【英語】英語總復習∶中考英語書面表達(提高)知識講解及答案經(jīng)典

【英語】英語總復習∶中考英語書面表達(提高)知識講解及答案經(jīng)典一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1．書面表達在本周班會課上，同學們對“初中生什么時候放學比較合適？”這一問題進行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學認為初中生應該在5點左右放學，下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。TimetoleaveschoolActivitiestodoafterschool·at5o’clock·at4:45·at5o’clock·...·exercisetokeephealthyandreadbooks·dowhatwewant,suchaslisteningtomusic·takeapart-timejob·...注意：（1）短文必須包括表格中所有要點，并適當發(fā)揮；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名；（3）詞數(shù)：80-100；（4）短文開頭僅供參考，不計入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭：“Whattimeshouldjuniorhighschoolstudentsleaveschool?”Thisweekwehaveheldaclassmeetingtotalkaboutit.Hereistheresultofthediscussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“Whattimeshouldjuniorhighschoolstudentsleaveschool?”Thisweekwehaveheldaclassmeetingtotalkaboutit.Hereistheresultofthediscussion.Moststudentsthinkthatstudentsshouldleaveschoolatabout5o'clock.Theycanexercisetokeephealthyandreadmoreinterestingbooksafterschool.Somethinkthatstudentsshouldleaveschoolat4:45,becausetheycanhavemoretimetodowhattheywanttodo,suchaslisteningtomusic.Afewthink5o'clockisthebesttimetofinishschool.Afterschool,theycandopart-timejobs,suchascollectingdiscardedplasticbottlestosellformoney.Iaminfavorofleavingschoolatfiveo'clock.Besideshavingtimetoplaytennis,IcanalsodrawsomepicturesIlike.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如holdaclassmeeting，talkabout，theresultof，keephealthy，afterschool，havemoretimetodo，wanttodo，suchas，listentomusic，infavorof，cleantheroom，playtennis等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)Theycanexercisetokeephealthyandreadmoreinterestingbooksafterschool.和Moststudentsthinkthatstudentsshouldleaveschoolatabout5o'clock./Somethinkthatstudentsshouldleaveschoolat4:45,becausetheycanhavemoretimetodowhattheywanttodo,suchaslisteningtomusic.等復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化；同時Moststudentsthink…/Somethink…/Afewthink…使敘述條理，層次分明，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。2．假定你是David，來自美國，你的QQ好友LiMing想要在今年的暑假去做志愿者，他來信向你了解有關(guān)這方面的情況。請認真閱讀下面的郵件，并根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和實際用英語回復，可以有適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮。To:davidwoodlandschool@From:limingsunshineschool@Subject:VolunteeringDearDavid，I’mwritingtoaskyouforadvice.Iknowyouoftendovolunteerworkinyourfreetime.I’minterestedinitverymuch.I’mgoingtodosomethissummervacation.ButIknowlittleaboutit.Couldyouhelpmeanswerthefollowingquestions?●Whydoyouwanttobeavolunteer?●Whatkindofvo1unteerworkissuitableforusstudents?●Doyouhaveanyproblemswithvolunteering?●Ifmyparentsdon’tallowmetodoso,whatshouldIdo?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Bestwishes，LiMing注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右?；貜托诺拈_頭和結(jié)尾己經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù);2.回復中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearLiMing,Thanksforyourletter.I'mgladyouwouldliketobeavolunteer.Nowletmeansweryourquestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoulovevolunteeringanddowellinit.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.BestwishesDavid【答案】DearLiMing,Thanksforyourletter.I'mgladyouwouldliketobeavolunteer.Nowletmeansweryourquestions.IvolunteerbecauseIenjoyhelpingothersandcanlearnalotfromothers.Asstudents,wecantakepartinsomeinterestingactivities,suchaslookingafteranimalsandworkingforsportsmatches.Also,wecanjoincharityorganizationstohelpprotecttheenvironmentandsoon.It’sOKtohaveproblems,becausevolunteeringtakesmuchtimeandenergy.SometimesIcan’tbalancemystudyandwork.Ifyourparentsdon’tallowyoutovolunteer,youshouldhaveagoodtalkwiththem.Trytoletthemunderstandyou.Ihopeyoulovevolunteeringanddowellinit.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.BestwishesDavid【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，給好友LiMing回信，介紹暑假做志愿者的情況。。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I'mglad……，wecan……，It’sOKto……，Ifyourparentsdon’tallowyouto…….，youshould……，Ihope……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭為你想要成為一名志愿者而感到高興，接下來介紹我們可以從事的志愿者工作以及志愿者工作帶來的一些問題，最后我希望你喜歡志愿者工作。此處wouldliketo,enjoydoingsth,learnfrom,takepartin,suchas,lookafter,allowsbtodosth,letsbdosth,lookforwardto等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。3．書面表達假如你是Amy，德國的交換生Sara下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她詢問如下信息：1．你家情況；2.有關(guān)餐桌禮儀；3.她要承擔的家務勞動；4.…現(xiàn)在，你就她提出的問題給她回信，也預祝她在你家過得開心！要求：1.文章必須包括圖片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.字數(shù)約110詞。DearSara，I’mgladtohearfromyouyesterday._____________________________________________Love，Amy【答案】DearSara，I’mgladtohearfromyouyesterday.Welcometomyfamilynextweek.Ihaveasmallfamily.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily,myparentsandme.InChina,unlikeintheWest,platesareplacedonthetableandsharedbyeveryone.AndsometimestheChinesehostsusetheirchopstickstoputfoodinyourbowlorplate.Thisisasignofpoliteness.Theappropriatethingtodowouldbetoeatthewhatever-it-isandsayhowdeliciousitis.Ifyoufeeluncomfortablewiththis,youcanjustsay"thankyou|"inpolitelyandleavethefoodthere.Asforhousework,Ithinkit'sourdutytohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Soyoucanhelpmyparentswashthedishes,cleantheroomandmakethebed.Ihopeyoucantakecareofyourselfandyourfamilybydoinghousework.Ofcourse,ifyoulike,Iwillteachyouhowtocookdeliciousdishes.Love,Amy【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如begladto，hearfrom，unlikeintheWest，onthetable，asignof，helpsb.do，dosomehousework，washthedishes，cleantheroom，makethebed，takecareof，howtodo等。而復雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)InChina,unlikeintheWest,platesareplacedonthetableandsharedbyeveryone.和Ifyoufeeluncomfortablewiththis,youcanjustsayapolitethankyouandleavethefoodthere./Ihopeyoucantakecareofyourselfandyourfamilybydoinghousework./ifyoulike,Iwillteachyouhowtocookdeliciousdishes.等復雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。4．寫作假定你是李華，在一位名叫TigerMom的學生家長的博客上，你看到以下內(nèi)容。請你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容，寫作要點和要求，給這位家長回復。I’mthemotherofafourteen-year–old.Ihavearuleformydaughter:beamongthetopof5studentsorgetpunishedinonewayoranother.Shehasbeendoingverywellinschool,butsomeofmyfriendskeeptellingmethatIputtoomuchpressureonher.AmIwrong?寫作要點：1.表明自己的看法。2.陳述自己的理由。3.提出至少2條建議。【答案】Hi,TigerMom,WhatpuzzlesyouisactuallyapuzzleformanyparentsinChina.Myideaisthatitisnotquiterightforyoutodoso.Althoughhighgradesareanimportantfactorinevaluatingstudentsandfortheirfutureuniversityadmission,developmentinwisdom,emotion,health,andlifeattitudeshouldneverbeignored.Therearemanyexamplesaroundus.Someall-Astudentsinschoolhaveturnedoutnottobeassuccessfulinsocietyastheywereexpected.Thereasonisoftenthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.Furthermore,punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpthemgrowupmentallyandphysically.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends'advice.Moreimportantly,letherlivelikealovelygirl；letherhavemorefriendsandsocialactivities；andlethermakemistakesofherownastheteenagersoftendo.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學生家長的博客進行回復。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Myideaisthat……，Thereare……，Someall-Astudentsinschoolhave…….，Thereasonis……，SoIsuggestthat……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。點睛：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。此處turnout,bynomeans,helpsbdosth,growup,letsbdosth,makemistakes,ofone’sown等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。5．書面表達同學們，中考后就會迎來漫長的暑假了，班會課上老師組織大家討論假期學習和生活計劃。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英語向同學們匯報一下你的計劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計劃學習博覽群書；學習技能（或自擬一點）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉（或自擬一點）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點）注意：1.表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù)90左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3.表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。Dearclassmates,Summerholidayiscoming,andhereismyplanforit.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeallofyoucanenjoythecomingholiday.That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】Dearclassmates,Summerholidayiscoming,andhereismyplanforit.First,I'dliketochooseseveralgoodbooksandreadthemcarefully.Thiscanhelpmeopenmymindandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Ialsothinkit'snecessaryformetolearnatleastoneskill.I'minterestedincooking,soIwilllearntocooksomedeliciousdishesduringtheholiday.Second,healthisthemostimportant.SoIwilleathealthilyandexercisemore.Iplantoeatmorefruitandvegetablesandkeeprunningeveryday.Third,it'sagoodideatojoininsomecharityactivitiesbecauseweshouldbekindtosomeoneinneed.IwillpaymoreattentiontoprotectingourenvironmentsothatwecanmakeourEarthabetterworld.Also,travellingoutisagoodchoice.Whiletravelling,wecanbeclosetonatureandlearnaboutdifferentcultures.WehavemorechancestosearchtheInternet.Iknowunhealthywebsitesareharmfultous.Iwillsaynotothem.Ihopeallofyoucanenjoythecomingholiday.That'sall.Thankyou.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I'dliketodo，helpmeopenmymind，atleast，beinterestedin，duringtheholiday，plantodo，joinin，bekindtosomeoneinneed，paymoreattentionto，beclosetonature，searchtheInternet等。而First,I'dliketochooseseveralgoodbooksandreadthemcarefully./Second,healthisthemostimportant./Third,it'sagoodideatojoininsomecharityactivitiesbecauseweshouldbekindtosomeoneinneed.等表順序詞和綜合句式的運用，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。6．4月23日是“世界讀書日”，你校英語俱樂部正在開展主題為“多讀書，讀好書”的活動。假如你是李華，請你寫一封倡議書，向全體同學發(fā)出號召。內(nèi)容包括：應該讀什么樣的書，以及讀書的意義。提示詞語：story,novel,knowledge,improve,important提示問題：●Whatkindofbooksshouldweread?●Whydoweread?Dearstudents,theWorldReadingDayiscoming.SoI’mhereagaintocallonallofustoreadmorebooksandreadgoodbooks.LiHua【答案】例文Dearstudents,theWorldReadingDayiscoming.Asamiddleschoolstudent,everyoneshouldreadbooks.Firstly,readingincreasesourknowledgeandwecanlearntheworldaffairswithoutgoingout.Secondly,readingisagoodwaytoimprovereadingandwritingskills.Finally,readingcanbroadenourknowledgeandhorizon,whichisimportanttojobhuntinginthefuture.Therefore,starttoreading,nomatterhowoldyouareandwhatyouaredoing.SoI’mhereagaintocallonallofustoreadmorebooksandreadgoodbooks.LiHua【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開頭，寫出對學生的倡議。例文點評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時，描述倡議時，描寫細致，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；agoodwaytodosth；broadenourknowledgeandhorizon。句型：readingisagoodwaytoimprovereadingandwritingskills；readingcanbroadenourknowledgeandhorizon,whichisimportanttojobhuntinginthefuture。7．為了宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化,某雙語雜志將舉辦征文活動來介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事,“程門立雪（StandinthesnowtowaitforMasterChengrespectfully）”是其中一個選題。請你根據(jù)下面的內(nèi)容提示,用英語寫一篇短文參加此活動。內(nèi)容提示：1.楊時去拜見老師程頤一老師在睡覺一楊時在雪地等一老師醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)楊時在門口2.通過介紹這個故事,發(fā)表你的看法或者觀點。要求：1.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫：詞數(shù)：100左右.2.不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱、老師和同學的真實姓名?！敬鸢浮縇onglongago,therewasamancalledYangshi.Oncehewenttovisithisteacher,Chengyi.Unfortunately,Mr.Chengwassleepingintheroom.Hedidn’twakeuptheteacher.Sohestoodinfrontofthegate.Atthatmoment,thereweresnowflakesflyingoverhisheadanditwasverycold.ButyangshistillstoodinthesnowuntilMr.Chengwokeup.Whentheteacherwokeup,thesnowwasverydeep.Yangshiwaslikeasnowmanstandingatthegate.Finally,theteacherwasmoveddeeply.Afterreadingthestory,Ithinkweshouldrespectourteacher.Weshouldstudyhard.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，主要介紹中國的經(jīng)典故事,“程門立雪（StandinthesnowtowaitforMasterChengrespectfully）”。目的是宣傳和弘揚中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化。時態(tài)為一般過去時，靈活運用動詞的過去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通過介紹這個故事，發(fā)表看法或者觀點。寫作時，避免漢語式英語。注意固定搭配及主謂一致的問題，例如:Therewas/were...注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，具有條理性。8．書面表達根據(jù)下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，內(nèi)容須包括：對下表中關(guān)于（CityA和CityB）的全部信息進行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。CityACityBFlying2hours4hoursTemperature30℃18℃Hotel★★★★★★Thingstodo★★★★★★Food★★★★★★Inmyopinion,ishebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inmyopinion,CityAisthebetterplacetospendmysummerholiday.Althoughthetemperaturethereishigher,thehotelislesscomfortable,andeventhefoodisnotasdeliciousasthatinCityB,IstillchooseCityA.ThemostimportantreasonisthatIcanhavealotofthingstodoinCityA.Icanenjoymorebeautifulsceneryanddomoreactivities.Besides,ittakesusonlytwohourstoflythere,whichsavesusalotoftime.Ihopetheholidaywillbeanunforgettableexperience.【解析】【詳解】試題分析：本題給出了兩個城市的飛行時常、氣溫、旅館情況。食物等相關(guān)信息，要求考生對每個信息進行比較，選擇自己要去的暑假旅游目的地。雖然字數(shù)要求不多，但可以很好地考查考生英語寫作的基本功，需要考生對常用的英語句型熟練掌握。熟悉英語的表達方式。避免漢語式英語。句型不要都用簡單句。另外，一定要注意題目要求，把每一個信息都進行比較，不要有漏掉。寫作亮點：本篇作文按照題目要求選擇了城市A作為自己暑假旅游的目的地。對于城市A的缺點，作者用了“Although”盡管一詞輕輕帶過。對于優(yōu)點則重點突出，因為在城市A可以做很多事情，作者在這里用了詞組“alotof”。在比較的時候，作者用了多種方式，使句子不單調(diào)，比如在比較溫度時，直接用比較級“higher”在說旅館時用了“l(fā)esscomfortable”，比較食物時，用了“as…as”等。在說選擇城市A的原因時，用了that引導的賓語從句。本文大部分都是復雜句，顯示了作者比較熟練的英語寫作水平。9．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說,她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華,請你給Jessica寫一封信,介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點：1.中秋節(jié)的時間；2.中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯,賞月,吃月餅等；3,我最期待的活動。要求：1.80--100詞〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整。DearJessica,I'mgladtohearfromyou.NowletmeintroducetheMid-AutumnFestivaltoyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJessica,I'mgladtohearfromyou.NowletmeintroducetheMid-AutumnFestivaltoyou.TheMid-AutumnFestivalfallsonthe15thofthe8thlunarmonth.It’sabigdayforusChinesepeople.Allthefamilymembersgettogethertocelebratethefestival.Intheevening,weusuallyhaveabigdinner.Andthenwegooutsideandenjoythefullmoon.Themoonthatnightlooksthebrightest.Withthebeautifulmoonupinthesky,wesittogethertoeatmooncakes,andshareourstories.Forme,thebestpartistoenjoythemoonandeatmooncakes.Mooncakestasteverydelicious.Theylooklikethemoon,bigandround.Yours,LiHua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋