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專題17讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)16大提分句式+對(duì)點(diǎn)精練

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)”又稱為“with結(jié)構(gòu)”

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒(méi)有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開(kāi)了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語(yǔ)+adj.open)

2.女孩心怦怦直跳（beatwildly），打開(kāi)（unwrap）了她的禮物盒。(with+賓語(yǔ)+分詞)

3.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水（fulloftears/filledwithtears）

4.那個(gè)人躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。（ontheground,tremble）

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithhermouthwideopen.

Thegirlunwrappedthegiftboxwithherheartbeatingwildly.

Hiswifewasextremelysad,witheyesfulloftears/withtearsrollingdownherface

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作A,BandC

Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說(shuō)“接下來(lái)是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示動(dòng)作伴隨，原因或結(jié)果

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘子，

緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

句式4巧用生動(dòng)的無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：Astrong/intensesenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews.

Relieved(=breathingasighofrelief),Ericthankedthemanandswitchedthefrequencyback,“Mac,help

iscoming!”Buttherewasnoresponse.埃里克松了一口氣，向那個(gè)人表示感謝，并將頻率調(diào)回，“麥克，

救命來(lái)了！”但沒(méi)有回應(yīng)。

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie激動(dòng)而高

興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽(tīng)到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來(lái)了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

句式7：.“一……就……”的表達(dá)法：assoonas,hardly/scarcely…when…,nosooner…than…,the

moment/minute/second/instant,immediately/instantly/directly,on/upon+n.doing。

Themomenttheannouncerannounced“Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School”,thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為

RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻,雷鳴般的歡呼和笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”:

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.一想到自己沒(méi)有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

句式9：主句，which從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

格式：_______主句________，which第二句話；

例句：瑪麗打開(kāi)門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。Maryopenedthedoorandsaw

thelittlegirl，whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

結(jié)構(gòu)2：格式：_______主句________，whichenable/forced/allowedsbtodo；_______主句________，

whichmade/forced/allowedsb感情詞

例句：就在這時(shí)，我們聽(tīng)到了UnclePaul遠(yuǎn)處傳來(lái)的微弱聲音，這重新點(diǎn)燃了我們回家的希望。

Justatthemoment,weheardthefaintvoiceinthedistancefromUnclePaul,whichallowedustolightthe

hopereturninghome.

句式10：描寫(xiě)氣氛或者氛圍的句子。（情感詞+fill+地點(diǎn)）

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累：(表達(dá)情感的形容詞+動(dòng)作具體描寫(xiě))，用so…that

Jodiewassoexcitedandrefreshedthatsheyelledout“Myluckyspikes”.朱迪非常興奮，神清氣爽，她

大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘”。

1.興奮：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我動(dòng)得跳了起來(lái)

2.開(kāi)心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown.我高興得上跑下跳

3.感動(dòng)：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword.我感動(dòng)得一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)

4.悲傷：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands.我難受得用手捂住了臉。

5.(生氣)IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我氣得一句話也說(shuō)不出。

6.（害怕）Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded.我害怕得手心汗，

心怦怦直跳。

7.（羞愧）IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning.我羞愧得感覺(jué)自己的臉在燃燒。

升級(jí)：倒裝

SoshockedwasIthatIwasfrozentothespotthemomentIheardthenews.(當(dāng)我聽(tīng)到消息時(shí)候，我太震

驚了以至于呆在原地)

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

（1）Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.Jodie穿著她嶄新的

釘子，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

（2）Whentheannouncersaid“Nextupisthegirls’100-meterhurdles”,Jodietookadeepbreathand

walkedtothestartinglineslowly.當(dāng)播音員說(shuō)“接下來(lái)是女子100米欄”時(shí)，朱迪深吸一口氣，慢慢地

走到起跑線上。

（3）Thrilledandjoyful,Jodiehuggedherteammatestightlywithtearsrollingdownherface.Jodie.激動(dòng)

而高興，緊緊地?fù)肀е?duì)友，淚水從臉上滑落。

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

呼應(yīng)主題常用句式

直到...才.…(1)倒裝句:notuntil+時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)didsbrealizethat+主題從句

(2)強(qiáng)調(diào)句:itwasonlythenthatsbrealizedthat+主穎從句

還記得某人的話，某人的話還One’swordsechoed/rangoutinone'searsthat+主題

在腦海中

Myteacher’sencouragingwordsstillechoed/lingered/rangoutinmyears,bringingmeaglimmer/ray/

beamofhope.

Itwasmymotherwhotaughtustoholdapositiveattitudetolife.是我的媽媽一直教導(dǎo)我們要對(duì)困難保

持樂(lè)觀的態(tài)度。

Itwaslovethatmakestheworldgoaround.正是愛(ài)讓/使這個(gè)世界運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)起來(lái)

Shesaidthatitwasmycompanyandencouragementthatnotonlymadeherhappybutalsoimprovedher

confidence.(她說(shuō)正是我的陪伴和鼓勵(lì)不僅使我快樂(lè)而且提高了我的信心）

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句

主語(yǔ)從句

結(jié)構(gòu)1：Itis+adjforsbthat…

結(jié)構(gòu)2：whatIcoulddo/say/…isto

what(counts/matters/impressme)mostisthat…=itisimportantthat…

Whatmakemeanxiousisthat>>>>

功能：用于突出某個(gè)動(dòng)作的重要或必須

應(yīng)用位置：不限

例句1：我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

例句2：我所看到的與我過(guò)去所經(jīng)歷的任何事情完全不同。

WhatIsawwascompletelyunlikeanythingIhadexperiencedinthepast.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

1.Withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought

2.Couldnot/hardlywaittodosth

【例句】

1.在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezing/bitterlycoldwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

withoutdelay/hesitation/asecondthought,reachingformyson.

2.我迫不及待地想把這個(gè)好消息告訴媽媽。

Icouldhardlywaittoinformmymotherofthisgoodnews.

對(duì)點(diǎn)精練

一、對(duì)點(diǎn)精練--漢譯英

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

1.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開(kāi)了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

2.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開(kāi)了她的禮物盒。

______________________________,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來(lái)。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,he______________________________hismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,______________________________.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。

______________________________,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)

1.一想到即將到來(lái)的考試，他就感到無(wú)比焦慮。

__________________________________________________________himwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃?lè)隊(duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。

_____________________________amongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcert

date.

3.一種寧?kù)o的感覺(jué)籠罩了整個(gè)圖書(shū)館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。

__________________________________________________________,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedon

theirstudies.

句式5：情感形容詞+句子

興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。

_____________________________,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽(tīng)到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來(lái)了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

_____________________________,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和

笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.

_____________________________"Number11,JodieNymble,takesthegoldforRiversideMiddle

School",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己沒(méi)有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

_____________________________didn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

瑪麗打開(kāi)門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。

Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,_____________________________.

句式10：描寫(xiě)氣氛或者氛圍的句子

空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

_____________________________.

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累

我動(dòng)得跳了起來(lái)。

_____________________________Igaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,_____________________________.

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

_____________________________thatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodo

it.

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,_____________________________.

句式15：名詞性從句

我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

_____________________________wastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriver

_____________________________,reachingformyson.

答案：

句式1：With+復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)

4.那女孩張大了嘴巴，打開(kāi)了她的禮物盒。

Withhermouthwideopen,thegirlopenedhergiftbox.

5.女孩心怦怦直跳，打開(kāi)了她的禮物盒。

Withherheartbeatingwildly,thegirlunwrappedhergiftbox.

句式2：并列謂語(yǔ)，細(xì)化動(dòng)作

1.他看到包里的外套后，非常驚訝，然后叫他媽媽出來(lái)。

Seeingthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthencalledhismothertocomeout.

2.他的妻子傷心極了，眼里滿是淚水。

Hiswife,extremelysad,stoodwitheyesfulloftears.

句式3：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子

他躺在地上，雙手顫抖著。

Lyingontheground,hetrembledwithhishands.

句式4：巧用生動(dòng)的無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)

1.一想到即將到來(lái)的考試，他就感到無(wú)比焦慮。

Thethoughtoftheupcomingexamfilledhimwithimmenseanxiety.

2.一股激動(dòng)的情緒在人群中蔓延，因?yàn)闃?lè)隊(duì)的主唱宣布了演唱會(huì)的日期。

Awaveofexcitementspreadamongthecrowdastheleadsingerofthebandannouncedtheconcertdate.

3.一種寧?kù)o的感覺(jué)籠罩了整個(gè)圖書(shū)館，每個(gè)人都在專心致志地學(xué)習(xí)。

Asenseoftranquilityenvelopedtheentirelibrary,witheveryonedeeplyfocusedontheirstudies.句式5：

情感形容詞+句子

興奮和精神煥發(fā)，朱迪大叫“我的幸運(yùn)釘鞋”。

Thrilledandrefreshed,Jodieyelledout"Myluckyspikes".

句式6：巧用時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表達(dá)情節(jié)

好像經(jīng)歷了一個(gè)世紀(jì)之后，埃里克聽(tīng)到了另一個(gè)聲音。終于來(lái)了，是雪山救援隊(duì)！

Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,Ericheardanothervoice.ItwasSlideMountainRescuewhofinally

came!

句式7：“一……就……”的表達(dá)法

當(dāng)播音員宣布“11號(hào)，JodieNymble，為RiversideMiddleSchool奪金”的那一刻，雷鳴般的歡呼和

笑聲充滿了HiddenPark.答案：Themomenttheannouncerannounced"Number11,JodieNymble,takes

thegoldforRiversideMiddleSchool",thunderouscheersandlaughterfilledtheHiddenPark.

句式8：巧用“某人想到”

一想到自己沒(méi)有幸運(yùn)的釘子，她就更加焦慮，心跳加速，腳出汗。

Atthethoughtofthefactthatshedidn’thaveluckyspikes,shefeltmoreanxiouswithherheartbeating

fastandherfeetsweating.

句式9：主句，which從句（定語(yǔ)從句）

瑪麗打開(kāi)門看到了小女孩，她有著令她熟悉的眼睛和黑色的頭發(fā)。

答案：Maryopenedthedoorandsawthelittlegirl,whohadfamiliareyesandblackhair.

句式10：描寫(xiě)氣氛或者氛圍的句子

空氣中彌漫著憂慮和焦慮。

Worryandanxietyfilledtheair.

句式11：關(guān)于情感句子的積累

我動(dòng)得跳了起來(lái)。

IwassoexcitedthatIgaveajumpintheair.

句式12：副詞修飾動(dòng)詞或句子

Jodie穿著她嶄新的釘鞋，緊張不安地等待著輪到她。

Jodieworeherbrand-newspikes,waitingforherturnnervouslyandanxiously.

句式13：倒裝或強(qiáng)調(diào)

直到那時(shí)，朱迪才意識(shí)到，只要她不遺余力地去做，運(yùn)氣總是會(huì)眷顧她。

NotuntilthendidJodierealizethatluckwouldalwaysfavorheraslongasshesparednoefforttodoit.

句式14：獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)

她手里顫抖著拿錢，眼里淚水涌起。

Shetookmoneywithshakinghands,tearswellingupinhereyes.

句式15：名詞性從句

我們能做的就是慢慢沿著原路回去。

Whatwecoulddowastogobackalongtheprevioustrack.

句式16：毫不猶豫/迫不及待做某事

在一個(gè)下雪的冬天早上，水冰冷刺骨，但那個(gè)年輕人毫不猶豫/遲疑地跳進(jìn)水里，伸手去夠我兒子。

Onasnowywintermorningwiththefreezingwater,theyoungmanjumpedintotheriverwithoutdelay,

reachingformyson.

二、請(qǐng)使用現(xiàn)在分詞結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)下列句子或小段落

1.Hewastremblinginablanketandhesaid,“I’mcold.”

______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Tremblinginablanket,hesaid,“I’mcold.”

2.Isatbackinaneasychairandfellasleep.

______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Sittingbackinaneasychair,Ifellasleep.

3.WhenIsawnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Seeingnoonenoticingus,IputtheChristmaspresentdownandleft.

4.Whenshearrivedthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,andaskedforZatanna’sdormitoryfrom

doortodoor.

______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Arrivingthere,shesearchedtheunfamiliarbuilding,askingforZatanna’sdormitoryfromdoor

todoor.

5.Helookedatmeandbithislips,asifhewasthinking.

______________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】Helookedatme,bitinghislips,asifthinking.

6.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iheldthatten-dollarbillandIwonderedwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

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【答案】Standingthereforafewmoments,Iheldtheten-dollarbill,wonderingwhattobuyandwhoto

buyitfor.

7.Whenhesawthecoatinthebag,helookedveryastonishedandthenaskedhismothertocomeout.

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【答案】Lookingveryastonisheduponseeingthecoatinthebag,hethenaskedhismothertocomeout.

8.‘Here,’hesaid.Atthesametimehehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

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【答案】Saying‘Here,’hehandedthecoinstothegatekeeper.

9.Atallgirlansweredthedoorandshewasfrowning.ShetoldEmilythatZatannawasworkinginthe

schoolcafé.Whensheheardthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedherandleft.

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【答案】Frowning,atallgirlansweredthedoor,tellingEmilythatZatannawasworkingintheschoolcafé.

Uponhearingthis,Emilyforcedafaintsmile,thankedher,andleft.

10.Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit.ThenshedrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse

assheexplainedIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

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【答案】Shewrote“ToBobby,FromSantaClaus”onit,thendrovemeovertoBobbyDecker’shouse,

explainingthatIwasofficiallyoneofSanta’shelpers.

三、請(qǐng)使用獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)改寫(xiě)下列句子

1.Hereyesbrimmedwithtears,andsheleft.

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【答案】Tearsbrimminginhereyes,sheleft.

2.Theboystoodthereandhisfacewasrigidwithanger.

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【答案】Theboystoodthere,hisfacerigidwithanger.

3.IclaspedmyhandsbehindmeandIwastooshockedtosayaword.

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【答案】Handsclaspedbehindme,Iwastooshockedtosayaword.

4.Agirlcameinwithabookinherhand.

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【答案】Agirlcamein,abookinherhand.

5.Themanagersatquietlyintheofficeandhiseyeswereclosed.

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【答案】Themanagersatquietlyintheoffice,hiseyesclosed.

6.Theysatintheroomwiththecurtainsdrawn.

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【答案】Theysatintheroom,thecurtainsdrawn.

7.Oliverjumpedupandhisfacewasbrightredwithanger.

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【答案】Oliverjumpedup,hisfacebrightredwithanger.

8.Lindaleapttoherfeetandhereyeswereblazingwithanger.

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【答案】Lindaleapttoherfeet,hereyesblazingwithanger.

9.AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome.Hertearswereshininginhereyes.

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【答案】AswehuggedRuthgood-bye,shesaidtome,tearsshininginhereyes.

10.Hecriedandhisblueeyeswereshiningbehindhisglasses.

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【答案】Hecried,hisblueeyesshiningbehindhisglasses.

四、請(qǐng)用過(guò)去分詞或形容詞改寫(xiě)下列句子或小段落

1.ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere.Iwasconfused.

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【答案】ForafewmomentsIjuststoodthere,confused.

2.Theywereveryfrightened.Theyalljumpedback.

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【答案】Theyalljumpedback,veryfrightened.或Veryfrightened,theyalljumpedback.

3.Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome.Theyweretiredandhungry.

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【答案】Intheevening,thechildrenreturnedhome,tiredandhungry.

4.Hewasexhausted.Hesatdownatthesideoftheroad.

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【答案】Exhausted,