中考英語書面表達單元檢測題(word)

1、中考英語書面表達單元檢測題（word）一、中考英語書面表達（含答案詳細解析）1近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴重，整個國家的空氣污染狀況令人擔憂。請分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應對措施，寫一份英文的倡議書，呼吁大家保護環(huán)境，減少對空氣的污染。要點提示：（1）我國空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。（至少寫2 點）（2） 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。（至少寫2 點）（3）減少空氣污染的措施。（至少寫2 點）要求：（ 1） 80 詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。（ 2） 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。dear students ,as we all know , hazy days have been

2、influencing our lives a lot in recent years . that warns us ofthe seriousairpollution_【答案】 dear students,as we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. that warns us of the serious air pollution. big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. for

3、example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. besides, the peoples activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. whats more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. air pollution is becoming more and mor

4、e serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, whats more, we had better walk or take a bus. protecting the environment is our duty. everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個國家的空氣污染狀況。所提供的材

5、料中列舉了近年來，各大城市霧霾（haze）情況越來越嚴重，主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象，原因，應對措施三個方面去介紹。時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當發(fā)揮。寫作時，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達要符合英語習慣，注意時態(tài)、時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縲e had better walk or take a bus. 我們最好步行或乘公共汽車。這里had better 表示最好，后面跟動詞原形，take a bus 表示乘公共汽車?！靖叻志湫投縫rote

6、cting the environment is our duty.保 境是我 的 。 里protecting theenvironment做主 ，用的是 的ing 形式。2 面表達假定你是李 ，最近你 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，你的英國朋友peppa 向你來信 情況。 你用英 寫封回信， 介 以下 果：1 水 2垃圾分 3少用 巾，重拾手帕4步行、 自行 或公交出行、參考 ：low carbon低碳； tissue 巾 數(shù)： 100 左右。開 和 尾已 你寫好，不 入 數(shù)。dear peppa,thank you for your last letter asking about our d

7、iscussion on low-carbon lifestyle. here issomething about it _best wishes,yours,li hua【答案】 dear peppa,thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. here issomething about it we can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. first, welight

8、s if possible and spend less time watching tv or surfing the internet. saving water alsomatters much. besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some,which will surely benefit us a great deal. in addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead oftissues so that we can pre

9、vent more trees from being cut down. more importantly, when we goout, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to acleaner world.best wishes,yours,li hua d bett【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，向我的英國朋友peppa 寫信，介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行的 情況。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句

10、子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：we can do， wedbetter，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的 用。寫作中注意運用代 ，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 我要介 我 班就低碳生活方式 行了 ，接下來介 我 低碳生活可以做的事。此 ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of,contribute to等 些 的運用也 文章增色不少。3隨著社會的 展，通 的方式從 古 代的 信到當今的互 網(wǎng)， 著巨大的 化。

11、你寫一篇短文， 你 代通 工具的使用及看法。內(nèi)容包括：1. 你喜 使用的通 方式有哪些？2. 它 的 點和缺點是什么？3. 你 使用 代通 工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出 真 的學校名稱和姓名；2. 意 ， 數(shù)80左右。開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)。as time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. as for me,【答案】 as time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication method

12、s now. as for me, i prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes i chat by communication software, such as wechat and qq.mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. by using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the i

13、nternet. however, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.in my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 代通 工具的使用及看法?！?解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 第一，三人稱，注意主 一致 ，句

14、子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：thereare ， i prefer to ，mobile phones bring ，we can ， we should ，so let 等s句式的 用。寫作中注意運用代 ，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系?！军c睛】本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 介 了我喜 使用的通 方式有哪些；接下來介 它 的 點和缺點是什么，以及使用 代通 工具要注意什么；最后呼吁號召大家合理使用 代通 工具。此 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the internet, concern about, in on

15、es opinion,try one s best等 些 的運用也 文章增色不少。4 面表達同學 ，中考后就會迎來漫 的暑假了，班會 上老 大家 假期學 和生活 劃。假如你是李 ， 根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英 向同學 一下你的 劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假計劃學習博覽群書；學習技能（或自擬一點）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉（或自擬一點）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點）注意：1. 表達中必須包括所給要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達中請勿提及真實校名及姓名。dear classmates,summer holiday is coming, and

16、 here is my plan for it._i hope all of you c an enjoy the coming holiday. that 【答案】 dear classmates, s all. thank you.summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. this can help me open my mind and learn more about the world

17、. i also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. im interested in cooking, so i will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.second, health is the most important. so i will eat healthily and exercise more. i plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every

18、day.third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. i will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our earth a better world. also, travelling out is a good choice. while travelling, we can be close to nature and lea

19、rn about different cultures. we have more chances to search the internet. i know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. i will say no to them.i hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. thats all. thank you.【解析】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如 id like to do ， help me open my mind ， at leas

20、t， be interested in ，during theholiday ， plan to do ，join in ， be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ，be close to nature ， search the internet 等。而 first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ second, health is the most important./third, its a good idea to join i

21、n some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表順序詞和綜合句式的運用，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點。點睛：書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。5安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2.

22、上下樓梯3. 交朋結(jié)友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求：1. 語句通順，表達準確，內(nèi)容連貫；2短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。3詞數(shù)： 80100 詞。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。safety has become the focus to us all. how to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents._ _【答案】 safety has become the focus to us all. how to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. f

23、irst, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.second, there are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. so don twith each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. or there may be an accident.besides, we should be friendly and get o

24、n well with others, don t quarrel or even fight. last butnot least , we should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which isharmful to our health.in a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結(jié)合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內(nèi)

25、容。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。6life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.請你以 “ learn to smile為”題，根據(jù)下表所列的要點寫一篇100 詞左右的文章（文章開頭已給出）。1、面對困難與煩惱學會微笑（考試失利、被別學會對自己微笑人誤解等）。2、使你自信，擊敗你的人有時就是你自己。3、有益于身心健康。1、便于與他人之間的交流。學會對他人微笑2、給別人帶來快樂,自己也快樂。微笑是一種語言人人都能懂，傳遞友誼，拉近距離。1、參考詞匯：對某人微笑smi

26、le at sb. 誤解 misunderstand2、短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐字翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。learn to smilei remember a song by westlife, the first sentence of it is“ just a smile and the rain is gone.you like smiling? i think you should learn to smile ._【答案】 learn to smilei remember a song by westlife, the first sentence of it i

27、s“ just a smile and the rain is gone.do you like smiling? i think you should learn to smile .first, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. if you fail anexam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don t be sad. just smile at yourself . smiling atyourself brings

28、 back your confidence . sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. and smile can also keep you healthy.second, learn to smile at others. it will make you communicate better with people. smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.in a word, smile is a kind of language belonging

29、to everyone. it passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. living with a smile ,every day will beshiny.【解析】 是一篇表格式的作文，要點是一表格的形式出 ，首先要研究表格，找出需要表達的要點，然后加以整合，也可以適當增加使意思更 ，但要點一定要全，不能漏掉。寫作 要注意遣 造句，不能受 的影響，要用地道的英 表達，注意 ， ， 拼寫， 法等 ，用好 句，適當用復 句?？梢杂靡恍└?。 要注意句子的關(guān) 。

30、7 面表達根據(jù)下列表格的提示，寫一篇 changes in our hometown 的英 短文（80 左右）文章內(nèi)容必 包含所 的所有信息開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)內(nèi)容要點： 去 在1舊房1高樓2河水 2河水清澈（ clean and clear）3步行、 自行 上班3乘公交 、小汽 上班4道路狹窄（ narrow ）4街道 （ wide ），干 整 5居住條件（ living conditions ）差5生活越來越好， 境（ environment ）越來越舒適6你的感想 （寫兩到三句）changes in our hometownin the past ten years ， great c

31、hanges have taken place in our hometown 【答案】 changes in our hometownin the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. in the past, there used to be old houses. the river was very dirty. the roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. people were not rich. they wen

32、t to work on foot or by bike. but now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. we can see the clean river and the clear water . even we can see fish in the water. there are many wide and clean roads. our life is better and better the environment around us is more and more comfortable. people

33、usually go to work by bus or by car.i am glad to see these gr eat changes in my hometown. but i think it s still important to remember the past. it tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【 解】亮點 明： 篇 作的 次清晰，內(nèi)容 ，表達流 。文中使用了非常好的短 ，例如take place， in our hometown ， in the past ， used to be ，go t

34、o do ， on foot ， by bike，betterand better ， more and more 等。而 i think its still important to remember the past/it tells that we should cherish the present life. 等賓語從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運用，豐富了習作內(nèi)容，使表達多樣，是本文的最大亮點。【點睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用

35、高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分數(shù)。8 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 jack給你寫郵件表達了想?yún)⒓幽阈Ｊ钇跒橥鈬鴮W生舉辦的漢語夏令營的愿望，希望你告知活動舉辦的具體時間地點，活動安排以及你的建議。提示詞語：chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示問題： when and where will the chinese summer camp be held? what activities will be held at the chinese summer camp? what is your advice for jack

36、?dear jack,i am very glad to know that you are interested in the chinese summer camp in ourschool this summer holiday.yours,li hua【答案】 dear jack,i am very glad to know that you are interested in the chinese summer camp in our school this summer holiday.the chinese summer camp will be held in our sch

37、ool from july 10th to july 30th this summer.the activities of this chinese summer camp are as follows:first, you will attend chinese classes, learning the meaning of chinese characters.second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of china and chinese culture, especially chine

38、se holidays, which will impress you deeply.what s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the great wall. what you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.if you have any questions, please tell me. i am looking forward to your early reply.yours,li hua【解析】【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，

39、只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。2.例文點 ： 要求寫作體裁 信格式，所以例文用第一人稱i 行寫作，在文章 尾也按照 準 信格式 行了收尾。文章 用一般 在 和一般將來 。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并 行了適當拓展，所 也都全部用上。3.高分亮點：短 ： as follows，take part in ， whats more， look forward to 。句型：被 句型， 在分 作狀 ，主 從句。9中央 臺 典詠流 目的播出，再次激 了人 典文學作品的 情。 可以成就更美好的自己， 伴隨我 成 。

40、根據(jù)以下要點提示，以“growing upwith reading ” 寫一篇英 短文介 你曾 的一本 或首 ，并建 大家多 ， 好 。要點提示：1. 取知 ，開 眼界； 的重要性2. 提升自我，增 自信 1. 作品內(nèi)容 介； 的一本 或一首 2. 感悟及 自己的影響。1. 利用 暇 多 ，養(yǎng)成 的好 ；多 ， 好 2. 多 典文學作品 注意：1. 短文 包括以上要點，可適當 ，以使行文 。2. 文中不得出 自己的真 姓名、學校及地名。3. 數(shù)： 80-100（文章開 已 出，不 入 數(shù)）。參考 ： classic 典作品； open up one s eyes開 眼界； improve on

41、eself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信； responsibility 任； cooperation 合作。growing up with readinghave you watched the program everlasting classics on cctv? this program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.【答案】 growing up with readinghave you watched the program everlasting class

42、ics on cctv? this program makes us moreinterested in reading books, especially classics. reading is very important. we can get knowledge through reading. it can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident . our study can be improved if we read more good books.these days i am reading a book whose title is jane eyre, which attracts me a lot. the books writer is called charlotte bronte, who was born in england in 1816.she had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they