譯林版高中英語(yǔ)必修第三冊(cè)UNIT2 Period6寫(xiě)作(Writing)課件

Period6

UNIT2

Naturaldisasters主題語(yǔ)境人與自然

——自然災(zāi)害與防范，安全常識(shí)與自我保護(hù)關(guān)于自然災(zāi)害場(chǎng)景文本描寫(xiě)課時(shí)學(xué)案寫(xiě)作(Writing)自然災(zāi)害的文本描寫(xiě)一般包括災(zāi)害的發(fā)生、場(chǎng)景、危害以及人們的認(rèn)識(shí)和感受等。該類(lèi)描寫(xiě)要求學(xué)生通過(guò)本單元學(xué)習(xí)，掌握相關(guān)詞匯表達(dá)，并能用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)言描述自然災(zāi)害的場(chǎng)景和危害，培養(yǎng)面對(duì)災(zāi)害的意志，并倡導(dǎo)關(guān)愛(ài)大自然的意識(shí)。[基本框架]1．開(kāi)頭——災(zāi)害發(fā)生

2．主體——災(zāi)害場(chǎng)景和危害損失3．結(jié)尾——感受和認(rèn)識(shí)[常用表達(dá)]1．causeagreatloss造成巨大損失2．takesafetymeasures采取安全措施3．leavetheareainruins使這個(gè)地區(qū)成為廢墟4．seriouslyinjuredhislegs他的雙腿嚴(yán)重受傷5．feelasuddenurgetorunaway突然想趕快逃走6．causedamagetoproperty造成財(cái)產(chǎn)損失7．a(chǎn)houselookingasiftofalldown看上去好像要倒塌的一棟房子8．hopetofindtheirmissingson希望找到他們失蹤的兒子假設(shè)你是李華。2024年3月31日，江西省南昌市遭遇罕見(jiàn)的強(qiáng)降雨天氣，造成數(shù)人傷亡。你的英國(guó)筆友Tom來(lái)信表達(dá)慰問(wèn)，請(qǐng)你回信，簡(jiǎn)要描述災(zāi)害并表達(dá)感想。注意：1．寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTom，Isincerelyappreciateyourheartfeltcondolences.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Warmregards.Yours，LiHua[審題構(gòu)思]1．確定體裁：回信；

2．確定人稱(chēng)：

第一和第三人稱(chēng)；3．確定時(shí)態(tài)：

一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；4．確定內(nèi)容：①感謝筆友的關(guān)切和慰問(wèn)；②描寫(xiě)災(zāi)害情況；③表達(dá)戰(zhàn)勝災(zāi)害的意志和決心。[遣詞造句]1．最近南昌的強(qiáng)降雨造成了人員傷亡，而且暴雨也造成了更多的財(cái)產(chǎn)損失。TherecentheavyrainfallinNanchang____________deathsandinjuriesandit__________morepropertydamage.2．雨水淹沒(méi)了街道，沖毀了房屋，并使許多人被迫離開(kāi)家園。Thepouringrain_______thestreets，_________housesseverely，and______alotofpeopleleavetheirhomes.hasresultedinalsocausedcovereddamagedforced3．這次自然災(zāi)害使我們深感悲痛。然而，盡管困難重重，我們決心團(tuán)結(jié)一致，開(kāi)始重建受災(zāi)地區(qū)的行程。Thisnaturaldisasterhasleftus_____________________．However，_______________________，wearedeterminedtocometogetherasacommunityandstartthejourneyofrebuildingtheaffectedareas.4．我們都希望，通過(guò)我們的共同努力，我們能夠在未來(lái)減少這類(lèi)災(zāi)害的影響。

Weallhopethatthroughourunitedefforts，wecan________________suchdisastersinthefuture.deeplysaddeneddespitethedifficultiesreducetheimpactof[句式升級(jí)]1．用aswellas將句1變?yōu)楦鼮楹?jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TherecentheavyrainfallinNanchanghasresultedindeathsandinjuriesaswellasmorepropertydamage.2．將句2變成被動(dòng)句。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．用it作形式主語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)句4。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Streetswerefloodedunderwater，houseswereseverelydamaged，andnumerousindividualshavebeendisplacedfromtheirhomes.Itisourcollectivehopethatthroughourunitedefforts，wecanreducetheimpactofsuchdisastersinthefuture.[連句成篇](注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)你暯舆^(guò)渡詞語(yǔ))____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[參考范文]DearTom，Isincerelyappreciateyourheartfeltcondolences.TherecentheavyrainfallinNanchanghasresultedindeathsandinjuriesaswellasmorepropertydamage.Streetswerefloodedunderwater，houseswereseverelydamaged，andnumerousindividualshavebeendisplacedfromtheirhomes.Thisnaturaldisasterhasleftusdeeplysaddened.However，despitethedifficulties，wearedeterminedtocometogetherasacommunityandstartthejourneyofrebuildingtheaffectedareas.Itisourcollectivehopethatthroughourunitedefforts，wecanreducetheimpactofsuchdisastersinthefuture.Thankyouforyoursinceresupportandconcernduringthesehardtimes.Warmregards.Yours，LiHua人物個(gè)性描寫(xiě)[詞塊積累]1．standoutfromthecrowd脫穎而出2．a(chǎn)simple-mindedman頭腦簡(jiǎn)單的人3．lackofresponsibility缺乏責(zé)任感4．beofadeterminedcharacter性格果斷5．bepopularwith...受……歡迎6．a(chǎn)good-humored/good-naturedperson脾氣好的人7．a(chǎn)manofstrongpersonality個(gè)性強(qiáng)的人8．lovableandgood-naturedpersonality可愛(ài)溫和的個(gè)性9．a(chǎn)neasypersontodealwith容易相處的人10．bereadytohelpothers樂(lè)于助人[佳句積累]1．Itiseasytodealwithsomeonewhoisdowntoearth.和坦誠(chéng)低調(diào)的人交往很容易。2．Someoftheseyoungmusiciansarehugelytalented.這些年輕的音樂(lè)家中有些極有天賦。3．Heisanambitiousyoungmanfullofenthusiasmandengergy.他是個(gè)充滿(mǎn)熱情與活力的有遠(yuǎn)大抱負(fù)的青年。4．Shenevergaveupandstruggledtoleadanactivelife.她從不放棄，總是努力過(guò)積極的生活。5．Hewouldneverbeimproper；heisalwaysaperfectgentleman.他總是舉止得體，一直是個(gè)完美的紳士。閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)一個(gè)80詞左右的段落，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ittookplaceinateacher'sfamily.Oneday，Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool，whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique，whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavoritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction，theterrifiedboyglued(粘)thepiecestogetherquicklyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Themotherherselfnaturallynoticeditthatevening.Tohersurprise，therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atdinnertime，sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment，thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbor'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroomandfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthathersonwaslying，forallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However，inthefaceofherson'snervouseyesandthelooksoftheotherfamilymembers，Ben'smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn'tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobed，theboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom，askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut，ashehadalreadylied，hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend，nomatterhowangryhismotherbecame.Inthestudy，calmlybathedinthelight，hismother'sfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandenter，shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone.Themothersaid，“Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination—awindow-openingcat！”Hearingherwords，Benwentred，loweredhisheadandsaidathankyou.Surprisingly，themothertookoutanotherchocolateandpresseditintohishand.“Thisoneisforthedelicaterepairworkyoudidtothebrokenvase.”Shealsoaddedthatshewasmovedbyhowmuchtheboyvaluedthefamilypossessions.Benfeltaflowofshamethroughhisbody，andhadtolowerhishead.ThemotherthencalmlyencouragedBentorewardhimselfwithmorechocolateforanyothergoodthingshehaddisplayedinthisevent.Hedidastoldto，promisingthathewascalmwhenfacingtheaccident.Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand，theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.

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