefocusedonthemusic,lettingitguideher.Thefamiliarnotesofherpieceflowedfromherflute,fillingtheroomwithabeautifulmelody.Leahplayedwithanewfoundconfidence,hereyesclosedasshelostherselfinthemusic.Whenshefinished,thesilencewasfollowedbyawarmroundofapplause,andLeahopenedhereyeswithasmile.Shehaddoneherbest,andthatwasallthatmattered.Aftertheaudition,LeahfoundRachelapproachingher.“Congratulations!Yo