高三英語書面表達(dá)講評(The+Beijing+Olympic+Games)課件.ppt

revision 出差表達(dá)自己的思想飯后游泳推遲穿上 上演 增加體重熄滅收好 放好把 放整齊我明白了 從 掉下來經(jīng)歷低聲地 onbusinessexpressoneselfswimonafullstomachputoffputonputonweightputoutthefireputawayputsthinorderigotit falloffgothroughinalowvoice 1 你認(rèn)為什么事使老師生氣 2 他從不吃早飯 是嗎 whatdoyouthinkmadetheteacherangry heneverhasbreakfast doeshe 3 天氣這么熱 魚肉會變質(zhì)的 itissohotthatthefishwillgobad 4 閱覽室不準(zhǔn)吸煙 wedon tallowsmokinginthereadingroom 5 會議被推遲到下星期五了 6 快點 只剩下五分鐘了 themeetinghasbeenputofftillnextfriday hurryup thereareonlyfiveminutesleft 7 雖然他已經(jīng)失敗了三次 但他還要再試一次 thoughhefailedtheretimes hewantedtotryafourthtime togo 作文講評 請以thebeijingolympics為題 參考下面信息 寫一篇意思連貫 語句通順的100字左右的短文 可適當(dāng)擴展 1 奧運會在北京的召開使每個中國人都很激動 中國人多年的夢想得以實現(xiàn) 2 北京奧運會的成功舉辦顯示了中國的能力和實力 得到了世界的高度評價 同時也讓世界了解中國 讓中國更了解世界 3 奧運會上各國運動員奮力拼搏的精神鼓舞了我們每個人 4 希望奧運精神體現(xiàn)在我們平常的學(xué)習(xí)生活中 生詞 舉辦host運動員athlete 評分的四大緯度 內(nèi)容 語法 思想 框架 組織結(jié)構(gòu) 要點全 拓展有度 有效 連接詞 作文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊 流暢 準(zhǔn)確 復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu) 高級詞匯 多種句型 能引起讀者的共鳴 靈魂 問題 時態(tài)語態(tài)問題beijingwillhostthe29tholympicgames beijinghostedthe29tholympicgames thedreamhasbeencometrue thedreamhascometrue wehaverealizedourdream 2 主謂一致問題everyonewereexciting everyonewasexcited 3 逐字翻譯問題theathletestriedtheirbestencouragedus theathletestriedtheirbest whichencouragedus 問題 4 詞性混淆問題theolympicswerehostedsuccessful theolympicsweresuccessfullyhosted 5 介詞短語的運用問題i mproudofchinaisstrong i mproudthatchinaisstrong wehavelookedforwardtohosttheolympics wehavelookedforwardtohostingtheolympics 1 審題2 列提綱 要點3 連詞成句4 連句成篇5 潤色修正6 定稿 寫作步驟 體裁時態(tài)結(jié)構(gòu)要求 字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容 信息2信息3 開頭正文結(jié)尾 審題 體裁時態(tài)要求結(jié)構(gòu) 字?jǐn)?shù)內(nèi)容 一般過去時 para 1para 2para 3 抓要點 湊字?jǐn)?shù) 信息1 信息4 奧運會在北京召開每個中國人都很激動多年的夢想得以實現(xiàn) 各國運動員奮力拼搏精神鼓舞了我們每個人受到了世界的高度評價顯示了中國的能力和實力使世界了解中國的歷史和文化也讓中國更了解世界 hostedexcitedcametruetriedtheirbestencouragedshowedspoke thoughthighlyoflearnedmoreabouthadachancetogetcloserto 列提綱 要點 madeeveryefforts sparednoefforts hadabetterunderstandingof hostedexcitedcametruetriedtheirbestencouragedshowedspoke thoughthighlyoflearnedmoreabouthadachancetogetcloserto 連詞成句 madeeveryefforts sparednoefforts hadabetterunderstandingof beijing the29tholympicgames it everychinese thedream athletes thisspirits everyoneofus thissuccess china spower people it foreigners chinesehistoryandculture china theworld beijinghostedthe29tholympicgames itexcitedeverychinese thedreamcametrue athletesmadeeveryefforts thisspiritsencouragedeveryoneofus thesuccessshowedchina spower peoplespokehighlyofit foreignershadabetterunderstandingofchinesehistoryandculture chinahadachancetogetclosertotheworld 連句成篇 beijinghostedthe29tholympicgames itexcitedeverychinese thedreamcametrue 潤色修正 beijinghostedthe29tholympicgames whichexcitedeverychinese becausethedreamthatchinesehaddreamtformanyyearscametrue athletesmadeeveryefforts thisspiritsencouragedeveryoneofus thesuccessshowedchina spower peoplespokehighlyofit foreignershadabetterunderstandingofchinesehistoryandculture chinahadachancetogetclosertotheworld thebeijingolympicgameswereasuccess peopleallovertheworldspokehighlyofit athletesfromdifferentcountriesmadeeveryeffortstocompeteintheevents whichencouragedeveryoneofusnottogiveupinfaceofdifficulty what smore thesuccessfulolympicsshowedtotheworldhowpowerfulchinais thusmakingforeignershaveabetterunderstandingofchinesehistoryandculture atthesametime chinahadachancetogetclosertotheworld 定稿 beijinghostedthe29tholympicgames whichexcitedeverychinese becausethedreamthatchinesehaddreamtformanyyearscametrue thebeijingolympicgameswereasuccess peopleallovertheworldspokehighlyofit athletesfromdifferentcountriesmadeeveryeffortstocompeteintheevents whichencouragedeveryoneofusnottogiveupinfaceofdifficulty what smore thesuccessfulolympicsshowedtotheworldhowpowerfulchinais thusmakingforeignershaveabetterunderstandingofchinesehistoryandculture atthesametime chinahadachancetogetclosertotheworld thebeijingolympicsibelieveallthechinesemustbeexcitedbecauseofthebeijingolympicsgames ourdreamforyearsfinallycametrue wesawtheathletesfromdifferentcountriestrytheirbesttowin itnotonlyencouragedeverybody butalsomadeusrealisethat higher fasterandstronger isthespiritoftheolympicgames asthegameswashostedsuccessfully weprovedthatchinawasdevelopingandbecomingstronger what sm