Unit 7 A Day to Remember .（話題寫作指導）（教師版）

Unit7ADaytoRemember(話題寫作指導）【話題分析】值得記憶的一天本單元的話題是“值得記憶的一天”，要求能圍繞這一話題寫一篇有關(guān)學校郊游、周末活動或過去發(fā)生的事情的短文。在寫作時，時態(tài)以一般過去時為主，人稱主要是第一人稱。注意要交代清楚事情發(fā)生的時間、地點、經(jīng)過及感受。常用句型：Itwassunny/cloudy/windy/rainy...Wewentonaschooltrip...Wehadsomuchfun...Wehelped...Wepicked...Itwastiringbutinteresting.Itwasadaytoremember.【寫作實例】生活中有很多值得記憶的東西。你校英語報社正在開展以“ADaytoRemember”為主題的征文活動。請你結(jié)合以下提示，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，參加此次活動。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動的時間、天氣情況、參加人員、地點；2.具體活動；3.感受...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點撥】【教材典句】Todaywewentinaschooltriptoafarm!(SB,1b)Theworkseemedeasy,butittooktimetogetitright.(SB,1b)Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(SB，1b）Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.(SB,1b)【經(jīng)典范文】ADaytoRememberItwassunnylastSaturday.WewentonaschooltriptoRedStarFarm.Wehadsomuchfunthere.Ittookusonehourtogettherebybus.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmfirst.Thereweremanygoats,cows,ducksandchickensonthefarm.Thefarmertoldussomethingabouttheseanimals'livinghabits.IwasinterestedintheanimalsbecauseIlovedthem.Thenwehelpedthefarmerfeedchickensandducks.Afterthat,thefarmertaughtushowtomilkacow.Itseemedeasy,butittookussometimetogetitright.Finally,wehelpedthefarmerpicksomeeggs.Itwastiringbutinteresting.OnethingIlearnttoday:Keepinganimalsisn'teasy.Itneedslotsofwork.Itmademethinkweshouldvaluethetimeandworkhardforabetterfuture.Itwasadaytoremember.【亮點點評】①用lastSaturday點明活動的時間。②用wentonaschooltrip表達上周六的活動。③first,then,after,that,finally表明活動的順序。④用“Itwastiringbut...”表達對這次活動的感受。⑤"Itwasadaytoremember.”總結(jié)全文?！就綑z測】1．假如你是李華，你校廣播站以“MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchool”為題向?qū)W生們征稿。請你寫一篇英語文章投稿，內(nèi)容包括：學習、活動、遇到的問題、這一天的感受等等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱；4.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua.MyfirstdayherewasgoodbecauseIlearnedmanynewthings.Theclasseswereinteresting.Ilikescienceandhistorybest.Afterschool,Ijoinedthebookclub.Wereadandtalkedaboutbooks.Ialsoplayedgameswithmynewfriends.Howfunitwas!Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.Ishouldspendmoretimelearningnewwords.Overall,I’mhappyhere.I’mmakingnewfriendsandlearningnewthings.I’mlookingforwardtomoredayslikethis.Thankyouforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示的要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山。向大家問好，介紹自己。（開頭已給出）第二步，具體闡述。根據(jù)提示的要點，闡述在初中第一天的學習、活動、遇到的問題、這一天的感受等。第三步，書寫結(jié)語。展望未來，感謝大家的聆聽。[亮點詞匯]①findit+adj.forsb.todosth.發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事對某人來說很怎么樣②spendtimedoingsth.花時間做某事③overall

adv.總之④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Howfunitwas!（感嘆句）②Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.（省略that的賓語從句）省略（）2．假設(shè)你是李華，上周末你參加了一次郊游。請根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息，寫一篇題為“AnExcitingTrip”的英語短文。時間上周末參加者你和……地點北海公園（BeihaiPark）活動劃船、爬山、野餐（haveapicnic）、照相、做游戲……感受……要求:1.不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，表達正確；3.60詞左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnExcitingTrip

Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatmyhome.WewenttoBeihaiParkbybus.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedandwesangsongsonthebus.Whenwegotthere,wewentboatingonthelake.Weclimbedmountainsandhadapicniconthemountain.Afterthatwetooksomephotos.Thensomegirlsdancedunderthetreeandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wegothomeat4o'clockintheafternoon.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadagreattime.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為材料作文。要求根據(jù)題目所給要點提示寫一篇關(guān)于郊游的英語短文，文中所給要點必須全部包含，并可以適當加以拓展。2.寫作指導：寫作時人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱；時態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過去時；按照要點提示，準確表達，內(nèi)容條理清楚，無句法錯誤；可適當運用連詞或時間狀語從句，使文章內(nèi)容層次清晰。3．假設(shè)上個月，你參加了學校組織的去現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場的郊游活動，請以“Aschooltriptothemodernfarm”為題，寫一篇英語短文。提示問題：(1)Whodidyougotothefarmwith?(2)Howdidyougetthere?(3)Whatdidyoudothere?(4)Howdidyoufeel?提示詞語：pickstrawberries,feedcows,tiredbutveryhappy要求：1.60詞左右；2.在提示問題和提示詞語的基礎(chǔ)上，可適當發(fā)揮。Aschooltriptothemodernfarm________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AschooltriptothemodernfarmIwentonaschooltriptothemodernfarmwithmyclassmatesandteacherslastmonth.Wetookabusthere.Whenwegotthere,wepickedstrawberries.Thestrawberriesweredelicious.Afterthat,wefedcows.Thecowswereveryfriendly.Wehadareallygoodtimethere.Onthewaybacktoschool,Ifeltalittletiredbutveryhappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作。要求根據(jù)所給的要點提示來介紹你參加的現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場的郊游活動。注意要點齊全。2.寫作指導：本文應(yīng)用第一人稱和一般過去時來敘述。寫作時先開篇點題，然后敘述自己在現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場的經(jīng)歷，最后表達這次旅行的感受。在介紹內(nèi)容時，力求語言準確，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。做到無語法和標點錯誤。4．假如你是Kate，現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國際學校，上周你學校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡（placeofinterest），如長城、故宮、天安門廣場（Tian’anmenSquare)等。請你給你的同學Mike寫一封60詞左右的書信介紹一下你的這次學校旅行。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate【答案】DearMike,Howareyou?Howwasyourschooltrip?IwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmateslastweekinBeijing,China.Itwasgreat.YouknowBeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithaslotsofplacesofinterest.LastSunday,theweatherwassunny.WewenttotheGreatWallanditwasgreatandexciting.ThenwewenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwascool!NextwevisitedTian’anmenSquare.Itwasbeautiful.Oh,Itookalotofphotosonthetrip.Allofushadgreatfunontheschooltrip!Pleasewritebacksoonandtellmeaboutyourtrip.Yours,Kate【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一封書信，要注意書信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介紹上周的學校旅行，題中給出了旅行的相關(guān)內(nèi)容，在寫作中要進行運用，也可以適當增加細節(jié)，使文章更加流暢。2.寫作指導：本文主要是向朋友介紹上周的學校旅行，在介紹北京的情況時，用一般現(xiàn)在時，介紹旅行過程時用一般過去時。第一段主要是問候朋友；第二段重點介紹北京并描述旅行過程和感受，寫作時要注意連接詞的使用，使文章更加有層次；最后一段表達祝愿。寫作中注意時態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換，同時保證無語法錯誤和單詞拼寫錯誤。5．假如你叫皮特，請根據(jù)表格中所給的信息用英語寫一則旅行日記。詞數(shù)不少于60。DateOctober2nd,TuesdayWeatherwindyPlacetheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseumFoodchicken,friedfishFeelingdelicious,happy,tiredTuesday,October2nd

Windy___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tuesday,October2nd

WindyItwaswindyonOctober2nd.WewenttotheGreatWallandthePalaceMuseum.They’reverygreat.Thereweremanyvisitorsthere.Wehadchickenandfriedfishfordinnerinarestaurant.Thefoodintherestaurantwasverydelicious.Welikeditverymuch.Wehadagreattime.ItwasanexcellenttripinChina.Weweretired,buthappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇日記，主要從當天的天氣入手開始描寫，然后用記述的方式講述當天做的一些事情，把當天的經(jīng)歷寫清楚即可。2.例文點評：文章以當天的天氣情況展開描寫，詳細的描寫了當天做的一些事情，文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，格式正確，用詞簡單易懂，語言結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。3.高分亮點：短語：theGreatWall；PalaceMuseum；haveagoodtime。句型：and引導的并列句；Therebe句型?！菊骖}鏈接】1．（23-24七年級下·河北張家口·期末）隨著社會的發(fā)展，越來越多的人走進博物館。假如上周六（7月6日），你參觀了張家口博物館（ZhangjiakouMuseum）。請根據(jù)下面的圖示寫一篇短文，介紹你的博物館之旅。要求：1.短文須包含以上全部圖片信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.詞數(shù)60個左右。ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseum______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseumLastSaturday,IhadatriptoZhangjiakouMuseum.Itwasveryinteresting.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.ItwassunnylastSaturday.ZhangjiakouMuseumisveryfar.It’saboutfortykilometers.Iwenttherebybus.Ittookusaboutfiftyminutes.InthemuseumwesawalotofinterestingthingsandIlearnedalot.Ilearnedsomeinformationaboutthehistory,geographyandcultureofmyhometown.ItookalotofphotosandIboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.ItwasanexcellenttripandIhadagoodtime!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹博物館之旅；第二步，介紹時間、天氣、交通以及在博物館進行的活動等；第三步，介紹自己的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①interesting有趣的②sunny晴朗的③information信息④gift禮物⑤excellent極好的⑥haveagoodtime玩得愉快[高分句型]Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.(祈使句)2．（23-24七年級下·山東德州·期末）古人云：“讀萬卷書，行萬里路?！奔偃缒闶抢钊A，本周你需要在英語角活動上向大家分享你的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請根據(jù)以下要點及要求寫一篇英文短文。要求：1.參考要點內(nèi)容，并適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于80詞（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。Mytripto__________LastSaturday,Itookatripto__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoavillageLastSaturday,Itookatriptoavillagenearmyhomewithmyparents.Theweathertherewassunnyandwarmthatday.Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.Mymothertooksomebeautifulpictures.Afterthat,wepickedsomefreshfruitonthefarmtogether.Thenwehadlunchinasmallbutcleanrestaurant.Thefoodtherewasverydelicious.Intheafternoon,wewentfishingforanhour.Wedidn’tgohomeuntilitwasdark.ItwasgreatfuntostayinthevillageandIwashappyaboutthistrip.I’mlookingforwardtotravellingthereagain.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；

②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；

③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]

第一步，補全標題；

第二步，講述去農(nóng)村的旅行經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達自己的感受。

[亮點詞匯]

①atfirst起初

②lookforwardto期待

[高分句型]

①Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.（動詞不定式作主語）

②Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.（時間狀語從句）3．（23-24七年級下·山東德州·期末）假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸媽媽帶你去了北京旅游，請你根據(jù)下列表格提示寫篇英語短文，介紹一下你的旅游經(jīng)歷。行程我和爸爸、媽媽去了北京參觀了天安門廣場，國家博物館，在北海公園劃船去了老舍茶館，了解了老舍的生命歷程：吃了美味的食物，并給爺爺奶奶買了禮物。感受……提示詞：天安門廣場TiananmenSquare；國家博物館NationalMuseum；北海公園BeihaiPark劃船goboating；老舍茶館LaoSheTeahouse；駱駝祥子CamelXiangzi要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于60詞（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）。MyTriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutthetrip.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Andwevisitedmanyplacesofinterest,suchasTiananmenSquare,theNationalMuseumandBeihaiPark.AndinBeihaiPark,wewentboating.Itwasgreatfun!WealsowenttoLaoSheTeahouseandlearntalotaboutLaoShe.HewasborninBeijingin1899.Thenhebecameateacherin1916.Fiveyearslater,hewasinanewspaper.AndthenhewenttoEnglandandtaughtChinesein1924.Later,hecamebacktoChinain1929.Hemarriedin1931anddiedin1966.TwoofhisfamousworksareCamelXiangziandLaoSheTeahouse.Wealsohadsomedeliciouslocalfood,suchasBeijingDuck.Andweboughtsomegiftsformygrandparentsbeforeweleft.Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.Beijingisawonderfulplace.IthinkIwillgothereagain.【詳解】[總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括表格中所列要點，要適當補充，使文章內(nèi)容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。［寫作步驟］第一步，開門見山，引出話題：介紹去年暑假去北京的經(jīng)歷。第二步，介紹去北京的方式和參觀的景點；第三步，重點介紹老舍的生命歷程；第四步，品嘗美食以及其他活動；第五步，表達感受。［亮點詞匯］①manyplacesofinterest許多名勝古跡②suchas例如［高分句型］①Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.

(though引導讓步狀語從句)②IthinkIwillgothereagain.(賓語從句)4．（23-24七年級下·四川廣安·期末）假如你是Lucy，去年暑假和父母一起參觀了杭州，根據(jù)下面提供的信息，以“MyLastSummerHoliday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根據(jù)提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的小短文，可適當發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：第一天：Onthefirstday；西湖：TheWestLake；第四：fourth提示：1.第一天，參觀西湖，拍了許多照片。2.第二天，在湖里游泳，非常涼爽。3.第三天，野炊，食物很好吃。4.第四天，在街上散步，為朋友買了一些禮物。5.很累，但很開心。期待著下次再去。MyLastSummerHoliday_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyLastSummerHolidayIvisitedHangZhouwithmyparentslastsummervacation.Wehadagreattimethere.HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.WevisitedtheWestLakeandtookmanyphotosthereonthefirstday.Iswaminthelakethenextdayanditwasverycool.Wehadapicniconthethirdday.Howdeliciousthefoodwas!Iwalkedonthestreetandboughtsomegiftsformyfriendsonthefourthday.IleftHangZhou,feelingtired,buthappy.Iamlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為記敘文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中你的杭州之旅的介紹要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“以“MyLastSummerHoliday”為題，介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受?！眮硪鲋攸c介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“參觀的地點、自己的活動、感受等”幾個方面重點介紹你的杭州之旅的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，表達“期望再次去那里”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①haveagreattime玩得高興；②takephotos拍照；③buysthforsb給某人買某物；④lookforwardto期望。[高分句型]①HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.(“oneofthe+形容詞最高級+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”句型)②Howdeliciousthefoodwas!(感嘆句)5．（23-24七年級下·山東臨沂·期末）21世紀英文報正在舉辦以“MyTripto________”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，根據(jù)以下提示與要求，用英語寫一篇短文來投稿，分享自己難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷。提示:1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whodidyougowith?Andhowdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyoudothere?4.Howdidyoufeelaboutyourtrip?要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2.語言通順，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。MyTriptoBeijing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 MyTriptoBeijingLastyear,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsinthesummervacation.Wewenttherebyplane.WevisitedthewonderfulForbiddenCityandSummerPalace,climbedtheGreatWall,andwalkedthroughTiananmenSquare.What’smore,wewatchedtheraisingofthenationalflagintheearlymorning.ThefoodinBeijingwasalsoamazing.IlikeddeliciousPekingduckandlambhotpot.MytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.Itwasajourneythatnotonlyfilledmyeyeswithwonderbutalsotouchedmyheart.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，直入主題，介紹旅行的時間，地點和人物；第二步，具體闡述在這次旅行中都做了什么；第三步，談?wù)勛约旱母惺?。[亮點詞匯]①walkthrough穿過②theraisingofthenationalflag國旗的升起③notonly...butalso不僅……而且……[高分句型]①MytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.(定語從句)6．（23-24七年級下·河北石家莊·期末）假如你是李華，今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母坐火車一起去北京游玩了。請你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇日記，可適當發(fā)揮。日期5月1日天氣晴朗行程上午：游覽天安門廣場（Tian’anmenSquare）和故宮（thePalaceMuseum）中午：在一家餐館吃牛肉面下午：參觀名勝古跡長城感受雖然有點累，但是很開心。要求：1.意思連貫，表達準確，可適當拓展；2.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。May1st___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】May1stThisMayDayIwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Itwassunny.Wewereexcited.WevisitedtheTian’anmenSquareandthePalaceMuseuminthemorning.Therewerelotsofpeople.Atnoon,wehadbeefnoodlesatarestaurant.Intheafternoon,wevisitedtheGreatWallandtooksomephotosthere.Beijingisabeautifulcity.WhenIcameback,