Unit2HealthyLifestyleReadingforWriting課件-高中英語人教版選擇性2

ReadingforWritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutyourlifestyleToreadtwolettersandcompleteatableToanalysetheorganizationofthelettersTolearntowritealetteraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochangeLead-inWatchavideo,thinkaboutyourlifestyleLeadinginStayingupLate1.Doyouhaveotherunhealthyhabits?overeatinggameaddictionlackofexercise2.Whatisyourlifestyle?Myideallifestylegoodhabitseathealthyfoodgotobedearlydoexerciseregularlystudyhardkeepawayfromphones...MycurrentlifestylebadhabitsChangebadhabitsandformgoodonesIfthereisasummercamporganisedbythemagazineHealthyLife,wouldyouliketojoin?Whyorwhynot?Whatdoyouexpecttolearnthere?ReadingReadformainideaandstructure1.Whowritethesetwoletters?2.Whatarethepurposesofwritingtheseletters?readingandthinkingWangLuandGeorgeFielding.Toinformtheeditoroftheirproblemsandthechangesthattheymadetobetterthemselves.How?TwostudentsattendedthesummercamporganisedbythemagazineHealthyLifeandwrotetotheeditor.Readthetextquickly,andfillintheblankstofinishthemainideaofit.Thesearetwo________from_______and_________,whoattended

,totheeditortoinformtheeditoroftheir_________,_________,___________and___________.thesummercampWangLuGeorgeproblemsdecisionsactionsresultslettersFast-ReadingWhatisthebasicstructureofaletter?DearEditor,

Yourstruly,/Sincerely,signature___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________bodyComplimentaryclose信尾敬語Salutation稱呼ReadingforstructuresReadeachletter,labeleachparagraphusinginformationbelow.AidentifyproblemsBconsiderwhattodo Cdescribewhathe/shehasdonetochangeDgivetheresults ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternProblemProblemDecisionDecisionAction(s)Action(s)Result(s)Result(s)ReadingforstructuresAnalyzetheorganizationoftheletters.Labeltheparagraphsusingthelettersbelow.Someparagraphsmaycovermorethanonetopic.Aidentifyingproblem(s)BconsideringwhattodoCwhathe/shehasdonetochangeDtheresultsPassage1Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____AB123-4C5DPassage2Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____Paragraph_____:_____1A2A&B3B4C5DReadforstructuresA.identifyingproblem(s)B.consideringwhattodoC.whathe/shehasdonetochangeD.theresultsreadforstructureProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)ABCDAA&BBCDProblem-solutionpatternReadforthestructuresA.identifyingproblem(s)B.consideringwhattodoC.whathe/shehasdonetochangeD.theresultsLabeltheparagraphsusingthelettersbelow.ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)Problem-solutionpatternReadfordetailsReadingfordetailsReadthesetwoletterscarefullyandcompletethetableonP21.

InformationWangLuProblem●didnotfeel_______●felt

_______________,lacked_______●got_______,experienced___________Decision●to________________●to________________Action●stopped_______________________________________●exerciseseverydayfor______________Result●more____________________in__________________●sleeps______,nolonger_____________●feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlifeReadingfordetails

InformationWangLuProblemdidnotfeel_______felt

_______________,lacked_______got_______,experienced___________Decisionto________________to________________Actionstopped_______________________________________exerciseseverydayfor______________Resultmore____________________in__________________sleeps______,nolonger_____________feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlife?

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InformationWangLuProblem●didnotfeel_______●felt

_______________,lacked_______●got_______,experienced___________Decision●to________________●to________________Action●stopped_______________________________________●exerciseseverydayfor______________Result●more____________________in__________________●sleeps______,nolonger_____________●feelslike________________________wellsleepyanddizzypassionflueasilymanytoothacheseatnosugarexerciseregularlybuyingsweets,biscuits,andsugarydrinksatleast30minutesdynamicandstrongerbothbodyandmindsoundlysuffersfromfluortoothachesincontrolofherownlife

InformationWangLuProblem●felt___________

●feltevenmore_________after_________________________Decision●to___________________________

________________Action●goes____________________

___________Result●feelsmuchmore_________________

●feelshecan_____________________________

stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetterReadingfordetails

InformationWangLuProblemfelt___________feltevenmore_____________after_________________________Decisionto___________________________________________Actiongoes_____________________________________Resultfeelsmuchmore________________feelshecan________________________________stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetter

InformationWangLuProblem●felt___________

●feltevenmore_________after_________________________Decision●to___________________________

________________Action●goes____________________

___________Result●feelsmuchmore_________________

●feelshecan_____________________________

stressedoutwornoutplayingcomputergamestakecontrolofhislifeandfindotherwaystorelaxrockclimbingmonthlywithhisdadenergeticchangehimselfforthebetterProblemDecisionActionResultpasttensepresenttenseReadingfortenseSummarizefortheorganisationoftheletters.ProblemDecisionAction(s)Result(s)identifyingproblemsconsideringwhattodowhathe/shehasdonetochange

theresults

pasttensepasttensepresent/pasttensepresenttense

Analysethetenseoftheletter.ProblemDecisionAction(s)pasttenseResult(s)presenttensePreparationsforthewritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochange.structureProblemDecisionActionResultWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetosee

pasttensepresenttenseProblem1.AfterIattendedyour...,Irealised...2.Ifelt...andlacked...3.AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse...Decision1....stimulatedmydecision.2.Imadeupmymindto...3.Idecidedto...

Readforusefulexpressions.Howdidtheydescribeproblems,decisions......?Action1.SometimesI...OthertimesI...2.IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandCResult1.Theresultshavebeenfantastic.2.Inolongersufferfrom...3.IfeellikeI’mincontrolofownlife.readforadvancedexpressionsidentifyingproblems仿寫Problem:參加完夏令營后，你努力擺脫digitaladdiction，請寫信給編輯，描述你的問題，決定，行動，結(jié)果。自從參加有關(guān)個人生活選擇的夏令營后，我意識到我沉迷于電子設(shè)備，在玩的時候讓我娛樂，但是之后更精疲力盡。AfterIattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices,IrealizedIwasaddictedtodigitaldevices，whichentertainedmewhenIwasplaying,butwornmeoutafterwards.readforadvancedexpressionsdescribingdecisions激發(fā)我的動力下定決心改變……決定掌控……用...代替...仿寫：我的動力被激發(fā)，我下定決心擺脫壞習慣，掌控自己的生活。Mymotivationstimulated,Imadeupmymindtogetridofbadhabitsandtakecontrolofmylife.readforadvancedexpressionsdescribingactions仿寫：每次我想玩電腦游戲的時候，我就出去慢跑。這不僅提高了我的生活質(zhì)量，也改善了我的身體狀況。WheneverIwantedtoplaycomputergames,Iwentjogginginstead,whichnotonlyenhancedmyqualityoflifebutalsoimprovedmyhealth.readforadvancedexpressionsshowingresults仿寫：結(jié)果是極好的。我在身體和精神上精力充沛。更好的是，我感覺我可以讓自己變得更好。Theresultshavebeenfantastic.Igetmoredynamic,refreshedandenergeticbothphysicallyandmentally.Betteryet,IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.WritingWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetoseeWritingWritealettertotheeditoraboutoneaspectofyourownlifestylethatyouwouldliketochange.Usetheorganizationtobrainstormthefollowingitems.IdentifyingproblemsConsideringwhattodoPlanningtheactionstotakeTheexpectedresults本單元的寫作任務(wù)是給編輯寫一封講述自己生活方式的信。此類作文主要圍繞以下幾個方面寫作：1．首先要詳細敘述自己曾經(jīng)不良的生活方式；2．再以時間為主線敘述事情發(fā)展的經(jīng)過，即從過去不健康或亞健康狀態(tài)，經(jīng)過積極的調(diào)整，達到現(xiàn)在的身心健康狀態(tài)；3．最后表達自己對此的感悟。WritingTipsforwritingalettertotheeditoraboutyourlifestyle.(寫作技法)一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)本文兼顧書信和記敘文的體裁特點。首先，它具備書信的基本構(gòu)成要素，包括稱呼、正文、信尾敬語和署名。正文部分為記敘文的寫法。第一段：敘述自己曾經(jīng)不良的生活方式；第二段：為改變生活方式所作出的決定；第三段：為改變生活方式所采取的措施；第四段：產(chǎn)生的積極的結(jié)果。二、注意事項1．文章要體現(xiàn)出自己改變前后的身心狀態(tài)的對比。2．前后兩種不同生活方式的對比。3．準確使用人稱和語態(tài)。開頭：Iamwritingtoexpressmy...aboutmycurrentlifestyle,whichIbelieveis...我寫信是為了表達對我當前生活方式的……,我覺得我的生活方式是……Iamwritingtotalkaboutmy...andmydeterminationtomakeachange.我寫信是為了談?wù)勎业摹臀蚁胍鞒龈淖兊臎Q心。Ihavedifficulty/trouble/problems(in)doing...with...我在做……上有困難。

Thesebadhabitscanleadto...

這些壞習慣會導致…Imakeupmymindtochange.../Iamdeterminedtochange...

我下定決心要改變……Idecidetosetrealisticgoalsand...我決定要設(shè)定現(xiàn)實的目的并…Iwanttoestablishahealthyroutine.

我想要養(yǎng)成健康的作息習慣。Ahealthierlifestyleisessentialfor...更健康的生活方式對…至關(guān)重要。Ahealthylifestyleinvolves

regularexercise,balancedmeals,andenoughsleep.

健康的生活方式包括定期鍛煉、平衡膳食以及充足的睡眠。It'sofgreatimportancetoexerciseregularlyand...

定期鍛煉和……是很重要的。Onewaytostartistoaddexercisetomydailyroutine.

一個開始的方法是將運動添加到我的日常安排中。Iwilltrytosticktoaregularsleepscheduleandmakesure...

我會努力去遵守正常的作息時間并確?！黧w：結(jié)尾：

Iamwillingtomakepositivechangeswhichwillbebeneficialtomy...

我愿意作出積極的改變,這些改變會對我的..有益。Ibelievethatahealthylifestyleisthefoundationforahappyandfulfllinglife,andIamwillingtodowhateverittakestoachieveit.

我相信一個健康的生活方式是幸福美滿的生活的基礎(chǔ)，

我愿意盡一切努力去實現(xiàn)它。UsefulexpressionsProblemDecisionActionResult1.IrealizedthatIwasaddictedto...2.Iusedto...3.IgotsoabsorbedthatI...1.IrealizedthatIneedtochangemyself.2.Idecidedtodo/madeupmymindtodo...1.Tokeephealthy,weshould…/wewouldbetter...2.It’simportant/essentialto....3.....isanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4.Istopped…1.Ifeelmore....thanever....2.Ithasenhanced/improved...3.IfeelconfidentIwillreachmygoal!常用表達1．Havingagoodhabitisveryimportant.2．Playingcomputergamesforalongtimewilldoharmtoyourhealth.3．Doingexerciseisanothergoodwaytokeephealthy/fit.4．Runningisthebestworkoutforlosingweightbecauseit’scheap.5．Itisimportanttoaskyourdoctorforahealthcheckonceayear.6．Goingtobedearlyandgettingupearlyisalsoveryimportant.7．Tokeephealthy，we’dbettercutdownonfatandsugarinourdiets.8．Itisbadforyourhealthtostayindoorsforalongtime.OutlineDearEditor，AfterIattendedyoursummercampabouthealthandlifestylechoices，IrealisedI...eitherphysicallyormentally...(詳述自己曾面臨的問題)Imadeupmymindtochangetwothingsinmylife...(為解決問題作出的決定)AfterthatIstopped...Sometimes,I...OthertimesI...(實施的舉措)Theresultshavebeen...Ifeelmore...Inolonger...(產(chǎn)生的積極結(jié)果)Yours，LiHuaNowyouaregoingtojointhecamp.Writealettertotheeditortotellhimyouronelifestylethatyouwanttochange.

假如你是李華，正在英國參加交換生活動。你想?yún)⒓親ealthyLife

雜志社組織的第二期夏令營活動。請給雜志社的編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1.Whatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochange;2.Whyyouwanttochange;3.Howyouplantochange;4.Whatresultyouhopetosee.Writingtask假定你是李華，參加完HealthyLife雜志社組織的第二期夏令營活動后，你努力改變不健康的生活習慣。請給雜志社的編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1．你想改變什么樣的生活習慣；2．為什么你想要改變；3．你計劃如何改變；4．你希望看到什么結(jié)果。注意：1.開頭和結(jié)尾已給,不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearEditor,

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaStep1

Analyzethestructure假定你是李華，參加完HealthyLife雜志社組織的第二期夏令營活動后，你努力改變不健康的生活習慣。請給雜志社的編輯寫一封信，內(nèi)容如下：1．你想改變什么樣的生活習慣；2．為什么你想要改變；3．你計劃如何改變；4．你希望看到什么結(jié)果。注意：1.開頭和結(jié)尾已給,不計入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。審題確定文體：主體時態(tài)：主體人稱：第一人稱一般現(xiàn)在時一般將來時書信謀篇①介紹自己不良的生活習慣；②改變不良生活習慣的原因

和行動計劃；③預(yù)期的結(jié)果。Brainstormwithyourpartner.BrainstormProblemDecisionActionResultWhatlifestylehabityouwouldliketochangeWhyyouwanttochangeHowyouplantochangeWhatresultyouhopetosee

LetterwritingstructurecontentlanguageSalutationBodyCloseDear...,para1para2para3ProblemDecisionActionResultYourtruly/sincerely,signature

AfterIattendedyour...,Irealisedthat.../AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse.../Mostworrying

...stimulatedmydecision/Imadeupmymindto.../Idecidedto...

IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandC/WheneverIwantedtodo...,Ido...instead

Theresultshavebeenfantastic/Inolongersufferfrom.../Ifeelmuchmoredynamic,refreshedandenergeticthepossible

usefulexpressions1.AfterIattendedyour...,Irealised...2.Ifelt...andlacked...3.AsItookpartin...,Istartedtoanalyse...1....stimulatedmydecision.2.Imadeupmymindto...3.Idecidedto...1.SometimesI...OthertimesI...2.IgetrefreshedthroughdoingA,BandC1.Theresultshavebeenfantastic.2.Inolongersufferfrom...3.IfeellikeI’mincontrolofownlife.ProblemDecisionActionResult連詞成句(含本單元句型)1．我經(jīng)常不吃早餐，吃垃圾食品，熬夜，很少做體育鍛煉。Ioftenskipbreakfast，eatjunkfood，stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise.2．他們給我的身體和精神都帶來了負面影響。Theyhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.3．我經(jīng)常感到緊張和疲憊不堪。Iamoftenstressedoutandwornout.4．為了保持健康，我決定馬上改變一下自己。Tokeepfit，Ihavemadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.5．我會保持均衡的飲食。Iwillkeepabalanceddiet.6．我認為定期鍛煉是個好主意。Ithinktoworkoutregularlyisagoodidea.7．我應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習慣。Iamsupposedtodevelopthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.8．我會變得更加精神，更有活力和精力充沛。Iwillgetmorerefreshed，dynamicandenergetic.9．更好的是，我覺得我可以讓自己變得更好。Betteryet，IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetter.第三步句式升級1．將句1和句2用定語從句合并成一句話。Ioftenskipbreakfast，eatjunkfood，stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise，whichhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.2．用it充當形式主語改寫句6。Ithinkit’sagoodideatoworkoutregularly.第四步組句成篇用適當?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇英語短文。SamplewritingDearEditor，Afterattendingyoursummercamp,IrealizedIhadsomeunhealthylivinghabits.Forinstance,Ioftenskipbreakfast,eatjunkfood,stayuplateandtakelittlephysicalexercise,whichhavebroughtmeanegativeeffectphysicallyandmentally.Iamoftenstressedoutandwornout.Tokeepfit,Ihavemadeupmymindtochangemyselfstraightaway.Firstofall,Iwillkeepabalanceddiet.What’smore,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoworkoutregularly.Lastbutnotleast,Iamsupposedtodevelopthehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.Ibelievetheresultswillbefantastic.Iwillgetmorerefreshed，dynamicandenergetic.Betteryet,IfeelthatIcanchangemyselfforthebetterYours,LiHua假定你是李華，你的筆友王強最近沉迷于電腦游戲，這給他帶來很多危害。請你給他寫一封書信，勸說他戒掉這個不良習慣，并提出建議。內(nèi)容包括：1．浪費了學習的時間；2．對身心健康造成危害；3．你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Homework參考范文DearWangQiang，Hearingthatyouareaddictedtoplayingcomputergames，Ifeltveryworried.Tobeginwith，itwillmakeyouwastetoomuchvaluabletimewhichshouldbespentonyourstudy.Inaddition，playingcomputergamesforalongtimewilldoharmtoyourhealth，especiallytoyoureyes.Worsestill，somegamesarefullofviolence，whichwillbeharmfultoyourmentalhealth.Therefore，Istronglyhopethatyoucanbreakawayfromit.Theearlier，thebetter.Youcanreadmoregoodbooks，takemoreexerciseorparticipateinsomesocialactivitiestobroadenyourhorizons.Ihopetheadviceabovewillbeofbenefittoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours，LiHuaWriting

假如你是李華，你因玩手機上癮影響了學習和生活，決定改掉這個不良習慣。請你給雜志HealthyLife

的編輯寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.簡單介紹自己的不良習慣

2.說明為擺脫不良習慣將要做的嘗試

3.表達期待注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Para1:表明寫信的目的＋說明問題+不良影響；Para2:決心做出改變+具體的措施;Para3:表達希望。1.審題定調(diào)人稱:本文要以第一人稱為主;時態(tài):時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。2.謀篇布局Deareditor,I’mwritingtosharesomethingwithyou.IrealizethatI_____________沉迷于digitaldevice,_____entertainsmealotwhenIamplaying,but_______________________對...有消極的影響

mylifeandstudies.Suddenly,Ibecomeawarethatifleftunchecked,mybadhabitswould__________________________使我一事無成.