讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)-以愛(ài)之名家務(wù)與機(jī)票里的深情+講義 高二下學(xué)期開(kāi)學(xué)英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Niallwasa10-year-oldboywhoenjoyedtheoutdoors.Hewasfondofparksandnaturetrailsandwassavingupforanewbikehecoulduseforhisoutdooradventures.Onedayafterschool,Niallcheckedtherefrigeratorforsomeleftovers.Hewasveryhungryafterspendingtheearlyafternoonplayingfootballwithhisfriends.HenoticedhismomLinda’sto-doliststuckontherefrigeratordoor.“Preparedinner,washthedishes，mowthelawn(修剪草坪),watertheplants，dothelaundry,cleanthehouse...”Niallreadthelist.Herealizedhismomwouldonlybeabletogotobedatoneo’clockinthemorningifshewantedtoaccomplisheverything.Andshehadtowakeupatfivetopreparebreakfastforbothofthembeforeschoolandwork.“Oh,Mom,’’Niallsighed.Hewassadthathismotherhadtoworkhardbecauseshewasraisinghimasasinglemother.Withouthesitation,hequicklyfinishedhismealanddecidedtohelpwiththehouseworkonhismom’slistintwohoursbeforeshecamehome.Niallfirstcleanedtheflooranddidthelaundry.Thenhewenttohismom’sroomtoputthefoldedclothesinthecloset,wherehesawabeautifulcard.Itwashismother’sbucketlist.Niallfoundhertopwishwastoflytoawhitesandbeachalone.Theboysmiled.Heknewhowmuchshelovedgoingtothebeachandhowmuchshehaddevotedtothefamily.Inspired,Nialldecidedtousethemoneyhehadsavedtobuyaplaneticketforhismom.Hecouldaskhisgrandmatoteachhimhowtobookaflight.Heimaginedhowhappyhismomwouldbewhenhehandedherthatticket.Smiling,Niallquicklyplacedtheclothesinsidethecloset.Therewerestillmanyotherchores—likemowingthelawn—thatneededtobedone.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意10歲的尼奧熱愛(ài)戶外活動(dòng)，正存錢(qián)買(mǎi)新自行車(chē)。一天放學(xué)后，他看到身為單親媽媽的媽媽琳達(dá)列在冰箱門(mén)上的待辦事項(xiàng)清單，發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽要忙到凌晨一點(diǎn)才能完成所有家務(wù)，第二天還得早起為兩人準(zhǔn)備早餐。尼奧心疼媽媽?zhuān)瑳Q定在媽媽回家前兩小時(shí)幫她做家務(wù)。他先打掃地板、洗衣服，在媽媽房間放衣服時(shí)，看到了媽媽的愿望清單，得知媽媽最想去白色沙灘獨(dú)自旅行。尼奧深受觸動(dòng)，決定用自己存的錢(qián)給媽媽買(mǎi)機(jī)票，并打算找奶奶幫忙訂票，之后他繼續(xù)下樓完成剩下的家務(wù)。故事山分析開(kāi)端：尼奧放學(xué)后看到媽媽忙碌的待辦事項(xiàng)清單，決定幫忙做家務(wù)。發(fā)展：尼奧做家務(wù)時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽的愿望清單，決定用自己的積蓄給媽媽買(mǎi)機(jī)票。高潮：續(xù)寫(xiě)部分，尼奧完成家務(wù)，媽媽回家，尼奧給媽媽機(jī)票，媽媽的反應(yīng)。結(jié)局：媽媽被尼奧的舉動(dòng)感動(dòng)，兩人關(guān)系更加親密，體現(xiàn)親情的溫暖。五處伏筆以及在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)伏筆：尼奧是單親家庭，媽媽獨(dú)自撫養(yǎng)他?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，突出媽媽看到尼奧的禮物后的感動(dòng)，強(qiáng)調(diào)單親家庭中孩子對(duì)媽媽的理解和感恩。伏筆：尼奧看到媽媽的待辦事項(xiàng)清單，決定幫忙做家務(wù)?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段中，詳細(xì)描述尼奧完成家務(wù)的過(guò)程，如修剪草坪時(shí)遇到的困難及如何克服，體現(xiàn)他對(duì)媽媽的愛(ài)。伏筆：尼奧看到媽媽的愿望清單，決定給媽媽買(mǎi)機(jī)票?；貞?yīng)：續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段中，描述尼奧在奶奶幫助下成功訂票，以及媽媽收到機(jī)票時(shí)的驚喜和感動(dòng)。伏筆：尼奧熱愛(ài)戶外活動(dòng)，存錢(qián)買(mǎi)自行車(chē)。回應(yīng)：可以在結(jié)尾提及尼奧雖然用了買(mǎi)自行車(chē)的錢(qián)，但他并不后悔，因?yàn)閶寢尩男腋８匾?，體現(xiàn)他的成長(zhǎng)。伏筆：尼奧想象媽媽收到機(jī)票時(shí)的快樂(lè)?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫(xiě)中，具體描寫(xiě)媽媽收到機(jī)票時(shí)的表情、語(yǔ)言和動(dòng)作，展現(xiàn)她的喜悅和感動(dòng)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段：詳細(xì)描述尼奧繼續(xù)完成家務(wù)的過(guò)程，如修剪草坪時(shí)可能遇到草太長(zhǎng)、工具不好用等困難，但他努力克服，最終完成了所有家務(wù)，滿心期待媽媽回家。第二段：寫(xiě)尼奧在奶奶的幫助下成功買(mǎi)到機(jī)票，媽媽回家后，尼奧將機(jī)票遞給媽媽?zhuān)瑡寢尶吹綑C(jī)票后的驚喜、感動(dòng)，兩人溫馨互動(dòng)，表達(dá)彼此的愛(ài)。情感線一開(kāi)始，尼奧看到媽媽的辛苦，心疼媽媽?zhuān)瑳Q定幫忙做家務(wù)，情感上是對(duì)媽媽的關(guān)心和體貼?？吹綃寢尩脑竿鍐魏?，他決定給媽媽買(mǎi)機(jī)票，情感變得更加堅(jiān)定和溫暖。在完成家務(wù)和買(mǎi)到機(jī)票的過(guò)程中，他充滿期待。媽媽收到機(jī)票時(shí)，尼奧收獲了成就感和幸福感，媽媽則是驚喜和感動(dòng)，兩人的情感在互動(dòng)中得到升華。故事線尼奧放學(xué)后看到媽媽的待辦事項(xiàng)清單，決定幫忙做家務(wù)。尼奧做家務(wù)時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽的愿望清單，決定用積蓄給媽媽買(mǎi)機(jī)票。尼奧下樓繼續(xù)完成家務(wù)，如修剪草坪等，克服困難。尼奧在奶奶幫助下成功買(mǎi)到機(jī)票。媽媽回家，尼奧將機(jī)票遞給媽媽。媽媽感動(dòng)，兩人表達(dá)彼此的愛(ài)，關(guān)系更加親密。主旨升華句Loveisnotjustwords,butactionsthatshowcareandsacrifice.愛(ài)不只是言語(yǔ)，更是展現(xiàn)關(guān)懷與犧牲的行動(dòng)。Inafamily,smallactsofkindnesscanbringgreatwarmthandstrengthenthebondbetweenfamilymembers.在一個(gè)家庭中，小小的善舉能帶來(lái)巨大的溫暖，并加強(qiáng)家庭成員之間的聯(lián)系。Truehappinessliesinmakingthosewelovehappy,evenifitmeansgivingupsomethingwedesire.真正的幸福在于讓我們所愛(ài)的人快樂(lè)，即使這意味著放棄我們渴望的東西。Achild'sloveforaparentcanbeapowerfulforcethatovercomesdifficultiesandbringsjoytothefamily.孩子對(duì)父母的愛(ài)可以是一種強(qiáng)大的力量，它能克服困難，給家庭帶來(lái)歡樂(lè)。Familyiswhereloveisshared,sacrificesaremade,andheartsarefilledwithwarmthandgratitude.家庭是愛(ài)得以分享、付出得以展現(xiàn)、心靈充滿溫暖與感激的地方。寫(xiě)作示范示范一

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Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.Thelawnmowerwasabitheavyforhim,butNiallgrittedhisteethandstartedmowing.Thegrasswaslongandthick,makingthejobevenmorechallenging.However,hedidn'tgiveup.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,hefinallyfinishedmowingthelawn.Thenhewateredtheplants,makingsureeachonegotenoughwater.Bythetimehecompletedallthechores,hewasexhaustedbutfilledwithasenseofaccomplishment.Hecouldn'twaittoseethelookonhismom'sfacewhenshecamehome.Paragraph2:

Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.Afewdayslater,whenhismomgothomefromwork,Niallhandedhertheticketwithabigsmile.“Mom,thisisforyou.Youcanfinallygotothebeachyou'vealwayswantedtovisit,”hesaid.Lindawasstunned.Tearsfilledhereyesassherealizedwhathersonhaddone.ShehuggedNialltightly,saying,“Youarethebestthingthathaseverhappenedtome.Iloveyousomuch.”Atthatmoment,Niallknewthatallhiseffortswereworthit,andthelovebetweenthembecameevendeeper.示范二

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Thenhehurrieddownstairstodothem.Niallpushedthelawnmower,strugglingtomakeitmovesmoothlyacrosstheunevengrass.Hehadtostopseveraltimestoclearthegrassthatgotstuckinthemower.Hisarmsached,buthethoughtofhismom'stiredfaceandkeptgoing.Aftermowingthelawn,hewashedthedishes,scrubbingeachonecarefully.Finally,hewateredtheplants,enjoyingthesoundofwaterdropletshittingthesoil.Wheneverythingwasdone,hesatonthecouch,waitingforhismomwithexcitement.Paragraph2:

Assistedbyhisgrandma,Niallsecretlyboughthismomaplaneticket.Onasunnyday,whenhismomwasabouttostartherusualeveningroutine,Niallpresentedthetickettoher.“Surprise,Mom!It'stimeforyoutotakeabreak,”heexclaimed.Linda'seyeswidenedindisbelief.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,thenpulledNiallintoawarmembrace.“Ican'tbelieveyoudidthisforme.Youaresothoughtful,”shesaid,hervoicetremblingwithemotion.Niallfeltawarmglowinhisheart,knowingthathehadmadehismom'sdreamcometrue.【答案】Paragraph1:Then,hehurrieddownstairstodothem.Inthefollowinghour,Niallmowedthelawn,wateredtheplants,etc.Then,knowinghismomwouldreturnhomesoon,hesetthetableandheatedtheleftoversfordinner.Whenhismotherarrivedhome,Niallwasseatedatth