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Unit7ADaytoRemember(話題寫作指導(dǎo))【話題分析】值得記憶的一天本單元的話題是“值得記憶的一天”,要求能圍繞這一話題寫一篇有關(guān)學(xué)校郊游、周末活動(dòng)或過去發(fā)生的事情的短文。在寫作時(shí),時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主,人稱主要是第一人稱。注意要交代清楚事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、經(jīng)過及感受。常用句型:Itwassunny/cloudy/windy/rainy...Wewentonaschooltrip...Wehadsomuchfun...Wehelped...Wepicked...Itwastiringbutinteresting.Itwasadaytoremember.【寫作實(shí)例】生活中有很多值得記憶的東西。你校英語報(bào)社正在開展以“ADaytoRemember”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合以下提示,寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文,參加此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括:1.活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、天氣情況、參加人員、地點(diǎn);2.具體活動(dòng);3.感受...______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路點(diǎn)撥】【教材典句】Todaywewentinaschooltriptoafarm!(SB,1b)Theworkseemedeasy,butittooktimetogetitright.(SB,1b)Itwastiringbutgreatfun!(SB,1b)Todaywasreallyadaytoremember.(SB,1b)【經(jīng)典范文】ADaytoRememberItwassunnylastSaturday.WewentonaschooltriptoRedStarFarm.Wehadsomuchfunthere.Ittookusonehourtogettherebybus.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmfirst.Thereweremanygoats,cows,ducksandchickensonthefarm.Thefarmertoldussomethingabouttheseanimals'livinghabits.IwasinterestedintheanimalsbecauseIlovedthem.Thenwehelpedthefarmerfeedchickensandducks.Afterthat,thefarmertaughtushowtomilkacow.Itseemedeasy,butittookussometimetogetitright.Finally,wehelpedthefarmerpicksomeeggs.Itwastiringbutinteresting.OnethingIlearnttoday:Keepinganimalsisn'teasy.Itneedslotsofwork.Itmademethinkweshouldvaluethetimeandworkhardforabetterfuture.Itwasadaytoremember.【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】①用lastSaturday點(diǎn)明活動(dòng)的時(shí)間。②用wentonaschooltrip表達(dá)上周六的活動(dòng)。③first,then,after,that,finally表明活動(dòng)的順序。④用“Itwastiringbut...”表達(dá)對(duì)這次活動(dòng)的感受。⑤"Itwasadaytoremember.”總結(jié)全文?!就綑z測(cè)】1.假如你是李華,你校廣播站以“MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchool”為題向?qū)W生們征稿。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語文章投稿,內(nèi)容包括:學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、遇到的問題、這一天的感受等等。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱;4.開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyFirstDayatJuniorHighSchoolDearSchoolmates,I’mLiHua.MyfirstdayherewasgoodbecauseIlearnedmanynewthings.Theclasseswereinteresting.Ilikescienceandhistorybest.Afterschool,Ijoinedthebookclub.Wereadandtalkedaboutbooks.Ialsoplayedgameswithmynewfriends.Howfunitwas!Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.Ishouldspendmoretimelearningnewwords.Overall,I’mhappyhere.I’mmakingnewfriendsandlearningnewthings.I’mlookingforwardtomoredayslikethis.Thankyouforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇話題作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示的要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,開門見山。向大家問好,介紹自己。(開頭已給出)第二步,具體闡述。根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn),闡述在初中第一天的學(xué)習(xí)、活動(dòng)、遇到的問題、這一天的感受等。第三步,書寫結(jié)語。展望未來,感謝大家的聆聽。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①findit+adj.forsb.todosth.發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事對(duì)某人來說很怎么樣②spendtimedoingsth.花時(shí)間做某事③overall

adv.總之④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①Howfunitwas!(感嘆句)②Butsometimes,Ifoundit’sdifficultformetolearnEnglish.(省略that的賓語從句)省略()2.假設(shè)你是李華,上周末你參加了一次郊游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格中的提示信息,寫一篇題為“AnExcitingTrip”的英語短文。時(shí)間上周末參加者你和……地點(diǎn)北海公園(BeihaiPark)活動(dòng)劃船、爬山、野餐(haveapicnic)、照相、做游戲……感受……要求:1.不要逐條翻譯表格中的信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語句通順,表達(dá)正確;3.60詞左右,開頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。AnExcitingTripLastweekend,Iwentonatripwith_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AnExcitingTrip

Lastweekend,Iwentonatripwithmyclassmates.At7:30inthemorning,wemetatmyhome.WewenttoBeihaiParkbybus.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedandwesangsongsonthebus.Whenwegotthere,wewentboatingonthelake.Weclimbedmountainsandhadapicniconthemountain.Afterthatwetooksomephotos.Thensomegirlsdancedunderthetreeandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wegothomeat4o'clockintheafternoon.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Wereallyhadagreattime.【詳解】1.題干解讀:本題為材料作文。要求根據(jù)題目所給要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇關(guān)于郊游的英語短文,文中所給要點(diǎn)必須全部包含,并可以適當(dāng)加以拓展。2.寫作指導(dǎo):寫作時(shí)人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱;時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí);按照要點(diǎn)提示,準(zhǔn)確表達(dá),內(nèi)容條理清楚,無句法錯(cuò)誤;可適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞或時(shí)間狀語從句,使文章內(nèi)容層次清晰。3.假設(shè)上個(gè)月,你參加了學(xué)校組織的去現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的郊游活動(dòng),請(qǐng)以“Aschooltriptothemodernfarm”為題,寫一篇英語短文。提示問題:(1)Whodidyougotothefarmwith?(2)Howdidyougetthere?(3)Whatdidyoudothere?(4)Howdidyoufeel?提示詞語:pickstrawberries,feedcows,tiredbutveryhappy要求:1.60詞左右;2.在提示問題和提示詞語的基礎(chǔ)上,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Aschooltriptothemodernfarm________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】AschooltriptothemodernfarmIwentonaschooltriptothemodernfarmwithmyclassmatesandteacherslastmonth.Wetookabusthere.Whenwegotthere,wepickedstrawberries.Thestrawberriesweredelicious.Afterthat,wefedcows.Thecowswereveryfriendly.Wehadareallygoodtimethere.Onthewaybacktoschool,Ifeltalittletiredbutveryhappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀:該題目屬于記敘文寫作。要求根據(jù)所給的要點(diǎn)提示來介紹你參加的現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的郊游活動(dòng)。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文應(yīng)用第一人稱和一般過去時(shí)來敘述。寫作時(shí)先開篇點(diǎn)題,然后敘述自己在現(xiàn)代農(nóng)場(chǎng)的經(jīng)歷,最后表達(dá)這次旅行的感受。在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí),力求語言準(zhǔn)確,內(nèi)容完整,保證行文連貫,條理清晰。做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。4.假如你是Kate,現(xiàn)在就讀于北京某國際學(xué)校,上周你學(xué)校組織了一次旅行。你們游覽了北京的許多名勝古跡(placeofinterest),如長城、故宮、天安門廣場(chǎng)(Tian’anmenSquare)等。請(qǐng)你給你的同學(xué)Mike寫一封60詞左右的書信介紹一下你的這次學(xué)校旅行。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate【答案】DearMike,Howareyou?Howwasyourschooltrip?IwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmateslastweekinBeijing,China.Itwasgreat.YouknowBeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithaslotsofplacesofinterest.LastSunday,theweatherwassunny.WewenttotheGreatWallanditwasgreatandexciting.ThenwewenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwascool!NextwevisitedTian’anmenSquare.Itwasbeautiful.Oh,Itookalotofphotosonthetrip.Allofushadgreatfunontheschooltrip!Pleasewritebacksoonandtellmeaboutyourtrip.Yours,Kate【詳解】1.題干解讀:本文是一封書信,要注意書信的格式,文章主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行,題中給出了旅行的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,在寫作中要進(jìn)行運(yùn)用,也可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使文章更加流暢。2.寫作指導(dǎo):本文主要是向朋友介紹上周的學(xué)校旅行,在介紹北京的情況時(shí),用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),介紹旅行過程時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)。第一段主要是問候朋友;第二段重點(diǎn)介紹北京并描述旅行過程和感受,寫作時(shí)要注意連接詞的使用,使文章更加有層次;最后一段表達(dá)祝愿。寫作中注意時(shí)態(tài)的轉(zhuǎn)換,同時(shí)保證無語法錯(cuò)誤和單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤。5.假如你叫皮特,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格中所給的信息用英語寫一則旅行日記。詞數(shù)不少于60。DateOctober2nd,TuesdayWeatherwindyPlacetheGreatWall,thePalaceMuseumFoodchicken,friedfishFeelingdelicious,happy,tiredTuesday,October2nd

Windy___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tuesday,October2nd

WindyItwaswindyonOctober2nd.WewenttotheGreatWallandthePalaceMuseum.They’reverygreat.Thereweremanyvisitorsthere.Wehadchickenandfriedfishfordinnerinarestaurant.Thefoodintherestaurantwasverydelicious.Welikeditverymuch.Wehadagreattime.ItwasanexcellenttripinChina.Weweretired,buthappy.【詳解】1.題干解讀:文章是一篇日記,主要從當(dāng)天的天氣入手開始描寫,然后用記述的方式講述當(dāng)天做的一些事情,把當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷寫清楚即可。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng):文章以當(dāng)天的天氣情況展開描寫,詳細(xì)的描寫了當(dāng)天做的一些事情,文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,格式正確,用詞簡單易懂,語言結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn):短語:theGreatWall;PalaceMuseum;haveagoodtime。句型:and引導(dǎo)的并列句;Therebe句型?!菊骖}鏈接】1.(23-24七年級(jí)下·河北張家口·期末)隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展,越來越多的人走進(jìn)博物館。假如上周六(7月6日),你參觀了張家口博物館(ZhangjiakouMuseum)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖示寫一篇短文,介紹你的博物館之旅。要求:1.短文須包含以上全部圖片信息,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.條理清晰,語句通順,語法正確,書寫規(guī)范;3.詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseum______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ATriptoZhangjiakouMuseumLastSaturday,IhadatriptoZhangjiakouMuseum.Itwasveryinteresting.Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.ItwassunnylastSaturday.ZhangjiakouMuseumisveryfar.It’saboutfortykilometers.Iwenttherebybus.Ittookusaboutfiftyminutes.InthemuseumwesawalotofinterestingthingsandIlearnedalot.Ilearnedsomeinformationaboutthehistory,geographyandcultureofmyhometown.ItookalotofphotosandIboughtsomegiftsformyfriends.ItwasanexcellenttripandIhadagoodtime!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”為主;③提示:根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作,注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步,表明寫作意圖,介紹博物館之旅;第二步,介紹時(shí)間、天氣、交通以及在博物館進(jìn)行的活動(dòng)等;第三步,介紹自己的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①interesting有趣的②sunny晴朗的③information信息④gift禮物⑤excellent極好的⑥haveagoodtime玩得愉快[高分句型]Letmetellyousomethingaboutit.(祈使句)2.(23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末)古人云:“讀萬卷書,行萬里路?!奔偃缒闶抢钊A,本周你需要在英語角活動(dòng)上向大家分享你的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)及要求寫一篇英文短文。要求:1.參考要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于80詞(開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Mytripto__________LastSaturday,Itookatripto__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoavillageLastSaturday,Itookatriptoavillagenearmyhomewithmyparents.Theweathertherewassunnyandwarmthatday.Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.Mymothertooksomebeautifulpictures.Afterthat,wepickedsomefreshfruitonthefarmtogether.Thenwehadlunchinasmallbutcleanrestaurant.Thefoodtherewasverydelicious.Intheafternoon,wewentfishingforanhour.Wedidn’tgohomeuntilitwasdark.ItwasgreatfuntostayinthevillageandIwashappyaboutthistrip.I’mlookingforwardtotravellingthereagain.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;

②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;

③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]

第一步,補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題;

第二步,講述去農(nóng)村的旅行經(jīng)歷;第三步,表達(dá)自己的感受。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①atfirst起初

②lookforwardto期待

[高分句型]

①Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.(動(dòng)詞不定式作主語)

②Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.(時(shí)間狀語從句)3.(23-24七年級(jí)下·山東德州·期末)假如你是李明,去年暑假爸爸媽媽帶你去了北京旅游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格提示寫篇英語短文,介紹一下你的旅游經(jīng)歷。行程我和爸爸、媽媽去了北京參觀了天安門廣場(chǎng),國家博物館,在北海公園劃船去了老舍茶館,了解了老舍的生命歷程:吃了美味的食物,并給爺爺奶奶買了禮物。感受……提示詞:天安門廣場(chǎng)TiananmenSquare;國家博物館NationalMuseum;北海公園BeihaiPark劃船goboating;老舍茶館LaoSheTeahouse;駱駝祥子CamelXiangzi要求:1.參考提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于60詞(開頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。MyTriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MytriptoBeijingMynameisLiMing.Lastsummervacation,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyparents.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutthetrip.IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Andwevisitedmanyplacesofinterest,suchasTiananmenSquare,theNationalMuseumandBeihaiPark.AndinBeihaiPark,wewentboating.Itwasgreatfun!WealsowenttoLaoSheTeahouseandlearntalotaboutLaoShe.HewasborninBeijingin1899.Thenhebecameateacherin1916.Fiveyearslater,hewasinanewspaper.AndthenhewenttoEnglandandtaughtChinesein1924.Later,hecamebacktoChinain1929.Hemarriedin1931anddiedin1966.TwoofhisfamousworksareCamelXiangziandLaoSheTeahouse.Wealsohadsomedeliciouslocalfood,suchasBeijingDuck.Andweboughtsomegiftsformygrandparentsbeforeweleft.Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.Beijingisawonderfulplace.IthinkIwillgothereagain.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇記敘文,為材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過去時(shí)”;③提示:文章應(yīng)該包括表格中所列要點(diǎn),要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充,使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí);行文時(shí)多用第一人稱,盡量多使用短語和句型;寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞,使行文連貫、順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步,開門見山,引出話題:介紹去年暑假去北京的經(jīng)歷。第二步,介紹去北京的方式和參觀的景點(diǎn);第三步,重點(diǎn)介紹老舍的生命歷程;第四步,品嘗美食以及其他活動(dòng);第五步,表達(dá)感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①manyplacesofinterest許多名勝古跡②suchas例如[高分句型]①Thoughthetripwasshort,Ifeltveryhappy.

(though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句)②IthinkIwillgothereagain.(賓語從句)4.(23-24七年級(jí)下·四川廣安·期末)假如你是Lucy,去年暑假和父母一起參觀了杭州,根據(jù)下面提供的信息,以“MyLastSummerHoliday”為題,介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受。根據(jù)提示,寫一篇不少于60詞的小短文,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯:第一天:Onthefirstday;西湖:TheWestLake;第四:fourth提示:1.第一天,參觀西湖,拍了許多照片。2.第二天,在湖里游泳,非常涼爽。3.第三天,野炊,食物很好吃。4.第四天,在街上散步,為朋友買了一些禮物。5.很累,但很開心。期待著下次再去。MyLastSummerHoliday_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyLastSummerHolidayIvisitedHangZhouwithmyparentslastsummervacation.Wehadagreattimethere.HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.WevisitedtheWestLakeandtookmanyphotosthereonthefirstday.Iswaminthelakethenextdayanditwasverycool.Wehadapicniconthethirdday.Howdeliciousthefoodwas!Iwalkedonthestreetandboughtsomegiftsformyfriendsonthefourthday.IleftHangZhou,feelingtired,buthappy.Iamlookingforwardtogoingthereagain.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文,為記敘文。②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中你的杭州之旅的介紹要點(diǎn),適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié),并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,表明寫作意圖。借用“以“MyLastSummerHoliday”為題,介紹你的杭州之旅以及你的感受?!眮硪鲋攸c(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容;第二步,具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“參觀的地點(diǎn)、自己的活動(dòng)、感受等”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹你的杭州之旅的具體情況;第三步,書寫結(jié)語,表達(dá)“期望再次去那里”的愿望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveagreattime玩得高興;②takephotos拍照;③buysthforsb給某人買某物;④lookforwardto期望。[高分句型]①HangZhouisoneofthemostbeautifulcitiesinourcountry.(“oneofthe+形容詞最高級(jí)+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”句型)②Howdeliciousthefoodwas!(感嘆句)5.(23-24七年級(jí)下·山東臨沂·期末)21世紀(jì)英文報(bào)正在舉辦以“MyTripto________”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。假如你是李華,根據(jù)以下提示與要求,用英語寫一篇短文來投稿,分享自己難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷。提示:1.Whenandwheredidyougo?2.Whodidyougowith?Andhowdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyoudothere?4.Howdidyoufeelaboutyourtrip?要求:1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2.語言通順,條理清楚,書寫規(guī)范;3.文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評(píng)分。MyTriptoBeijing____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 MyTriptoBeijingLastyear,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsinthesummervacation.Wewenttherebyplane.WevisitedthewonderfulForbiddenCityandSummerPalace,climbedtheGreatWall,andwalkedthroughTiananmenSquare.What’smore,wewatchedtheraisingofthenationalflagintheearlymorning.ThefoodinBeijingwasalsoamazing.IlikeddeliciousPekingduckandlambhotpot.MytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.Itwasajourneythatnotonlyfilledmyeyeswithwonderbutalsotouchedmyheart.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材:本文是一篇材料作文;②時(shí)態(tài):時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”;③提示:寫作要點(diǎn)已給出,考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步,直入主題,介紹旅行的時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)和人物;第二步,具體闡述在這次旅行中都做了什么;第三步,談?wù)勛约旱母惺堋亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①walkthrough穿過②theraisingofthenationalflag國旗的升起③notonly...butalso不僅……而且……[高分句型]①M(fèi)ytriptoBeijingwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforalifetime.(定語從句)6.(23-24七年級(jí)下·河北石家莊·期末)假如你是李華,今年五一節(jié)你和你的父母坐火車一起去北京游玩了。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的提示內(nèi)容,用英語寫一篇日記,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。日期5月1日天氣晴朗行程上午:游覽天安門廣場(chǎng)(Tian’anmenSquare)和故宮(thePalaceMuseum)中午:在一家餐館吃牛肉面下午:參觀名勝古跡長城感受雖然有點(diǎn)累,但是很開心。要求:1.意思連貫,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,可適當(dāng)拓展;2.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。May1st___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】May1stThisMayDayIwenttoBeijingwithmyparentsbytrain.Itwassunny.Wewereexcited.WevisitedtheTian’anmenSquareandthePalaceMuseuminthemorning.Therewerelotsofpeople.Atnoon,wehadbeefnoodlesatarestaurant.Intheafternoon,wevisitedtheGreatWallandtooksomephotosthere.Beijingisabeautifulcity.WhenIcameback,

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