高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)第六部分書面表達(dá)專題三寫作技法指導(dǎo).ppt

1、考生要寫好書面表達(dá),首先應(yīng)該了解高考書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則和評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。 一、評(píng)分原則 1.本題總分為25分,按5個(gè)檔次給分。 2.評(píng)分時(shí),先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次,然后以該檔次的要求來衡量,確定或調(diào)整檔次,最后給分。 3.詞數(shù)少于80和多于120的,從總分中減去2分。 4.評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為:內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。 5.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面,評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 6.如書寫較差,以致影響交際,將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。,名師課堂,專題三寫作技法指導(dǎo),二、評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 第五檔

2、(21-25分):完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù) 覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn),使用了較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和較高級(jí)詞匯,應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。 好的書面表達(dá)應(yīng)該字跡清楚工整(整體美觀的答卷應(yīng)該單詞大小適當(dāng),全文布局合理,留足天、地、邊,字跡清楚工整),內(nèi)容全面,使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句式,語法和詞匯用法基本沒有錯(cuò)誤,拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,上下文銜接自然。,技巧一,高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句式,一、使用高級(jí)詞匯“三原則” 1.精準(zhǔn)選詞,標(biāo)新立異 寫作時(shí)選詞要精準(zhǔn),適當(dāng)使用不容易想到的詞匯,適度求新求異。 (1)In the coming three years,our school life will be

3、difficult. In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging.(2014江西高考書面表達(dá)) (2)I received your email last week,but Im busy preparing for my final exam,which is important for me,so I didnt reply to you without delay. I received your email last week,but Im busy preparing for my final exam,

4、which is vital for me,so I didnt reply to you without delay.(2013山東高考滿分作文),2.變換用詞,避免重復(fù) 盡量避免過多地使用某一個(gè)單詞,必要時(shí)選擇使用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞或詞組 來代替。 I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches. I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches. 3.短語優(yōu)先,增加文采 多使用詞組、習(xí)語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。 (1)To ac

5、hieve ones dream,one must try to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. To achieve ones dream,one must make great efforts to equip oneself with rich knowledge and set a goal easy to reach. (2013北京 高考滿分作文) (2)Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we face,and release our pre

6、ssure from different aspects. Whats more,we can pour out the troubles we are faced with,and release our pressure from different aspects.(2013重慶高考滿分作文),【即學(xué)即練】 運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯“三原則”改寫加黑的詞或短語。 1.We all have the same chance. 2.We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend. 3.Developing a good habit is also impor

7、tant.,參考答案:1.possess2.endless3.of importance,4.He didnt listen to what I said in the class. 5.Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. 6.The teacher directed the gifted students towards the more difficult courses.,參考答案:4.turned a deaf ear mote6.challenging,二、使用高級(jí)句式“

8、六策略” 1.使用被動(dòng)語態(tài) (1)So people need enough water to feed such a large population. So enough water is needed to feed such a large population. (2)Im delighted to know that the Shanghai Museum will organize a famous art exhibition and you are collecting opinions of the public as to selecting the location f

9、or the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ideas. Im delighted to know that a famous art exhibition will be organized by the Shanghai Museum and opinions of the public are being collected as to selecting the location for the exhibition,which encouraged me to write to express my ide

10、as.(2013上海高考滿分作文),2.使用倒裝句 (1)Better still,it writes so smoothly that it can contribute to making our handwriting better. Better still,so smoothly does it write that it can contribute to making our handwriting better. (2014湖南高考書面表達(dá)) (2)The children can grow up mentally and physically healthy only in

11、this way. Only in this way can the children grow up mentally and physically healthy.(2013福建高考滿分作文) 3.使用省略句 (1)English words are easily forgotten unless they are constantly repeated. English words are easily forgotten unless constantly repeated. (2)If it is so,I hope you will have a wonderful time. I

12、f so,I hope you will have a wonderful time. (2013山東高考滿分作文),4.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句 (1)We created a harmonious atmosphere with sincerity and faithfulness. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.(2014江西高考書面表達(dá)) (2)As a saying goes,the little thing matters most. As a saying goes,

13、it is the little thing that matters most.(2013上海高考滿分作文) 5.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞 (1)Since I know that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions. Knowing that our library is going to buy books,Id like to give some suggestions.(2014浙江高考書面表達(dá)),(2)If I were given the choice,I would make donatio

14、ns to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living conditions. Given the choice,I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living conditions. (2014廣東高考書面表達(dá)) 6.使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) (1)His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding h

15、is jacket behind him,and we can see sweat on his face. His mother is paving the ways for him while his father is holding his jacket behind him,with sweat on his face. (2013福建高考滿分作文) (2)As the society develops rapidly,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. With the soc

16、iety developing rapidly,its necessary for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer.,【即學(xué)即練】 運(yùn)用高級(jí)句式“六策略”改寫下列句子。 1.Above all,we must do something to stop pollution.(使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)) 2.I realized the importance of English when I entered senior high school.(使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句) 3.I didnt realize words could be power

17、ful in both positive and negative ways until then.(使用倒裝句),參考答案: 1.Above all,something must be done to stop pollution. 2.It was when I entered senior high school that I realized the importance of English. 3.Not until then did I realize words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.,4.If

18、it isnt well organized,the meeting will be a failure. (使用省略句) 5.Because there was too much noise,I couldnt go on studying.(使用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)) 6.His parents were killed in a traffic accident and left him a big fortune.(使用非謂語動(dòng)詞),參考答案: 4.If not well organized,the meeting will be a failure. 5.With too much noise,I couldnt go on studying. 6.His parents were killed in a traffic acciden