讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對(duì)點(diǎn)訓(xùn)練（解析版）-2025年高考英語(yǔ)寫作常考題型專項(xiàng)突破

專題17讀后續(xù)寫16大提分句式+對(duì)點(diǎn)精練

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”又稱為“with結(jié)構(gòu)”

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn'thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語(yǔ)+a可.open)

2.女孩心怦怦直跳(beatwildly),打開(unwrap)了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語(yǔ)+分詞)

3.他的妻子傷心極了,眼里滿是淚水(fulloftears/fi心dwithtears)

4.那個(gè)人躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。(ontheground,tremble)

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.

Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作A,BandC

Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls'100-meterhurdles",Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示動(dòng)作伴隨，原因或結(jié)果

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘子,

緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

句式4巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語(yǔ)：Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.

描述心情的名詞動(dòng)詞

happiness/joy/delight開心seize

anger/rage/furycatch（caught過去式）

sadness/sorrow悲傷strike（struck過去式）

gratitude/appreciation感激surround+sb.

admiration欽佩/贊賞takeholdof

guilt/remorse愧疚悔恨washover

fear/terror/fright/panic害怕comeover

astonishment/shock/surprise震驚

Relieved（=breathingasighofrelief）,Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,help

iscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口氣，向那個(gè)人表示感謝，并將頻率調(diào)回，“麥克，

救命來了！”但沒有回應(yīng)。

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

句式7：.“一...就...”的表達(dá)法:assoonas,hardly/scarcely...when..nosooner...than...,the

moment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doingo

Themomenttheannouncerannounced"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

SchooF9,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble,為

RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻,雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”：

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn'thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

句式9：主句，which從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

格式：主句，which第二句話；

例句：瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。Maryopenedthedoorandsaw

thelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

結(jié)構(gòu)2：格式：主句，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；主句

,whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情詞

例句：就在這時(shí)，我們聽到了UnclePaul遠(yuǎn)處傳來的微弱聲音，這重新點(diǎn)燃了我們回家的希望。

Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolight

thehopereturninghome.

句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子。（情感詞+fill+地點(diǎn)）

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累：（表達(dá)情感的形容詞+動(dòng)作具體描寫），用so…that

Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout"Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常興奮，神清氣爽，她

大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘”。

1.興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我動(dòng)得跳了起來

2.開心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高興得上跑下跳

3.感動(dòng)：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感動(dòng)得一句話也說不出來

4.悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我難受得用手捂住了臉。

5.（生氣）1wassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說不出。

6.（害怕）Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，

心怦怦直跳。

7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感覺自己的臉在燃燒。

升級(jí)：倒裝

SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.（當(dāng)我聽到消息時(shí)候，我太震

驚了以至于呆在原地）

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的

釘子，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls'100-meterhurdles",Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說“接下來是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激動(dòng)

而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.直

到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

呼應(yīng)主題常用句式

直到…才.…(1)倒裝句:notuntil+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)didsbrealizethat+主題從句

(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主穎從句

還記得某人的話，某人的話One'swordsechoed/rangoutinone*searsthat+主題

還在腦海中

Myteacher'sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/

beamofhope.

Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的媽媽一直教導(dǎo)我們要對(duì)困難保

持樂觀的態(tài)度。

Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是愛讓/使這個(gè)世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)起來

Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedher

confidence^她說正是我的陪伴和鼓勵(lì)不僅使我快樂而且提高了我的信心)

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句

主語(yǔ)從句

結(jié)構(gòu)1：Itis+adjforsbthat...

結(jié)構(gòu)2：whatIcoulddo/say/...isto

what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat...=itisimportantthat...

Whatmakemeanxiousisthat??

功能：用于突出某個(gè)動(dòng)作的重要或必須

應(yīng)用位置：不限

例句1：我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

例句2：我所看到的與我過去所經(jīng)歷的任何事情完全不同。

WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought

2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth

【例句】

1.在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.

2.我迫不及待地想把這個(gè)好消息告訴媽媽。

Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.

對(duì)點(diǎn)精練

一、對(duì)點(diǎn)精練-漢譯英

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

2.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,hehismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。

______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語(yǔ)

1.一想到即將到來的考試，他就感到無比焦慮。

___________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃逢?duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。

amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedthe

concertdate.

3.一種寧?kù)o的感覺籠罩了整個(gè)圖書館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。

___________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedon

theirstudies.

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。

,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào),JodieNymble,為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和

笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

didn'thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。

Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,.

句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子

空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累

我動(dòng)得跳了起來。

_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,.

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodo

it.

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,.

句式15：名詞性從句

我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

_____________________________,reachingformyson.

答案：

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

4.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開了她的禮物盒。

Withhermouthwideopen,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

5.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開了她的禮物盒。

Withherheartbeatingwildly,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,stoodwitheyesfulloftears.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。

Lyingontheground,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無靈主語(yǔ)

1.一想到即將到來的考試，他就感到無比焦慮。

Thethoughtoftheupcomingexamfilledhimwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃逢?duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。

Awaveofexcitementspreadamongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcertdate.

3.一種寧?kù)o的感覺籠罩了整個(gè)圖書館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。

Asenseoftranquilityenvelopedtheentirelibrary,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedontheirstudies.句式5：

情感形容詞+句子

興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。

Thrilledandrefreshed,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble,為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和

笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.答案：ThemomenttheannouncerannouncedHNumber11,JodieNymble,takes

thegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己沒有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn'thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，which從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

瑪麗打開門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。

答案：Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

句式10：描寫氣氛或者氛圍的句子

空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.

句式11:關(guān)于情感句子的積累

我動(dòng)得跳了起來。

IwassoexcitedthatIgaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句

我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay,

reachingformyson.

二、請(qǐng)使用現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子或小段落

1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,mcold.”

【答案】Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,"I'mcold.”

2.Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

【答案】Sittingbackinaneasychair,Ifellasleep.

3.WhenIsawnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

【答案】Seeingnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

4.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna?sdormitoryfrom

doortodoor.

【答案JArrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna'sdormitoryfromdoor

todoor.

5.Helookedatmeandbithislips,asifhewasthinking.

【答案1Helookedatme,bitinghislips,asifthinking.

6.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

【答案］Standingthereforafewmoments,Iheldtheten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

7.Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

【答案】Lookingveryastonisheduponseeingthecoatinthebag,hethenaskedhismothertocomeout.

8.‘Here,'hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

【答案】Saying'Here,'hehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

9.Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkinginthe

schoolcafe.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

【答案】Frowning,atallgirlansweredthedoor,tellingEmilythatZatannawasworkingintheschoolcaf

e.Uponhearingthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedher,andleft.

10.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus"onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouse

assheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.

【答案】Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus"onit,thendrovemeovertoBobbyDecker'shouse,

explainingthatIwasofficiallyoneofSanta'shelpers.

三、請(qǐng)使用獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)改寫下列句子

1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.

【答案）Tearsbrimminginhereyes,sheleft.

2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.

【答案】Theboystoodthere,hisfacerigidwithanger.

3.1claspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.

【答案】Handsclaspedbehindme,Iwastooshockedtosayaword.

4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.

【答案］Agirlcamein,abookinherhand.

5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.

【答案】Themanagersatquietlyintheoffice,hiseyesclosed.

6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.

【答案】Theysatintheroom,thecurtainsdrawn.

7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.

【答案】Oliverjumpedup,hisfacebrightredwithanger.

8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.

【答案】Lindaleapttoherfeet,hereyesblazingwithanger.

9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.

【答案】AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome,tearsshininginhereyes.

10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.

【答案】Hecried,hisblueeyesshiningbehindhisglasses.

四、請(qǐng)用過去分詞或形容詞改寫下列句子或小段落

1.ForafewmomentsIjus