讀后續(xù)寫+艾琳追小偷的故事+講義 高三下學(xué)期3月月考英語試題

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ElainewalkedoutthedoorofPetty’sFineFoods,clutchingabagofpies.Shewasnotafearfulperson.Butassheheadedtowardherparkedcar,thegrayinggrandmotherofthreecouldn’thelpnoticingtwoyoungmentrailingbehindheronthesidewalk.“Aretheyfollowingme?”shewondered.ItwasasunlitMayafternooninUticaSquare,anupmarketshoppingcomplex—hardlythetimeorplaceforstreetcrime.Elaineshookoffherfear.Therearedozensofpeoplearoundhere.I’mnotinanydanger.ButassheshiftedherbagandopenedthedoortoherToyota,oneofthemenrusheduptothecar.Heblockedherinononeside,whiletheotherpushedherandthenwordlesslyrippedthewhiteleatherbagfromhershoulder.Bothmentookoffrunning.Insidethebagwerehercreditcardsand$11.Butthat’snotwhatmadeherfrantic.Therobbershadherhousekeysanddriver’slicense—withheraddress.Elaine’ssix-year-oldgrand-daughterwasathomewiththenanny(保姆).Extremelyangry,shescreamed,“Theystolemypurse!”About15feetaway,Erinhadjustemergedfromthepostoffice.Erinoftenworkedwithelderlyclientswhoalsolookedtoherforemotionalsupport.Erinhadagoodunderstandingoftheirloneliness,listenedtotheirconcerns.NowsheheardtheterrorinElaine’svoiceandsawthetwomenrunningacrossthelot.They’regoingtobegoneifsomeonedoesn’tdosomething,sherealized.Theothershoppersseemedunaware.SoErinmadeaquickcall.She’dmakeenoughnoisetogeteveryone’sattention.Hopefullysomebodywouldstopthethieves.At50,Erinwasbynomeansanathlete.Norwasshedressedforachase.Still,shehadtokeepthemeninsightuntilhelparrived.Clutchingherpurseandwalletinonehandandherstampsintheother,shesprintedafterthem.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡

相應(yīng)位置作答。“Thosetwoguysstoleawoman’spurse!”shescreamed.______________________________________________________________________________________WhenthewomenhadtheguystrappedintheStarbucksbathroom,theywavedatsecurityguards._________________________________________________________________________________________艾琳追小偷故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）?第一段：?呼喊后的場景：細(xì)致描繪Erin呼喊后購物區(qū)瞬間的變化，人們臉上驚訝、疑惑的表情，停下腳步時的動作，如有人手中的咖啡差點(diǎn)灑出，“‘Thosetwoguysstoleawoman’spurse!’shescreamed.Hervoicereverberatedthroughtheshoppingcomplex.People'seyeswidenedinsurprise,andsomehaltedabruptly,theircoffeecupsnearlytippingoverastheytriedtofigureoutwhatwasgoingon.”。?Erin追趕細(xì)節(jié)：深入刻畫Erin追趕小偷時的身體狀態(tài)，呼吸急促、腳步沉重但堅定，眼神始終鎖定小偷，“Erin,herheartthumpingwildly,keptsprinting.Herbreathcameinshortgasps,andherfeetfeltheavy,buthereyeswerefixedfirmlyonthefleeingthieves.Sheignoredthediscomfortandpushedherselftorunfaster.”。?路人參與情節(jié)：全面展現(xiàn)路人從最初的不知所措到逐漸有人加入追趕的過程，描述他們的呼喊聲、奔跑姿態(tài)，以及相互之間的交流，“Atfirst,passersbywereinastateofconfusion.Butgradually,afewbraveindividuals,inspiredbyErin'sdetermination,joinedthechase.Theyshoutedwordsofencouragementtoeachotherandquickenedtheirpace,formingasmallbutdeterminedgroupinpursuitofthethieves.”。?第二段：?困住小偷場景：生動描繪將小偷困在星巴克衛(wèi)生間時，眾人的緊張與興奮，以及小偷的驚慌失措，“WhenthewomenfinallyhadtheguystrappedintheStarbucksbathroom,theirfaceswereamixoftensionandexcitement.Thethieves,realizingtheywerecornered,lookedarounddesperately,theireyesfilledwithpanic.”。?與保安協(xié)作：具體描述保安到來后，與Erin等人的交流，保安進(jìn)入衛(wèi)生間抓捕小偷時的果斷行動，“Thesecurityguards,alertedbythecommotion,rushedover.Erinquicklybriefedthemonthesituation.Theguardsnoddedandenteredthebathroomwithdetermination.Therewasabriefscuffle,andthentheguardsemerged,holdingthethievesfirmly.”。?后續(xù)情感互動：深入闡述Elaine與Erin見面時的情感表達(dá)，Elaine感激的話語、動作，Erin謙遜的回應(yīng)，以及周圍人對她們的稱贊，“Elaine,whohadbeenanxiouslyfollowingthechase,rantowardsErin.ShethrewherarmsaroundErin,tearsstreamingdownherface.‘You'remyhero.Yousavedmeandmygranddaughter,’shecried.Erinsmiledgentlyandsaid,‘Anyonewouldhavedonethesame.’Theonlookersapplauded,theirfacesfilledwithadmiration.”。?情感線（150字）?Erin起初聽到Elaine呼喊時，心中涌起正義感，毫不猶豫地追趕小偷，過程中因體力不支而疲憊，但堅定的決心未曾動搖。當(dāng)與眾人困住小偷時，緊張感達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)，隨后保安成功抓捕，她感到如釋重負(fù)。Elaine見到Erin時，滿心感激，淚如雨下，Erin則謙遜回應(yīng)。周圍人對她們充滿稱贊，整個氛圍從緊張危險轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)闇嘏椭C，大家因這次事件感受到人與人之間互助的力量。?故事線（6條）?Elaine在購物后準(zhǔn)備開車離開時，遭遇兩名男子搶劫，錢包被搶走，里面有重要物品，包括家門鑰匙和孫女在家的信息，她驚恐尖叫。?Erin在附近郵局聽到Elaine的呼喊，看到小偷逃跑，決定制造噪音吸引注意并追趕小偷，盡管自身條件不利，但決心堅定。?Erin呼喊后，購物區(qū)路人被吸引，部分勇敢者加入追趕隊伍，小偷加快逃跑速度，Erin等人緊追不舍。?眾人將小偷困在星巴克衛(wèi)生間，隨后向保安揮手示意，保安迅速趕來。?保安進(jìn)入衛(wèi)生間成功抓捕小偷，Elaine趕到，對Erin表達(dá)深深感激。?警察到達(dá)帶走小偷，Erin的行為不僅幫助Elaine找回物品，還讓社區(qū)居民關(guān)系更緊密。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisheart-warmingstoryvividlydemonstratesthatinthefaceofinjustice,thecourageofonepersoncaninspireacollectiveaction,highlightingthepowerofunityandtheindomitablespiritofthecommunity.?這個溫馨的故事生動地表明，在面對不公正時，一個人的勇氣可以激發(fā)集體行動，凸顯了團(tuán)結(jié)的力量和社區(qū)不屈不撓的精神。?ThroughErin'sheroicpursuitandthesubsequentcooperationofthecommunity,weareremindedthatkindnessandbraveryknownobounds,andtheycanbridgethegapbetweenstrangers,creatingamoreharmoniousandsecureenvironmentforall.?通過艾琳英勇的追趕以及隨后社區(qū)的合作，我們被提醒，善良和勇敢是無限的，它們可以彌合陌生人之間的差距，為所有人創(chuàng)造一個更和諧、更安全的環(huán)境。?Thejourneyfromtheshockoftherobberytothetriumphofjusticeshowcasestheresilienceofthehumanspiritandtheprofoundimpactthatasingleactofcouragecanhave,notonlyonthevictimbutalsoontheentirecommunity.?從搶劫的震驚到正義的勝利之旅，展示了人類精神的韌性以及一個勇敢行為所能產(chǎn)生的深遠(yuǎn)影響，不僅對受害者，而且對整個社區(qū)都是如此。?Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthateveryindividualhasthepotentialtobeahero,andbystandingupforwhatisright,wecanmakeasignificantdifferenceintheworldaroundus.?這個故事有力地提醒我們，每個人都有成為英雄的潛力，通過堅持正義，我們可以在我們周圍的世界中產(chǎn)生重大影響。?FromErin'sinitialdecisiontochasethethievestothecelebrationofjusticeachieved,weseethatintimesofcrisis,thecommunitycancometogether,andthebondsbetweenpeoplecanbestrengthened,teachingusthetruemeaningofsolidarityandcompassion.?從艾琳最初決定追趕小偷到慶祝正義的實(shí)現(xiàn)，我們看到，在危機(jī)時刻，社區(qū)可以團(tuán)結(jié)起來，人與人之間的聯(lián)系可以加強(qiáng)，教導(dǎo)我們團(tuán)結(jié)和同情的真正含義。?寫作示范一?“Thosetwoguysstoleawoman’spurse!”shescreamed.Hervoicecutthroughthebustlingnoiseoftheshoppingcomplex.Passersbyfrozeintheirtracks,theireyesscanningtheareainconfusion.Erin,herheartpoundinglikeadrum,tookoffafterthethieves.Herlegsfeltlikelead,butsherefusedtostop.Sheshoutedforhelp,andslowly,agroupofpeoplejoinedher.Thethieves,realizingtheywerebeingchased,dartedthroughthecrowd,butErinwashotontheirheels.Shecouldfeeltheadrenalinepumpingthroughherveins,givingherthestrengthtokeepgoing.?WhenthewomenfinallymanagedtotraptheguysintheStarbucksbathroom,theywavedfranticallyatthesecurityguards.Theguards,whohadbeenalertedbythecommotion,rushedoverimmediately.Theyenteredthebathroomand,afterabriefstruggle,apprehendedthethieves.Erinletoutalong-awaitedsighofrelief.Elaine,whohadbeenanxiouslyfollowingthechase,ranuptoErinandhuggedhertightly.“Yousavedmylifeandmygranddaughter's,”shecried.Erinsmiledandsaid,“Weallhavetolookoutforeachother.”Thepolicearrivedshortlyafterandtookthethievesaway.Erin'sactofbraverynotonlyrestoredElaine'sbelongingsbutalsobroughtthecommunitycloser,showingthatalittlecouragecangoalongway.?寫作示范二?“Thosetwoguysstoleawoman’spurse!”shescreamed.Thesoundechoedthroughouttheshoppingcomplex,causingastiramongtheshoppers.Somepeoplelookedaroundinshock,whileothersquicklyjoinedErininthepursuit.Erin,despiteherlackofathleticability,pushedherselftothelimit.Herbreathwasragged,andherfeethurt,butshekepthereyesfixedonthethieves.Assheran,sheshoutedencouragementtotheothers,andtogether,theyformedadeterminedgroup.Thethieves,sensingthegrowingpressure,triedtolosetheirpursuers,butErinrefusedtobedeterred.?WhenthewomenhadtheguyscorneredintheStarbucksbathroom,theysignaledthesecurityguards.Theguards,whohadbeeninformedofthesituation,rushedinandswiftlyapprehendedthethieves.Erinandtheotherwomenletoutacollectivesighofrelief.Elaine,hereyesfilledwithtears,ranovertoErin.“Ican'tthankyouenough,”shesobbed.Erinpattedheronthebackandsaid,“It'swhatweshoulddoforeachother.”Thepolicesoonarrivedandtookthethievesintocustody.Erin'sheroicdeednotonlybroughtjusticetothesituationbutalsoleftalastingimpressiononthe