求助信課件-高三下學(xué)期英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

應(yīng)用文寫作求助信1.寫作思維導(dǎo)圖求助信第一段：問候語+（自我介紹）＋背景呈現(xiàn)(寫信的目的)1.問候語：Howiseverythinggettingalongwithyourecently2.自我介紹：I'mLiHua,aseniorthreestudentwhoisplanningtostudyabroad.I'mLiHua,anexchangestudentfromYunnanprovince,China.3.背景呈現(xiàn)（寫作目的）：近來一切可好？一名打算留學(xué)的高三學(xué)生一名來自中國云南的交換生2.語言框架【例】最近，我在英語學(xué)習(xí)上遇到一些問題，這使我很苦惱。Recently,IhavemetsomeproblemsinstudyingEnglish,whichmakesmeveryupset.句式

1：Ihavemetsomeproblemsin...,whichmakesme...開頭：求助背景(基礎(chǔ)句式)句式

2：Ihavenochoicebutto...【例】我遇到的問題使我很苦惱。因此，我別無選擇，只能向您求助。TheproblemsIhaveencountered_________________________________.Therefore,I____________________________________.makemeveryupset/bothermealothavenochoicebuttoturntoyouforhelp知道你喜歡/對...感興趣，我寫信來尋求你的幫助。Knowingthatyouareinto/interestedin....Iamwritingtoaskyouforhelp/todomeafavour.知道你精通.../有經(jīng)驗(yàn)..，我想知道你是否能幫我一把。Knowingthatyouareexpertin/haveagoodcommandof/haveexperiencein....,Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavour/helpmewith...開頭：求助背景(高級句式)典型例句1）Ihavetrouble/difficultyingettingalongwellwithmyclassmates,soIamwritingsincerelytoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor/lendmeahand.

我在與同學(xué)相處方面有困難，所以誠摯地寫信來請求你能伸出援助之手。2）IamencounteringsomeproblemsinlearningEnglish,whichtroublemealot.KnowingthatyouarespecializedinEnglish,Ican'twaittowritetoyouinthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.我在英語方面遇到一些麻煩，這很困擾我。知道您專攻英語，我迫不及待寫信給你，希望你能好心地幫助我。3）I'mbusyinpreparingforgoingabroadforvacation,butunfortunately,I

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meafavour.我正忙于準(zhǔn)備出國度假，但不幸的是，我發(fā)現(xiàn)它很難處理，所以我在想您能否幫我一下【拓展】亮點(diǎn)句式：1.Ihavesomedifficulty/troublein(doing)sth.2.I’mwritingtoyoutoask/seekforsomehelp.3.Ifinditquitedifficultto...4.Facedwithsomanydifficulties,Ihavetoaskforyourhelp/Ihavetoturntoyouforhelp.5.Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpandprofessionaladvice.首段：背景介紹＋寫作目的knowingthatyouareanexpertinEnglishpoetry,I'mwritingyoutheletterinthehopethatyoucouldoffermesomeprofessionalguidanceformyEnglishpoetryreading［非謂語動詞，賓語從句，介詞短語，同位語從句］*knowing=Havingknowninthehopethat=hopingthat

句式

1：Whatpuzzles/troubles/bothersmemostis...【例1】最令我煩惱的是，我學(xué)得越多，得分反而越少。

，thelessscoresIget.Whattroubles/bothersmemostisthatthemoreIlearn主體：求助內(nèi)容(基礎(chǔ)句式)句式

2：Iwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceon.../Iamwonderingwhetheryoucouldhelpmewith…【例1】我想知道您是否可以就如何提高英語技能給我提一

些建議。IwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadviceonhowtoimprovemyEnglishskills.句式

3：Itwouldbeofgreathelpifyoucan…【例】如果您給我提供一些關(guān)于如何做好英語演講的寶貴建議，那將會是很大的幫助。ItwouldbeofgreathelpifyoucanoffermesomevaluablesuggestionsonhowtomakeawonderfulEnglishspeech.第二段-求助內(nèi)容-描述出現(xiàn)困難的背景我打算做/正在準(zhǔn)備做...,該（活動）致力于...Iintendtodo/ampreparingtodo/for...,whichaimsto...句1.我正在為音樂會做準(zhǔn)備，該音樂會致力于幫助外國學(xué)生更多地了解中國傳統(tǒng)音樂?！狪ampreparingforaconcert,whichaimstohelpforeignstudentsknowmoreabouttraditionalChinesemusic.主體：求助內(nèi)容(高級句式)求助信

第二段-求助內(nèi)容-遇到的困難然而，困擾我的事情是我...However,whatbothersmeisthat...我在做某事方面有困難。Ihavemuchdifficulty/troublein...句2.然而，困擾我的事情是我沒有任何組織過音樂會的經(jīng)驗(yàn)?！狧owever,whatbothersmeisthatIdon’thaveanyexperienceinorganizingaconcert/Iamatotalstrangertoorganizingaconcert.求助信

第二段-請求建議/征求幫助因此,我想知道你是否能就...給我一些實(shí)用的指導(dǎo)Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceon....此外，我希望你能...以便...。What’smore/Moreover,Ihopeyoucan...sothat句3.因此,我想知道你是否能就音樂會宣傳方面給我一些實(shí)用的指導(dǎo)。——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceonadvertisingtheconcert.求助信

第二段-請求建議/征求幫助因此,我想知道你是否能就...給我一些實(shí)用的指導(dǎo)Therefore,Iamwonderingifyoucouldgivemesomepracticalguidanceon....此外，我會很感激如果你能...以便...。What’smore/Moreover,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucan...sothat..句4.此外，因?yàn)槿狈σ恍┰O(shè)備，我會很感激如果你能聯(lián)系學(xué)校音樂俱樂部以便他們可以給我們提供一些設(shè)備?！?———————Moreover,lackingsomeequipment,Iwouldappreciateitifyoucancontacttheschoolmusicclubsothattheycanprovidesomeforus.求助信

第二段-請求幫助-約定時(shí)間地點(diǎn)最后，我想知道你是否方便（在某個(gè)時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)）幫助我們。Last,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutohelpusin...on...句5.最后，我想知道你是否方便明天下午在我們教室和我們一起討論一下?！狶ast,Iwonderifitisconvenientforyoutohaveadiscussionwithusinourclassroomontomorrowafternoon..【拓展】亮點(diǎn)句式：1.Iwouldliketoinquire（詢問）aboutanyeffectivemethodsyoumayhaveto…2.Iwouldliketoaskforsometipsonhowto…3.Ibelievethatyourexpertise[?eksp???ti?z]（專業(yè)知識）andexperiencein…wouldbeofgreathelptome.主體：說明困難＋請求幫助遇到：have=meet=encounter=comeacross=runacross困難：problems=trouble=difficulties做某事有困難：havesometrouble(in)doingsth［非謂語作主語］Doingsthisaheadacheforme.

［主語從句］Whatpuzzles/troublesmemostis[that＋句子）［定語從句］I'mencountering…problemswhichtroublemealot.主體：說明困難＋請求幫助遇到：have=meet=encounter=comeacross=runacross困難：problems=trouble=difficulties做某事有困難：havesometrouble(in)doingsth［非謂語作主語］Doingsthisaheadacheforme.

［主語從句］Whatpuzzles/troublesmemostis[that＋句子）［定語從句］I'mencountering…problemswhichtroublemealot.三大求助原因（選一個(gè)）第一次

Asthisismyfirsttime/experiencetodosth.Idon'tknowifthere‘ssomethingIshouldpayattentionto.有挑戰(zhàn)Therearesomechallengesstoppingmefromlearning(moreandbetter).好機(jī)會Ihopetomakegooduseofthisopportunitytodosth.soIwonderifyoucouldgivemesomeadvicesothat（這樣一來）Icantgetmyselfbetterpreparedinadvance.兩者／兩方面1.Foronething,…Foranother，…2.

Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand.三者／三方面首先：

First,…Tobeginwith…Tostartwith.其次：

What'smore,…Inaddition,Moreover最后：Finally,…EventuallyAtlast.…,Lastbutnotleast【基礎(chǔ)句】Ontheonehand.ItotallyhavenoideawhichpoemIshouldchose我不知道…

［升級1]Ontheotherhand,I'mdesperatelyinneedofsomeskillsofrecitation([?res??te??n]朗誦),includingpronunciationandintonation（語調(diào)）,whichwillperfectmyperformance.

［定從］☆需要

need=bedesperatelyinneedof=beindesperateneedof［升級2]:Ontheotherhand,someskillsofrecitationaredesperatelyneeded,includingpronunciationandintonation,whichwillperfectmyperformance您能給我一些幫助嗎？［升級1]Facedwiththeaboveproblems/Facingtheaboveproblems,Iamanxiousto（急于）getyourhelp.Couldyougivemesomeadvice［升級2]Ifyouarefacedwiththeseproblems,whatwouldyoudoAnyinformationwillbeabighelpforme.結(jié)尾：表示感謝，期盼回復(fù)(基礎(chǔ)句式)句式

1：I’dappreciateitif…【例】如果您能考慮我的請求我將不勝感激。I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration句式

2：…wouldbehighlyappreciated.【例】敬盼早日回復(fù)。Anyearlyreplywouldbehighlyappreciated第三段-表達(dá)感謝與期待“求人型”結(jié)尾：如果你能幫助我，我將非常感激。Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand.有你的慷慨幫助，我相信我們的音樂會將會很難忘。Withyourgeneroushelp,Ibelieveourconcertwillbeunforgettable.期待你早日回信。Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.結(jié)尾：表示感謝，期盼回復(fù)(高級句式)【拓展】亮點(diǎn)句式：1.Thankyouforyourtimeandpatience,andI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.2.Iwouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelpinthiscase.3.I’dappreciateitifyou’dliketooffermeahelpinghand.4.Iamtrulygratefulforanyassistancethatyoucanprovide.5.Yourinsightsandadvicewouldbegreatlyappreciated.6.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.7.Thanksinadvanceforyourtimeandadvice.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.8.I’mfirmlyconvincedthatIcanmakegreatprogressunderyourguidance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.尾段：表達(dá)感激＋期待回信表達(dá)感謝［升級1］Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldlendmeahand/dosbafavor.appreciateit=begraretul=bethankful［升級2]Anyinformation「youcanprovide]willbehighlyappreciated.I‘mlookingforwardtoafavorablereply（滿意的答復(fù)）atyourearliestconvenience（期待回信）

.寫作亮點(diǎn)①物作主語：人作主語化為名詞，動名詞作主語②介詞短語：eg（1）withspecialemphasis（重點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)）on+n/doingsth.(2)inthehopethat（希望）＋句子(3)withregardto（關(guān)于）+n/doingsthDear

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Hua3.模板寫作亮點(diǎn)③并列邏輯：活用and并列doing,todo④細(xì)化舉例基礎(chǔ)：nsuchasA,BandC

升級nindudingA,BandCnrangingfromAtoB/A,BtoC優(yōu)秀作文展示一Nextweek,thethemeoftheclassmeetingis"TraditionalChineseCulture,withspecialemphasis

onpresentingcolorfulclassmeetingontheEnglishwebsite,I'mwritingtoyouhopingthatyoucouldoffermesomesuggestions.I'mencounteringtwoproblemswhichtroublesmealot.Foronething,differenttraditionalChineseculture,rangingfromarts,sportstopainting,presentsparticularaspectsofournation.SoIhavenoideawhichoneIshouldchoose.Foranother,itmayseemchallengingformetopresentthepattern(模式)andtitleontheEnglishwebsite.優(yōu)秀作文展示一

ConsideringthatyouhavegreatpassionforChina,Iwonderifyoucouldprovidemewithsomeadvicewithregardtotheaboveproblem.Anyinformationyoucanprovidewillbehighlyappreciated.I'mlookingforwardtoafavorableresponseatyourearliestconvenience.優(yōu)秀作文展示二主題是向老師求助如何提高英語成績

DearTeacher,

Iamwritingthislettertoseekyourhelp.IhavebeenworkinghardtoimprovemyEnglish,butIstillfindmyselfstrugglingandnotachievingthedesiredresults.Ihavedifficultyinrememberingnewwordsandphrases.NomatterhowmanytimesIrepeatthem,Ioftenforgetthemwhenitcomestousingtheminwritingorspeaking.Also,Ihaveproblemsunderstandinggrammarrules.Igetconfusedwithtensesandsentencestructures,whichgreatlyaffectsmycomprehensionandexpression.優(yōu)秀作文展示二Inaddition,mylisteningandspeakingskillsarenotgood.IhavetroublecatchingthekeypointswhenlisteningtoEnglishmaterials,andIfeelnervousandunabletoexpressmyselfclearlywhenhavingEnglishconversations.IreallywanttoimprovemyEnglishandIknowyouhaverichexperienceandprofessionalknowledge.CouldyoupleasegivemesomeadviceandguidanceonhowtoovercomethesedifficultiesIwouldbeextremelygratefulforyourhelp.Thankyouverymuch.

假定你熱衷集郵，但你的父母并不支持這一愛好，于是你向一個(gè)名為“學(xué)生心聲”的專欄寫信咨詢解決的辦法。內(nèi)容包括：

1.你的意見：增長知識，減壓；

2.父母的意見：浪費(fèi)錢，占用學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間。注意：

1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearSir,I’masenior3studentinhighschool.Recently,myparentsandIhavetakenadifferentviewonmyhobby.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskyouforsomehelp.CollectingstampshasalwaysbeenmygreatpassionsinceIwasachild,whichnotonlybringsmeknowledgebutalsohelpsmerelaxunderthegreatpressureofstudies.However,myparentsarestronglyagainstit,fortheyconsiderit(as)awasteofmoney.Theyalsothinkthatsortingoutstampsmaytakeuptoomuchtime,whichshouldbespentonmystudies.Itseemsimpossibleforthemtobeinfavorofmyhobby.CouldyouhelpmeoutI’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintoconsideration!Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.DearMarcus,IamLiHua,astudentofyourclass.Confronted/Facedwiththechallengeofreadingforeignjournals,I’mwritingforyourgeneroushelpandinstructive(有益的)guidance.

Myprimaryconcern（我最關(guān)心的問題）wasthatwhilereadingforeignjournals,Iencountered

numerous（許多）unfamiliarwordsandunwillinglyreferredtoadictionaryfrequetly.SofrequentlydidIlookupwordsinthedictionarythatInearlylostmydesiretocarryon.Moreover,whattroubledmemostwasthatduetolackofculuralbackgrounds,Isimplycouldn’tmakesenseofsomearticles.

I’mfirmlyconvincedthatIcanmakegreatprogressunderyourguidance.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.

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