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單元寫作談?wù)摻】碉嬍砋nit3Foodmatters寫作維度本單元的寫作話題是“健康飲食”，相關(guān)內(nèi)容包含以下方面：(1)介紹健康的飲食習(xí)慣(2)介紹如何制作健康的食物寫作支架/模版談?wù)摻】碉嬍抽_(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題具體介紹如何吃得健康表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)黃金語(yǔ)料(從教材內(nèi)外積累好句)開(kāi)頭段①Healthyeatinghabitsareimportantforus.②Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyeatinghabits.③Thereisnodoubtthatbreakfastisimportant.④Iamahealthyboywithsomehealthyeatinghabits.中間段①Ilikehavingapples,breadandmilk.②Fruitandvegetablesarehealthyfood.③Weshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruitbutlessjunkfood.④Lastbutnotleast,wemusthaveourmealsontime.⑤Toomuchcoffeeandcolaarebadforourhealth.⑥What’smore,bothmybrotherandIdrinkoneglassofmilkeveryday.⑦Ithinkit’sgoodtochoosewholegrainbreadoverwhitebread.⑧Ihavebreakfasteveryday.⑨Ieatnotonlyvegetables,butalsomeat.⑩Mymotheroftenpreparesmealsathomeusingfreshingredients.?Ithinkit’simportanttoeatsnacksthataregoodforme,likenutsoryogurt,insteadofchipsorcandy.?Ibelievedrinkingwaterinsteadofsodaisagoodwaytostayhealthy.結(jié)尾段①Ibelieveeveryonecanhavehealthyeatinghabitsifwefollowtherulesabove.②Ithinkeatingwellisveryimportant.③Ithinkweneedtohavemorevegetablesandlessmeatinthefuture.經(jīng)典例題(從經(jīng)典例題學(xué)會(huì)審題)良好的飲食習(xí)慣對(duì)我們的健康非常重要，它能夠幫助人們預(yù)防很多疾病。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，以“Eathealthily”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，向大家介紹如何養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣。~~~~~審人稱：第一人稱~~~~~~~~~~~~審體裁：說(shuō)明文~~~~審時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~審要點(diǎn)：飲食健康、飲食習(xí)慣EathealthilyKnowwhatfoodisn’thealthyEatlesssweetfoodEatbothmeatandvegetablesHaveyourmealsontimeHavebreakfasteveryday要求：1.包含提示中所有的寫作要點(diǎn)；2.條理清楚，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；4.不少于80詞。題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。EathealthilyHealthyeatinghabitsareimportantforus.Sohowcanweformgoodeatinghabits?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________精彩范文[從教材內(nèi)外積累好句]精彩范文展示EathealthilyHealthyeatinghabitsareimportantforus.Sohowcanweformgoodeatinghabits?Firstofall,weneedtoknowwhatfoodishealthyandwhatfoodisnot.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~①Thegirlandtheboythinkthatrestaurantfoodisnothealthy.(教材P41)Usuallyfruitandvegetablesaregoodforusbutthefoodwithtoomuchsugarandfatisnot.Thenwemusteataslittlesweetandlittlesaltfoodaspossible.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~②It’sthehealthiest______becausevegetablesarealwaysgoodfor________.(教材P42)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~③Weshouldeatasmanyfruitsandvegetablesaspossible.(教材P43)~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Theymaycausemanydiseases.Abalanceddietisnecessary.Weshouldeatnotonlyvegetables,butalsomeat.Besides,wemusthavebreakfasteveryday.Lastbutnotleast,wemusthaveourmealsontime.Ibelieveeveryonecanhavehealthyeatinghabitsifwefollowtherulesabove.【亮點(diǎn)詞塊】·firstofall首先·toomuch太多·abalanceddiet均衡飲食·notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……·lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是·ontime準(zhǔn)時(shí)【高分句子】·Firstofall,weneedtoknowwhatfoodishealthyandwhatfoodisnot.(賓語(yǔ)從句)首先，我們需要知道什么食物是健康的，什么食物是不健康的?！believeeveryonecanhavehealthyeatinghabitsifwefollowtherulesabove.(賓語(yǔ)從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)我相信，如果我們遵循上述規(guī)則，每個(gè)人都能養(yǎng)成健康的飲食習(xí)慣。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練隨著5月20日“全國(guó)學(xué)生營(yíng)養(yǎng)日”的到來(lái)，《21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》正在開(kāi)展對(duì)中學(xué)生早餐情況的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文進(jìn)行投稿，倡導(dǎo)營(yíng)養(yǎng)早餐。學(xué)生比例早餐情況健康狀況55%每天吃豐富的早餐身體健康，精力充沛25%經(jīng)常吃垃圾食品偶爾生病20%不吃早餐感到饑餓，上課無(wú)法認(rèn)真聽(tīng)講，經(jīng)常生病要求：1.必須包含表格內(nèi)所有信息；2.詞數(shù)不少于80。(文章題目和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))BreakfastIsImportantThereisnodoubtthatbreakfastisimportant.Recentlywedidasurveyaboutbreakfastinourschool.Herearetheresults.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________范文參考BreakfastIsImportantThereisnodoubtthatbreakfastisimportant.Recentlywedidasurveyaboutbreakfastinourschool.Herearetheresults.Tooursurprise,only55percentofthestudentshavewonderfulmealsforbreakfasteveryday.Theyarehealthyandalwaysfullofenergy.25percentofthestudentsoftenhavejunkfood.Theydon’thaveabalanceddiet.Theireatinghabitsaresobadthattheysometimesfallill.20percentofthestudentsgotoschoolwithouteatingbreakfast.Asaresult，thesestudentsoft