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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Teachersareagift,especiallyTroy'steacher,Donna.Shealwaysgoesaboveandbeyondforherstudents,butwhatshedidforTroy'sfamilyistrulybeyondselflessnessbutamiracle(奇跡).Donnaisoneofthoseteacherswhopaycloseattentiontothestudentsintheirclassroom.Shebegantonoticesomethingoddinoneofherelementarystudents,Troy.Hewasnotactiveinclasslikehehadbeen.Troyusedtobeapassionatestudentinclass,engagingwithteachersandhisfriends.Beingahelpinghandtotheteacherandclassmates,Troywasalwayswelcomedbyeverybody.However,hewasallofasuddensoshutdownandhisbehaviorwassimplynotthesame.Heseemedtobesilentallthetime,andhiseyeslostlightofdesireforknowledgeandpassionforanyactivities.Donnagrewveryconcernedandwonderediftherewassomethinggoingonthataffectedhisperformanceatschool.So,shereachedouttoTroy'smomtoexpressherconcerns.Andthatwaswhenshediscoveredsomethingwrong.Forthepastyear,hismomhadbeeninstage-fivekidney(腎)failure.Shewasinpaineverydayanddesperatelyneededanewkidney.Butshehadararebloodtype,sofindingamatchforakidneytransplantwasvirtuallyimpossible.Herconditionhadbeenaverylongandanxiousjourney.Ithadbeensopainfulforthefamily,andithaddefinitelymadeanimpactonTroy.Andinclass,hehadbeensilentlycarryingthepainhismomwasgoingthroughathome.ThenewsbrokeDonna'sheart.Sheknewthatshejusthadtodosomething.ShewasthereasalovingfriendtohelpTroywithhisstudies,butshewasalsothereforhismom.DonnaresearchedhowtobecomeakidneydonoranddiscoveredthatshehadthesamerarebloodtypeasTroy'smom.Shegottestedand,surprisingly,shewasamatch.注意:1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。WhenDonnatoldthenewstoTroy'sfamily,everyonewassurprised.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Soonthekidneytransplanttookplace._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________老師捐贈(zèng)腎臟故事續(xù)寫(xiě)情感線:得知Donna匹配成功時(shí),Troy一家從震驚、不敢置信到滿心感激;手術(shù)成功后,喜悅與安心取代了長(zhǎng)久以來(lái)的擔(dān)憂,Troy從消沉變得開(kāi)朗,家庭氛圍也從壓抑轉(zhuǎn)為溫馨,大家對(duì)Donna的感激之情愈發(fā)深厚。故事線:Donna告知匹配成功消息,Troy一家震驚又感激。準(zhǔn)備腎臟移植手術(shù),過(guò)程緊張。手術(shù)成功,Troy媽媽逐漸康復(fù)。Troy在學(xué)校的狀態(tài)明顯好轉(zhuǎn),重拾往日活力。Troy一家對(duì)Donna表達(dá)誠(chéng)摯的感謝,以各種方式回饋。此事在學(xué)校和社區(qū)傳開(kāi),成為愛(ài)心傳遞的典范。主旨升華句:Thisactofkindnessnotonlysavedalifebutalsokindledthehopeandwarmthinafamily,showingthatlovecanovercomeanyobstacle.(這一善舉不僅拯救了一條生命,還點(diǎn)燃了一個(gè)家庭的希望與溫暖,表明愛(ài)可以戰(zhàn)勝任何障礙。)Donna'sselflessdonationisavividexampleofhowasingleperson'slovecantransformthelivesofothers,spreadingthelightofhumanityfarandwide.(Donna的無(wú)私捐贈(zèng)生動(dòng)地詮釋了一個(gè)人的愛(ài)如何改變他人的生活,將人性的光輝廣泛傳播。)Throughthisexperience,weareremindedthatinthefaceofdifficulties,thepowerofloveandselflessnesscancreatemiraclesandbringaboutpositivechanges.(通過(guò)這次經(jīng)歷,我們被提醒,在困難面前,愛(ài)與無(wú)私的力量可以創(chuàng)造奇跡并帶來(lái)積極的改變。)ThestoryofDonna'skidneydonationservesasapowerfulreminderthattrueloveliesinthewillingnesstosacrificeforothers,makingtheworldabetterplace.(Donna捐贈(zèng)腎臟的故事有力地提醒我們,真愛(ài)在于愿意為他人犧牲,讓世界變得更美好。)Thisheart-warmingeventshowsthatasimpleactofkindnesscanhaveaprofoundimpact,inspiringotherstospreadloveandcompassion.(這個(gè)暖心的事件表明,一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉可以產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)的影響,激勵(lì)他人傳播愛(ài)與同情。)示范一WhenDonnatoldthenewstoTroy'sfamily,everyonewasdumbfounded.Troy'smomcoveredherfacewithherhands,sobbinguncontrollably.Troy'sdadstoodthere,speechlessforamoment,beforepullingDonnaintoatightembrace.Troy,stillinshock,walkeduptoDonnaandwhispered,"Thankyou,Mrs.Donna."Donnagentlypattedhishead,saying,"Everythingwillbeokay."Soonthekidneytransplanttookplace.Themomentthedoctorannouncedthesuccess,Troy'sfamilyeruptedinjoy.Inthefollowingweeks,Troy'smom'shealthimproveddaybyday.Troy,nowfullofenergy,becametheclassmonitoragain.ThefamilyorganizedabigpartytoexpresstheirgratitudetoDonna.WordofDonna'skindnessspreadinthecommunity,inspiringmorepeopletobereadytohelpothersinneed.ItwasclearthatDonna'sactoflovehadnotonlysavedalifebutalsokindledafireofkindnessineveryone'sheart.示范二WhenDonnatoldthenewstoTroy'sfamily,Troy'smomstaredatherindisbelief.Tearsstreameddownhercheeksasshestammeredoutherthanks.Troy'seyessparkledwithnewhope,andhehuggedDonnatightly.Hisdad,overcomewithemotion,couldonlymutterwordsofgratitude.Donnajustsmiledsoftly,saying,"We'reallinthistogether."Soonthekidneytransplanttookplace.Aftertheoperation,Troy'smom'srecoverywasnothingshortofamazing.Asshegotbetter,Troy'sschoolworkimprovedsignificantly.Hewasbacktohisenthusiasticself,alwaysreadytohelpothers.Thefamilymadeahandmadethank-yo
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