高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：愛的堅守：用一生編織的善意+“謊言”

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習愛的堅守：用一生編織的善意“謊言”1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Aliheardhersingwhensheplayedthepiano.Andhesawhisgrandmotherdiagnosedwithdisabilitywassingingtogetherwithhim.Hewasabsolutelyshocked.Thediseasetookherlegsawayaslongashecouldremember.Hisgrandmotherevendancedtothemusic,totallyattractedbythepieceofmusic.Outofcuriosity,heaskedhisgrandmotherwhathadhappenedonearth.Shegiggledandbeganherstory.4續(xù)寫原文Oh,dear,letmeshareastorywithyou.Whenyourgrandfatherwentfishingontheboat,Iwassoafraidoflosinghim,andIwassoafraidthathewouldnevercomeback.TheonlywayIcouldstaycalmwastodance.Ipretendedtofeelgood.However,frommybottomofmyheart,Iexperiencedthepainofnotknowingwhethermylovewouldcomebacksafely.EverydayIwenthome,excitedbutfrightenedtoreadhisletters.Healwaysendedhisletterswith“IloveyouwithmylifeandGodblessesyougoodhealth.”Andthenonedaycamealetteronlywiththreesentences,“Ihavelostmyarms.Igiveyoubackyourfreedomandyoudeserveabetterone.”Thinkingforalongtime,ImadeadecisionthatIwouldpretendIwasdisabledtoo.Iboughtastickandawheelchairmyself.ItoldmyfriendsandfamiliesaswellashimthatIgotacaraccident,losingbothofmylegs,unabletodanceanymore.ThenIwenttoseeyourgrandfather.Itoldhim“youarethebetteroneIshoulddeserve;andwearethesame,withoutfeelingsorryforourselves.”Ileanedforwardandshowedhimaweddingdress.“Nowshowmeyouarestillaman,”Isaid,“Iwon’taskagain.”Hefinallysmiledandmanageditonme,walkingtowardsmeandgivingabighug.5續(xù)寫原文Lookingatgrandmotherforawhile,Aliwasdeeplyinspiredbyher.“YouareanangelandIwillloveyouforever.”Alimurmuredquietly.6段首句Paragraph1：GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Paragraph2:Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother’sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma’susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9阿里聽到有人彈鋼琴時，驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)患有殘疾的奶奶跟著歌聲一起哼唱，甚至還能隨音樂舞動。出于好奇，他詢問奶奶緣由，奶奶便笑著講述了自己的故事。原來，爺爺出海捕魚時，奶奶害怕失去他，跳舞成了她緩解焦慮的方式。每天奶奶都懷著激動又忐忑的心情盼著爺爺?shù)膩硇牛鵂敔數(shù)男趴偸且浴拔覑勰?，愿上帝保佑你健康”結(jié)尾。直到有一天，爺爺來信說失去了雙臂，要給奶奶自由，讓她去尋找更好的人。經(jīng)過深思熟慮，奶奶決定假裝自己也殘疾了，她買了拐杖和輪椅，向親朋好友包括爺爺謊稱遭遇車禍失去雙腿，不能再跳舞了。之后奶奶帶著婚紗去見爺爺，鼓勵爺爺，最終爺爺露出了笑容，為奶奶穿上婚紗，兩人緊緊相擁。阿里聽后深受觸動，輕聲呢喃奶奶是天使，會永遠愛她。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1：GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.奶奶微笑著看著阿里，讓他承諾在她去世前都不要把這件事告訴爺爺。阿里看著奶奶那充滿愛意與期待的眼神，重重地點了點頭，認真地說道：“奶奶，您放心，我一定會遵守承諾的?！睆哪且院?，阿里時常想起奶奶的故事，心中對奶奶的敬佩之情愈發(fā)濃烈。他更加珍惜和奶奶相處的時光，總是陪伴在奶奶身邊，聽她講述過去的點點滴滴。而奶奶也依舊像往常一樣，和爺爺過著平淡而溫馨的生活，兩人相互扶持，相互照顧。阿里看著爺爺奶奶恩愛的模樣，心中滿是溫暖，他知道，這份愛來之不易，是奶奶用一生的堅守換來的。在奶奶的影響下，阿里也變得更加懂得珍惜身邊的人，對待感情更加認真和執(zhí)著。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother’sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma’susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.幾年過去了，在奶奶葬禮結(jié)束六個月后，阿里偶然發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺坐在奶奶常坐的椅子上，悲傷地抽泣著。阿里的心中一陣刺痛，他輕輕地走到爺爺身邊坐下。爺爺抬起頭，滿臉淚痕，聲音顫抖地說：“孩子，我好想她，沒有她的日子，我真的不知道該怎么過?！卑⒗锟粗鵂敔斖纯嗟臉幼樱q豫了一下，最終還是決定把奶奶的秘密告訴爺爺。他深吸一口氣，緩緩說道：“爺爺，其實奶奶她……”阿里將奶奶為了不離開爺爺而假裝殘疾的事一五一十地告訴了爺爺。爺爺聽后，瞪大了眼睛，臉上露出難以置信的神情。他沉默了許久，淚水再次奪眶而出。過了一會兒，爺爺緩緩地說：“我就知道，她怎么會這么輕易地離開我。她是那么愛我，為了我，她什么都愿意做?！睆哪且院?，爺爺雖然依舊沉浸在失去奶奶的悲痛中，但他的眼神中多了一份釋然和感激。他常常會對著奶奶的照片講述自己的生活，仿佛奶奶從未離開過。而阿里也明白了，真正的愛情是經(jīng)得起時間和磨難考驗的，爺爺奶奶之間的這份深情，將永遠留在他的心中，成為他人生中最寶貴的財富。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Lookingintograndmother'seyesfullofloveandexpectation,Alinoddedfirmlyandsaidseriously,"Grandma,don'tworry.Iwilldefinitelykeepthepromise."Fromthenon,Alioftenthoughtaboutgrandma'sstory,andhisadmirationforhergrewstronger.Hecherishedthetimespentwithgrandmaevenmoreandalwaysaccompaniedher,listeningtohertellthestoriesofthepast.Andgrandmastilllivedaplainbutwarmlifewithgrandpaasusual.Theysupportedandtookcareofeachother.Watchingthelovingrelationshipbetweenhisgrandparents,Alifeltwarminhisheart.Heknewthatthislovewashard-wonandwastheresultofgrandma'slifelongdedication.Undergrandma'sinfluence,Alialsobecamemoreawareofcherishingthepeoplearoundhimandmoreseriousandpersistentindealingwithrelationships.14范文呈現(xiàn)Afewyearswentbyandsixmonthsaftergrandmother'sfuneral,Alifoundgrandpasittingingrandma'susualchairbyaccidentandsobbingsadly.ApangofpainshotthroughAli'sheart.Hewalkedgentlytograndpa'ssideandsatdown.Grandpalookedup,hisfacecoveredwithtears,andsaidinatremblingvoice,"Child,Imisshersomuch.Ireallydon'tknowhowtolivewithouther."Lookingatgrandpa'spainfulexpression,Alihesitatedforamomentandfinallydecidedtotellgrandpagrandma'ssecret.Hetookadeepbreathandsaidslowly,"Grandpa,actuallygrandma..."Alitoldgrandpaeverythingabouthowgrandmapretendedtobedisabledinordernottoleavehim.Afterhearingthis,grandpa'seyeswidenedindisbelief.Heremainedsilentforalongtime,andtearswelledupinhiseyesagain.Afterawhile,grandpasaidslowly,"Iknewit.Shewouldn'tleavemesoeasily.Shelovedmesomuchthatshewaswillingtodoanythingforme."Fromthenon,althoughgrandpawasstillimmersedinthegriefoflosinggrandma,therewasasenseofreliefandgratitudeinhiseyes.Heoftentalkedtograndma'sphotoabouthislife,asifgrandmahadneverleft.AndAlialsounderstoodthattruelovecanwithstandthetestoftimeandhardships.Thedeepaffectionbetweenhisgrandparentswouldalwaysstayinhisheartandbecomethemostprecioustreasureinhislife.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)GrandmothersmiledatAliandaskedhimtomakeapromisenottotellhisgrandpatilltheendofherlife.Gazingintohisgrandmother'seyes,brimmingwithloveandanticipation,Alinoddedresolutelyandspokewithearnestness."Grandma,restassured.I'llkeepthispromisewithallmyheart."Fromthatmomenton,Alifoundhimselfconstantlyreminiscingabouthisgrandmother'sstory.Hisadmirationforhergrewexponentially,andhecherishedeverymomentspentbyherside.Hewouldalwaysbethere,listeningintentlyassherecountedthememoriesofthepast.Meanwhile,hisgrandmothercontinuedtoleadasimpleyetwarmlifewithhisgrandfather.Theysupportedeachotherthroughthickandthin,sharingeverymomentofjoyandsorrow.Watchingtheiraffectionatebond,Ali'sheartwasfilledwithwarmth.Hewasacutelyawarethatthislovewasapreciousgift,nurturedbyhisgrandmother'sunwaveringdedicationthroughoutherlife.Underhisgrandmother'sinfluence,Alibecamemoreattunedtotheimportanceofcherishingthosearoundhim,approachingrelationshipswithgreatersincerityandcommitment.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afewyearsslippedby,andsixmonthsafterhisgrandmother'sfuneral,Alistumbleduponhisgrandfathersittinginhisgrandmother'scustomarychair,weepinginconsolably.AsharppainpiercedthroughAli'sheart.Hequietlymadehiswaytohisgrandfather'ssideandtookaseat.Hisgrandfatherlookedup,hisfacestreakedwithtears,andhisvoicequiveredashespoke."Child,Imissherterribly.I'matalosswithoutherbymyside."Seeinghisgrandfather'sanguish,Alihesitatedbrieflybutultimatelymadethedecisiontorevealhisgrandmother'ssecret.Takingadeepbreath,hebegan,"Grandpa,actually,grandma..."Alirecountedeverydetailofhowhisgrandmotherhadfeigneddisabilitytostaybyhisgrandfather'sside.Uponhearingthis,hisgrandfather'seyeswidenedinastonishment,andhefellintoalong,contemplativesilence.Tearswelleduponceagain